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Legacy by Kyra Storm Thanks heaps. Great read. :-) 05/28/2010 04:13 pm Chapter 16: The End? My gosh, this is a fabulous story and extremely well written. Loved the ending. Now I have to go check out all of your other work! ~liz Angel 09/15/2007 06:33 pm Chapter 16: The End? Awesome fic Jane 08/13/2006 08:22 pm Chapter 16: The End? I really loved this fic. Great work, can't wait to read more of your things:D Vicki 07/14/2006 10:57 pm Chapter 16: The End? Oh yeah - another rely on each other to survive story - and a goodie too! like this one a lot. i'm always just in awe of you authors and all the names of the creatures and characters you make up - where do you come up with them? I liked the Solum character. And.....wondering where Spike's coat is? Perhaps at the bottom of the ocean with that nasty ugallu creature? you may have to write another story to tell us where his duster is! thanks again for writing this one. Wonderful, wonderful fic! I'm all for light stories. :D How about the PWP, then taking Solum home, then their adventures in the islands, then their "higher purpose", then their return to Sunnydale with Xander's head exploding and Angel's disbelief that SPIKE could be chosen ahead of HE?!?...I hope you go on and on...again, I love it. I really like that ending and I just loved this story, thank you for sharing it!! :) WOW - great story sweetie - I am simply amazed at how delicious it was. I loved it - I am intrigued about the thought of a sequal and how will they defeat the monster after them but this was just perfect. Great amazing job and thank you for the delicious story! sirc 06/05/2006 01:45 pm Chapter 16: The End? This was a great story and I would love it if you would write something else in this 'verse :D Vickie 06/01/2006 08:51 am Chapter 16: The End? Loved it!!! Must have a Sequel!!! HEE 05/27/2006 05:00 am Chapter 16: The End? Great story. I love your characterization of both Buffy and Spike as they struggle against the attraction they feel for each other. This was very well written. I can't wait for a (the) sequel). C'mon, think of the fun of Angel finding out that Spike is now head of the Aurelius line. Not to mention the collective fit that the Scooby's (and Angel) are gonna have when they find out that the Chosen One is now mated to said head of the line. That will be spuffy goodness for everyone. [I Imagine Xander's head exploding.] You've set us up perfectly for the sequel, the hinting that the mating was pre-ordained and that there is a 'higher' purpose our mated pair, not to mention the looming horror of the Ugallu demon. Your public demands (ok, begs for) a sequel. Again - great story... thanks. vladt 05/27/2006 01:18 am Chapter 16: The End? masterful job. excellent read, thank you. you have to ask if we want more? is this a deep seated need to have people wimper and beg? alright, begging, please. awww you are SO SWEET kyra! *hugs kyra to death* It was an amazing fic and I thank you soooooooo much!!! *hugs you again* I would love to see how 'home' reacts to the news that Spike and Buffy are together, that's always fun! And check you out, you finished another fic!@ *is jealous* Amaze. I loved this- I found the ending especially chilling, and it seemed perfectly fitting to have the beautiful happy 'lets go explore the islands and be together and in love' storyline, slightly tinged by the fear of that damn Ugallu demon. I think a sequel to this would be supreme. Oh, and obviously- very happy mrSpike decided not to rip his lady's throat out. Lovely stuff. && Sequel please? This is a wonderful story! I loved it! Hope you make a sequel! pretty_in-Fangs 05/26/2006 03:31 pm Chapter 16: The End? Yay! Great ending. Thanks. I loved this fic, from beginning to end! I'm so glad everything turned out fine for Buffy and Spike. I really hope you do a sequel! :D Lou 05/26/2006 01:16 pm Chapter 16: The End? Gotta love a happy ending. Many thanks. SpaceLord 05/26/2006 06:59 am Chapter 16: The End? Well it worked out for all at the end. Hmm the worm thing that hunts them might be imortal but I think it's a bad idea for it to be indestructable. Anything