His Girl by dreamweaver
Chapter: Chapter 3

09/20/2012 05:30 pm
Uh, that cab thing bothers me.  It would be really easy to bribe someone for Spike's address.  Not being cautious enough IMHO. 
He’d rented it from Wolfram and Hart who know what vamps need. There would have been a spell on the house that would wipe out any recollection of the place by the cabbie and the cab company once they’re paid. That was the way I had visualized it, but I should have made that more clear. I did in another one of my stories, but forgot to mention it in this one. :)

04/14/2008 03:26 am
OH boy - things fell apart really fast.  Loved the scene where Buffy tells them to bug off.
Thank you!  I loved writing that!  Wish she had done it on the show.

04/10/2008 07:02 pm
Wow - I don't normally review mid completed fic, but how good is this chapter?!!! Love the turnaround on Buffy's behalf - so true to character.
Thank you!  I love both these characters so much that it's hard to get them wrong!

03/24/2008 01:21 am
you are evil. but you tell a very good tale. thanks.
Had to do it.  I'm glad you liked it!

03/12/2008 11:00 am
*Sob!*  I saw it coming, and it still breaks my heart.  Love how Buffy's brain 'rebooted'; awesome scene; can't wait for the conclusion; oh wait, don't have to wait!!  Hee-hee.  Please, please tell me  you have LOTS more stories; you're sooooo goood!!!
Wanted people to feel it!