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Second Sight by AJ Hofacre
Chapter: Risk The Pain
alým
04/08/2008 06:14 pm
This was...was...umh,what to say,what to say?
Amazing? Great? Brilliant? Perfect?
Gee,don't know...I think I'll settle down for all of them!
:D:D:DLoved this all,and can't really wait to read more.
Off to read more,then!
Amazing? Great? Brilliant? Perfect?
Gee,don't know...I think I'll settle down for all of them!
:D:D:DLoved this all,and can't really wait to read more.
Off to read more,then!
Huh, I could go for all of them, too :) I'm glad you liked the installment!
02/14/2008 07:09 am
Well that was brilliant! It was tough to read at points and definitely caused tears to be shed, but I loved that it was from Buffy's POV. It always seemed like she was giving up as much as she was saving Dawn and you really captured that here. It also seemed like she might feel more than just disgust towards Spike but wouldn't acknowledge it and you really explored that fully. Great job!
I think it was tough to read at points because those last few minutes of Buffy's life were jumbled. She was thinking and experiencing so much at once that of course all of her thoughts would pour out in a mess, and I tried to represent that. And I really think she did feel something more toward Spike, not just that night, but as far back as the engagement spell, maybe even as far back as when she first met him. Spike's the sort of guy that'll really leave an impact on people, whether you want him to or not :) Thanks for the review!
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