The Worst Betrayal by TwilightChild
Chapter: Straight Shooter

10/26/2008 01:29 pm
My Lord! This is such a brilliant piece of work! At first with the immense amount of warnings on the story's description, I was a bit wary of reading, but I am so glad I did! Please Update soon!!!!

08/25/2008 12:57 pm
Great story, but I must say, a completely beautiful banner!

08/20/2008 04:58 pm
omg luv it
it's a bit grafic... but w/e.
and please e-mail me at when you've got the next chappy up

08/06/2008 12:24 am
you are an amazing writer. this is a great story. not many authors can write dark as good as you have done here. i really hope to see this continued one day, it's wonderful!

02/19/2008 11:04 am
good stuff i cant wait to see how it ends. poor spike

06/10/2007 06:12 pm
Well done!

06/10/2007 03:37 pm
That was action packed. Looking forward to the rest of it.

06/07/2007 05:17 am
Wonderful chapter...edge-of-your seat excitement and action. Thank you for a great read. Looking forward to more and here's hoping that Spike begins to heal....and finally get some clothes and a haircut.
I'd be more worried about a thorough bath at first. lol. Thanks for the review ^_^

06/06/2007 09:05 pm
Woo hoo! Fabulous update! I love, love, love this story and can't wait for more.

Hope that stone really is out...poor Spike having to suffer even more! Buffy needs to really make it up to him when he's healing. He'll never be the same, but she needs to pull out all stops to make things right.

Nice Xander and Willow action..good to have them useful and as for the straight shooter herself...YAY!!!! I tend to agree with Buffy, but he needed to go NOW!

Poor female vamp, such a sad, sad place. Hope they rescue them all now.

If I'm the Kathleen in question, I am honored beyond words!!

Yep, that would be you. Just can't let a good idea for a chapter name go. I thought you'd hit it pretty well on the nose. As always, thanks for the wonderful review! ^_^

06/06/2007 03:57 pm
Such exciting action all round! Great chapter.
ty ^_^

06/06/2007 07:03 am
red and xander did well. buffy was surprisingly thorough, leaving nothing to chance. love her last line. excellent update, thank you.
Very glad you enjoyed.

06/06/2007 03:54 am
I'm really happy to find this story updating again! After that glimpse of real Spike, but then having to make Buffy hurt him when she's trying so hard for him to realize he's safe and that she's real. I can't wait to see what happens next between the two. And I do think, now Spike is safe, it would be kinder to end the vampires' lives and I hope Willow is okay with that, either by choice or mistake. Unstable world, you know it's gonna have a great ending!
Unstable worlds are fun. Just wait and see.

06/06/2007 02:45 am
Holy hell that was some ride! Wow! hee! And spike still isnt safe!! aaaaaaah!! *twitch*

Brilliant chapter hun! Cant WAIT for more! Like, dude, its an ache! hehehe
Thanks for posting the banner here! hee!
Ty you again for the lovely banner. Glad to post it anywhere.

06/06/2007 02:20 am
wow fantastic chapter, had me on the edge of my seat. please post again soon
Glad you enjoyed it

06/06/2007 02:14 am
Great chapter. Poor Spike, I can't imagine how painful that must have been. To think this has been his life for 10 years is heartbreaking.

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Eagerly writing the next chapter ^_^ More to come soon.

06/06/2007 02:06 am
this was another excellent chapter, love, full of lots of action and suspense...very very well done
Ty ^_^