Really, very cute. Loved this story, laughed out loud at some parts, loved the dialogue, especially Spike's. Wish we got an epilogue, and at least the declarations of love... I think both of them deserve to hear they are lived and we the readers would love to know they found out. Really enjoyed it, thanks!

 

Very lovely tale.

NICE READ - I don't read enough of the comedy or lighter fair in Spuffy Realm -

Second reading for me, and I enjoyed it even more with having seen the Parker -Buffy cycle for our episode discussions -

 Funniest story I've read in ages!  I love it very much--darn shame there's not more!  Definately needs to be nominated for a Major Prize.

Really enjoyed the tone and tenor of this. It's sweet without being off character..anyway loads of fun    

excellent conclusion, love, glad it all worked out for them...this whole story has been incredible :) *hugs*

Truly loved it, beginning to end! You gave a really unique spin to the Beer Bad story arc.  Enjoyably, Buffy seemed younger and a bit ditzier than the S4 Buffy we know; more like she was possibly, in S1.  Your Spike, tho' indeed a softy, couldn't help his innate
evil-ness showing thru at times...you portrayed his lack of
attention-span, hyperactivity & ubersexuality wonderfully!  Even technically evil he comes off as a sweetie. The banter about minions was priceless! 
The Watcher's Diaries glimpses were intriguing.  Lady Vicky was wonderfully spunky, ill-behaved, and unmanageable.  The ending bit was sweet, even if the poor old codger (oops, sorry, the codger was Travers), was bumbling around Bedlam or somesuch.
I think you need to write a sequel, as you need to update us as to the effects of the combination of the discounted lingerie and Anya's gift of Frimwurst !!!  There surely MUST be something to come of that??? (Probably in about  9 months or so...) I think THIS Spike would make a hellaciously harried father, totally overrun by any prodgeny, especially if female; and would also be done in by any & all females of his newfound family & circle of friends! (Aw, c'mon--I could just picture this Spike pulling his hair out a' la Steve Martin as a new father)...
Thanks for the read and the mind mini-vacation!
~~K.~~
~~fyreburned~~
fyreburned@yahoo.com

Ok, first off loved the story and second there has to be a sequel right? I mean come on there has to be something that happens with the  Firmwert statue glowing.

very entertaining wrap up to the tale.  loved anya' s gift.  thanks for the fun. (in last review it was not what you wrote, but what i assumed. that she  (vicky) had to be dead for a new slayer to be called.

Hahaha, Frimwerst. And the pimp chain as magical big bad evil-remover? Genius.

Fab ending, S_T. Deftly handled from start to finish, and I just love the way you write these two. I've been reccing this wherever I can, btw.

Looking forward to whatever you decide to write next.

I loved it!!!!!!

Oh sweet, please tell me there is more. I love it.

This was a great story, but now we need an epilogue to tell us about the necklace and the statue(evil grin)!  I really have enjoyed this and look forward to other stories soon.  Thanks.

I think having Willow and Tara magic them out of the trouble was...kind of a cop-out.  Otherwise, I really liked this story.  Enjoyed the stuff about the other slayer at the beginning of each chapter.  Really wonder what happened to her after the hat.  :)  I'm sure she fot it, after all.  
Nice work, but for the quibble. 

Sad to see it end, hope to something new from you soon!

it's already finished :S I really think I'll miss this story; but the thing with the fertility god statue and Spike's new necklace can be food for the muse to start a sequel :D I really hope so :P In any case, I really enjoyied your story and can't wait to read your next one ;-)

Serafimo Guttierez dropped his new construction company’s bid for repairs to the mall and the putas’ underwear store and dropped it into his fax machine. He pushed the send button.

Quizas los vampiros no eran tan malos.

**Dies laughing!! **

Thanks for a wonderful read from start to finish.

The perfect ending -- especially with the glowing Frimwort!

Thanks for the story, it was fun to follow.  I notice you left some loose ends - glowing fertility penis for example. :)  Any thoughts on a sequel?  Hmm... does the claim make her immortal?  Will she and Spike meet up with Vicky and Jonathan?  Are they related somehow?
Anyway, even if there is no sequel, it was a fun ride.  Thanks. 

Lovely.  Really enjoyed the ride. 

Kathleen

And a perfect happy ending! Now will there be a sequel? Parker is still out there and you said you had plans? Hmm?

Shit! I just saw this was posted and I have to go... well *shrugs* guess I'll have to read it at work tomorrow!!!

xxx