Life On Earth by FetchingMadScientist

Sofiya
09/08/2015 10:10 pm
Angels and Devils         
Hi, Where can I find this autor contacts? Also, it would be great, even so many years, to read the ending of the story.....So much great work, and not finished(((

04/26/2009 11:01 pm
The Promise         
very good chapter, thank you. always expect everything to spiral out of control when angel appears.

03/16/2009 04:24 am
Silly Rabbit         
This is a beautiful chapter - long wait but worth it - its so poignant and heart breaking for all of them -

10/28/2008 01:07 am
Silly Rabbit         
my comment on the last chapter could fit here. very well done, thank you.
:) thank *you*

Miss Rose
10/26/2008 05:23 pm
Silly Rabbit         
I liked the Spike and Buffy walking in on Willow and Joni scene, Willow had every right to be scared... hurting Joni is definitely a no-no. Interesting stuff going on around Joni, I can't wait to find out what happens in her life next! Great chapter! 
Papa bear and Mama bear are not going to let their baby be hurt, you're right:)  Let's hope Willow learned that.  Thanks for reading.

10/26/2008 03:52 am
Silly Rabbit         
Gggggggggrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr    AH!  Great chapter can't wait for more!
Thanks ! :) (I made you "GRRRR)

09/13/2008 05:55 am
Little Girls Lost         
possibly the saddest chapter. very, very good read. thank you.
Thanks so much for reading.  Knowing that others care about the stories I tell keeps the muse from needing oil like the tin woodsman. :)

Miss Rose
09/04/2008 10:54 pm
Little Girls Lost         
What fascinating new twists! I can't wait to find out how all these new things came about. Great chapter!
Won't it be fun? :)

07/28/2008 07:17 pm
Rise and Fall         
wonderful update - I especially like this section:


“Spike, that’s an easy one,” Buffy said, “She loves her Daddy. Her Daddy’s hurting and she wants to fix it. She’s a Slayer,

and the courage of Jonina at the end - I feel so sorry and so moved by this little girl and Spike -

I know that things are getting better for them but it seems that they will all be destroyed from all their pain if something does not bring them some joy and hope again -
Yes, it will be tough, but if, in the end Spike can be with Buffy and Joni...forever, wouldn't that be worth the sacrifice?  Thanks for reading. :)

07/26/2008 06:51 am
Rise and Fall         
awwwwwwwww man!!!!!!!!!!!  Your evil for stopping there!!!!!!!  Aaaagggggghhhhhhhhhh I need more!!!!
I know...but keep reading, okay?

07/26/2008 12:40 am
Rise and Fall         
is joni right? very good read, thank you.
She could be.  In fact, Joni could be the linchpin in this.  Does that help?

Miss Rose
07/25/2008 08:25 pm
Rise and Fall         
Something important is about to happen soon I can just feel it! Loved the chapter! :soon:
Gee, you think? ;) Thanks for reading!

07/26/2008 12:33 am
Lemonade         
very good read, thank you. difficult to have to rely on angel to help resolve anything.
Yeah, I know it is.  But he's gotta learn sometime...don't you think?

Miss Rose
07/02/2008 03:14 pm
Lemonade         
It seemed that, this time, the rabbit would win the race... I find this sentence very comforting. :) Loved this look into Angel's thoughts. Great chapter.
I'm glad, it was meant to comfort. :) and I'm so glad you're reading.

07/01/2008 04:25 pm
Lemonade         
I feel an ending soon, ,i hope by the end i will understand it all!  WOW oh WOW i want more more more!!!!!
The end is indeed near...but so is Christmas! :)  I hope you will give it a chance once it's done, sort of read the stories of this saga and connect them together, and if you have questions, don't be shy about e-mailing me. 

Thanks for reading!  And remember...good things come in tiny packages!;)

05/25/2008 10:47 am
Entreaty         
Great to have another update - their lives are filled with so much pain and sorrows - maybe finally times and places will begin to come back to being able to live together again -

Wonderful Series -
They will---but there's still that sacrifice to be made.  And it may not come from the quarter you think it will. 

05/25/2008 03:28 am
Entreaty         
beautiful read, thank you.
Glad you enjoyed it, and I hope to keep you enthralled a little longer. :) 

Miss Rose
05/23/2008 05:30 pm
Entreaty         
" He’d been rocked, set back on his heels, but he wasn’t going down"... yep, that's Spike alright!  It's so sad to see Joni blaming herself. :( Spike handled the tough situation pretty well though. Can't wait to find out what happens to this family next. Great chapter.
Glad you liked it.  It makes sense that Joni would blame herself, she's a tiny Slayer with all of Buffy's angst inside her! :(  Now, if Angel would just show....

04/22/2008 10:28 pm
A Midas Touch         
This is such a painful and beautiful piece of work - Thank you so much for the new update - I look forward to each new chapter.

Hard to keep track of everything and I always have to go back to reach several chapters but it is worth all the effort of the difficult read. 
Didn't mean to make it hard on you...:( But, this is a multi-story saga, and Joss put so many neat things into the seventh season...and then there was AtS...with no consequences.  I just couldn't leave it like that.  Or, let Spike burn in Hell.  He will be rewarded, just you wait and see.  And, if Buffy would only let him...Spike could change the Slayers forever. :)

04/21/2008 05:54 am
A Midas Touch         
great read, thank you.
Thanks for reading...It means a lot. ;)

Miss Rose
04/18/2008 09:12 pm
A Midas Touch         
Loved learning this... “Homer” was, she had no doubt now, he was the manifestation of a vampire’s soul; of Spike’s soul.
Could he have been pulled from Heaven? It was the only thing that made any sense.
Will be eagerly awaiting the next update! Wonderful chapter!
Thank you!  You mean it wasn't obvious before?  The chapter "Mirrors" and "What  If" in the previous story, "Vanishing Point" should help with that.  The story, with chapter titles, is over on another site.  I'm really glad you enjoyed the story! ;)

04/18/2008 07:20 pm
A Midas Touch         
MORE MORE MORE please???  great chapter!
Thanks! :)

03/25/2008 02:52 am
Origami         
very good read, thank you.
Thanks for reading! :)

Miss Rose
03/20/2008 07:46 pm
Origami         
Whoa! :o So all this time Oscar's been a familiar... very interesting turn of events. :heartfic: Fantastic chapter! :)
Yep.  Does that make you happy? :)  I keep saying...save the world go to hates?  Not in my world!  It'll take some time, but Spike will get what a hero deserves. Glad you like the story.

03/20/2008 06:38 am
Origami         
Great to have a new update - thank you for the new addition - burning his journals was very sad - I sure hope that Spike and his family can come through all these horrendous experiences -

Like Oscar very much -
Glad you like Oscar.  You're supposed to, and you will still see him in flashbacks/forwards.  There is a little pinpoint of light ahead, and a happy ending.  I hope you enjoy the ride getting there, and looking for the clues I've laid out within this story and its prequel.

Thanks again for reading :)

02/21/2008 10:04 am
All The King's Men         
Great to have the update - I am getting so excited and hopeful that they can all be united again - at last in peace
Hopefully.  But is is the little things that matter. ;) Thanks for reading.

02/21/2008 02:24 am
All The King's Men         
as always, red knows what is best.  right. very good read, also as usual. thank you.
Riiiight.:)  And why is "Spike/Homer" wary of the witch?  We will see...

Miss Rose
02/19/2008 04:30 pm
All The King's Men         
Looks like something exciting is going down soon, can't wait to learn more about it. Great chapter!
Yep, something's gonna happen.  Is it good or not?  Wait and see...

kim
02/19/2008 10:42 am
All The King's Men         
The time jumps have me confused.......
Sorry, but the next few chapters deal with the consequences of a decision Buffy makes. There shouldn't be too many more right away, but pay attention to what Buffy does. 

It could be important.

