Decoy by Isabel

Brit Girl
10/15/2012 01:16 am
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Dear Isabel

Will you ever get around to finishing this fic? It has so much potential. You really should at some point. This has probably been years now hasn't it but I've only just come across this site so I am enjoying reading all the different author's stories.

Grin. Yay faith. :-)
05/22/2010 04:29 am
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DreamFlight
08/30/2009 06:06 pm
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I am really loving this story! Hope you get a chance to update again soon - I'll be keeping an eye out for the next chapter! Absolutely love your version of "season 8" - of course, anything re-uniting Buffy and Spike has my love. :P

Brunettepet
09/02/2008 04:43 pm
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 The anonymous review was me.  I need to remember to sign in.

08/31/2008 03:26 pm
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It seems Spike gets under everybody's skin, and I hope Daniel's agitation works against him in the big confrontation.   I enjoyed your foot loose, breezy Faith.  She's sharp and funny, but goes into slayer mode when it's time.  Her "body guard" seems to be mirroring Faith's brash attitude.  It's charming.

Molly's certainly stepped into a crisis, and they still don't know all the ramifications.  What is the Army doing with Willow?  Why are they in on some revenge plot of Ethan's?  I'm looking forward to finding out.


08/25/2008 03:32 am
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have to love faith. great way to end the chapter. excellent read, thank you.

mockerofshoes
08/22/2008 11:28 pm
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Just got caught up on this story. Just want to say that i'm hooked!

08/22/2008 07:25 am
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I am completely in love with this story - great treat having several chapters to read when I got back from my vacation -  Like your Molly character and it would be really great to have a new friendship and ppotential companion for  Angel -

:-)
05/22/2010 04:21 am
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Felecia
07/30/2008 09:22 pm
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wow.

*starts tapping on desk*
*legs bobbing up and down*
*fidgeting in chair*

AHHH! Waitings going to be alot harder than I thought...
Amazing by the way!

07/08/2008 05:38 am
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Wonderful to have this update - sorry, had a much longer comment but it was lost to "page too much activity"

07/08/2008 02:49 am
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very good read, thank you. angel can laugh? molly is good.

Brunettepet
07/08/2008 12:55 am
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 Molly just staring into that manhole, incredulous that this complete stranger thinks she's going to blindly follow him into the sewer was hilarious.  It's lovely to finally have someone who doesn't just take a cryptic stranger at their word.  Angel certainly didn't disappoint, and it was fun that Molly relaxed him enough to loosen up and laugh.

I'm enjoying Spike and Buffy getting reacquainted.  The bite wasn't sexy, but the intimacy of it resonates.  They seem to be mending fences, finally.  It's lovely to read them being quiet with one another.  They can't step all over each other's emotions if they just shut up once in a while.

07/06/2008 05:57 pm
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Worth the wait...looking forward to the next!

:-)
05/22/2010 04:11 am
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Brunettepet
06/19/2008 05:40 pm
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 Excellent choreography on the fight.  Spike's actions and reactions were vivid and entertaining, and I enjoyed the brawl immensely.  Spike mentally vowing to get these slayers home to have the opportunity to learn their names was lovely.  Daniel and Juliette were formal and polite, so gutting Spike came out of nowhere.  The image of Spike skewered through with that sword was striking.

Molly's meet and greet with Angel was also entertaining.  She's going to be an effective ally.

Buffy's musing over birthday cake was  moving her back toward Spike, so her reaction on seeing him battered and bloody was believable.  There's no way she's letting him run off again without a fight.

This is all making for a fun read.
lol I don't know why I'm so reluctant to write fight scenes... apparently I do a decent job. I just always feel like I'm skipping steps, forgetting something. It gets confusing and difficult to write what you see happening so fast in your head.

And yes, Buffy realized things and won't let him go without a fight. For sure!

06/19/2008 03:24 am
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excellent read, thank you. molly sorta grows on one. hope she sticks around. at the very least buffy sees what she nearly lost. hope she makes the right moves.
Yep, that was the point: for Buffy to see she almost lost him again. It's the little slap in the face she needed to get over herself. She'll probably be more open to conversation for now on.

06/14/2008 05:21 pm
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I love this story and your Original characters (at least I think they are original, I don't read the comics hee) are awesome, too! Thank you for sharing.

Yes, they are original characters. Or at least, Molly, Daniel, Juliette and Lazarus are. Glad you like them. And you're welcome. What's the point of writing stories if I don't share? lol It's all for you guys ;)

06/13/2008 08:13 pm
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Wow this just gets better and better. Bloody brilliant fight scene that was so easy to visualize.  Love Giles and xander in this BTW.  That taser helped so much.

Love Spike's bravado against the older family....typical and could picture everyone stopping to watch the showdown.  GAAAAAHHHHH with the sword injury but thought immediately that Buffy would have a chance to show TLC for a change and make up for being a right bitch.  Glad she realized he could have died with her "leave" ringing in his head.

Sense a possible pair up with Molly and Angel and heartily approve.  I rather liked her from the start and while I don't want Angel with Buffy he does need someone.  Nice move!  She'll have some info and bring them into play with the good guys no doubt. (typo alert....I'd bet she was carrying holy water not holly water)

I am going to my LJ and CDS to rec this story as it is excellent and a perfect balm to Spuffy lovers who are hating the comic (and just Buffyverse fans in general).

Kathleen
I think Molly would be a good match for Angel. She's not the type of girl who would take his bullshit lol. My beta agrees that they would be good together, but I haven't decided yet. Maybe friendship first.

