Slay Bells by Eowyn315
Chapter: Have Yourself a Merry Little Christmas

11/10/2011 08:32 am

Pleasure reading the series once again -   Congratulations of terrific series.

11/26/2010 07:56 pm
Was wonderful to read this again -  It is an excellent middle road between a happy, fun Christmas story and the series history.  I have to read all your Season Six alternative now -

I will make it one of my Christmas recommends over at Buffytube -

dzio
06/20/2010 04:10 pm
Whew. Points for Buffy, but apparently the stupidity jumped over to Spike. ;) Good thing it worked out in the end. 

Thanks for your work, whatever you might think after that rant few chapters back I really did enjoy reading this. Maybe not so much because of the romance part, because, like I said earlier, it stretched the limits of how much hot-cold, "I'd like to, but I'm scared", immature drama-queen crap I can stand. Um. Sorry, got carried away. Again.

But (and it's a nice but)! All stories in this arc are really well developed, I think you write amazingly good dialogue and your characterization of the Scoobies is great. Not the way I see them and not necessarily the way I'd write them if I wanted to change them, but it makes sense and it just works. I liked your OCs too, especially Susan and Emma. Since your Spike kinda lost his "truth-teller" place in the group in some places, what with him being too close to the problem to really see it, they both provided much needed kicks in the butt when the rest of the gang were being too pig-headed. ;) And the plots are really nice. There's a lot of stories that have nothing to offer except a massive overload of drama and romance, and all else is just window dressing. Here I had the feeling that it actually mattered and was more than just a way to bring us a step closer to Spuffy. ;) 

So, thanks again, and I'll be reading more of your stories later (and probably leaving a lot of longish and ranting reviews too), now I have to go and vote, it's presidential election day over here. ;)

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Sweet. :-)
05/10/2010 10:14 am
 

12/22/2009 04:43 am
Wonderful! Absolutely loved it!!

07/13/2009 11:26 pm

As I said in the "Looking for a Fanfic"-Section, I did enjoy this story very much. The whole storyarch from The hardest thing in the World to Slay Bells is well composed, you gather up all lose ends, and, may I ad, you do it in a elegant and eloquent way.
But I have to ask:
You didn`t just borrow Susan, you were a little inspired by Harrys adventures, weren`t you? I mean this question in a totally positive way, because I think it was really good, but I think I noticed a familiar, for a better word of it, tone or atmosphere. Perhaps it is because I listened to Storm Front and Fool Moon just two days ago, but sometimes i just waited for Harry to round the corner.
Perhaps that will happen someday? You already have the Susan link...

Thanks again, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

I actually wrote most of the series before reading the Dresden Files, so probably the tone is just similar by coincidence (or because that's the type of stuff I like to read in general), but some of the magical elements are based on the Dresden 'verse, like thaumaturgy and some of the combat magic. The Buffyverse doesn't explain how magic works nearly as well as the Dresden Files, but I think they have a similar enough basis that one works in the other's world.

I would love to write a Buffy/Dresden crossover - probably not in this series, but as a standalone story - but I haven't figured out how to reconcile the different types of vampires yet. :)

Amara D'Angeli
04/14/2009 02:25 am
Wow - really wish you were going on with this one!  I've loved every minute of it.  If you do happen to move forward (or if you already have elsewhere) I'd love a heads up!  amaradangeli@inbox.com
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Sorry, no plans to continue this one at this point, but if I ever do, I'll post it here (assuming the site gets fixed).

sister cuervo
03/01/2009 03:52 pm
 Wow!  Excellent ending.  You've really done a fabulous job of tying up the plot .  Wonderful writing.

sister cuervo
10/19/2008 01:30 am
 What a wonderful series.  I have enjoyed them immensely. They have got just the right touch of "will she", "will he?" plus loads of plotty goodness to sustain the story through all the sections.  Much more satisfying that the actual Season 6.  Great work!
Thank you for the review! I'm so glad you enjoyed the series. :)

09/01/2008 01:54 am
remember commenting " about waiting 'til easter" to read your christmas fic. the tale was posted on time. it was my rl issues that caused me to add it to my to be read file. so, near labor day, i am thanking you for allowing to read your fine holiday fic. fun read, again, thank you.
Heh, holidays are fun whenever you celebrate them! Thanks for commenting!

Deb
01/25/2008 10:58 am
Have thouroughly enjoyed this fic. Tender touching and heartfelt that they have come full circle. Would have loved for this fic to continue on into them moving forward with the relationship. I wouldn't have minded some spuffy loving either as you get their chemistry right. It has been a great read. Looking forward to your additional writings!
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. If the Spuffy loving happens, it'll be in the next fic in the series, which doesn't seem to be forthcoming right now. Guess we'll see. Thanks for the review!

Cas
01/19/2008 09:58 pm
Terrific holiday story - very well written, plotted and god characterization. Loved the ending. Thanks for sharing, and happy new year.
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. Happy new year to you, as well!