01/30/2008 04:49 am
Taking Troy         
fine read, thank you.  between the chapter title and the chapter ending not expecting anything positive happening soon.
Maybe not...Then again, maybe it's a "play fake."  Only the "Mad scientist" knows for sure, Igor. ;)

01/23/2008 01:28 pm
Taking Troy         
wonderful to have an update - I have enjoyed reading this very much -
Thank you. It may be hard to follow, but Spike is playing his own "Shell" game. ;) His family, and his reward mean too much to him to give them to someone else.

Miss Rose
01/23/2008 05:27 am
Taking Troy         
How perfect that Spike playfully called Joni Slayer. :) Can't wait to find out what happens when Willow confirms what Buffy already knows. Great chapter!
It should be interesting. Spike is smart...and the reward is just too good to miss.

Thanks for reading.

01/23/2008 02:25 am
Taking Troy         
AW MAN!!!!!!!! Please update soon! twist upon twist and turn upon turn!


he he he great chapter!
Can you follow me, and Spike, around the curves? It should be a fun ride. :)

01/15/2008 03:53 am
A Rabbit's Foot         
very good read and i nice positive chapter ending. thank you.
It can't be * all* doom and gloom :)

01/01/2008 11:04 am
A Rabbit's Foot         
Great to have your update -
:)

Miss Rose
12/31/2007 07:05 pm
A Rabbit's Foot         
What a heartwarming reaction from Joni. :) I liked seeing a bit of her slayer side coming out to play. Great chapter!
Maybe now we can learn about the "choice " Joyce was talking about in the previous story. :) Maybe Joni knows something that she doesn't know she knows?

01/15/2008 03:42 am
The Little Fears         
very good read, thank you. and the sad little “Oh, Papa…no!” just might jolt spike out of his despair and get him fighting again.
Thank you so much for reading! I sure hope Joni can help.

Miss Rose
12/19/2007 05:24 pm
The Little Fears         
Whoa, what a sad twist at the end there. :wah: Can't wait to find out what happens next. :soon: Fantastic chapter!
Thanks for reading, Rose. :)

12/19/2007 01:22 pm
The Little Fears         
oh man oh man oh man oh man!!!!! Please update soon!!!!! OH WOW~!
I'll try, okay. Thanks for reading.

kim
12/19/2007 08:53 am
The Little Fears         
Such a big mess they've all gotten into. :(
Yep, time travel can be a real witch.

11/30/2007 08:03 pm
Unfinished Symphony         
more, please! very good read, thank you.
More soon, I promise. Can you wait? :) I;m not sure I can...;)

11/28/2007 01:56 pm
Unfinished Symphony         
wait wait wait his new fledge,,, now i am trying to remember if he turned Angelus,,,, its kinda makin sense,,, will reread the whole thing after you finish LOL
Yep, vampire again. You can read it over if you want to, and don't be afraid to ask questions. Thanks for reading.

Miss Rose
11/28/2007 01:35 pm
Unfinished Symphony         
I'm so glad Oscar was able to give Spike and Buffy a tip about the amulet, can't wait to find out what they learn. :) Great chapter!
I can't wait, either! :) Thanks for reading.

11/30/2007 07:57 pm
Less The Greater         
very good read, thank you. looking forward to the answer to spike question. actually looking for ward to the answers to many questions.
Me too! Hope they come soon. Watch for them, and thanks for reading. :)

Miss Rose
10/19/2007 04:35 pm
Less The Greater         
Intriguing opening scene... looks like Spike isn't the only one to "rise" in this update. ;)The Spike/Joyce scene was very intriguing too. Can't wait to find out how Spike's confrontation with Oscar goes. Great chapter!
And you would be correct. :) Glad you liked the Joyce scene. I'm interested to find out what Oscar has to say, too. :) It could be fun.

10/19/2007 01:42 pm
Less The Greater         
YES YES YES!!!!!!! I can't wait to hear this!
:)

10/14/2007 10:16 am
Intangible         
Just want to say again how much I have enjoyed reading this fine work - Congratulations and thank you so much for continuing your work.
Thanks!:) This is indeed a labor of love. Sometimes it's nice to know that others love this story too, as it seems to be flying a bit under the radar.

10/02/2007 03:01 am
Intangible         
very good read, thank you. you are handing out details like they are diamonds. more, more... please.
Thanks, vladt. Diamonds are a girl's best friend,you know. ;) I hate giving them up, but I will if I have to. :)

Miss Rose
09/30/2007 04:37 pm
Intangible         
That was quite a bombshell Oscar dropped! Can't wait to learn more about Oscar's revelation. Wonderful chapter!
Yes it was. Can Buffy be strong enough to handle any other interesting things Oscar might say?

Hmmmm...It could be fun to watch and see.

09/30/2007 06:09 am
Intangible         
Aaaaaaaaggggggggrrrrrrrrr!

ummm sorry great chapter...........
:) Does this mean you like it?

nmcil
09/15/2007 11:15 pm
Cavemen and Astronaughts         
Great Place to leave us - your series is kicking butt - excellent read, I am totally engrossed in the piece - Hope that you have some new chapters again soon -

Happy that Spike and all the connections between timelines, personas, and realms are starting to connect in one place again -

Congratulations on your fine series -
All of time has to converge at one point or another. (At least it does for my story.) I'm so glad you're enjoying this story, and hope you will read more.

Thanks. :)

09/13/2007 08:40 pm
Cavemen and Astronaughts         
very good chapter thank you. now, the details.
Details to follow...:) And thank you for reading.

Miss Rose
09/13/2007 01:37 pm
Cavemen and Astronaughts         
Loved the flashback. :) Can't wait to find out what Oscar has to say. Great chapter!
Glad you liked. More soon...:)

09/13/2007 01:29 pm
Cavemen and Astronaughts         
Can't wait for the next update!!!! I wanta know i wanta know!!!!!
It's coming soon...:)

08/20/2007 10:12 pm
The Red Horse         
another very good read, thank you.i'm sure that isn't what buffy expected him to say.
Thanks. :) Now, what will Buffy say?

Miss Rose
08/17/2007 01:35 pm
The Red Horse         
Hmmm... I wonder if Spike is gonna sense Oscar like Buffy did? Either way this is definitely gonna be one interesting talk. Loved the chapter!
Maybe. It should be interesting to see them interact with one another, though. :)

07/25/2007 09:44 pm
King of Beasts         
beautiful chapter ending. thanks for the fine read.
Glad you think so,and thanks for reading.

Miss Rose
07/19/2007 01:15 pm
King of Beasts         
:spuffy: The Spuffy interaction was wonderful. I'm so glad Spike and Buffy had this little moment of peace. Great chapter! :)
Thanks! Don't you think it's about time Buffy rescued Spike for a change? Let's hope this is a sign of things to come.

07/19/2007 04:24 am
King of Beasts         
awwwwwwwwwwwwww I loved this chapter! Great update! can't wait for the next!
:) Glad you liked it.

07/06/2007 09:21 pm
Fractured Light         
excellent read, thank you.
Thanks for reading. :)

Miss Rose
07/04/2007 06:49 am
Fractured Light         
Poor Buffy, you did a great job of conveying her insecurity, hopefully she'll grow and become the mom she wants to be. Interesting plan Oscar has regarding Liam, I hope it works. The Spike/Joni interaction was so beautifully touching as always. Loved the chapter!
Thanks. Things should be looking "Beautiful" for Mommy soon. ;)

07/04/2007 06:33 am
Fractured Light         
I read in a review a few chapters back that a sequel to this could be a possibility. I just wanted to let you know, I really hope you do! I admit that I really don't understand this story and it confuses the heck out of me, but I still do enjoy it and like the 'verse.

