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The Cedar Floor by Jess Marie nojiri23 05/02/2010 02:56 pm The Cedar Floor Nice. So satisfyingly Spuffy while remaining in canon. Exquisite. a 01/19/2010 05:36 am The Cedar Floor Nice. I particularly liked the "But, God, please don't let it happen tonight." Poor Buffy. Ah, so easily could have happened. Love it. 01/18/2010 04:25 pm The Cedar Floor so good and sweet. congrats on managing to be spuffy without totally twisting buffy's character. : ) rebcake 01/18/2010 08:16 am The Cedar Floor I like the way you balance things: the stress of the upcoming battle, the multiple reasons for every action (especially the kissing), the worry, the joking, the attention to every weapon. It never spins too far into any one thing, or promises too much for the situation. Well done. I really loved this. It was sweet and emotional. A very nice lil fic :) 01/18/2010 01:16 am The Cedar Floor I really liked the depth and emotion you reached in such a short time. Buffy's not quite fatalistic thoughts show her weariness but at the same time you capture the young word choices she uses. I was very interested by the mention of Buffy's slayer dream. Great work. What a lovely, touching little between the lines ficlet. Thank you! | |||
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