Glad you liked the fight scene. I just hate writing fight scenes because too much is going on at once. It's good to know I didn't do too bad.

And thank you for recommending my story. It means a lot to me.

06/13/2008 07:35 pm
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I've just raced through all the chapters from Hero of the People, Enemy of the State (brilliant title).  It's a stupendously good read, spot on characters, mulitple storylines - plus globetrotting   locations!  I love it.  Hopefully Spike's injury will make them both realise a few things!  More soon please.
Thank you so much! I appreciate the great comments.

Liza
06/13/2008 07:14 pm
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I've never read one of your fics before, but I'm going to track down a couple more.  I'm really enjoying the humour and the pacy plot - the lack of the latter being my bete noir with a lot of fanfiction.  The characterisation is great, rooted in the series but developing and deepening the characters with warmth, realism and wit.  Are you going to bring Lazarus back into this soon?  The character has inspired real affection in me.     
I usually have plot in my stories, but I have to admit it's the first time I try my hand at many different story lines coming together. Glad to hear you think I'm doing a good job. Lazarus and Clem might show up eventually, I haven't really decided yet. I like Laz too. He was fun to write. So glad you like the story. Thanks for your comments.

06/13/2008 04:59 pm
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Great to see you updating again! I'm not fan of Angel getting mixed in the story...... but I'm liking everyithing else so far.!

Cant wait for an other update! 
Angel won't be part of the story after that. Or at least, not much. His character was just a tool to get Molly informations about Spike and Buffy, and eventually help. No worries, I'm not a big fan of Angel either. But of course, that's not set in concrete. I might change my mind. I just don't like writing Angel. Angelus though I love to write, but he's no a bad guy in this story so Angelus won't happen.

06/13/2008 08:27 am
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YAY they are finally working back to being together. well spike not so much considering his unconcious. Update soon please!!!!
Soon, I promise. Thank you for your review, I'm happy you like it.

06/13/2008 06:44 am
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A very exciting chapter! I really liked the fight, though I would like some plausible explanation for why they didn't stake the unconscious vamps at the end. A fresh wave coming or a struggle to hold Spike together, perhaps?

As always, Molly is the greatest. I particularly liked this thought:

". . . she had made very large men cry before."
Well, like I said, they would only stay unconscious for a very short time and the priority was to get Spike away from there. Granted, they could have at least staked Daniel. But they weren't exactly thinking right at the time. Probably too worried about what Buffy would do to them if Spike died ;)

Glad you like Molly. I love writing her character. She wasn't even originally supposed to be part of the story. I got so many great comments about her that I decided to include her in the plot.

06/13/2008 04:47 am
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Thanks for an exciting chapter, can't wait to see what Buffy has planned!
Thank you! You won't have to wait too long. I've already written half of the next chapter. I will probably update next week.

All4Spike
06/13/2008 03:44 am
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Sorry I haven't reviewed every chapter, I started this fic somewhere else so long ago I couldn't remember the beginning, so when I discovered it had been updated I went back and started all over again and I got so excited I couldn't stop to review!
I love the way you didn't have B&S falling straight into each others' arms, they really do need to sort out their issues first, but of course to do that they have to stop being so stubborn and insecure and actually listen to each other!
Hopefully now that Spike is injured and will actually have to stay in one place for a few minutes and Buffy wants to nurse him herself they'll get a chance to talk.
I like how complex you've made the plot, bringing in the military, Amy and Ethan as in the beginning of the comics.  Can't wait to see where you're going.
Hey, no problem. I'm just glad you're reading and enjoying. That's all I want, really. Thanks for your great review. Makes me all happy to read stuff like that.

06/13/2008 03:32 am
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Excellent new chapter -  exciting and wonderful plot change to get Buffy, both of them, in a lot more "loving frame of mind."  That line of seeing him so badly injured is so right - All the world and your made up troubles fall away when you are faced with the possible death of someone you love and is a huge part of your life -

Hope that you can bring us a new chapter again very very very soon.
That was my point, exactly. Glad you got it lol Now that this happened, I'm sure she will be more open to listening to what he has to say. It's true that sometimes, it takes a situation like this one to realize how big a moron you've been :D

:-)
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02/08/2010 06:59 am
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I know you'll probably never finish this, since it's been so long, but I thought I'd drop a line and say how much I've enjoyed it thus far. It's probably one of my fav post-chosen stories I've read.

Brunettepet
06/19/2008 03:52 pm
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I'm enjoying Molly, and I hope she stumbles over Angel in her investigation.  He should be able to set her straight on the Sunnydale "terrorism."  I also enjoyed this supportive Xander, realizing that Spike makes Buffy happy so he should support his friend.  Spike's sarcastic comments kept me smiling, even though he's being just as stubborn as Buffy in leaving.

The vampire attack is an excellent excuse to keep Spike in the fold.  Here's hoping he and Buffy get some time together.  The fighting is crazy making.
Thanks. Keep the reviews coming, I love them. You motivate me to write more.

06/14/2008 10:08 am
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Awww! The Xander/Spike scene is so sweet, I love their interactions, their scenes are always the peppers BtVS needs with the sarcasm and wit. Enjoying your series and happy to see a S8 Spuffy, we need new materials.
Yes, I do love Spike and Xander arguing together. They're fun. Glad you like the story. Thanks.

06/13/2008 07:48 pm
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Take your time...that is called a plot.  Just putting them together would make it PWP...I like meat before my dessert personally.  This plot is a dandy too so bring it on!

