Lol, it's funny, most writers of fanfic love to pontificate on the romance and dialog, but your very brief and to the point.  You seem to take it as a given that your audience knows this world and can follow along easily.  I gues with such an esoteric subject you'd be right,  and what you are doing here does work. I know it's working for me anyway, you give just enough to be satisfying. Despite all this I do find myself wanting more.


  I guess that means you're doing a good job huh?

Not jealous? Yah, sure...

I'm still lovin' your Spike, although Harmony, ewwwwwwwwwwwwwww

Finding that I love all your incarnations of Buffy in this fic including Jealous!Buffy.  And of course she can't talk to Spike about it because she hasn't figured it out for herself yet.  And the developing feelings become more clear every time she gets riled at being called Slayer.  Good thing she has a whole summer to figure things out!

Thanks for the update!!

Great update, I like the idea of Buffy falling before Spike.

he he he he he

great chapter!

If that doesn't give her a nudge, nothing will!

Spike, as always, seems to be figuring it out before Buffy.  Wonder how long it will be before he gets rid of Harmony.  I'm glad Joyce is on their side, too.  Thanks for the update!