Slay Bells by Eowyn315
Chapter: As the Snow Starts to Fall

dzio
06/20/2010 03:17 pm
Okay, I've been sort of thinking about it ever since Jacob pulled out a TV-fixing mojo out of his hat, but now I'm pretty much sure. That dad of his, he wouldn't happen to be called David, would he? A nice, middle-aged guy who just happens to have a son who needed a tiny bit of compelling recently?

The one good thing I can see about this is that this time there's a chance that the guy Buffy's boinking is not trying to dismember her out of his own volition, but is being used to get to her. It will still screw her up (if she can be MORE screwed up than she already is), but not as much as the other thing would.
Ah, yeah, several people guessed that one. Although an equal number of people thought Jacob himself was evil, and I was happy to prove them wrong. I feel like it means more if Buffy chooses Spike because she actually loves him more, not just because the other guy turned out to be evil, you know?

12/22/2009 02:43 am
Love the fact that the noose is tightening around the bad guy..whoever he/she is and especially loved the Spuffy cemetery make out.

ennairea
01/04/2008 10:10 pm
Yay! can't wait for more! Mostly so I can see how the boyfriend guy fits into all of this. I bet his dad is the worlock guy they've been looking for.
Everybody's got a theory. ;) Thanks for the review!

01/04/2008 07:19 pm
It seems as if it has taken me FOREVER to sit down and read. I finally got through all of the chapters. I just LOVE LOVE LOVE this story. I don't know what is going on with her boyfriend. He gives me the creeps. I am so glad that Buffy just got a little taste when she found out about Spike and Susan. I really feel bad for Susan but she had to know it wouldn't end well with Spike. And they have this warlock to hunt down. I am glad that at least Spike got a chance to tell her about breaking things off with Susan. Now Buffy has to figure out what she really wants. LOVE IT.
I'm glad you had a chance to sit down and read it all. :) Thanks for reviewing!

pheonia
01/04/2008 01:52 pm
awww!!

:heart:

Thanks! :)

Nikkole
01/04/2008 02:48 am
At least Buffy is TRYING to open up and be honest with herself. I hope she is able to sort this all out for herself and realize that she wants Spike...BUT, if she hurts Jacob, who's to say he won't be the one to help the warlock get her?
Aw, man. You think Jacob would be that vindictive? :)

01/04/2008 02:19 am
thanks much for the wonderful update - loving this story

01/04/2008 02:18 am
thanks much for the wonderful update - loving this story
Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it. :)

01/03/2008 11:42 pm
Oh I loved the little scene in the graveyard and I am surprised Susan let him go so easy, so how I don't think we have see the last of her.
I think Susan knew what to expect... but that's not to say I won't bring her back. She's fun. :)

01/03/2008 07:22 pm
Okay, finally Buffy is showing a bit of sense. She is at least admitting to HIM what we all have known... that she DOES want him.

Love his honorable stand with Susan and his sweet thanks for her loving appreciation.

Had a feeling Buffy was the intended sacrifice. That is NOT going to happen if Spike has a thing to say about it (and I suspect he will). Speaking of suspicions...why do I distrust Jacob (and his out of town alibi is too pat as well). Maybe he's going to take her to the sorcerer (His dad???? After all magic was something he learned at home..right?)on Friday???? I'll wait to see of course, but that is my guess (NO you were not too unsubtle I just love trying to guess plot direction in any well written story *G*).

Love the scene where Buffy let down her defences enough that Spike saw she felt rejected and they ironed that out. ADORED the near climax (pun intended) on patrol...hot even if incomplete.

Kathleen
Hee, don't worry about my subtlety, I was figuring people would start putting pieces together around this point... or trying, anyway. :) I'm glad you liked the chapter! Thanks for the review!

01/03/2008 06:04 pm
Time?! She needs more time?!

Buffy Summers is officially of her rocker.

Just stake me, will?

:) Loved the chapter.

01/03/2008 06:03 pm
Time?! She needs more time?!

Buffy Summers is officially of her rocker.

Just stake me, will?

:) Loved the chapter.
Well, she does still have a boyfriend. I'd be a little concerned if she didn't have a problem jumping Spike's bones before she'd broken up with Jacob...

ya_lublyu_tebya
01/03/2008 12:12 pm
Lovely chapter. Glad that misunderstanding finally got sorted out. Why do I get the feeling all will not run smoothly though? Oh wait, coz it's Spuffy!! Anyway, brilliant work and can't wait to see what happens.
Yeah... Spuffy never quite goes smoothly, does it? Thanks for the lovely review!

01/03/2008 04:09 am
Yippee! Hope Buffy has finally come to her senses! More soon, please!
Heh, I think that's what everyone's hoping. :)

01/03/2008 04:01 am
Now that's what I call progress! I know it'd be too much to hope that Buffy will go immediately break up with Jacob, but at least she's admitting to herself that she wants Spike. And I'm so glad Spike ended things with Susan! Don't get me wrong, she was what he needed for a while, but it was starting to seem a bit too serious for my liking. I am starting to have some suspicions about this warlock and his associations, but I think I'll keep them to myself and see if I'm right. Update soon please!
Thanks for the review! As I've told other people... if you don't guess on the record, you can't take credit for being right. :) I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

Pam S
01/03/2008 03:43 am
Glad they have worked out a few of their problems. But died and brought back to life could be quite a few people.. Buffy yes, but might be brought back to "unlife"

Waiting to see what happens.. Enjoying.
"Unlife" isn't the same as life. Giles distinctly said resurrection, not turning...

Thanks for the review!

01/03/2008 03:42 am
"his sexy pose and rumpled “fuck me” look" Is it bad if I find that line completely and totally hot?? Need a picture; brain not working anymore.... Awesome chapter; of course Buffy will now dump J like the replacement stud he is, right?? B's not gonna have second, third or fourth thoughts, right?? You're killing me here, you know? Please update again soon; faithful fan is dying of delayed Spuffy goodness
Oh, lordy, no, it's not bad. :) I might've drooled a little writing it... Thanks for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying it.

01/03/2008 03:09 am
ah, my poor sweet confused Buffy. Better get your head out of the clouds and smell the dinner date. Silly girl. But, at the same time, another step in the right direction! Wee!
Hehehe. Thanks for the review!

kim
01/03/2008 03:05 am
Ah, Spike's persistence for an answer pays off. And now she feels really silly.

Oooh, David needs a dead Buffy, eh? Big honking mojo he's trying to pull off.....ambitious prick.
Yeah, she really needn't have worried. :) Thanks for commenting!