Buffy is acting in complete character....deep sigh.  I am actually in Spike's corner on this....time SHE come to him for a change.  Why be mad at him?  She's the one who told him their night was important then macked on Angel and made fun of Spike's jealousy.  She said nothing the night before the battle and waited for the flames to say the ILY!  Why expect him to rush to her side???????  ONE ILY vs. years of "get over me" isn't to be ignored.  Nope she has this coming.

Excellent in every way.

Kathleen
You're right, I should take my time and do it right lol The thing is, I'm also posting my story on another website where the readers are more into very light and romantic plots, so I got a lot of comments about how long it is for Buffy and Spike to finally get together and have their happily ever after. It made me believe that maybe I was losing readers because of that. But it wasn't enough to make me change my plans about the story. I still wrote it the way I wanted. Like you, I want meat before my dessert lol I have done the PWP and the light romantic plots in the past. Now I wanted to try something different.

I totally share your opinion about the things Buffy has put Spike through in the past. I thought she needed to pay a little. See what it feels like for a change. And I thought it was in character to make her react the way she did. She's never been too much into communication. She's more "react first, think later".

06/03/2008 02:38 am
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take your sweet time . you tell a sweet tale. very good read, thank you.
Glad you like it. Thanks

06/01/2008 07:42 am
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Excellent Work - was great to read several chapters at once -  look forward to the next update - These new vampire couple seem like they would be very interesting - hope you plan to keep them around for a bit -
Thank you! You're right, it's always more fun to read several chapters at once. So glad you like the story.

Lise
05/31/2008 10:28 pm
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This is a very interesting story that I am for sure going to follow. Looking forward to the next chapter!

L
Thank you so much. I'm glad you like it.

05/31/2008 04:59 am
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Hey - take all the time you want to, in order to write it your way!  I'm a patient sort, at any rate...
Thanks for your patience, it will be worth it ;)

anon462
05/30/2008 06:18 pm
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Hmm? What's going on in LA? Careful you don't become someones lunch Molly.

Xander grew up? He was hardly sarcastic and not a bit hateful, amazing. And Giles didn't walk into the room with a cross in his hand making threats? This really is an alternate reality isn't it???

Willows in a real mess. Wonder what Ethan will do to her when he finds out what she did to Amy? Hey! If Will can do that whole astral thingy why doesn't she use it to visit the coven?

Oooo!!!  Fight!!! Fight!!!  At least it will take Spikes mind off of Buffy, for a few minutes anyway.  :)

Thanks for all your great comments!

05/30/2008 07:41 am
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Go, Molly! I have high hopes for that girl.

Also, go Willow! Can't keep a good witch down.

And finally: silly, silly Buffy and Spike. It's as if they LIKE putting off the inevitable.
Thanks for your review, Rebcake. Buffy and Spike will make things right eventually, I promise.

Brunettepet
06/19/2008 03:38 pm
Issues much?         
Spike and Buffy butting heads shouldn't be a surprise, but it's disheartening.  He's right about Buffy's convoluted logic.  She tells him to go away, but is then pissed off when he's gone.  It's no wonder he's thrown in the towel.  Their relationship is exhausting. 

Excellent reunion with giant Dawn, though.  Spike's reaction to her losing her virginity made me laugh, as did her plucking him up in her giant hand.  It's surreal to have her so ginormous.

Amy in Willow's body being touched by evil Ethan gave me a chill.  He's very creepy in this story.  I'm really enjoying it.
I think I found my fanfic twin! What I mean is that all the comment you write, all the things you like about the story, are the parts that I prefer. I know, I have favorite parts about my own story... lame. But it's the stuff that made my smile when I wrote them. It makes me so happy to read you comments, you have no idea.
The Dawn and Spike conversation for example. I had that planned since the beginning of the story. I could just see it happening in my head. Fun to write.
Isn't Ethan creepy? lol
Glad you're loving it.

06/13/2008 07:34 pm
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Damn....didn't even mention how much I ADORED the reunion with Dawn.  PERFECT in every way!

<i>"I'm not putting you down until you promise you won't kill Kenny." </i>  Okay images of South Park and many, many giggles!

Kathleen
Thanks, Kathleen. It was so much fun to write. Especially the conversation about sex. I love overprotective big brother Spike.

06/13/2008 07:33 pm
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Ethan is being used so much more effectively (as is Amy) in this story!  Excellent Big Bad's.  I get that they aren't with the General (or don't appear to be) so this is quite a convergence of storms with the older vamp duo, the military, AEthan lined up on one side and our heroes on the other.

I meant to mention what a collosal wanker Angel was to refuse to help since he thinks Buffy is with the Immortal....jerk!  Hope Buffy finds that out!  No cookies for you!

Kathleen
Yes, Angel is incredibly immature sometimes and the way he loves is so selfish that it can't really be called love. You don't care if the person you used to love is in trouble because you're pissed that she moved on? That's pretty bad.

And I love writing the really sick relationship between Amy and Ethan. Magic wise, the things they've done over the years made me think they would be a good team.

06/03/2008 02:03 am
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shame spike and buffy cannot communicate as easily as spike and dawn. very good read, thank you.
Yes, communication is key if you want a relationship to work. But she'll learn eventually.

