I just started reading Buffy fan fiction, and really LOVED this!    I really hope you will finish this someday soon.    This is one of the Best fan fictions I have read so far.

Thank you for sharing your talent with the rest of us!

Theresa

NICE update - like your Dawn and Buffy bedroom scene -

you really write the characters very well, capturing their personalities, speaking style, mannerisms...excellent chapter, love, and i'm so looking forward to reading that conversation between tara and buffy!!!!

Good story. I'm enjoying it. I'm glad Dawn wasn't too harsh on Buffy after the talk they had. Can't wait to see how the conversation between Tara and Buffy will go.

So, Martha stewart is a witch? I shoulda known...

I love the interaction between Buffy, her sister and Willow, even. I hope she will get some help for her magic problem in this story before it is too late. Please don't let Tara die, please!

I look forward to the return of Spike and another fabulous update! This is such a great "what coulda been"!!

between dawn and spike, buffy just might figure things out. good read, thank you.

Great chapter, but so short, and no SPIKE!!! What are you doing to me??? Just kidding; it really was good; I love the interaction b/n Dawn & Buffy; you've definitely got a feel for the character voices.

Great to see that Dawn is bringing a little normalcy into their their talks.
Fun cooking episode.

I just read everything in this piee so far. looks like a really great begining. Keep it up :)