01/17/2008 10:47 am
Lovely writing. Have enjoyed the series as a whole. Lots of give and take in the relationship, a bit of angst, a bit of tenderness. It's been a thoroughly engaging story. Now I'll have to go back and read it all the way through again!
Thanks! I'm so glad to hear that you enjoyed it. (And hey, if you read it all over again, that'll give me some time to work on the next one!)

01/16/2008 08:36 pm
I'm going to miss this fic sooo much! This chapter was particularly great, the line with Xander's "naughty list" made me laugh, but what I really loved was:

"Someone who knew what she wanted, and recognized that she was holding it in her hands."

This is how Buffy should have been. I'm glad you fixed that. You know, those shows creators have some good ideas, but then they're screwing them up :)

I hope you'll start a new fic soon!
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. As for a new fic, I can't seem to go very long without posting something, so I'm sure it's not too far off. :) But nothing's sparking me at the moment, so I can't say if it'll be the next one in this series or something completely different.

tess
01/16/2008 08:16 pm
Thank you for a fabulous story. Glad it all turned out lovely in the end - had me worried for a while there. Anya's naughty list comment was pure class.
Haha, glad you liked the naughty list. Thanks for the review!

01/16/2008 08:12 pm
This was a perfect ending to this long ride!
"Her touch was tender, unhurried, not the frantic fumblings in his crypt or the zero-to-sixty lust of the graveyard, but the languid kiss of someone who knew she had all the time in the world. Someone who knew what she wanted, and recognized that she was holding it in her hands." Nothing better sums up what we all hoped Buffy would one day realize and acknowledge. This paragraph alone was worth every moment of angst and every time Buffy drove me crazy.

I felt sorry for Jacob but that resolution was the only possible one for him.

Liked the use of the Council in clean-up and Buffy protecting Spike's "guilt" from those likely to vote for staking.

I have the feeling that at the end of this S6 ride Spike would be looking into a soul just as he did the one in canon...same reason actually just different impetus. He knows that without that soul the time may come when he won't know the right choice and he now wants that power of knowing. I can see this Spike heading for Africa (only letting Buffy know to one degree or another of his plan...certainly his intention to return)in quest of his soul.

Really wonderfully written series here and your Buffy actually grew up. Her love is built on certainty not like on screen. She has fought it but KNOWS what and who she wants...no cookie cooking needed. The oven has dinged at last.

Kathleen

Thanks, sweetie! I love reading your reviews. Always so thoughtful (both in the "kind" way and in the "full of thoughts" way). :) I'm glad you liked that quoted bit - I was kind of proud of that line.

Interesting thoughts about the soul. I haven't really thought that far ahead (and honestly, not sure whether I'll get that far in the series). When I first starting writing this series (lo, those many months ago), I intended it to be a story where Buffy manages to make things work with soulless Spike. But you're right - he's definitely going to be challenged, and uncertain that he's making the right choice. Especially considering what I have planned for him (evil laugh - mwahahaa), I can certainly see him feeling like he needs the soul.

ya_lublyu_tebya
01/16/2008 05:17 pm
Aww yay!! I was petrified Spike was going to leave but I'm glad Buffy persuaded him otherwise. This has been a brilliant story with so many wonderful twists and turns and just what I like to see, a happy end. Well done!!
That would've been a shame - if he left just when Buffy was ready to give him what he's wanted. See, I can give a happy ending once in a while... :) Thanks for the review!

Angie
01/16/2008 03:14 pm
This was a great story, I'm gonna miss it. Oh Yeah Im SO with Anya on the whole Santa Claus thing, and that's all I'm gonna say about that!
*gives you awkward look* Santa kinks... overshare? Maybe. ;)

Thanks for the review!

kim
01/16/2008 08:34 am
Love Anya's last comment there, LOL!

Awww, Buffy finally got to the believing part. And the Scoobs are at least ambivalent, if not welcoming...

Good that Willow still gets that overdue training, too!
Yeah, Buffy's (finally) right there with Spike. And see? We always knew the Scoobies would come around.

01/16/2008 06:08 am
Great ending! Love that Buffy covered for Spike so she didn't have to deal with the others reactions and probable attempts of staking. And the following reassurance is something Spike really needed after that. I think it worked out well that Jacob just left town. No loose ends, no reminders, just everyone attempting to move on. Great idea to end it with a "family" Christmas, including Spike! I'll miss this story, but I'm glad it turned out so well!
Thank you! I don't think there was really any other option for Jacob but to leave. Sticking around would only be painful. I'm glad you enjoyed the story!

01/16/2008 04:13 am
OH I loved it.
Glad to hear it. :)

01/16/2008 03:41 am
Thank you for this wonderful story.
Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

01/16/2008 03:29 am
WOW - the end - and a wonderful ending it was - I so enjoyed reading the entire work - thank you for giving us such a great Buffyverse story.
Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked the ending!

Pam S
01/16/2008 02:56 am
Loved it.. and the happy ending..
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :)

time of change
01/16/2008 02:45 am
*sniff*

Wonderful ending. Lovely last line. I'm just sad that it's over.
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. And, you know, "over" is such a subjective thing... lol.