Reb
05/22/2008 08:11 pm
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Thanks for the new chapter. Poor Willow. Poor Spike. Poor Amy? I look forward to Spike's inevitable conversation with Giles, since Buffy's completely  abdicated her responsibilities by throwing a hissy fit. You'd think they'd all have learned by now that communication is key. Sigh.
Yes, poor Amy too. The girl has so many issues, it's not even funny. Several years of therapy maybe? I think she needs it. And believe me, Buffy will learn her lesson. And it's about time if you ask me. Damn, if she could just get over herself and learn to listen... lol

Tamara
05/20/2008 08:42 pm
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Love the convo between Spike and Dawn. I don't blame him for giving up, he really is the one always making the effort.

And as for the giant Dawn thing it turns out that she was super sized( either by accident or design) after she lost her virginity to her boyfriend's roommate. The comics are going for a massive amount of character assassination in my book.Thank the powers for great fanfic.
Yeah, I know about Dawn. I wasn't going to include her at first, but I just thought Spike's reaction would be too funny and I had to write it. Thanks for your review.

sara
05/20/2008 07:14 pm
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that sucks, not the chapter, but i was hoping buffy and spike would have talked.  why can't she just listen to him?  she's such a pain sometimes, i hope she comes to her senses before he leaves.
Why did she not just listen to him? That's an easy one: because it's Buffy lol She's not exactly easy to deal with. It makes her interesting, but also frustrating. I'm glad the chapter doesn't suck lol

:-)
05/22/2010 01:55 am
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Brunettepet
06/19/2008 03:26 pm
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 I loved Buffy's babbling about her hair and being all random and charming.  The depth of her mourning was heart hurting, but her reaction to his not contacting her immediately was even worse.  Spike was an idiot, but not listening to his explanation is making his actions seem callous.

Molly realizing there's something not kosher about Sergeant Vol's mission is a step in the right direction.  The slayers will have a woman on the inside if she discovers they're forces for good in the world.

Excellent Giles voice in this chapter.  His exasperation and anger were an entertaining read.
Yeah, these two have issues. Spike was an idiot for not telling her he was back, and she was an idiot for not listening to his explanation. But they'll figure it out.

I like Molly. I'm having fun writing her character. I like smart, strong women. It will be good to have her on their side, for sure.

I'm glad you like my Giles. I don't really like writing Giles because I always feel like I'm getting him wrong. It's harder for me to write proper British, then it is to write slang. When I travel to the UK, I hear mostly slang British because that's the way most young brits speak. So it makes it easier to write Spike.

Owen
06/17/2008 08:31 am
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Very nicely done, not just Buffy's reaction but also Molly's.  They're both upset about being left out of the real story.
Exactly. You got it :) Two strong women who like to be in control. Thanks for your comment.

06/14/2008 01:03 am
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Spike sighed. "Luv, I wasn't expecting to walk in, say 'Honey I'm home' and have you offering me a drink, the news paper and my slippers, but please, say something. Anything..."

"I cut my hair. I'm sorry."

This is UTTERLY perfect!! not being funny at all, that is one of the best buffy/spike interactions ive read in a VERY long time
so very descriptive of shock and so very Buffy it struck a cord. "I cut my hair. I'm sorry." <-- genius

This is so funny because I honestly wasn't sure if people would get the "I cut my hair" speech. Not that I think people are stupid, but because I was afraid it would only made sense to me. What I see happening in my head isn't necessarily what other people would expect. But I'm so happy I got so many great comments about this.

06/13/2008 07:19 pm
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Just started this and am gobbling it up rapidly but wanted to make a pit stop to let you know it is brilliant!  THIS is how they should have written S8 in the comic. It even has many of their cherished elements in it but THIS  THIS makes sense...this is well written, well plotted and totally in character.  Fabulous.

Totally adored the reaction in realizing it was Spike and the inner musings.  Excellent and insightful view of Buffy's mind.  BUT the whole I cut my hair and further explanation was CLASSIC and marvelous.

LOVING this....you are reclaiming my characters from the debacle of the comic dismantling of all I loved.  I could kiss you.

Kathleen
Thank you thank you thank you!!! Honey, you just totally made my day. I was super stressed out because I'm about to spend seven days working with a guy who hates my guts and was starting to get a migraine just thinking about it, then I turned my computer on and your fabulous reviews made me so happy that I forgot all about the next seven days lol. I so needed the confidence boost.

It's funny because the hair monologue was the one thing I wasn't sure about, and it turns out everybody seems to like it. It was not even planned but while I was writing, I could just see it happening in my head. Glad you enjoyed it.

I was afraid a lot of people wouldn't read the story because they hate the comics so much. I'm not a big fan either (except for the ones with Faith) But it brought me back to the good old days when they would do something I disagreed with on the show, and I would write a fanfic to fix it. Not liking what they do with my favorite characters is such a great motivation for me to write. So God bless the frustrating comic books lol

05/31/2008 12:20 pm
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I for one am enjoying this work very much - sorry you are not getting the amount of reviews you deserve but I know that your readers are having a great deal of pleasure reading your continuation of the series -
It's alright because the reviews I do get are great. As long as people are enjoying it, that's all that matters.

05/17/2008 03:31 am
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buffy's "pointless conversation" was the beginning of her actual saying what she thought. or, it slipped out in the babble. she was again emotionally  honest up to the point that emotion took over completely. but if it was that easy we would be deprived of many  chapters to enjoy. very good read, thank you
Things are just never easy with Buffy. I didn't want a "they fall into each other's arms and live happily ever after" kinda thing. I was trying to keep it real. I hope it works. Thanks you so much. I always enjoy your reviews.

