Rain by Yzba
Chapter: Seven

02/01/2008 06:19 am
love the way they are connecting. very good chapter, thank you.

01/29/2008 07:48 pm
Buffy's reaction to her Turning...or whatever it was... are interesting.  I liked her "sitting on a sledgehammer" comment. 
I'm sort of surprised Joyce hasn't shown up...or Dawn, maybe.  I liked the protective side of Dawn you showed in the chapter where Spike tells her family. 
Loved the update! 

01/29/2008 11:44 am
Glad to see another chapter up, that's what started me reading again.  I think I read the first chaps while I was still lurking.  Hope RL starts getting better and you are doing a great job with this story.

IT
01/29/2008 04:53 am
 Great interaction between these characters.  I really "the softer side" of Spike.  I'm looking forward to Buffy's growth as a new "being" and Spike's role in that. 

01/29/2008 02:07 am
I loved this chapter. Buffy's reactions are very realistic but still display her softer side, and I'm sure seeing her advanced Slayer side will be an interesting comparison. I wonder how Spike will react? Also, I love the Sire-Childe relationship they're falling into, and Spike already being a protective, caring individual. So looking forward to more!

01/29/2008 02:02 am
I really love this fic, and I'm glad you started updating again or I would have never found it!  I love the way Buffy and Spike are with each other, they had me in tears for the first 2 chapters.  And this new Vamp!Slayer thing that Buffy has going is really interesting.  Can't wait to find out more about that!