that lives should be able to die. I would love more stories in this verse but would love it even more if you wrote a story where Angel finds out that Buffy and Spike are mated, that could be very entertaining. :) DizzyB 05/26/2006 06:04 am Chapter 16: The End? Awesome story. I thoroughly enjoyed it from first to last. And the Ugallu was such a great and creepy creation of yours. Kudos! No, vamp Buffy?? YOU TEASE!! *gives you the stink eye* And yes, make up for it by giving us a sequel *nods* Great ending. Nice claiming, even if it was in front of an audience. And you ended it like one of those darned horror movies where you know there will be a sequel. Laura 05/26/2006 03:04 am Chapter 16: The End? I liked the ending. I was afraid Spike was going to turn her but it all worked out in the end. Adriana 05/26/2006 03:01 am Chapter 16: The End? Whatever your heart desires, Kyra. If you feel like a lighter fic, go for it. I loved Legacy! I was following it before all hell broke loose in NO so I am glad that you're feeling up to writing again. YAY! Pin 05/26/2006 02:40 am Chapter 16: The End? I really enjoyed this and like this chapter in particular. You've left lots of possibilites for future stories, which is very nice. Thanks! Bloody excellent fic it is :P ~*~Tasha~*~ 05/26/2006 02:32 am Chapter 16: The End? Interesting way to wrap that one up. Nice claim. OH my what is going to happen - oh just wow good good story Emilee 05/24/2006 01:18 am Chapter 15: Power AARGH!! Mean, very mean making us wait til Sunday. But it wouldn't be so painful if it wasn't such an excellent read. Great job! Oh... My... God... Poor Buffy- how is this going to end? Another great chapter :]] ~*~Tasha~*~ 05/21/2006 07:56 am Chapter 15: Power Oh my gosh!! First off ... stupid of Buffy to think that her saying she doesn't love Angel would just change everything all peachy after she rejected Spike. Secondly, wow ... nice reminder of how evil Spike can be. I'm still going to hope for a pleasant ending to the story though. I know that things can turn one way and another back and forth. I really don't think he is stupid enough to fall for Ipwet's line of crap. He always tends to surprise us all with something else. So, I'm going to cross my fingers that he has something else up his sleeve instead of just killing Buffy. Excellent update, and I look forward to getting the last chapter to see how you conclude this one. Damn I hope spike comes to his senses!! Is it sunday yet? *looks at clock* Thanks for this fic, it's been an incredible ride and I will be sad to see it end but then there is the jealousy that you're actually finishing your wips up, LOL!! Randi Giles 05/21/2006 02:51 am Chapter 15: Power Evil naughty tease! Pin 05/20/2006 03:49 pm Chapter 15: Power Great chapter - lots of shifting allegiences. Looking forward to seeing if Spike really goes through with it. Thanks Pin 05/20/2006 03:49 pm Chapter 15: Power Great chapter - lots of shifting allegiences. Looking forward to seeing if Spike really goes through with it. Thanks Aaaaaaaack! vladt 05/20/2006 06:10 am Chapter 15: Power excellent read, thanks. will wait patiently to discover how you wrap this up. though this does seem like the beginning of a tale. ROFLMAO, of course the story must go where it will, or it isn't a true story just a sham :P RATS! I'll have to wait over a month to find out how this ends! Buffy deserves what she gets but still - - - No flames here, I am lovin' it still! Can't wait for the last chappie. pretty_in_fangs 05/20/2006 04:08 am Chapter 15: Power ::whimper:: Evil. But what does her blood tell him? And I can't believe she thought that just saying that she didn't love Angel would be enought o turn everything to roses again. fangfaceandrea 05/20/2006 03:49 am Chapter 15: Power not a flame since I'm loving this, just my emotional reaction: Spike's an asshole!! can i stake him?? pretty please? oooo yay! vamp buffy!!! Oh Man just doesnt cover it! Is he realy going to do it? OMG! can you emagen how porweful she'd be if he does! Oh how I hope you update soon. SpaceLord 05/20/2006 01:46 am Chapter 15: Power Ah well I thought this was gonna be one of