05/14/2008 07:31 pm
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I'm a bad, bad reader and I haven't reviewed your story at all.  I"m sorry!  I am enjoying it!!!  I liked Spike's reaction to Buffy's outburst.  I cna't wait to find out what Molly does. 
Nah, you're not bad. As long as you stop by once in a while to let me know you're still reading... I'm happy lol That was my only problem: I wanted to know if people were still reading. Now I know :D I'm just glad you're still enjoying it. Thanks!

Leilani
05/14/2008 03:26 pm
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It'll probably take a while for your former readers to discover you're updating this story again.  Don't take it to heart.

I just discovered this story and am loving it!!  So keep on writing - the masses will return...
I didn't want to come off as being all whiny. It's just that it's worrysome to get no reaction at all. You start wondering if you're litterally writing only for yourself lol Obviously--based on the wonderful reviews I got this time--I was worrying for nothing. I'm glad you found the story and liked it, hon. And thank you for the encouragements.

Reb
05/14/2008 07:51 am
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It's nice to have this back. I had lost track and had to go back and read the whole thing. Italy was fun (a couple of chapters back), especially Mario and Illona. The reunion was wonderfully awkward and graceless on all sides. I am very excited to see what Molly Stevens will come up with. Military attache to the Slayers, perhaps?
If it was good enough to read twice, I'm happy lol. I'm just sorry that I took such a long break from writing this one that so many people had to read the previous chapters again. I had so much going on in my life. I'm a flight attendant and I spent the winter being gone seven to eight days at a time and going to places where I wouldn't dare bringing my laptop for fear it would get stolen from my hotel room. I also wanted to finish Aloha to get it out of the way and be able to focus only on Decoy. Plus, I spent tons of money to go to the Buffy Reunion in L.A. in March and had to work overtime to pay for that. Not making excuses, but that's basically what happened. Add to that a very reluctant muse, and you get months and months of silence. I'm back on track now and promise regular update. Thanks for your review, Reb.

anon462
05/14/2008 06:19 am
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New reader, so my first comment.  I'm really loving this story!!! I started it a couple hours ago and couldn't stop reading it. Each chapter became more and more interesting as the story developed. Finding Spike in Vagas trying to start a new life and not think about Buffy was kind of funny in a way, because when it comes to Buffy it isn't possible for him to not think about her in one way or another. Then as soon as he heard that there was something going on at the Hellmouth and the military were interested in Buffy, he had to go find out why. And once he did he had to chase half way around the world to find her, still thinking she was involved with the Immortal. Then off he goes again to Scotland, has the big first meeting with Buffy and blows the whole thing by telling her how long he has been back.  Now he has to face her and make her listen to him.

That's the brief summary of the story and every bit of it was a fantastic read. The characters were perfect in the way they thought and acted. Reading the chapters was like watching new episodes of BtVS, the ones that should have been made by Joss.

Great work, great writing, great time reading it!!!  Really looking forward to the next chapter, can't wait to see how Spike makes Buffy listen to him and hopefully they can make up and have a night of screaming Spuffy porn!!!  :D
Thank you so much! That is such a nice review. Oh, and... I'm hoping for a nice night of Spuffy porn too. But first, there's one stubborn Slayer who's gonna have to get over herself and listen lol.

05/14/2008 04:50 am
If only I knew how to lie         
Lovely to see an update!  I seem to have missed the last one somehow.  I imagine you might get some grief, but personally I like how you handled the 'Spike's been gone for a year' fiasco.  I know Buffy had issues, but it always irritated me when people have her go running back to Spike the minute she see's him back.  I mean, hello, does the name Harmony ring a bell?  Authors tend to forget that...

But, the point is - I really enjoyed this chapter and am looking forward to the next one! :)
Well, she kinda ran to him... she just expected to run through him lol. Glad you enjoyed it.

Dee
05/14/2008 02:43 am
If only I knew how to lie         
Well, I hope this review helps.  I read this story when you first put it out and was happy to see it again.  I almost thought it was a completely new story until I got to the second chapter and things started sounding familiar again.  I hope you will be able to finish because I find it very interesting and entertaining!
You thought it was a new story? That's funny :) Wow, you know it's been too long when... lol No worries, I always finish my stories. It would break my heart to abandon one of them--they're like my babies. Especially this one because I have so many ideas for it. Thanks.

TwilightChild
05/14/2008 12:20 am
If only I knew how to lie         
  Uh oh, more trouble!  But, still, she shouldn't have run off like that.  with their relationship as new and tender as it is, she could end up losing it.  Hell, she could end up losing HIM with all the danger that pops up in their lives.

  I do love the babble she couldin't stop.  Very cute, and when confronted with that kind of loss, I think she would be at a loss for relevant words.  What do you say in that situation?

  Engaging story.
Ya know, for a girl who already died twice, you'd think she'd figured out by now that life is too short to waste time like that. Or at least, she should give people a chance to explain themself. But our Buffy doesn't deal well with rejection so she jumped to conclusions. She'll come around. Or at least, something will happen to make her.

You got my point exactly about the seemingly pointless hair monologue. That's it. What do you say in a situation like that? When you imagine a situation like that in your head, you think of all these wonderful things you'd say. But then, when it does happen, things never go as planned. You have too much things to say, it all wants to come out at the same time, and none of these meaningful things you thought you needed to say don't seem to matter anymore. And you end up saying something completely unplanned that seems pointless and random, but says it all in a weird way. So anyway, that's what I was thinking.

Thank's for the feedback, it's greatly appreciated.

