Forward to Time Past by Unbridled_Brunette
Chapter: Chapter Thirty-Six

kim
07/18/2007 11:24 am
Hey, babe, someone was asking me how this fic was coming, on another site, so I'm just wondering how you're doing....RL been crazy? *hugs*
Sorry it took so long! I feel really bad about leaving everyone hanging so long. RL was pretty awful for a while, but things have slowed down and improved considerably. So, hopefully, I'm back on track writing-wise. :)

06/30/2007 05:47 am
Finally got a chance to read this chap.

Excellent fight scene...I don't think Angelus will underestimate our boy again. Darla may prove to be a more dangerous enemy than Angelus, though.
Thanks for the review. Sorry it took me so long to tell you that. I'm falling sadly behind on answering reviews. Darn you for introducing me to lj. Now, I'm addicted! :P

I'm glad you liked the chapter!

Mrs X
06/12/2007 01:41 pm
Excellent!

06/12/2007 05:41 am
excellent read, thank you. bonus points for spike showing angel that he is not in control.

06/10/2007 04:57 pm
Spike just keeps getting angrier and cockier--fortunately he has the luck and the determination to pull it off. And Darla seems to have taught him that occasionally a strategic retreat is in order.

06/10/2007 04:16 am
wow, I still love your story sweetie :) Hope you can update soon *hugs*

06/08/2007 11:39 pm
This just gets better and better. LOVE strong Spike. The fight scene was spectacular....note perfect! Just enough detail to be visual without sounding like a "how to" manual for fistacuffs. Hard to do and my hat's off to you, you excelled.

Love Spike staking his territory with Dru and not taking any shite off of Darla OR Angelus. Nice he noticed Angelus' arrousal and learned something important from that in dealing with his grand sire.

Excellent on all counts. This is a masterwork deserving all awards now and in future.

Kathleen

Onyx
06/08/2007 10:32 pm
Awesome.....When Spike threw Angelus out of the window....I wanted to erect statues in your honor.

LindsayH
06/08/2007 09:33 pm
I see what you mean about writing Angelus--I haven't had so much fun reading him in ages! Of course, that might have something to do with the total thrashing Spike was giving him. Love it, cannot wait for another update!

06/08/2007 07:08 pm
I can't see Angelus respecting anyone enough to learn from them. On the other hand, Spike's willingness to learn from the Slayer is making him a more powerful warrior. The fight scene was just wonderful...you made it look easy, and boy is that hard. Like a dance performance where the audience only sees the magic, not the hours of work that made it possible. Loved, loved, loved it!
I'm so glad you did. Thank you! :)

06/08/2007 03:58 pm
Beautifully written fight scene. Believable and easy to visualize.
How did Spike and Dru get away? I'd think it would be as difficult for them to get far as it was for Darla to find Angelus and get him inside before they met a dusty sunbright end.
Well, Angelus had lost quite a bit of blood, so I doubt he would have stormed into the flat without having something to eat to give him energy, first. That would give Spike a little time to get a head start on him. Also, there is nothing to say that Angelus woke up right away and left the shop at sunset. He might still have been out cold while Spike and Dru were making their exit.

06/08/2007 11:25 am
This was a terrific chapter -- and one of the best fight scenes I've read. Spike is really coming into his own. Fabulous story.
Thank you, Lou. I struggled with that darn scene and rewrote it several times. It's nice to know the end result was good. :)

06/08/2007 10:35 am
This was wonderful. I just loved getting to see Spike beat Angelus in a fight, and without letting his demon show. It just shows that Spike has more control over himself.
Great update and I'm always looking forward to more. :)
I'm glad you liked it. That fight scene was really difficult for me; I think I had to rewrite it five times. I now have a whole new respect for you, writing your big epic battle scenes. Thanks for the review. :)

veronica
06/08/2007 07:54 am
wow what a fantastic update! I love how you write Spike - especially when the part when Spike was intoxicated with the power he had over his grandsire... and yet he chose not to act on it. Just goes to show you that Spike is a much better man than Angel. (although I'm pretty sure I don't need to convince anyone on here, haha) And just like everyone else on here, I love the tenderness between Spike and Dru. Simply perfect!
lol. No, I don't think you'll get much argument on that matter. And I'm so glad that people are responding positively to Spike's relationship with Dru. I was afraid some readers might feel that it lessens his love for Elizabeth(Buffy), when it doesn't at all. Glad to hear that you guys know that. Thank you. :)

06/08/2007 07:36 am
Thanks for the knock down drag out between Spike and Angelus...a Spike won! Just loved it, thanks, it was fantastic! Love this can't wait for them to find each other again and for him to realise he's going to be a father. Thanks for another update. Your's and Gillypod's are the only ones I've read since I've been out of the hospital, that's how much I love it. Thank you so much for posting, can't wait for more.
I didn't know you were in the hospital, Verda. I hope you're okay and feeling well now. Thank you for taking the time to let me know you liked the chapter. :)

06/08/2007 07:25 am
Wonderfully written fight scene! Ah, revenge is sweet. You could tell that Spike was savoring his.

My favorite line...
*He folded his arms behind his head and grinned wryly. “I’ve got the new Slayer. All wrapped up pretty and waiting for us.”*

I can just see Spike doing this and I love him all snarky, so damn sexy. I'm liking the evolving of his and Dru's relationship. Your doing a fine job in the development of it. It's necessary for Spike in becoming who he is. I defy anyone to flame you about the telling. *Glares hard at those who try*

The whole bit with Darla there in the tub with Dru and him just making himself at home and then him preventing her from leaving was just priceless. I could see her reaction so clearly it made me smile. Great job hun, keep it up!
Yay, my very own flame shield! :D Thanks for the support, AC, and the review.

fanxstitch
06/08/2007 06:58 am
another excellent chapter. Thank you so much for writing more of this wonderful story.
Thank you for taking the time to review it, fanxstitch. :)

kim
06/08/2007 05:39 am
OMG, that was freakin' fabulous!!!!!!!!! Like the best scene in a movie. You even described the hold well that Spike had on Angelus on the floor! Girl, you really outdid yourself, and I can't *wait* for the next chapter. Spike rules!!!
Given the amount of time I spent struggling with this chapter, it thrills me to no end to know that you feel that way. Thank you so much for the review! :)

06/08/2007 05:32 am
Yay!! *claps* Lovely update. The fight scene was great, and really showed off how much Spike has learned from fighting a Slayer. (Although, I will admit, at the phrase "intercourse with the Slayer" I had dirty thoughts. :)) Spike and Dru were very sweet together - and even though part of me goes, "But... but... Elizabeth!" I know he's gotta have strong feelings for Dru, in order to end up the Spike we know. And I'm eager to see what happens with this new Slayer....
lol. Bad Eowyn! No more naughty thoughts about Spike's intercourse! Thanks for the review. :)

06/08/2007 04:08 am
Oh, VERY well done! Lol. That was a beautiful revenge. I love it. And I love the growing tenderness between Spike and Dru.
Revenge is sweet. Although I'm not certain we've seen the last of Angelus. Thanks for the review. :)

06/08/2007 04:02 am
Great fight scene and worth waiting for.
Thank you so much. I'm glad you feel that way. :)

daniel_nieves
06/08/2007 03:16 am
sweet. Angelus got what he had coming to him. He deserved everything Spike gave and more.
Poor Angelus. Does no one side with him in this story? Well, yeah, me neither. Thanks for the review. :)