Questions by xoChantelly
12/27/2009 12:55 am
In this chapter, you switch back and forth from Buffy's head to Willow's head. Probably would be better to stay with Buffy and have them talk all this out. Also, I think Angel would try to tell Buffy the reason why she has to stay away from Spike. Then, she can tell him he's full of baloney.
12/03/2009 03:17 am
Timing of Angel's arrival with this big 'problem' just has to make me wonder whether this is just a distraction. Please don't stop posting. I am sure people are reading even if they are not reviewing.
lol You'll find out soon! I promise I won't stop posting, I love this fic and its nice to know that you are too =D I wish more people would review, but I'm happy with what I get. Thanks!!
12/27/2009 12:49 am
finding every psychic or wizard that could help him. - it would be good to see him go to one psychic and go through the ceremony rather than just tell that he went to a bunch. Like the Angel going to kill him before Buffy - good tension.
12/03/2009 03:16 am
How typical of Angel! Please, would some Angel stakeage be too much to ask for?
lol Yup, Angel is being pretty douche-ish lol. I wish I could just have him staked, but he is gonna be playing a BIG role in this series! Glad you're enjoying =D Thanks for the reviews!!
12/27/2009 12:42 am
Bless you for dumping all that Cordy/Connor crap. It was just unbearable. Good solid beginning. It might be stronger if you have Spike look through his own clothes to find a wallet or some id. Does it matter if he finds out who the woman was? Also, I wouldn't use Spike's name in the first part. We all know who he is, but he doesn't. Also, you might trim the song down to a few pertinent lines. Loved the Angel blackmail. His singing is beyond scary. Looking forward to more.
12/03/2009 03:14 am
Loved the beginning. I can't believe you're not getting lots of reviews. But then the site seems kind of quiet - I guess everyone is holiday shopping or something.
Awww, thanks! That means a lot. I haven't been getting many reviews for this fic where ever I post, but my all human fics get lots. I was thinking the same thing, with the holidays around, Spuffy is all quiet. I won't stop posting, because I absolutely adore this fic and I enjoy writing it. Thanks for reviewing, you're awesome!!
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