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Undivided by slaymesoftly
Chapter: One
alým
03/27/2008 03:49 pm
Great start,loved it.
Thanks. I hope you like the rest of it. :)
08/06/2007 06:03 pm
lol...she's certainly asking a lot more of him this time than in canon...:P but he's willing, because he loves her, even if she doesn't know it yet...great chapter, love :)
Thanks - yep, she's already taking him for granted. LOL
08/05/2007 02:08 am
love to 'hear' buffy's thank you. very good beginning, thank you.
Thanks. Yeah, not something she said nearly often enough.
08/05/2007 01:15 am
Oh this looks good, do we have a future romance in the works too.
Possibly.... :)
08/03/2007 05:49 pm
Lovely opener -- it never hurts to have Buffy in his debt.
Nope. Who knows? She might even be grateful this time. :)
08/03/2007 02:03 pm
Hmm, all of them together, eh? Lots of possibilities! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Next chapter soon! Thanks for reading.
Kimmyadams
08/03/2007 11:56 am
this is a great story and start and I loved season 5 because it held the most promise for Spike and buffy.
Yeah, Spike would have done anything for Buffy...Please, will this story end up better between them and better than season 5 actually did? Please have a better ending...please!
Kimmy
Yeah, Spike would have done anything for Buffy...Please, will this story end up better between them and better than season 5 actually did? Please have a better ending...please!
Kimmy
LOL - yep, my season 5 fics tend to end in a more positive place than did the show. Thanks for reading. :)
08/03/2007 11:51 am
I am excited with this beginning. I love twists on what we saw and this decision by Buffy is a great jumping off point. The group dynamic will be interesting as will Buffy's attack on Glory. Wheee...another good story to look forward to!
I enjoyed the brief visual of Giles, bags in hand, in the doorway. Spike is to be commmended for keeping still.
Kathleen
I enjoyed the brief visual of Giles, bags in hand, in the doorway. Spike is to be commmended for keeping still.
Kathleen
Spike has a lot to be commended for in this fic. LOL Thanks!
Veronica
08/03/2007 10:43 am
definitely a good start! Hopefully Buffy will get some manners pretty soon tho. Looking forward to the next chapter!
She's working on it. LOL
08/03/2007 09:27 am
Interesting start!! Poor Spike, he'd do ANYTHING for Buffy
Thanks. Hope you continue to like it. And, yes, he will - good thing, too!
kim
08/03/2007 07:11 am
A *god* vs. the Slayer, Buffy....underestimating your opponent is a bad idea!
Poor Spike....hardly anyone uses even remotely decent manners around him.
Poor Spike....hardly anyone uses even remotely decent manners around him.
Yep, it sure is! (As we will see....)
08/03/2007 05:15 am
Loved the "thank you"!
*G* My Buffy remembers her manners, occasionally, anyway.
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