I absolutely adored Prayers For A Poet, but felt a bit... cheated, when it ended. It seemed like I survived all that angst, just to finally make it to the good stuff, and instead found the words 'The End'. So, I was thrilled when you made the sequel to it, but slightly dissapointed when it just... fast-forwarded so many years ahead. It was like, but wait a minute, don't we even get to see a day with them together before the tragedy strikes? Which reminds me, if there's anyway i could talk you into a one-shot of the time period immedualtely after 'prayers For A Poet', I would love you forever!

I'm also not usually too good with new characters - it doesn't matter who it is, I just never quite fall in love with them the way normal people do. So, i may have read through that one a bit too fast.

But with this one, I'm realy struggling. Not with staying interested, just with understanding what all exactly is going on. Maybe it's just too deep for me! haha!

the only other thing I would ask if you go ahead with a fourth, is that ican you give buffy a little of the lime-light too? I don't really know how to say it. It's just, it's kinda like in all three fics, 'Spike is injured, Spike is hurting, Joni only wants Spike, Spike is emotionally tortured, Spike's the only one anyone care's about', you know?

I'm sorry, I really don't mean to be so negative. I do love your fics. i just sometimes wish Buffy could be more than just the one that sits around worrying, not knowing what to do, you know?

i realize that most of the people on this board tend to not even like Buffy & prefer to see hero/tortured/to-the-rescue Spike, but i'd just really love to see Spike set around and actually worry about her for once in his life, instead.

Please don't hate me!
I don't hate you. The fact that you sat down to type a thoughtful comment means so much! ::hugs:: Most people just say, "Meh, too much work, forget it."

My 'verse is convoluted. But, it's not all about "Buffy sits around worrying." In fact, all of this was set in motion because Spike was worried about Buffy "for once in his life."

It was Joni who couldn't deal with what happened, and because of that, she messed things up.

Believe it, or not, the happy life you want, with Buffy featured, :) is about to start. Just wait for it.

Good things come in small packages...;)

07/04/2007 06:27 am
Fractured Light         
I am so hooked,, i am understanding more and more and its hard because its always changing but its such an awesome story every update is just wonderful! When its all done I am going to reread it again I always catch things better the second time!

Thank you for the update!
Thanks. I'm glad you are catching on, even though it is always changing. :)

The spinning is about to stop, and the sunshine might be peeking through all the clouds soon. I hope you like the story just as much when things start looking up.

06/19/2007 02:26 am
Fast Asleep         
at the end of the update, all three are, seemingly,doing better. very good read, thank you.
Let's hope they're better. Thanks for commenting.

Miss Rose
06/17/2007 06:27 am
Fast Asleep         
That was so touching. :( I'm glad Joni and her Daddy are gonna be okay. :) Wonderful chapter!
Of course they're okay. They're each all the other had for eight years. Love can heal a world of hurt, and Joni loves her Daddy.

06/17/2007 06:05 am
Fast Asleep         
oh man oh man oh man!!!!!! I'm kinda confused but its in a good way i think,, Great chapter!!! So touching! Can't wait for the next!!!!
Maybe this will clear things up, Joni is a little Slayer. She could be having Slayer dreams. ;)

05/27/2007 06:35 am
In His Debt         
GOOD Oscars got him Liam has always been such a well I shouldn't say the word but YOU KNOW what i mean!

Great chapter! So Oscar is Williams older brother? I am trying to fit it all together!
He's a brother only in the sired sense of the word. ;)

05/27/2007 03:38 am
In His Debt         
very good chapter, thank you. angel is even more worthless as a human than as angelus.
Yep, guess so. And, don't forget, there's a little Slayer that needs to cut her teeth. :) What would happen if she found out who took her Daddy and her Papa from her?

Miss Rose
05/27/2007 03:14 am
In His Debt         
Well, I guess that's what happens to cowardly weasles that sneak out into the night. I have faith that Oscar knows what he's doing. Loved the chapter!
Oscar knows what he's doing...I'm so glad you liked the chapter.

kim
05/27/2007 02:57 am
In His Debt         
But making Angelus is bad!!!!!!
Ah...but it's a whole new game now. Liam isn't top dog anymore. Just wait and see...

nmcil
05/29/2007 04:56 am
Raw         
This is all so tragic - hard to read but a wonderful story - Hope your Oscar can help - Very much like how you connected William time period in this piece. Hope you can bring us a new chapter soon.
Oh, Oscar will help. And, I am so glad you like the story. Remember...you have to have hard times or the hero of the story would not be a hero. :) Please keep reading, and thank you for your comment!

nmcil
05/18/2007 08:17 pm
Raw         
really like the different various new characters you use in the work - wonderful story and great chapter, hope you will post an update soon.
Not too Mary Sue, is it? Thanks for reading.

05/10/2007 07:07 am
Raw         
loved buffy's ending comment. very fine read, thank you.
Thanks. :) I couldn't resist the little jibe. Glad you liked it.

Miss Rose
05/10/2007 04:25 am
Raw         
Hurry Oscar hurry! The Dustin family could definitely use Oscar's help right about now, I just hope they decide to trust him. Fantastic chapter.
I hope he can help, 'cause you're right. Spike needs all the help he can get at this point.

kim
05/09/2007 11:40 pm
Raw         
Poor family.....:(
I know...Thanks for reading. It will get better...I promise.

04/25/2007 08:10 pm
Orphans         
very good read. sad, but very good. thank you.
Thank you. Let's hope Buffy can reach Spike before he does something he will regret.

Miss Rose
04/24/2007 02:51 pm
Orphans         
Oh my... This is positively heartbreaking! :( I hope Buffy can talk Spike out of his plan. Great chapter.
I hope so too!

cj
04/24/2007 05:32 am
Orphans         
Please update soon. I can't wait. Is this going to be the final one of the series?
I update as fast as the muse will let me. As far as this being the last in the series...? I don't really know- but it may not be the last. Let's see where this part of the story takes us first, shall we? Thanks so much for your comment. :)

kim
04/24/2007 05:22 am
Orphans         
So sad!
I can't argue with that...:(

04/24/2007 04:49 am
Orphans         
oh NO!!! Not again!!! Not so soon!!!! aw man!!! your killin me here!

Great chapter Please update soon!!!!
Buffy hasn't had her say yet. She may have more influence than she knows.

Glad you like it though.:) And, I promise not to leave you hangin' for too long.

04/15/2007 08:46 am
To Be What She Needs         
Just started reading this story, and the ones that came before. Have to say, I love it! Very inventive, imaginative, and tender. Spike's reaction to how long he was gone was very convincing, much more so than what they did on the show with Angel. You've made your own world with them, and its great. Can't wait to see more.
Thank you, that means so much. :D It's hard to create OCs that don't overpower the ones we've grown to love... Do not want to have a Mary Sue...but I'm trying to make them believable.

I also thought that the people over at ATS in season 5 glossed over and minimized Spike and his experience in "Hell." That just made me mad. Hope you enjoy where I take this story and will take the journey with me. :)

04/07/2007 07:04 am
To Be What She Needs         
liam must have received his own soul back when he became human. he is worse than angelus. very good read, thank you.
Liam is kinda clueless, isn't he? Not that far removed from Angel, IMO.

04/06/2007 05:03 am
To Be What She Needs         
WOW~! Great chapter! I just want to SMACK Liam! Please let SOMEONE smack him!

its all clearing up GREAT CHAPTER!
I'm glad it's making more sense. Do you think slapping Liam would really help? 'Cause I'll do it...;)

kim
04/06/2007 04:38 am
To Be What She Needs         
So sad!!!!
I know! Thanks for reading, anyway.

Miss Rose
04/06/2007 03:02 am
To Be What She Needs         
:( Poor Joni! :( Poor Spike! This new development in their relationship is so sad. :wah: Looks like Spike is gonna really have to work hard to regain Joni's trust... but I have faith in him.
Buffy's talk with Liam was eye-opening, can't wait to hear how he answers her question. Great chapter.
But, will Liam answer it? Or will he just create more? I don't really know if Spike can gain her trust...Joni is the future Slayer. It's kinda hard to kill things that look like the one that took care of you and loved and protected you. But I know he's gonna go down tryin'!