Amy
05/14/2008 12:11 am
If only I knew how to lie         
What an original plot idea!  You definitely have my attention.  This has a good start to it and I am eagerly waiting for the next one...oh, and the spuffy goodness please!  More of that!
The Spuffy goodness will come... as soon as they get over their issues. Just kidding! The day Spike and Buffy have no more issues is November 12th 3024 lol I won't make you wait that long :D :::sighs::: I'm funny tonight. Glad you like the plot idea, it's the first time I try my hand at something so involved. I have so many ideas, I can't wait to write more. I'll post again soon. So happy you like it.

Goddess_Hecete
05/13/2008 11:58 pm
If only I knew how to lie         
Brillant story.  Seriously, one of the best Post-NFA fics I've read.  Can't wait for the next chapter!
Really? Thanks! So nice to hear :)

05/13/2008 11:47 pm
If only I knew how to lie         
I left you a review for the last chapter over at EF.  Great update, things didn't go to well for poor Spike now did they?  Hope he can make it up to her.  Looking forward to your next update!
Things never go well for Spike. Poor guy. If only he'd start explaining himself before saying how long he's been gone, she might not have reacted so badly. Note to Spike: don't blurt things out. EVER. But you just know he'll manage to fix things. And if he doesn't, well, there's always Harmony. lol Just kidding. As if ;)

:-)
05/22/2010 01:47 am
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Brunettepet
06/19/2008 03:03 pm
Visitors         
The slayer meeting was entertaining, especially Buffy's dismissive Dawn talk.  Dawn whining and stomping outside the castle gave me a grin, too.

Spike and Andrew's ride to the castle was funny, and this line made me laugh out loud:  "Contorted in a seat not fit for a small child, wrapped in a blanked that reeked of mold and other unidentified smells, and suffering from a mild concussion due to the numerous bumps in the road and the low ceiling, Spike started to miss his wooden crate."  Poor Spike, he's getting battered and bruised on this European vacation

Buffy's stunned, then angry, then weepy reaction to Spike was stellar.  I had no idea what to expect, but it was vivid and emotional.
I always enjoyed the chemistry between Spike and Andrew. I like how Andrew worships Spike.
About Buffy... I couldn't see her just throwing herself in Spike's arms so I tried to imagine what kind of reaction she would really have. That seemed believable to me. Glad you liked.

05/31/2008 11:57 am
Visitors         
Loved your interaction between Spike and Andrew - plus, I love how you bring Spike and Buffy together -

I look forward to seeing your version of season eight - great project -

Thank you so much! I appreciate your comments and I'm glad you like the way I write Spike and Andrew. These two always made me laugh ;)

05/17/2008 03:14 am
Visitors         
tears are a start.  onward. good read, thank you.
True. Thanks for reading.

TwilightChild
05/14/2008 12:21 am
Visitors         
  Love her running and smacking into him.  Gotta love those unexpected reunions.  There's just so many ways they can turn out.

Thank you for continuing your story.  :)
No problem. Of course I was gonna continue it, I love writing this story. It's a little difficult keeping up with all the different characters, but I like a challenge. I wanted the reunion to be funny in an ironic way. I hope I managed. I figured Buffy was not the type of positive girl who believes in miracles unless they smack her in the face and she would jump to the worst conclusion. In this case: that The First was back. Happy you liked it.

Veronica
05/07/2008 11:39 pm
Visitors         
Just read this from the beginning and I love it!  Can't wait to see how the reunion plays out!
Thanks, Veronica!

Veronica
05/07/2008 11:39 pm
Visitors         
Just read this from the beginning and I love it!  Can't wait to see how the reunion plays out!
Thanks, Veronica. It means a lot to me that you love it. You shouldn't have to wait too long for an update, my beta already has the next chapter. I'll post as soon as she send it back.

Brunettepet
06/19/2008 02:51 pm
Happy bunch         
 Andrew's explanation was a good one, especially trying to give poor, deceased hero Spike a laugh at The Immortal and Angel's expense.  Willow being betrayed by Kennedy and Rona is a surprise, but Amy really isn't.  She still has an ax to grind with Willow and Buffy.

The two new vampires are already entertaining.  They're going to be a nice addition to the chaos that's showing up in Scotland.
I just thought it was the only explanation that actually made sense and was in character for Andrew. And about Kennedy and Rona... I just don't like them. I had a grudge to settle with those b*$ches. I'm not over the "ding dong the bitch is gone" Rona said when Buffy was kicked out of her house. And Kennedy just generally get on my nerves. So I'm making them pay :D Mmmuhahah Amy really needed to come back. I felt like her story wasn't over.
Glad you like my two new vampires.

05/14/2008 09:53 am
Happy bunch         
like the new characters you have introduced -
Thanks. I love writing original characters. It allows me to be creative :)

05/14/2008 09:53 am
Happy bunch         
like the new characters you have introduced -
You do? Glad you like them. I love creating new characters. It's fun to write characters that somebody else created because it's a challenge to get them right, but it's also fun creatively speaking to create your own. Especially when people tell you they like them ;)

02/06/2008 06:00 am
Happy bunch         
Just found this story and am amazed! I loved Lazarus and seeing Spike with his friends. Your Ilona Bianchi voice was perfect and how you handled the suspense for Willow-Amy, the army guy, and whoever is magically torturing Willow is fantastic and gripping. I hope you'll come back to this story, because I can't wait to see how you'll handle the Buffy Spike reunion. I love what she was thinking about her knight rescuing her from her castle, and hope they have at least a little while to be ecstatic and in love and possibly making out. ; )
Lovely story, good job!

