Wait for Me by superscar
Chapter: Chapter One

05/30/2008 03:20 am
Oh no!  Spike is a tease.  Harmony the Vampire Slayer - you may have launched a new Verse.  LOL
Damn, that would have been a good title.

Karen
04/02/2008 07:42 pm
Nice, I love strong!Spike
Mmm... me too.

03/30/2008 07:40 am
love that spike has his third slayer. he seems to have buffy too. very good first chapter.
Well, he has me, for sure.  We'll see about Buffy.  Thanks for reading!!

03/30/2008 03:45 am
Great start - sorry you had to kill off Harmony the Vampire Slayer so fast. 
Yeah, it has a ring, doesn't it?  So wrong it could be right?

Em
03/26/2008 03:09 am
Awesome set-up for a kick-ass story. The Harmony as a Slayer thing threw me a little (she seems completely undeserving) but it all fell into place eventually. Please update soon!
Well, I think she's totally worthy of...being Spike's food.  :)  That's a pretty lofty accomplishment, actually.  One of three!

03/25/2008 11:13 pm
A very impressive start. I can't wait for the next update!  Your evil Spike already grabbed my attention and I can't wait to see more of him, especially dealing with the tasty little blond he's apparently planning on turning, but is waiting for something... I've got to know what thoughts are going through his head! Wonderful Buffy characterization, staying her even without being the Slayer.
I'm glad you liked the Buffy characterization!  That's the hardest thing with a new fandom, so I'm really excited you think it works!  I love evil Spike too, what's not to like? 

03/25/2008 09:45 pm
Wow - you sure got rid of Harmony quickly. Wonder where you'll go from here.
I just couldn't see her winning a fight that Buffy would have lost herself without Joyce.  Sort of stretching it that she survived up til then, actually, but hopefully that can be accepted for the sake of the story.  :)

June
03/25/2008 05:11 pm
Great job with the introduction to the characters and love how we got caught up on Buffy by just seeing her with Cordelia, a few sentences and thoughts with Harmony, and the blush when Spike calls for the drink virgin *G*  Having Spike wanting to turn her, too, so we know he doesn't think of Buffy as just a meal to play with, opens a up a lot more possibilities without letting us in yet on what Spike's thinking and feelings. Can't wait to read more!
Thanks so much!  I was so glad to see this review!  I was bouncing around, "It worked, it worked!  Check it out!"  And then my cat just gave me that look, like it wasn't clear why she was hanging out with me.

sue
03/25/2008 04:24 pm
Oh yeah, you have a good one here ......
God, I hope so.  In my head, it is.  The trip to paper is the big concern.

pearlseed
03/25/2008 02:05 pm
 Leather draped over him like original sin and he looked intimately versed in the best kind of bad.

There hasn't ever been a better leather line written about the beloved.  You are delightful to have thought to write this about Spike!!  You got my curiousity up about what happens next.  Harmony as slayer?? ohmy!!
Thanks so much for validating all the blood, sweat, tears and laptop replacement costs.  Much appreciated!!!