04/07/2007 06:56 am
Primal Scream         
very surprised spike is issuing a warning. well, not really.( can't have major character killed before he fulfills all his plot requirements.) very good read, thank you.
;)

04/07/2007 06:56 am
Primal Scream         
very surprised spike is issuing a warning. well, not really.( can't have major character killed before he fulfills all his plot requirements.) very good read, thank you.
Yeah, I'm not done playing with Oscar yet. ;)

03/23/2007 12:16 pm
Primal Scream         
YEA!!!!

Now I hope Oscar can talk fast enough to explain so Spike will remember before he kills him!

Great Chapter!
Thanks! I hope he can too.

kim
03/23/2007 08:22 am
Primal Scream         
Better do some quick explaining, mate.
How fast do you think Oscar can talk?

Miss Rose
03/23/2007 06:36 am
Primal Scream         
Wow! What an intense and emotionally charged chapter. I'm really looking forward to finding out what happens next.
Wonderful chapter! :soon:
Thanks. I will be waiting too. Hopefully, the muse won't take a walkabout. :)

03/10/2007 11:09 pm
Desperate Times         
very good chapter, thank you. enjoy the way you deal out bits and pieces.
Thanks- gotta keep the readers coming back for more, you know...:)

03/10/2007 06:17 am
Desperate Times         
See now you just clinched it..... :) you just turned me into an A1 reviewer! I can say all day i will stop until its finished but in truth i am so addicted i couldn't stop reading if i really wanted too,, it calls to me "new chapter in,, new chapter in better find out what happens!!!!" More than likely what will happen is when this is finally finished I will reread the series completely (again btw) and try to suck out every tidbit of detail i might have missed the last (few) times i have read them. Isn't that what you do to really good stories? read and reread?
Ohhh... you know it's all part of the evil plan to keep the Buffyverse exciting! ;) If Joss isn't going to do it, we writers have to pick up the slack!

Miss Rose
03/10/2007 12:39 am
Desperate Times         
Loved the glimpse's into the future, I like how neatly Oscar is fitting into the fabric of the story. Can't wait to find out if Oscar has his first meeting with little Joni. Wonderful chapter!
Thanks...I'm trying to make the transition more subtle than M.E. did with "Dawn." She was a little obvious, wasn't she? :)

03/10/2007 12:38 am
Desperate Times         
So much pain and an amazing tale. I'm going to have to read them both over from start to finish when this is done.
Thanks for reading. If you have questions, feel free to ask. :)

kim
03/09/2007 11:58 pm
Desperate Times         
Yes, get her before she's hit by a car, or God knows what else.

So Oscar's a time traveler.....
*gasp* Don't say it...I might be channeling Joss...LOL. :) Sometimes he takes over my keyboard. Bad Joss!

03/09/2007 11:18 pm
Desperate Times         
ahhhhhhhh!!!! Its making more and more sense the pieces are slowly fitting together! Part of me want the easy way and stop reading this chapter by chapter and just wait until your done so i can read it all together but another part of me is to curious to just WAIT! GReat chapter! I will probably in the end do both!
I'm so glad it's starting to make sense. And, would you really stop reading? :( The reviews are the only pay I get, and the only way I know if you're "getting" it.

Keep letting me know what you think, and I might send Spike over to your house for cocoa. :P

Thanks for reading!

03/01/2007 09:53 pm
Tangents         
fascinating tale. thanks for the fine read.
You are very welcome! :)

03/01/2007 03:25 am
Tangents         
OK i am getting this more and more... Pieces are falling together... I love this story but its like its restarting or remaking constantly so its easy to get confused but its such an awesome story! I can't wait to find the start point with Oscar,, I mean yes i know he knew William when he was human and i remember the whole Diane and Liam story and how he waited his time at W & H so he could get close... But how did he meet up with Spike again? I can't WAIT for the next update! Thank you!
It is constantly changing. But the only one who knows that is Oscar, and maybe Joni. It's all about the choices we make.

Miss Rose
03/01/2007 01:09 am
Tangents         
Oh no! Poor Joni! Poor Spike! What horrible thing for Joni to have to walk into. :( Can't wait to find out what happens next! Great chapter. :soon:
I can't wait either. Do you think that this could be the reason Joni's Daddy never again allowed himself to truly be "seen" by his little girl?

kim
03/01/2007 12:50 am
Tangents         
Oh, dear...Somebody catch her!
Let's hope it's not some big nasty that does the catching...

Miss Rose
02/23/2007 01:43 pm
Legacy         
Oh no! Homer!!! :( This new development is so sad, I wonder how all this is gonna be explained to Joni. Can't wait to find out where things go from here. Great chapter.
It may take a while...maybe a *long* time, and 'Daddy's' self control.

kim
02/23/2007 06:22 am
Legacy         
Aaaaack! Eeep! Oh, dear! Fix it, please?
It is coming...but not from where you think.

02/23/2007 05:35 am
Legacy         
OH man i am so lost! WHATS HAPPENING!!!!! I love this story but its so confusing sometimes! Please come with answers soon!!!

Thank you for the update!
Answers are coming, I promise. It might help to read a story called "Vsnidhing Point" though. That is achived here too. :)

02/19/2007 09:45 pm
Storybook Notions         
just kill him. letting him talk will only make things worse. very good read, thank you.
He might want to...but would that be good for little eyes?

SpaceLord
02/19/2007 06:27 pm
Storybook Notions         
Ahh just kill Liam and be done with it, if you let him live he'll probably fuck up the future even more.
Oh, SL, you have no idea how much he's gonna try...

Miss Rose
02/19/2007 01:10 pm
Storybook Notions         
I love how Spike is handling the Liam situation. It's probably wishful thinking on my part, but I really hope Liam is so terrified that he finally spills something important. Wonderful chapter!
I don't know if Liam will spill any info. But I *know* Homer is...:)

02/19/2007 09:11 am
Storybook Notions         
For God's sake, Liam, hurry up! There's not much time...
Homer's fate in Liam's hands? Even *I'm* biting my nails! :)

02/14/2007 09:29 pm
From Above         
lovely read and a lovely place to stop. the wait for the next update will be spent enjoying angel's mental state. thank for the fine read.
I'm glad you're enjoying frightening Liam as much as I am. :)

Miss Rose
02/10/2007 07:30 am
From Above         
:( Poor Homer. Loved the Spike/Liam interaction though, I really hope the Big Bad comes out to play. Great chapter!
Yeah, sad isn't it? But someone has to pay for both Buffy and Angel's short sightedness. And, the Big Bad...? I think he's wanting answers right about now. Let's hope Liam has them.

kim
02/10/2007 05:53 am
From Above         
Dum de dum dum.....Time to pay the piper, Liam.
I think you might be right:)

02/03/2007 02:45 am
Broken Toys         
very good read, evil place to stop. thanks for both.
Yeah, I know. I have to make you want to read the next chapter don't I?

Miss Rose
01/31/2007 02:19 pm
Broken Toys         
I'm so worried about Homer, his interactions with Spike and Joni are breaking my heart. :( I can't wait to find out what Spike and Buffy do with Liam now that they have him. Great chapter.
Love the banner! After reading about Joni for so long it's nice to finally get a look at her. :)
I wonder what Spike will do with Liam too. I love the banner too! Isn't Joni cute? As far as Homer goes...he loves Joni and Buffy so much that I think he'd do whatever he needed to do to keep them from harm.

kim
01/31/2007 08:03 am
Broken Toys         
No rest for the wicked...
Nope- guess not.

01/26/2007 03:18 pm
Cricket's Song         
Ok, I've been remiss in post my reviews for this story because sometimes when I really like what I'm reading I will go back and read it over and over from beginning to end (or wherever the author makes me stop *pout*) and will zone out on leaving reviews.

