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Questions by xoChantelly his hair was platinum blonde - what happened to Spike's hair? Sorry if I missed something. Clifferhanger!! darn it! awesome story please continue! In this chapter, you switch back and forth from Buffy's head to Willow's head. Probably would be better to stay with Buffy and have them talk all this out. Also, I think Angel would try to tell Buffy the reason why she has to stay away from Spike. Then, she can tell him he's full of baloney. Cas 12/03/2009 03:17 am Chapter 3 Timing of Angel's arrival with this big 'problem' just has to make me wonder whether this is just a distraction. Please don't stop posting. I am sure people are reading even if they are not reviewing. lol You'll find out soon! I promise I won't stop posting, I love this fic and its nice to know that you are too =D I wish more people would review, but I'm happy with what I get. Thanks!! finding every psychic or wizard that could help him. - it would be good to see him go to one psychic and go through the ceremony rather than just tell that he went to a bunch. Like the Angel going to kill him before Buffy - good tension. Cas 12/03/2009 03:16 am Chapter 2 How typical of Angel! Please, would some Angel stakeage be too much to ask for? lol Yup, Angel is being pretty douche-ish lol. I wish I could just have him staked, but he is gonna be playing a BIG role in this series! Glad you're enjoying =D Thanks for the reviews!! Bless you for dumping all that Cordy/Connor crap. It was just unbearable. Good solid beginning. It might be stronger if you have Spike look through his own clothes to find a wallet or some id. Does it matter if he finds out who the woman was? Also, I wouldn't use Spike's name in the first part. We all know who he is, but he doesn't. Also, you might trim the song down to a few pertinent lines. Loved the Angel blackmail. His singing is beyond scary. Looking forward to more. Cas 12/03/2009 03:14 am Chapter One Loved the beginning. I can't believe you're not getting lots of reviews. But then the site seems kind of quiet - I guess everyone is holiday shopping or something. Awww, thanks! That means a lot. I haven't been getting many reviews for this fic where ever I post, but my all human fics get lots. I was thinking the same thing, with the holidays around, Spuffy is all quiet. I won't stop posting, because I absolutely adore this fic and I enjoy writing it. Thanks for reviewing, you're awesome!! | |||
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