those happy ending stories where Buffy and Spike would find love and escape and live happily ever after but I guess I was wrong. Can't say I'm disapointed more like I'm surprised. Glad to see more frequent updates it was a bit slow there for a while. No he betrayed them - how could he? Runs to next chappie! No- bad, bad Spike. This makes the butterflies in my stomach go crazy. Oh, and I LOVE Solum- he's a great character. Very very creative. Love this!! Stupid Spike. I'm hoping he's going to come to his senses here!! *rushes to read next chapter* sirc 05/19/2006 07:10 pm Chapter 14: Betrayal great chapter OMG! WTF is Spike up to now?? Poor Solum. He went out of his way to save Spike and Buffy and keep them alive and now he's being given to the vampires that imprisoned him in the first place. Hope you're enjoying your chain saw. lol and please! You might bite her, but you wont kill her, Spike. And Im damb sure you aint going to let anyone elese bite her, no matter how mad you are at her! So ha! vladt 05/18/2006 05:07 am Chapter 14: Betrayal wonderful read. spike has to betray them, it is the only way out. two chapters? not nearly enough. giles, xander, and angel"s rants each deserve a seperate chapter. fangfaceandrea 05/18/2006 01:20 am Chapter 14: Betrayal holy crap! I hate Ipwet. Love this, can't wait for more! cheryl 05/17/2006 09:12 pm Chapter 14: Betrayal I have enjoyed this story - it is one of the better ones I have read. Thank you! Dar 05/17/2006 07:55 pm Chapter 14: Betrayal Well at least Spike got them out of there. I don't see how you can wrap it up in two but then the word sequel come to mind :)Love the chapter. Good Luck with the chainsaw dihcar 05/17/2006 07:29 pm Chapter 14: Betrayal "Angel and Giles would kill him." Haha, yeah right! They get to try. seeya ~*~Tasha~*~ 05/17/2006 07:10 pm Chapter 14: Betrayal Dang. At first my heart was really breaking at the thought of Spike betraying Buffy. After reading the chapter, I kind of realize why he still went along with it. Buffy basically denied him, rejected him again like all the others as if he wasn't good enough. That is the worst thing you can do to Spike because he will always react to it. He's been hurt too many times before. So, even though I am really sad that he still betrayed them ... I at least understand why. I hope that a happy ending still comes out of this somehow. Good update. Spike! You bastard! SpaceLord 05/17/2006 06:29 pm Chapter 14: Betrayal Only 2 more chappies....how will you ever be able to wrap this up in 2 chappies? Well I love the chappy, hope that Spike is nice to Solum at least he deserves to be able to go home. Cool. :-) 05/28/2010 03:35 pm Chapter 13: Torn okay, that was a frickin good fight and awesome end to the chappie. just had to say it ~liz Well dusted the old one (happy!) but poor buffy - i can't wait to read the next chapter and see what happens next. This is a really complelling story! sirc 05/19/2006 06:43 pm Chapter 13: Torn great chapter ~*~Tasha~*~ 05/16/2006 05:43 am Chapter 13: Torn Oh boy ... what is Spike going to do now. His whole deal with Ipwet is wrong. I hope that he realizes now, after what they just went through, that Buffy is his and he won't share her with ANYONE else. Excellent update. Bad Spike, no giving Buffy to Ipwet! *flicks him on the nose* Bad boy akarinacj 05/15/2006 11:26 pm Chapter 13: Torn Great story, very interresting and different. Hope you update soon. I am loving this! Keep it coming! SpaceLord 05/15/2006 11:59 am Chapter 13: Torn Ohh sweet fight....this is so good :) pretty_in_fangs 05/15/2006 05:58 am Chapter 13: Torn I'm happy to see this story continues. I think that Spike's demon may be about to smack him upside the head with the knowledge that he's fallen for Buffy. OH shit Spike is da man. lovin it, more soon *whiney annoying voice* vladt 05/15/2006 03:21 am Chapter 13: Torn great chapter, thanks for the excellent read. Sam 05/15/2006 01:31 am Chapter 13: Torn WOW!!! Great Story so far. Love it. More please. That was an asume Chapter! I so hope you'll be able to update again soon. This is sutch a grate story. totaly loven it. :-) 05/28/2010 03:26 pm Chapter 12: Waking Up noooooooo he can't betrey buffy (okay I know he won't - really - right) looks nervous and intrigued and runs to next chapter Ooooh- poor Buffy. Bad spike for even considering Ipwet's plan! Love this. Love the new developments :) ~*~Tasha~*~ 03/25/2006 02:11 pm Chapter 12: Waking Up Ooo ... I really hope that Spike doesn't betray her. {whimpers} Look forward to more. Excited to see a chapter of this one. romero 03/15/2006 05:42 am Chapter 12: Waking Up Wow! Is it hot in here? I don't think you could have made this chapter any better. Love all the bitey goodness..etc..I'm looking forward to reading more soon. rayan 03/13/2006 06:00 am Chapter 12: Waking Up ahhhh give me more nooooow....its one hell of a story you got there....keep it up Irene 03/12/2006 08:27 pm Chapter 12: Waking Up I can't belive what Spike is doing, but it is very "Pre-addmitance to loveing Buffy" Spike. Can't wait for the next update vladt 03/12/2006 07:31 am Chapter 12: Waking Up very good update. thanks for the read. I certainly hope Spike isn't going to fall for that crazy vamp's big ideas. Maybe their host can just show Spike and Buffy the way out of the caves. More story please. kim 03/11/2006 11:46 pm Chapter 12: Waking Up Spiiiiiiiike! squeeeeee!!! Oh, um sorry! I adore this story and am very happy to see have a new chapter. :-). So good! So hot 05/28/2010 03:19 pm Chap 11: Quenching the Desire And you worry about your sex scenes???? :-). So go 05/28/2010 03:16 pm Chap 11: Quenching the Desire ok, im reading this fic straight through and wasnt planning on commenting until the end... but that last line of solum's was sooo frickin hilarious, i just had to review to say so. cuz like, there's all this hot, spuffy goodness and all of a sudden, BAM! humor. that is just a great line!!!!! ~liz LMAO - the last line was absolutly perfect - great update - great story! I am really enjoying this and can't wait to see where youtake it! “Man, I sure need to get me one of them mortal enemies.†Everyone does man, every one :P vladt 03/12/2006 07:23 am Chap 11: Quenching the Desire excellent chapter. plot can be somewhat overrated. thanks for the fun. ~*~Tasha~*~ 03/03/2006 08:13 am Chap 11: Quenching the Desire ROFLMAO ! That last line was hilarious. This whole chapter was steaming hot. {fanning herself} Darn fine writing. Let the plot stay hidden. LOL. Although I still felt it was plot building and character building in the chapter. {Smiles} One mortal enemie for me to please, Oh and Super Size it! just sue 02/10/2006 12:33 pm Chap 11: Quenching the Desire Yikes! Have just caught up with this again and am loving it! For someone who thinks they don't write good sex scenes, well, I just wanna be around when you have one you're happy with 'cos that was way good enough for me! So looking forward to more. Thanks ever so. lol! loved that last line! and omg, that was hot! *fans herself and passes out as well* Randi Giles 02/10/2006 06:10 am Chap 11: Quenching the Desire Oh Hot Dang! That was just...I need a smoke and I don't smoke. I blame you...excuse me because i musnt now go awaken my mortal enemy... god damn that was funny!! that last line, I mean. I love this fic!! feel free to not find your plot for a while because you do good work without it. But, if you should happen to come across my brain in your search, please send it home. It's been missed. ruby redgurl 02/10/2006 04:45 am Chap 11: Quenching the Desire That was way HOT!!! if you cant find your plot, then pray continue and write another sexy hot chapter instead. Great chapter -hot,hot sex and finishing with a funny. neo_trinityknot 02/10/2006 02:31 am Chap 11: Quenching the Desire I thought it was hot... LOL! I love Solum. Nice scene. Very detailed. And your transitions in Buffy's thinking were very good, particularly in the first part of the chapter. SpaceLord 02/10/2006 01:46 am Chap 11: Quenching the Desire Yeah I'm with Solum....sure could do with a mortal enemy ;) So when the plot gets lost just go with the smut, well I'm not complaining :) Ella 02/09/2006 11:54 pm Chap 11: Quenching the Desire wow. that was so amazing. just absolutely amazing. keep up the great work! WHEW!! We all need mortal enemies like that. Gotta go smoke now. Kyra, dear, if that was disjointed and unsmooth.... All I can say is MORE MORE MORE!!!!!! Here's a carrot to lure the plot bunny out. Maybe you should wing them back to Sunnyhell and write some Scooby reaction to Buffy being missing. Might help the other bunnies come together. Sigh. I wish ;-). Thanks. 