So now, here's my review:

HURRY UP AND POST MORE! I swear I'm gonna stop sending you chapters of mine to beta so you have more free time to write this story. I have a few theories about who/what and its making me batty not knowing for sure.

That and its just an extremely intriguing piece.

Very haunting. Kind of sticks with you even when you're done reading.
Thanks so much for reviewing. It's so nice to know that people are actually reading. I'm so glad you have your theories. I'm trying to make people think, and I'm writing something that I would read too. I hope you haven't figured out the end yet...:) I don't want you, or anyone, to be so bored that you stop reading.

01/25/2007 11:49 pm
Cricket's Song         
this is what oscar has been preparing for? very good read, thank you.
Most likely

Miss Rose
01/23/2007 01:21 pm
Cricket's Song         
Looks like the quote "Out of the mouths of babes" really fits here... thank goodness for little Joni and her insights. Loved the chapter! :)
Yep, she's guileless. And, don't forget, she has some pretty weird things rolling around in her head. Things that could be important.

kim
01/23/2007 08:49 am
Cricket's Song         
Ah, now they know....so, is Oscar about to drop Liam on their doorstep?
Could be. But, will he stay where he can be found? That's another question altogether.

01/18/2007 10:09 pm
Seedling         
excellent read, thank you.
:) And thank you for reading!

Miss Rose
01/18/2007 01:07 pm
Seedling         
My poor heart is aching so badly for the whole Dustin family right now. :( I'll be eagerly awaiting the next update to find out how things play out. Great chapter.
Thanks Rose...:)

annie
01/12/2007 08:38 pm
Heliotrope         
hi! it's me again... soo, i'm still a little confused. Homer is a version of Spike, correct? but is he the human side or something? is that why Spike was so out of it before? and why has Homer aged so much? has he been (where ever they were) for that long a time?

oops, that was a lot of questions, wasn't it... so, i'm a little more confused than i thought, but i love the story and the emotions that come through so clearly in your writing. it's just that i'm really slow on the uptake, apparantly :D

love it, update soon!
kisses
Hi annie-
Yes, Homer is Spike. A part of Spike that very few belive even exists. This part encompasses *all * beings, good or not. He's sort of the"fifth element."

The name "Homer" means promise. Remember what Spike said in "The Gift?" Something about "A promise to a lady..." :)

Homer has taken it upon himself to take care of Joni, as well as take her punishment for her use of magic. But, the Higher Ups(PTB'S) would not allow him to tell Joni or Spike who he really was. So he's in disguise, sort of.

The age thing is just a way of letting the reader know that a great deal of time has passed, and whatever "Homer" is, he's been through alot.

Here's a hint- reading Chapter 15 of "Vanishing Point" may help:) That and renting the movie "The fifth element"

Miss Rose
01/11/2007 07:02 am
Heliotrope         
I loved Homer's interaction with his family, especially with Joni. Can't wait to find out what happens next. Fantastic chapter!
Thanks! "Papa" does love Joni doesn't he?

01/11/2007 05:38 am
Heliotrope         
spike is back; very good chapter, thank you.
Yep. Something was missing, but now it's not :)

dicecanntcry
01/11/2007 05:10 am
Heliotrope         
i am so completely confused right now...
Well, if I can help at all...I'll try. But, as the summary to this story suggests- it might be helpful if you were familiar with some of the events of the previous story. Sorry about that. I hope you will continue to read anyway, and I'll try and answer any questions.

kim
01/11/2007 03:20 am
Heliotrope         
Ooooo....the plot's a'swelling....!
Yep! :)

01/11/2007 05:23 am
Elemental         
buffy definitely needs the help. very good read, thank you.
Help is coming...now that all the pieces have been put in place.

annie
01/03/2007 08:56 pm
Elemental         
soo, i was wondering. who is this honer guy? is he who i think he is? cause if he is, way weirdo. i'm getting a little confused, not really along for the ride, sort of speak. Splainy? would be highly appreciated :D

i love the story though, dont get me wrong. im just slow on the uptake ;)

kisses
Homer....well, who he is is kinda weird, but in a very good way. If you're thinking that it might be Spike, but way older? Then, you'd be right.

If you read the previous chapters, then you know that the Dustins- Spike, Buffy, and little Joni have an "angel" that watches out for them, and if you read any of the story before this, "Vanishing Point" you know that Joni created a *big* mess wben she used magic after her Daddy died. And, if you haven't read it, I just told you. :)

Anyway, the short answer is this, Joni missed her Daddy so much that she went back in time and messed things up. Now Daddy has to fix them. Hence the "angel."

And yes, Daddy is who you think he is. That hasn't changed. Joni is Spike's adopted daughter.

Needless to say, I never liked Joss's outcome. Save the world and you end up in Hell? Not in my story! :)

If that's still not clear...and it probably isn't lol, feel free to Contact me, and I'll answer *any question* you have about the story. Thanks for reading.

Miss Rose
01/02/2007 02:49 pm
Elemental         
The Oscar/Liam scene was great! I loved the Liam smackage! Boy, did he ever deserve it. I found Oscar's flashback very intriguing. Can't wait to find out what happens now that Buffy summoned Homer. Wonderful chapter, and Happy New Year! :)
It should be interesting. Did you take note of the wordage of the incantation? It could be important...:)

12/28/2006 09:42 am
North Wind         
Homer? Don't know who else if not him maybe her mother, but I'm hoping it's "Papa". That was one heart wretching chapter. Now Buffy's the mother and she get's it, but Spike just broke my heart. I wanted to start VP, but not tonight. Need to hit the sack. This is a fabulous fic, thanks so much for sharing.
"Homer" is who took care of Joni, and Spike, when no one else could. And, he is the "essence" that Oscar is looking for.

12/24/2006 07:15 am
North Wind         
excellent, thank you. glad to see some help coming.
You're very welcome and thank you for reading! :)

kim
12/23/2006 07:59 am
North Wind         
Oscar's really got those strategic skewers sharpened to perfection. Angel might have to give up being human, eh? Well, he doesn't deserve the gift...not when Joni and Spike are hurting so much.
He sure does. Someone has to think about that little family. I know Liam isn't.

12/23/2006 05:48 am
North Wind         
I just love this story... I just recently reread this series and was so glad you updated! I keep my eye out for everything you write. Thank you for updating! It was great! Can't wait for the next!
So then everything is fresh in your mind? That's great! And, I'm glad to know you really like my stories. :)

Miss Rose
12/23/2006 03:47 am
North Wind         
Yay, Homer is back! I kinda had a feeling he would turn up again, especially now. Can't wait to find out what he's up to. Thanks for the fantastic chapter, and Happy Holidays! :)
Yep, and he knows how to fix this "problem." The trouble is...the solution could affect someone else.

12/28/2006 09:11 am
Snowglobe         
A little lost here, Oscar called his daughter "Rabbit", but the one to save their family is Liam, so I must be patient. Poor little Joni, she's so young to be trying to take on so much responsibility. Her parents have an extraordinary brave little girl there. Fantastic chapter, thanks.
This is no ordinary little girl. And the place Joni came from was cold and snowy, like a snowglobe. But it was warm too, due in part to a very loving essence...

12/16/2006 10:01 pm
Snowglobe         
fascinating read, thank you.
Thank you for reading

Miss Rose
12/13/2006 01:59 pm
Snowglobe         
The kitchen scene was wonderful, I enjoyed how Joni interacted with her parents, and I loved how she reminisced about Homer. Can't wait to find out what happens next. Loved the chapter!
So glad you liked it. Things will be getting interesting.

kim
12/13/2006 08:28 am
Snowglobe         
Oh, interesting...think I have it figured out. Angel's the Velveteen Rabbit.
:) I think you're on the right track.

