Closure by Eowyn315
Chapter: Chapter 9

08/14/2009 03:54 am
     "It was unclear whether Spike's presence bothered (Willow)because he'd tried to kill her on several occasions or simply because he'd interrupted her study time". Yep, that's our Willow. All with the having of priorities.
     Hey, I finally figured out how to use spell check (I didn't know that small ABC over a check sign & beside the "check" was spell-check) !  
     Why didn't Buffy take Spike to her house? Doesn't make sence to me, but ...
She didn't take Spike to her house because she knew the Initiative was looking for him, and she didn't want to get her mother involved in that. Also, if Buffy's going home to escape from everything for a little while, it doesn't really make sense to take one of her problems along with her.

10/18/2008 02:27 am
I don't blame Xander for his reaction, but I still feel bad for Buffy.  It's getting realistically worse for her.
Yeah, it's hard to fault either one of them for their reactions. It's just a bad situation all around...

Mark Evans
07/11/2008 11:32 am
I love this story!  You write Buffy so well.  I understand her friends reacting the way they did, but I wish they'd try to be more supporting.  But I do feel their reactions to everything are realistic.  This fic is so sad, yet it's so good, and I don's usually like angst, lol.  I can't wait for the next update :D .
Thank you! I'm pretty big on the angst, so it was sort of inevitable. :) I'm glad you're enjoying the story, and that it feels realistic. That's always a great thing to hear.

07/11/2008 04:42 am
you write this Buffy so well it's scary
Thank you! I'm glad you like it.

07/11/2008 02:57 am
Another excellent update - sad turn of events for Buffy-Xander relationship - I don't blame him for being so upset but at least bringing up the hyena incident will help clear out old wounds - that is if they can get back their trust and Best Friend relationship.

This chapter is so good at showing how this crime effects not only Buffy, but all her other relationships as well. 

Thanks much for the new chapter - your story is a great new project for the Spuffy and Buffyverse FF community -
Yeah, I figured I couldn't do a rape fic where Xander was a suspect without bringing up the hyena thing, so they'll just have to sort out their issues. Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it.

kw
07/11/2008 02:27 am
sad but good
Thank you!

07/11/2008 01:08 am

Impressive confrontations!   Getting fired up is just what Buffy needs to do.  Great update

Thanks! I think it'll be good for her. :)