Rain by Yzba
Chapter: Eight

BT_
02/15/2008 07:31 am
could you update soon?  really looking forward to the meeting with the scoobies. 
No pressure, just waiting for more of this great story!

02/01/2008 06:25 am
buffy has matured rapidly. very good read, thank you.

pretty_in_fangs
01/31/2008 12:07 am
I just sat down and read everything so far.  Lovely story.  The turned Buffy concept is always one of my favorites and I really like how you've handled it and the emotions that come with it.

I'll be watching for the next chapter.

01/30/2008 06:10 pm

Wow, this is an incredible story and you have every reason to be very proud of it and happy!   This is a story line that hasn't really been touched before and I flew thru it way too fast! 

An honest Buffy willing to do anything to protect Spike is unusual to say the least and who knows how strong she is.  If Xander tries anything he'd better watch out...I don't think Buffy would dust like most vamps since she is very unique. 

Be very proud of this and keep writing!  I love this and can't wait for more!
 

01/30/2008 10:00 am
Time to be brave, Buffy!

IT
01/30/2008 07:21 am
 Wow, Buffy's finally listening to her inner voice, and her heart.  Nice writing.  Please, keep going!

01/30/2008 06:12 am
I love seeing Buffy acknowledge how she really feels for Spike!  It seems like this new version of Buffy is much more honest with herself about reality.  Her need to protect Spike is endearing!  I'm sure you are your own worst critic, that's usually how it works, but I think you should be proud of this story!

01/30/2008 05:09 am
yay Buffy!  face the music and stand up for Spike! 
I love that she's so honest with herself here - that was one of the problems I always have with canon Buffy.
i'm sorry that you aren't happy with the piece, but I am.

01/30/2008 04:49 am
Yep, if anybody's gona be a problem, it's definitely Xander.