12/28/2006 08:31 am
Connecting         
Wow!, no wonder he has this wonderful connection with both William and Spike, Dru is their sire, he really is his brother. This has to be so hard for Oscar. On one hand he needs his revenge for Diana's sake, but he owe's so much to William and brother Spike and he needs some knowledge that Liam has to help his brother. So exciting, wonderful twist FMS.
Talk about torn, huh? :)

Miss Rose
12/06/2006 01:27 pm
Connecting         
Poor Buffy, she has so much on her mind, her upcoming talk with Joni should be very interesting. I enjoyed Oscar's insightful musings, loved the Dru twist. Wonderful chapter!
I think Buffy has more adjusting to do than Spike or Joni.

nmcil
09/14/2007 03:38 pm
A Yellow Wood         
This is such a Grand story - really admire the complexity of your storyline and all the inter-related personas and life lines that you are working from. Congratulations on your story and thank you so much for all your efforts to bring this work to the buffyverse fiction fans -
Thank you!!! And, Boy am I glad you're reading! :) I love a complex story, and it is so nice to know that others do as well. :)

I'm so glad readers like you are out there, in cyberspace. It makes me very happy and it spurs the muse to think of all kinds of Buffyverse goodness for you. ;)

12/28/2006 07:50 am
A Yellow Wood         
Almost feel like reading VP before I go any farther. I've missed more then I would have thought. So Liam know's something about vampire's that no one else know's, how interesting and only he can help Spike? Why would he want to help Spike since he's obviously been doing everything he can to take what he has? Very fascinating turn of event's. Excellent work, FMS, thanks.
Yes he does- and it's something he never told anyone. It goes all the way back to the "true beginning" to quote the "First."

12/01/2006 07:53 pm
A Yellow Wood         
very goor read, thank you. sad that liam must be saved.
Yeah, aren't I nasty? :)

Miss Rose
11/27/2006 07:01 am
A Yellow Wood         
Awww... The end of the chapter was so sweet... I loved it! I also enjoyed Joni's dream interaction with Homer. Buffy's talk with Joni was very informative, I like how it made Buffy question things. Fantastic chapter!
Glad you liked it. Joni knows more about the road Spike could take, and did. than she realizes. What she knows could be vital...

kim
11/27/2006 02:53 am
A Yellow Wood         
Real as real can be...

Oscar's truly an interesting sort...a "free range" vamp that had no sire to mold him into something else...his plan is really all about *teaching*, isn't it?

I'm sure Joni heard lots of stories over that time...
You might be right. Someone has to put the fear of God into Liam.

And Joni did hear lots of stories. That's why she likes "fairytales" so much. "Papa's" been plying her with cocoa and stories for as long as she can remember. :)

12/28/2006 06:41 am
Mirabilia         
Thanks for the giggle, the way you put the "box monster" took me back to the very beginning and the bit of innocence the show first had, when it started. Surprised Spike didn't feel her panic through the claim, but if he had, we wouldn't of had that beautiful moment. I just love this connection that they all have, though not the circumstances in which they're connected, just make's the fic more fascinating. Yeah, maybe the good-for-nothing Liam may have a Christmas miracle still waiting for him, even if he doesn't deserve it. I feel alot sorrier for Oscar then I do Liam. Oscar was a loving husband and father and Angleus changed his life forever, long before he was turned. Fantastic chapter, thanks.
You're welcome. I remember when I was a child the boxes at Christmas would cover the floor. And, there is no claim, it's something much deeper than that. :)

Miss Rose
11/17/2006 01:58 pm
Mirabilia         
The Spuffy scenes in this story are so heartwarming, I just love the quiet moments between Spike and Buffy. Thanks for another great flashback, loved the Liam/Oscar interaction. Great chapter!
I'm glad you liked it. :) I like the quiet moments too.

11/17/2006 10:21 am
Mirabilia         
What a contrast between the two scenes. I loved the reassurance that Spike gave Buffy with her expressed fear that having him back was just a dream. I am rather enjoying the truths that Oscar keeps giving Liam. Thanks so much for the update.
*Someone * has to tell Liam the truth. And I'm glad you noticed the connection and contrast. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter, and the story, so much.

12/28/2006 05:54 am
Boy Meets Girl         
Yup, I so need to read VP. Putting Oscar and Liam on the back burner is just fine by me, alway's ready for some Spuffy lovin. Can't wait to get caught up, sorry it took this long. Great read, thanks.
VP could help explain things, but I'm glad you like this story enough to want to read the preceeding one. :) Thanks!

11/11/2006 03:44 am
Boy Meets Girl         
wonderful read, thank you
You are so welcome!

11/07/2006 12:08 pm
Boy Meets Girl         
I loved how family oriented this chapter was and the connection Buffy made realizing that Homer was Spike. Thanks so much for the update, I really enjoyed it.
So glad you enjoyed it. Spike and Buffy needed to hold each other.

kim
11/07/2006 09:05 am
Boy Meets Girl         
Powerful stuff.
Thanks!

Miss Rose
11/07/2006 07:38 am
Boy Meets Girl         
Yay... For sweet Spuffyness! I'm so happy Spike and Buffy found this moment to reconnect, they certainly deserve it. Loved Buffy and Joni's talk. Great chapter! :)
They needed time to just be...if you know what I mean. I'm glad you liked the chapter.

nmcil
05/18/2007 04:25 pm
By Degrees         
So glad that you have continued with this story - happy reader here.
Thank you! This story needs more like you to read it. This series is a labor of love, not everyone understands that, or cares to. I am so glad readers like you, and those who frequent this site enjoy my stories! :)

12/28/2006 05:45 am
By Degrees         
No! of course Oscar could never kill a child, even if he is a vampire. What he went through as a father would stay with him his entire existence. Wow, loved that you placed Diana during William's time, made it so much more personal between them all. Once I get caught up, I'll start reading Vanishing Point, like I should of before I started this. Excellent chapter, FMS. Loved Spike's first words to her. He does alway's try to protect what's his, that's our Spike. Thanks for the wonderful story.
Indeed he wouldn't. There is more of a connection between them than you think. Vanishing Point can be a bit confusing. But, I will help where I can. Thanks for reading. :)

11/11/2006 03:38 am
By Degrees         
very good read, thanks. it would be very easy to say, kill angel slowly, and go on to another tale. but you have jonina's “Daddy will save them.” so spike will save the ba....
I know...I would so much like to let Liam die. But, he's human and we can't disillusion the little girl.

11/02/2006 03:51 pm
By Degrees         
The regard that Oscar feels for William shows through. First with how Oscar didn’t think William could survive the sight of how he found Diana, and yet he did, and then with him taking care of (if I understand this correctly) Oscar’s wife after Oscar was turned. I like how Oscar is making Liam take a look at his life and who he really is. His question on if Liam is worth saving was an interesting one, and I was somewhat surprised at Liam’s response. Thanks so much for the update, I really enjoyed it.
Sometimes it takes a harsh eye to make someone see themselves clearly. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

Miss Rose
11/01/2006 01:43 pm
By Degrees         
You have to just love how Spike found his voice when Buffy needed him the most. The new info we learned in the flashback makes everything even more interesting. Oscar is so blinded by his pain and need for revenge that he seems to be forgetting how big Spike's heart is, like Joni says her Daddy is a Prince who saves people, even if they don't deserve it like Liam. I look forward to finding out what happens next. Wonderful chapter!
Spike may have had some help, there. :) I think he's counting on the experiences away from Buffy to change him. Maybe they did...most likely not though.

Tamara
11/01/2006 05:31 am
By Degrees         
I think I like Oscar. For the most part Angel really hasn't had to face what he's done. Most of his victims aredead and Drusilla is too broken to seek revenge on him.