05/28/2010 02:56 pm Chapter 10: Feeding the Hunger lovely chaptre sweetie - I think this is absolutly fantastic ... really enjoying the complex universe you are weaving and can't wait to see what will happen next! Great long-chapter. Oh the lust-y-ness :D hehe vladt 03/12/2006 06:58 am Chapter 10: Feeding the Hunger wonderful update to an excellent fic. great line to end the chapter. thanks for the enjoyment. ~*~Tasha~*~ 02/02/2006 05:26 am Chapter 10: Feeding the Hunger Really glad to see an update. Sorry that it took me so long to review. Way behind on my reading. This was an excellent chapter. the UST between these two (if a power source) could keep LA Running for years. Excellent writing, and I look forward to more. idk5743228 01/23/2006 08:52 pm Chapter 10: Feeding the Hunger OMG, don't like the hanging. So,will she, won't she? tell me jane 01/23/2006 03:27 pm Chapter 10: Feeding the Hunger Love it can't wait for more. Great Story Great Chapter. I really enjoyed. Looking forward to the next chapters. Please continue to update and soon. Thankyou for a great story. That was a cliffie! Will there be nice, juicy smut when you come back? hehe...I love solum! His little smirks and quips. And Spike so obviously in denial. And Buffy took it on herself to make the move...yay!!! Just picked this story back up and am still enjoying it - I hope you do get a chance to work on it over the next couple of week.s Fantastic chapter!! You are drawing it out, damn you. LOVE THIS FIC!!! Good luck next week and looking forward to your return! gaillee 01/23/2006 09:45 am Chapter 10: Feeding the Hunger That was an outstanding chapter. Thank you so much. Loved the way Solum sees through their relationship and how they are oblivious. The tension is built so high by the end of this chapter...I'll be anxiously awaiting you update. (P.S. I am so glad you are updating your other fics, 'cause I like them all and have been anticipating updates on them all.) :-) 05/28/2010 02:38 pm Chap 9: An Ally ohh I like the wildcard - what an interesting character that you created. Very lovely story! Aww- love is in the air. And thank God, Buffy finally gets the chance to get some food into her system. Poor girl- hopefully, once she's back to full strength she'll be ready to kick some demon ass once again. And see to Spike too, of course. romero 01/20/2006 03:42 am Chap 9: An Ally Very funny lines. Great update. It seems to me I read the first part of this story somewhere, sometime but don't remember for sure. (Blonde here) Anyway, I hope there will be more soon. This digger demon appears to be entertaining and hospitable which Spike and Buffy definitely need now. jane 01/15/2006 05:06 pm Chap 9: An Ally Stonking update more more more. “More like one of the inmates. Actually I’m usually the only one, most of the others I find too late, and they’ve already been dinner and they are on their way out the other end. Know what I mean?â€Â
This line made me giggle! Great chapter. I'm so glad they found an ally of sorts and I am sooo glad to see this fic being updated! *glomps on* I love it. It's one of my 'drop everything and read the update NOW' fics. Can't wait to see what happens next! ~*~Tasha~*~ 01/15/2006 11:34 am Chap 9: An Ally This was a funny and great update. I loved it. Very entertaining. neo_trinityknot 01/15/2006 09:22 am Chap 9: An Ally great update!! ohhh what is going on - looks intrigued and runs to next chapter! Uh oh. Great dream sequence! Scary demon to face now though- still loving this a lot Irishrose 01/15/2006 10:57 am Chapter 8: Dreams of the Past I've been craving an update on this. And certainly no disappointment here! Love the dreamand Spike's realization, and I'll bet Ipwet is about to be a very happy vamp! Wonderful to see an update of this one. More soon, please!