09/27/2007 06:44 am
Happy bunch         
hmmm, those two sound kind of scary...and poor willow!!! hope they can help her soon...spike needs to find the real buffy and they need to help willow before it's too late!!! great chapter, love :)

DeanSamWinchesterfan
09/26/2007 10:50 pm
Happy bunch         
Good chapter.Update soon.I loathe Amy and Kennedy with a passion. At least you're not going the way of Xander/Buffy like the comics.

09/26/2007 02:55 am
Happy bunch         
fun read, thank you. andrew is to helpful to moving the plot along in this tale. maybe next time you can write him into an easily disposal spot (trying to put out a flaming angel and bursting into flames.)
Don't worry, soon they'll get to Scotland and Andrew will fall into the background. I needed him into the story for now, but he won't be a main character the entire time. Maybe some day, I'll write a short fic in which Andrew dies a painful and ridiculous death just for you ;)

09/25/2007 01:07 pm
Happy bunch         
Okay now this was just a great chapter. I am glad that Spike was told the complete truth. What in the world is Amy doing? I really do hope that they can find Willow. Awesome story and what is up with the spirits?
You liked it? Thanks. I was starting to worry because I didn't get many reviews for this chapter. I think people want Spike and Buffy together and it's taking too long to reunite them. It will happen soon though. Next chapter. Thanks for your review, it means a lot to me {{hug}}

Tamara
09/24/2007 12:20 pm
Happy bunch         
Good plot device with the body switch! I much prefer it to Willow betraying Buffy.

Not A surprise that Kennedy and Rona have turned.

And even if Spike had lost his soul , he still loved Buffy before he had one . Sounds like Andrew has been listening to council rhetoric.

It makes more sense that Andrew thought it would funny for Decoy!Buffy to date the Immortal when he thought Spike was dead. By the time he found out otherwise it was too late to stop it.
Aw, you gotta trust me, girl. I would never do something so out of character and unjustified, unless I came up with a good explanation first. Willow can't go from being a "white haired Goddess" to black eyed bad witch with no explanation. Amys'a... well, you know what I mean to say here.

And about Kennedy and Rona, you're right, it was to be expected. Even before getting their Slayer powers, these two had serious issues. Kennedy could fake being sweet sometimes, but you could tell she would turn into a nightmare if you'd piss her off. And Rona was too defiant for her own good. Give these two powers, and you're in for trouble.

Poor Andrew wanted to do something in Spike's honor, and it backfired when it turned out that Spike wasn't really dead.

Glad you enjoyed the chapter. I'll update again soon

:-)
05/22/2010 01:19 am
Doing it the American way         
 

Brunettepet
06/18/2008 06:46 pm
Doing it the American way         
 Your Ilona was hilariously over the top.  She's so cliche Italian it makes me grin.  Her aversion to all things Angel and The Immortal played out completely in Spike's favor, so maybe she'll be helpful in this new wrinkle, too.

Why has Willow thrown her lot in with the military?

So, the Buffy in Rome is the decoy this piece is named for.  Spike's attack was brutal and swift, and I love he got the chance to take out The Immortal as well, even if only temporarily.

It's all very entertaining.
I had to rewatch "The girl in question" to get a feel of Ilona's character, and I got to enjoy the episode more after finding out in the comics that Italy Buffy was just a decoy. The first time around, I was so upset that she moved on so fast that I didn't realize how funny the episode--especially Ilona--was. I had a great time writing this woman. She's hilarious.

08/25/2007 07:02 am
Doing it the American way         
loved the read, thank you. it's a shame spike might need andrew for info, otherwise great opportunity to eliminate the waste of space.
Poor Andrew. I kinda like the little. He's annoying but cute. At least sometimes. I can rewrite the chapter and position Andrew between the Immortal and the window if you want ;)

All4Spike
08/22/2007 01:40 pm
Doing it the American way         
Just a quick note in response to the point Melissa raised about the Buffy/XanderBot thing in issue 2. It's clear to me that it was part of the nightmare Buffy was having while under the drugs, not a real smoochie... we get her true fantasy later on... Buffy in a SexyNurse outfit sandwiched between a NakedSpike and a NakedAngel.
I'm relieved to know that :) I'm still buying the books, just not reading them. I'm planning to read them all at once. I find it frustrating to read them one at a time because it's such a quick read. And also, I don't want my story to be influenced by what happens in the books.

Time of Change
08/21/2007 11:18 pm
Doing it the American way         
Excellent. I look forward to reading more.
Thank you. I'm working on it. It shouldn't been too long before the next update.

08/21/2007 05:49 am
Doing it the American way         
hmmm....so i'm guessing this is true to the comics, and buffy's actually in scotland? i hope he finds her soon....love your portrayal of the roman ceo....so cool!!! loved this chapter, love :)
Yes, she is. I only took a few things from the comics. I basically used the first one for inspiration, but that's it. Glad you enjoyed Ilona lol

