Beer Foamy by Spikez_tart
Chapter: Where You Made Your Mistake

Ann Onomus
11/25/2009 02:05 am
Buffy kept Spike quessing all the way, didn"t she? Well, I love all the retail hell in this story. Shopping IS a bit silly, even tho owning stuff is nice.
I really hate the mall - can you tell?  Thanks for all your reviews.

03/23/2008 07:06 am
things are getting really exciting...hope they can stop the council guys...poor spike, he really took a beating from that cleotus guy...hope that doesn't have too bad an effect on the fight still to come...off to read the next chapter :)
Spike shouldn't have started up with Cleotus - he's a naughty boy.

01/31/2008 07:03 am
“Sure. Once the claim’s over.” poor giles. don't believe he and buffy are on the same page.  just as mrs. blodeuwedd ronwen giles didn't realize the council murdered their slayer to call a new one. very good read, thank you.
Murdered?  I think I need a beta bad if you got that.  Vicky's only MIA.  Thanks for reviewing. 

01/28/2008 04:48 pm
 Just to let you know I am enjoying this so much.  The Watcher's Journal almost more than the story!
Thanks L - I haven't been getting much feedback on the Journal.

01/28/2008 03:44 pm
uh oh...

Loved Cleotus' dusting.  very gross.
Oh goody - I was aiming for gross. Thanks.

01/28/2008 01:43 pm
Oh no, why do I see her claiming Spike right then and there.
Not quite yet - more business to take care of - Thanks for reviewing.

01/28/2008 11:53 am
thank you for the update.
Thanks peck.

Roby
01/28/2008 04:14 am
...Another great update.... Wheeeee!!!!!!
Thanks for reviewing.

01/27/2008 11:30 pm
Me likey! just as she was going to do it, the council appears. Perfect cliff-hanger (though am now v desperate for the next chapter, meh!)
She was - but now there may be intereference. Thanks for reviewing.

01/27/2008 10:45 pm
Great fight! Can't wait for the showdown.
Thanks, Lou. More to come

01/27/2008 09:48 pm
Just love the fight. The twins just didn't know what they were playing with when they went after Spike. And to have Cleotus find out the hard way as well was just too funny. And what was Lydia doing at the mall? And Giles had to help save Spike. Too funny. What in the world does the council think they are doing at the mall. They are going to cause more problems than just letting the night come ang go. Love the final entry of the watcher's journal. Great chapter.
Obviously, Lydia is shopping. I had to make Giles help Spike, nothing would irk him more. Thanks for the review.

01/27/2008 09:23 pm
She was planning to returning the claim! Nothing like a marriage in the middle of the mall LOL.

Nasty Watcher wankers would have to show up! Going to have to get rid of the uninvited guests and get on with the ceremony.

Kathleen
The Elvis Chapel in Vegas was taken. Hee hee. Thanks for reviewing.

01/27/2008 09:14 pm
God, woman, you're killing me! The way Buffy said 'once the claim is over' I was all but cheering since I got that (combined with her hugging his neck) to mean that she wouldn't let the claim expire... And now those Council gits are there?

Gaaaaah! You've got me hooked and -as always- begging for more!

XXX
Thanks, S. Appreciate the enthustiastic review.

IT
01/27/2008 08:24 pm
Uh, oh! How will you get them out of that?! Thanks for the story.
That's the problem - it's easy to dig the hole, but then you have to get the hero back out again. Thanks.

01/27/2008 08:14 pm
Really loved this showdown with the twins. Great fight descriptions! Hopefully Lydia will come to Spike's rescue? And Parker still needs to be dealt with. So eagerly looking forward to the next chapter!
Thanks Joyce - more to come.