-Lisa ~*~Tasha~*~ 12/28/2005 07:01 am Chapter 8: Dreams of the Past Love the story. Glad to see an update. Good to see this story continued.
I don't know if anyone else had it, but the first half of the chapter seems to hve formatting issues. There aren't any line spaces inbetween paragraphs. It is pretty much all run together line after line. There are carriage returns to the next paragraph, but the next paragraph starts directly beneath with no space. No big. Just makes it a little harder to read. SpaceLord 12/28/2005 04:14 am Chapter 8: Dreams of the Past Well I like this story alot so far, can't wait for the next chapter. jane 12/28/2005 03:39 am Chapter 8: Dreams of the Past Glad you're up and running again great update. Oracleholly 12/28/2005 03:05 am Chapter 8: Dreams of the Past YAY! KYRA'S BACK! love the new chapter -- the scene where Buffy "dreams/inserts herself" into Spike's past - reminded me of the time when Buffy dreamed of Angel's. But this was so much better -- b/c you know it's Spike.
I'm really not liking that head vampire. And apparently not everyone knew of that centipede thingie's existance. Will there by a coup? (eager for more) Way fun. :-) 05/28/2010 02:21 pm Chapter 7 Trust Given excellant story - really good job so far and loojking forward to reading the rest~ Incredible fight sequence- I had bated breath and everything. I love the bond growing between these two :]] ~*~Tasha~*~ 11/09/2005 03:25 am Chapter 7 Trust Given If this is rusty then whoo weeee ... I'd love to see you at full throttle. You did a great job with this chapter. Loved it! Yikes! Pretty bad place Spike and Buffy have found themselves. When are they going to pay some attention to the crystal? That might not be meant to help Buffy but it will help Spike. I'm glad to hear you plan to update more, I'm really interested in this story, it has such a unique plot line :) jane 10/21/2005 06:41 am Chapter 7 Trust Given Brilliant chapter I love adventure stories. SpaceLord 10/21/2005 05:09 am Chapter 7 Trust Given Love it, it's very good so far and very original I think. Keep up the good work. Damn Kyra this was amazing! The action was incredible!!! I'm loving the UST between spike and Buffy too and how they have to rely on each other *sighs happily* You're not rusty at all, you nailed this chapter. Glad you're back, we've missed you! *hugs* Unreal. Thanks. :-) 05/28/2010 02:11 pm 1 Chapter Five - AHH so that is her dasterdly plan ... She doens't know how loyal Spike can be does she - well at least she doesn't get it. I loved Buffy accidently gettign Spike off. It was hilarious and a bit steamy. *wicked grin * great chapter Chapter six - great chapter - I loved the draining of buffy and spike's rescue of her - really great update! Chapter three - excellant story so far - I love how you are making the elder vampires have backhistories, it makes it very interesting and keeps me wanting to find out what happens next! Chapter Four - Very yummy I like the bite and the wanting each other. Very yummy chapter - I am enjoying the story immensely - thank you for the great tale! Chapter One - Very intriguing start - life imprisonment in the Garden - I can't wait to see what happens next - what is the garden like, how will they escape? Ohhh details! Chapter Two - LOL Only buffy would be concerned about how she smells. I am glad they are figureing out to work together quickly. I am very intrigued and can't wait to read more! Prolouge- Very intriguing start - I wasn't sure I was going to like it because trapped on a desert island or a plane crash has been done often, well but often. (what I have a short attention span) but I really really like the premise of this story. I especially like the chracter of Cleo's maid. Very intriguing beginning and looking forward to more Just found this. Totally amazing. I'll be getting up to date very quickly [but it's the middle of the night right now so I might put off my reading until tommorrow morning] Very very excellent though- I love the bond that's growing. Completely beautiful :]] Oh, not rusty! Very exciting chapters and now I want more! ~*~Tasha~*~ 10/11/2005 01:04 pm 1 No new update, but I was happy to reread this one. Look forward to more. Very unique plotline going. LoL, loved the sleepgroping!
Very good story, can't wait to read more. As if they didn't have enough problems. please update soon. I need some new stuff :) | |||
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