And he's really reaching by trying to say that the things he did were to survive and were done without thinking. Drusilla alone is evidence that he put thought into what he did to people . Not to mention (i think it's canon) him going on about the art of the kill.
You're supposed to like Oscar a little. Yeah, we all know "Liam's" blowing smoke...but he has to do something. If he doesn't, he could be killed-for real this time.

10/26/2006 11:12 am
Justice and Mercy         
Don't know just what Oscar thought he would accomplish by letting them know that he had him. Spike is so far inside his own mind that he couldn't look for him even if he wanted too. Love that Joni's so in tune with her father. I do hope that Spike and Buffy do find out that it was Angel that took Joni and sent Spike to hell for hundreds of years. Great update, thanks.
Spike is smart. He pulling himself out, quite quickly thank you. And... sorry to ruin the surprise...but Joni's Mommy and Daddy already *know* who it was that put her in hell. :) It's all in the prior story, "Vanishing Point." Spike knows what's going on, he just can't voice all the feelings he's having yet, because he doesn't have the words.

10/26/2006 02:17 am
Justice and Mercy         
very good read, thank you. had been sympathizing with oscar, in part because of the tale, and in part due to an extreme dislike of angel(start in season 1.) not sure the picture was the in keeping with his revenge plans, seems cruel.
Part of this is meant to make Angel examine just how different the difference is between Spike and him. In order for that to start happening, the prospect of rescue has to be out there. Read on to find out where I'm going with this.

10/25/2006 01:00 pm
Justice and Mercy         
I still feel so sorry for Oscar and the pain he and his daughter went through at the hands of Angelus. I like that Angel is feeling some of the terror that he put Diana through. I love how Joni is helping her dad and that Spike knowledge that she would never lead him astray. I love what Georgie wanted to do for them and that she arrived to the family laughing together. Thank you so much for the update, I really enjoyed it.
Ahhh... the ambiguos villian. I learned from M.E. well, yes? Spike remembers Joni. She's the only part that's good in the place he was. And, Georgie is a good egg isn't she? :)

Miss Rose
10/25/2006 04:24 am
Justice and Mercy         
Whoa! That was a interesting move on Oscar's part, he must be really counting on the fact that Spike would want revenge on Liam. Spike's reaction to this turn of events should interesting.
Joni is so adorable, I love the way she keeps reaching her Daddy. Wonderful chapter!
It's quite possible that is what he's banking on. Joni can reach him eaisily because she knows things her parents don't know she knows. She's a baby Slayer, remember? She has some of Buffy's memories. The "G" rated ones...let's hope! :P

10/25/2006 02:17 am
Justice and Mercy         
LOL I love Jonina
She is a cutie...:)

kim
10/25/2006 01:02 am
Justice and Mercy         
The calling card has been received...will anyone come to Liam's rescue?
Don't know- you'll have to read to find out. :)

valdt
10/20/2006 04:48 am
The Grumbling Cricket         
fascinating read, thank you.
You are very welcome.

10/20/2006 02:07 am
The Grumbling Cricket         
LOL, loveing it
Thank you very much! :)

10/19/2006 10:24 am
The Grumbling Cricket         
No! No,no,no! He's not supposed to be helping that bastard! Spike can't help him either. He doesn't deserve it. Thanks for letting us know where she got her rabbit and his name. William's surname was Dustin? I still say NO! to helping Liam. Thanks for the read.
Yep. His name is Dustin...which also ties in with the other story that's in progress. The old man-who's known to readers of the previous story as, "Homer" behaved somewhat like Jiminy Cricket. And, he doesn't like Angel, or Liam all that much- there is a good reason for this. :) Hence the title of the chapter.

kim
10/19/2006 09:36 am
The Grumbling Cricket         
Interesting...not shy with the angst, are you, dear? :)
Nope not in the least. Someone has to comfort Joni. Buffy's focus is elsewhere.

Miss Rose
10/19/2006 06:27 am
The Grumbling Cricket         
Lovely, just lovely, I always enjoyed the way you wrote the father and daughter scenes between Spike and Joni, this was one was absolutely wonderful. It was so great to see Homer make an appearance in this story, I always loved his character. Wonderful chapter!
I missed Homer too. I might use him again to help Joni know what to do for her Daddy, and to comfort her.

10/19/2006 05:51 am
The Grumbling Cricket         
I loved Joni telling her daddy “I’m here, Daddy. And, I know the way out, if you’re lost. Just follow Mommy and me. We know the way.” How sweet that Spike was able to remember his special name for Joni and tell her that he loved her. Thank you so much for the update, I really look forward to them.
And thank you for reading. I'm do glad you enjoy my stories so much.

10/19/2006 09:48 am
Sense Memory         
Wow, that was wonderful. He remembered that they were married. Another step forward. Jonina's rabbit's name is Spike? Did she know that's her dad's name? He must be a great comfort for her. Hope Oscar tortures him for years, maybe not. Torture for a little while and then kill him. Yeah, that'll work for me. Put Prayer for a Poet & Vanishing Point on my list. Wonderful chapter, don't know how I missed it, thanks.
She named her bunny after the "Prince" from her Slayer dreams...and her imaginary friend,aka ghosty Spike from "VP". The "Prayersverse" is a bit complicated. But I know you'll enjoy it. :)

vladt
10/17/2006 06:31 am
Sense Memory         
warm, beautiful read, thank you. oscar can do whatever he wishes to liam; the more painful, the better.
Thanks. Oscar,though he doesnit need your permission, is glad for it:) and will keep it in mind as the story progresses. :)

Araedhel
10/15/2006 03:28 pm
Sense Memory         
Sunlight? I really like the chapter, but that confused me a bit.
If you remember, in "Angel's" last season there was "necro-tempered" glass in the law firm. I mentioned in a previous chapter that the dojo is outfitted with the same glass. Sorry to confuse you. :)

10/14/2006 05:49 am
Sense Memory         
I ended this chapter with the thought that it was just beautiful, then I remembered the scene with Oscar and Liam. The contrast as well as the information given by Oscar to Liam about where Spike had been really added to the impact that the other scenes left with me, and the ending with Jonina seeing her parents then slipping away particularly touched me. Thanks so much for the update.
Liam will be getting a close up lesson in what it means to be human-and a vampire. I just hope Spike *wants* to rescue him...

Miss Rose
10/14/2006 05:46 am
Sense Memory         
It's so great to see Spike and Buffy connecting. The exchanging of the ring was so romantic, and heartwarming. I enjoyed looking at the Spuffy moment through Joni's eyes. As for Liam he deserves what he gets, but i'm kinda worried that Oscar knows a little too much about Spike. Loved the chapter! :)
Mommy and Daddy are dancing again. Who can blame Jonina for being happy? Maybe they'll stay that way...?

10/14/2006 09:18 am
Law of Moses         
OMG! Angel stole their daughter! I hope Oscar torture's him as much as he deserves. What a revelation, that evil S.O.B. and he had a soul! This time he doesn't deserve to live. Even if he was turned again and reensouled, he'd still be the bastard that stole Buffy and Spike's child, so I say kill him! Hey! I'm just saying! Exciting and tender chapter. Thanks for the update. Waiting for the next update.
Yep he sure did! It might help if you had read "Vanishing Point," but I will be hitting on the major plot points, so no worries. Yes, Spike jumped into a hellish place to pull their daughter back, and prevent a plague. So, who's the hero here?

vladt
10/10/2006 10:38 pm
Law of Moses         
very good read, thank you. liam has answer for even more.
There's so much he's done. This is hte tip of the iceberg.

Robyn
10/09/2006 10:24 am
Law of Moses         
I really love the closeness of Buffy and Spike, that even though Spike doesn't recognize the words he can still read that she wants to reach him and that Buffy can tell that he has faced horrors and that he needs her. I am enjoying the terror Oscar is putting in 'Liam'. Thanks so much for the update, I really enjoyed it.
What goes around comes around. And maybe Joni can help reach her daddy where Buffy can't.

