Victims Of Fate by ya_lublyu_tebya
Chapter: Progress

All4Spike
06/10/2008 07:59 pm
Good idea Buffy, to prompt Spike into doing better than Angel!

05/22/2008 04:18 am
"'Course I can." now that is spike. very good read, thank you.

IT
05/17/2008 07:19 pm
I've just caught up with three updates - hooray!  This is a beautiful story.  Joyce is wonderful, as she always was on the show.  Angel seems worried about what Spike will say, and so he should be!  I wonder how Buffy will react.  

Great writing, thanks! 

05/17/2008 01:08 pm
Yay for updates!  Thank you for this story.

timeofchange
05/16/2008 07:47 pm
This is a wonderful story.  I look forward to reading more.

05/16/2008 02:17 am
oh, bonding!!!!
so sad, love it tho.
cant wait for more.
~liz

05/16/2008 02:14 am
This is really a great story.  You are writing CrazySpike very well and the interactions amongst all the characters is well done. 
I can't wait to find out what set Spike off when Angel went into the room.  I'm thinking he tried to get Spike to do something to Buffy or Joyce. 
Looking forward to more!

05/16/2008 12:26 am
Progress indeed.  Wonderful dialogue, so authentic.

05/15/2008 11:59 pm
Wonderful slow building of a real relationship here.  Yes at this time in Buffy's life her heart was soft and loving enough (and trusting) to have helped in this way....very believable.  Small steps but ones that are logical and necessary.

Excellent.

Kathleen

Carol
05/15/2008 11:32 pm
I'm really loving this.  It's my favorite story right now.  I like the way you're building the friendship. 

05/15/2008 10:39 pm
Nice to see Angel doing his very best to make everyone's life easier.  That would be my sarcastic voice.  I guess he figures that  helping the  Slayer while she isn't in with Spike is just too much work. Talking, yeah, that doesn't take much effort. But I just can't see him taking patrol or something while she's otherwise occupied. 

Ann
05/15/2008 10:26 pm
So happy to see more updates! I love how you stay true to Buffy's faithfulness and loyalty but still have her not totally blind and in love with Angel. And I think Spike's reaction to Angel is much more than just not liking him and that it will come out sooner or later.
Wonderful story and great updates!

fangfaceandrea
05/15/2008 03:42 pm
great  to see Spike getting better

05/15/2008 03:06 pm
Love how they are with one another in this chapter, kind of unsure of what's going on.  Interesting that she wants to be called by her name and not her title.  Can't wait for more!

05/15/2008 01:27 pm
That may have been the right comment to make to stir up Spike's competitive nature.  Nothing like the comparison to his greatest advesary to remind him of the importance of pulling himself together.  Maybe she should feed him more so his periods of coherence will last longer.