Beer Foamy by Spikez_tart
Chapter: Mopey and Broody

wallow
06/25/2008 12:14 pm
...laughed at the incorporation of  "spuffy" term and subsequent willow's  broody angel comment.  
Thanks W - I like making fun of broody Angel.

03/23/2008 06:39 am
lydia's trying to help...hope she can...excellent chapter, love, the parker bits crack me up...nearly therapeutic to see the little creep get what he deserves...great work, love :)
I may have over identified with the Parker thing. 

02/06/2008 08:01 pm
Just catching up with this now. Sooo great. Love Willow and her pens, Buffy and her hilarious thought process, Spike and his unrepentant evil hotness -- and omg his sniffing and feeling up of Lydia! Love love love! Also, this made me LOL:

Parker ran at an incredible speed across the dark campus quadrangle, in spite of the gunshot wound in his thigh. “Wow, this is cool. I’m like an incredible athlete.”


I love the way you immediately repeat lines in dialog. Comic genius.

Spike had to sniff Lydia, anyone could see that had to happen.  Thanks for the praise. 

01/31/2008 05:45 am
trying again (having problems leaving a comment.)  see red is about to help buffy, because red knows best. no, that was robert young. sorry. very good read, thank you. i am certain willow will fix everything. ok, i drink a bit.
Oh yes, Willow is ever helpful.  Makes you want to smack her.  Thanks.

01/06/2008 10:03 pm
Everyone very funny in this chapter. Love it.
Thanks, Lou. Now for the exciting (I hope) conclusion.

daniel_nieves
01/01/2008 05:48 am
Hey Char, good chapter.
Thanks JC

hotlipedjen
12/31/2007 04:03 am
Great couple of updates. It's getting really juicy now! Looking forward to more.
Thanks Hotlips

Dee81
12/30/2007 06:00 pm
This is a great story...it definitly brings a smile to my face. I love the concept of Buffy having to decide if she wants the claim to expire or not.

Plus, I love the fluff and how you're keeping everyone's voices in character.

Awesome job! I can't wait to read more.
Thanks Dee. Writer squirms with pleasure and blushes.

12/30/2007 04:03 pm
Lots of reasons to mope on all sides. Another great chapter!
No moping. If we want moping, we'll call Angel. He's a pro. Thanks.

12/30/2007 12:57 pm
OH I wonder where she is going to go and if Spike will think about what she said and go and find Buffy, to try and keep them safe.
More Lydia fun in the next chapter. Spike's too busy feeling sorry for himself.

Crystal
12/30/2007 09:22 am
My Day: Sucky day at work full of annoying stupid people. Drive home behind stupid git who thinks it's ok to go slow in the fast lane. Walk in door to messy house cos hubby and son home alone all day. Grr. Stomp around house a bit. Remember that you update on a Sunday. Sit down to fantastic story that makes me wish my name was Lydia and Spike was sniffing MY neck. Suddenly feel happier. Yay for you, you hunk of burning awesomeness, you! ((hugs))
Thanks Crystal. I've never been a hunk of burning awesomeness before. I feel sort of Elvis like. I hate work. Why doesn't Joss pay me to keep the Spuffy mill going.

12/30/2007 06:15 am
ew, broody Spike
I must put an end to that. Thanks for reviewing.

pfeifferpack
12/30/2007 04:43 am
Naturally he'll read them now that Lydia has gone.

Makes sense for her to have brought them....she is fixated on Spike (smart watcher girl that she is...sees he's special).

Buffy admitted it to Willow! Silly Willy to not realize the Watchers Council are far from perfect in their "facts". They should all know that by now. Wonder what she's planning to leash Spike for Buffy though. Hum...

Kathleen
Maybe I should have let Spike bite Lydia a little. She's very toothsome. Buffy admitted to herself that she loves Spike, which is even more important. Thanks for reviewing.

12/30/2007 02:50 am
Well well well, Lydia showed up and tried to do something to help them. I am glad that at least she spoke the words. I would have hoped that it would have been to Spike but at least they are out in the universe. But what will happen now? And really, can Parker be the lamest vampire ever?? HA...
Parker might be a close tie with one William Pratt for lame vampires. Heh heh.

12/30/2007 02:25 am
First of all, Parker really is the most pathetic fledge in history, and I loved every minute of him getting ass whopping! LOL for Willow, double LOL for Spuffy, LMAO with Mopey and Broody!

As for the 'awwwwww' part... Awwwww, why can't they see they are in love with each other, complete the claim, and eradicate the Council of Wankers??? (or can they?)

Loved it, as always!

XXX
Thanks, S - glad you liked it. I think I'm almost through working out my psychological deficiences on the hapless Parker. Almost.