Miss Rose
10/09/2006 02:51 am
Law of Moses         
The Spuffy interaction was so bittersweet, i'm glad Spike has Buffy and Joni on his side to help him through this ordeal. Oscar sure is playing a great game of psychological torture, his closing line must've really hit home for Liam. Fantastic chapter!
Joni will be helping her daddy very soon. Combine a grieving father with an obsessed vampire and presto...you get Oscar- or Spike, take you're pick.

kim
10/08/2006 11:49 pm
Law of Moses         
Ohohoh....ouch. Interesting, indeed.

A Spike without words is heartbreaking...
Yeah, I know. But it wouldn't ring true if he hadn't heard human speech in say a thousand years, and he came back using perfect English...would it? And as for Liam. things will get even more interesting.

vladt
10/10/2006 10:31 pm
Turncoat         
very good chapter, thank you. it is easier to sympathize wtih oscar rather than liam.
Just as I planned...:)

Robyn
10/06/2006 12:08 pm
Turncoat         
That poor father. Thanks so much for the update, I enjoyed it.
Grief can make you do horrible things...

Lynda
10/04/2006 08:48 pm
Turncoat         
I just cannot wait to read more of this wonderful tale.
Soon, Love...very soon.

Miss Rose
10/04/2006 02:45 pm
Turncoat         
The flashback was so vivid and intense, I don't blame Oscar for wanting for revenge his daughter, the poor little thing. Looks like ole Liam is really gonna pay the piper this time. Poor Spike, i'm glad Buffy has help from The Interregnum on her side. Wonderful chapter!
Looks like...and this isn't your typical "angel." This is an angel...with teeth :)

10/04/2006 09:38 am
Turncoat         
Diana poor baby and her father was so frantic searching for her, god I hate when it's a child. Now he's a vampire and ready for revenge. It must be Joyce since she would be the one who knows and loves them enough to want to ease her pain. Great chapter, thanks.
It had to be something horrible enough to make Oscar into a monster, and I think this would do the job. The "guardian angel" isn't Joyce...but it * is* sombody really close. Remember, from the summary, "The future can affect the past?" Well...it sure did!

10/01/2006 05:28 am
Winter         
very good update, thank you.
You're welcome!

09/30/2006 05:19 am
Winter         
Gone? As in dead? Dust? or not there anymore? It's Christmas and Buffy couldn't have a better christmas present. The two poeple she loved the most in the world are there with her now. Damn Angelus thinking that about people as they prepare for Christmas. Poor baby!. This fic is really coming along. Great job. Thanks for the read.
Gone as in...kidnapped. The flashback was important. And, Oscar...? Think "Holtz" with more tenacity. :)

Miss Rose
09/30/2006 02:44 am
Winter         
Whoa! What an unexpected twist! I never would've guessed what fate had in store for Liam Donovan, the flashback was perfect. And Wow! That was one amazing kiss, the Spuffy love scene was wonderful. Excellent chapter!
Looks like it's Spike to the rescue...again.

09/30/2006 12:30 am
Winter         
Wow, this is a very neat story and I'm really intereseted to see waht happens next.
So am I...:)

Robyn
09/29/2006 11:40 pm
Winter         
Spike comforting Buffy and her being able to see his love for her was so sweet. I really enjoyed the update, Thanks.
Sometimes love doesn't need words. :)

kim
09/29/2006 08:44 pm
Winter         
Interesting!
Yes very. Whatever will happen...? have to read on to find out.

10/01/2006 05:24 am
A Foreign Language         
beautiful read, thank you.
Thanks. Sometimes emotions are hard to write. I'm glad they came through for you.

Araedhel
09/28/2006 11:01 pm
A Foreign Language         
I have fallen in love with this story. Please keep writing.
Okay!

Robyn
09/26/2006 07:26 am
A Foreign Language         
I loved how perfect the characterization was with Buffy forgetting about the time difference. This chapter made me cry, first with how overwhelming Buffy’s pain and grief was and then when Spike found and comforted her and how beautifully perfect his first word was to her. I’m glad that Buffy realized that him relearning how to talk is going to be like a child learning. Thanks so much for continuing this wonderful story.
Awww...it choked me up too. He has to relearn how to be in her world. At least now she has the paitence to wait for him...I think. ;-)

Miss Rose
09/26/2006 03:31 am
A Foreign Language         
The Spuffy interaction was just beautiful! *reaches for a tissue* I absolutely loved this chapter, Nice work! :)
Thank you so much!

Verda
09/26/2006 01:19 am
A Foreign Language         
The perfect word for Spike and the only one for Buffy to say in return. Very beautiful chapter. Thanks for your wonderful words.
Thank you for coming along on this adventure. And, for you comments.

spikes_heart
09/26/2006 12:22 am
A Foreign Language         
**weeps** Lovely, hon. Just lovely.
Thanks!

09/26/2006 12:07 am
A Foreign Language         
LMFAO I've never responded to a response to a review before, mainly because I don't want you to think you have a new story review only to find out otherwise (although I guess this does inflate your numbers, so yay.) But i HAD to. Cause I totally get what you are saying about: "I loved it, and I wrote it."

Like we shouldn't really like something if we wrote it, but I know completely what you mean. Sometimes writing feels like channeling and the plot twists and turns can sometimes be just as surprising to the writer as to the reader. heh.

:P You know what I meant.

09/25/2006 11:46 pm
A Foreign Language         
awwwwwwwwwww very sweet. heh and very spike.
Isn't it? I loved it, and I wrote it...:)

10/01/2006 05:19 am
The New World         
great beginning to this part of the tale. thank you
Glad you're enjoying it.

Robyn
09/26/2006 07:16 am
The New World         
It is so lovely to see you continuing with this story line. I really enjoyed the previous two stories and am looking forward to this one as well. I love that Buffy realized that it is going to be a long and difficult road but that she is determined to see it through. Spike’s protective instinct towards Joni is so sweet.
I hope you enjoy it as much as you did the others. And, Spike hasn't seen Buffy in a Long time. Joni is the only thing that he reconizes, of course he'd be protective. When is he not? :P

Bigbird
09/21/2006 01:48 am
The New World         
oh I'm so glad you're continuing this story, as cofusing as the first was at times (had to read several chapters several times (bit dense like)) I still loved it.
Sorry...but the first story had to be a bit confusing to show how fragile time is. If you mess with things here, it could change what happens in the future, and vise versa. Do I sound like "Doc Brown" from the "Back to the Future" movies? lol. :)

Nikkole
09/20/2006 07:34 pm
The New World         
Very nice continuation. I like the different points of view, his and hers. I hope I can understand this story better than the last one....although I know you made it confusing on purpose! Can't wait to see more!!
The two stories I'm working on now are more straight forward. If you are confused you can e-mail me at my addy, and I'd be happy to answer any questions that you might have. :)

09/20/2006 08:51 am
The New World         
Wonderful beginning. Of course his natural response would be a growl to protect what was his. His daughter, that always has a wonderful sound to it. Looking forward to this fic as well. Great read, thanks.
Doesn't it, though? Glad you liked it. :D

Miss Rose
09/20/2006 03:05 am
The New World         
Wonderful start! Looks like Spike and his family are gonna have one exciting new adventure. I look forward to reading more! :)
Yep. Looks like. Hope you're there to cheer them on through the smiles and the tears to come. :)

09/20/2006 02:57 am
The New World         
Very spooky, fetching. We need more.
More is on its way.

kim
09/20/2006 02:53 am
The New World         
Another story in this series....

Heavy start...you really got the poetry flowing here.
Thanks. Hope I can keep your interest. The muse would not let me be until I posted this. I'm a slave to my Spike-like muse. What can I say? :)

09/20/2006 02:26 am
The New World         
wow...how intense and profoundly moving...excellent job, love :)
Thank you! :)