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Summer Session by LunaMystik
Chapter: The Only Evil in Town
05/28/2008 01:53 pm
At least they've agreed to a bickering truce - a step in the right direction!
05/28/2008 03:28 am
"but let nobody say that Buffy Summers was one to back down from the possibility of an uncomfortable wedgie!" LOL!
LOL! " “My mistake. So then you’re not trawlin’ the cemeteries offerin’ carnal favors to hard-up vampires? Imagine my disappointment,” Spike drawled."
Lot's of good dialog in this chapter : )
LOL! " “My mistake. So then you’re not trawlin’ the cemeteries offerin’ carnal favors to hard-up vampires? Imagine my disappointment,” Spike drawled."
Lot's of good dialog in this chapter : )
Thanks - those were two of my favorites to write.
Sin_amatic
05/26/2008 09:41 am
First off, I hestiated to start reading another wip, but I'm glad I took the chance. You have really captured the cadence of both Buffy and Spike - speak.
Is this really your first Btvs story. All I can say is "Great start" and "More please!"
.Ta!
Is this really your first Btvs story. All I can say is "Great start" and "More please!"
.Ta!
Thanks for giving this fic a chance! As a reader, I'm also hesitant to about WIPs... especially those that haven't been updated in a while. And yes, it's really my first BtVS fic. I find the speech patterns used in the show fun and fascinating, Thanks for the review.
05/25/2008 09:59 pm
Another good chapter. I'm loving the build up of tension.
Thank you for your reviews! As a first-time BtVS author, they mean a lot to me.
05/25/2008 02:55 am
enjoyed both their dialogue and their thoughts. very good read, thank you.
Thank you for your reply. Look out for chapter 3... more dialogue on the way!
05/24/2008 05:31 am
Great job for your first attempt, you're doing really well. Hope to read some more soon, keep at it.
Thanks for the encouragement! There's more on the way.
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