To Ride A Pale Horse by WeyrAtheneWolfen
Chapter: Chapter 10: Lockdown

01/18/2008 06:14 am
no death, no blood, no gore. but a good read and the last line makes up for the lack destruction.
Grins - Well Chapter 11 Hopefully appeased the desire for blood and death - sadly I am sure Ch 12 has no death but some great brawls!

01/13/2008 07:47 am
hmmmm....still of course holding little to no trust for anything that lindsay says...lol...loved the chapter, this story is shaping up wonderfully :) love it :)
Grins - thank you very much - we are having a blast writing it.

01/12/2008 04:48 am
love clem and his zombie knowledge .also loved clem and oz interaction
Thank you - I love Clem and Oz as well so they have to do the buddy buddy thing!

01/12/2008 03:45 am
Heeeey, no buddying up with the enemy *waves hands*
Giggles and runs around insanely!  Rubs hands

Carol
01/11/2008 01:33 am
I loved the Spike/Lindsey interaction. I've always liked Lindsey, and have wanted him to be a white hat (wishful thinking). Keep up the good work.
I adore Lindsey to!  I love the way Weyr writes him - so wonderfully *evil grin*  much more lindsey to come

kim
01/10/2008 08:34 pm
Oh, that's so a Buffy quote.

Hmm, have a feeling they didn't leave a door to be opened......can she climb high enough to break a window?

Nice convo with Lindsey.....I hope Spike will continue to make his life uncomfortable, even with the truce.

Even in that huge building, people are sure gonna go stir-crazy after a while....they can't just wait the zombies out.
I am glad you are enjoying the story and the lovely job Wery is doing with Lindsey!

Happy dances

Spikeskatmac
01/10/2008 05:33 pm
Awesome chapter; don't know how the hell you're keeping everything straight, between the excerpts from different 'books' and the story itself, but it's a great read! Can't wait for more!
Grins why thank you === we actually have a timeline and very extensive outlines of when everything happens, its the only way to manage it - but oh it is so much fun!

01/10/2008 04:29 pm
I was just thinking about this wonderful vivid story! Great update.

Love the idea of a legitimate friendship between Lindsey and Spike...great dialogue and character voices. Mutual dislike of Angel will be glue there.

Love his taking care of Dawn's needs and she of his. Buffy will fit nicely in the apartment *G*.

Love Angel and Fred and the discussion of logistics. I could picture the entire scene (the whole chapter for that matter).

Love the opening details of the spread....VERY 28 Days....scary!

Excellent.

Kathlen
I am so glad you like the chappie and the story Kathlen.  It is so much fun to play with this world and the characters.  Grins *hugs you very tight*