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First Date by peroxidelove
:-) thanks.
04/13/2010 02:37 pm
One-Shot
There's nothing like clearing the air...laying all the cards on the table etc...to get to the real depth of emotions between a couple. Beautifully written!
A lovely treatment of their last night together - I like your vision of what might have been - they had such a horrible time of it in the series -
oh, that you so much for commenting and for reading!
really appreciate it!
He didn’t rush her. Didn’t want to rush this. - You have some nice sentiments. Liked the love that could take it's time, even though there's hardly any left. Very sweet.
thank you so much for your comment! yes, it's pretty much what i always wanted their relationship
to be like :) thanks you letting me know your thoughts!
to be like :) thanks you letting me know your thoughts!
spuffy chick
10/20/2009 05:08 am
One-Shot
awww!... that was sweet! :)
thank you, you're lovely :)
That was really sweet! I've always wanted more out the Spuffy relationship, its part at the end of season 7 while awesome just wasn't enough, but this was perfect!
It was the most beautiful relationship in all of the Buffyverse don't you agree? Thank you so much
for reading and also for your lovely review :)
for reading and also for your lovely review :)
I agree. There should totally be a second date, months later when he comes back. This was really sweet
Thank you, yes I have been convinced! Second date on the way :)
calminthechaos
10/19/2009 05:36 am
One-Shot
Please don't let this just be a one-shot! This was beautiful! Like poetry, hot chocolate, and candlelight all in one! Every word was perfect and completely in character, I wish this had happened on the show! I really think you could add more, maybe as a part of 'getting to know one another' they could claim each other, maybe bringing him back for their second date? I don't know, I just don't want this to end! Great work!
aww thank you so much for that beautiful comment, you've really motivated me to write a follow up
to this story now! haha and i just wanted to leave it as a one-shot!
oh, okay then, since you asked SO nicely a second date there shall be :)
to this story now! haha and i just wanted to leave it as a one-shot!
oh, okay then, since you asked SO nicely a second date there shall be :)
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