Melissa
08/21/2007 04:35 am
Doing it the American way         
OMG GREAT STORY so far!!! You have got to finish this. I have read the comics too except for this past issue I haven't gotten it yet. But you didn't include Ethan Rayne or Amy in this, how come? And you changed Willow. She was suppose to have been captured in the comics but doesn't she break free or something along those lines and fights with Amy? Ugghh I gotta re-read them. Thank god you didn't have the Xander smooching with Buffy good god ughhhhh. Oh please do hurry with this one. It is so close to what is actually a Season 8 but with A FANFIC perspective. I was actually very very upset and appalled at the comics. I don't get the whole you can't have Spike and even Angel in the comics. Doesn't make sense when they are all owned and written by the same Joss but apparently Fox owns them. Hmmm thats just weird. If they appear in the comics they are only on loan. Don't get it thats why I love these fanfics you can just play and play to your hearts content. What I was unsure of was isn't this the same type of military that Riley is in that was based at the hell mouth? Because if I recall the Initiative had all sorts of things on Buffy when they found out who she was. Im still confused on that part of your story. Thats why Im waiting for you to finish...heeheee I ABSOLUTELY LOVE the title because it was TOTALLY mentioned in the comics about that Buffy being a Decoy. BLOODY BRILLIANT!!!!! But I can't wait to hear Andrews explaination because at the end of Angel he was soooooo cryptic and led them to believe it was Buffy and then made that comment that someday she would choose one of them...But it also questioned this in you part of the story with Buffy dreaming and reminicing she thinks of him still dead so you are going the route that Andrew didn't tell Buffy about Spike? Or did Buffy plant the double because of just disappearing or will you have that addressed anytime soon? Oh god please finish Im soooo into this story because of your comment based on the comics. THANK YOUUUUUUUU for this!!!!! Great job so far keep it up!!!!!
I'm glad you're that excited by this story. There's a few things I need to clarify though, and I think I'm going to have to change my warning pronto.
This story is only inspired by the very first of the comic books. I don't even read it anymore because I'm too grossed out by the Xander/Buffy thing. Basically, I did what we used to do with new episodes: take the episode and run with it. It goes of canon right after the first comic book. I took Joss' decoy Italian Buffy idea, the army (which is NOT the Initiative, that's why they have nothing on Buffy) and that's pretty much it. Forget everything that happened with Willow and Ethan in the books, that's not what will happen in the fic. I'm sorry if it's confusing. Just forget about the comics. I'm taking this somewhere else. Because I don't have to have permision to use Spike ;) I hope this cleared things up a bit.

All4Spike
08/21/2007 04:09 am
Doing it the American way         
Oh I love this, and having read the comics (so far) I understand where you're coming from. Looking forward to the revelations to come...
Thank you! Glad you like it.

Kat
08/20/2007 10:58 pm
Doing it the American way         
I have been reading this story but this is the first review that i have left. I love this story you are a master at keeping people wanting more if for no other reason that we got to know what is going to happen. Keep writing and I will deffentially keep on reading
Thanks for leaving a review, I appreciate it. Glad you want more ;) I'll try to update soon.

Tamara
08/20/2007 08:42 pm
Doing it the American way         
Good fight! Any chance the Immortal scumbag is permanantly damaged ? And what the Hell is Willow doing helping them find Buffy? Is trying to get the world's worst friend award..Again!
Nah. Sorry lol. But his ego is severely bruised though. :)
And Willow... Good little Willow ::shakes head:: Like I told someone else on another site who sounded upset by the "ohmygod, is Willow evil again?" angle, wait and see. It might not be what you think ;) Thanks for your review, Tamara

08/20/2007 06:36 pm
Doing it the American way         
Great chapter. I'm glad Spike found out it's a decoy, and I kinda like Ilona, especially with the 'I spit on him' thing.
lol isn't she funny? :D I always thought she was nice to Angel only because he was the CEO of W&H in L.A. She did greet Spike first when she saw him, and gave Angel a goofy looking jacket when she gave Spike such a nice one. That says it all lol. I figured since Angel is not CEO of W&H anymore, she doesn't have to be nice to him anymore ;)

DeanSamWinchesterfan
08/20/2007 06:15 pm
Doing it the American way         
Good chapter.Update soon.I love that Spike knew right away that it wasn't Buffy.I'm one of those people who's been convinced that Spike's loved Buffy since the first time he saw her at The Bronze.
lol so am I ;) And I think that if Spike could follow Buffy's smell all the way to some random house in S7, he would know right away the woman standing in front of him wasn't the real Buffy in this situation. He just didn't get close enough to find out in The girl in question.

Brunettepet
06/18/2008 06:38 pm
Welcome onboard Angelus Airlines         
 Spike's bitching and whining was very amusing.  he's right, Angel is petty enough to make the trip as uncomfortable as possible for Spike, but it's delightful that he's hooked back up with the sultry siren from Wolfram and Hart, even though he's arrived in the wrong European city!

Buffy's dream was intriguing.  She's going to recognize it's a slayer dream when Spike finally shows up.  Her bitterness toward living in a fish bowl is probably going to heighten once she finds out the government is after her.  Poor, put upon thing.
Yes, hard for her to think the dream is real when she thinks Spike is dead. But she'll figure it out soon enough. It was so fun to write the scene in the plane lol I was cracking up the entire time, seeing it happen in my head :)

05/14/2008 09:20 am
Welcome onboard Angelus Airlines         
Great Story  - Loved having Clem and your Laz character in the first part - Hope they can come back later in the story.  Very much enjoying this work -
Maybe. I love them both and would miss them if I don't get to write them again. So I might find something for them to do in the future. Thanks

08/25/2007 06:46 am
Welcome onboard Angelus Airlines         
very good read, thank you. she might be more help the angel.
Unfortunately, Angel is too busy looking at his belly button to be of much help to anybody sometimes. Aw, I'm not nice to the poofter. Sorry, can't help myself lol. But deep down, I do like the guy. Don't tell anybody. Glad you're enjoying the story

DeanSamWinchesterfan
08/16/2007 10:04 pm
Welcome onboard Angelus Airlines         
Good chapter.Update soon.Hee to Buffy and then Xander's reaction. My dad will be home soon,and then we leave for the baseball game/Styx concert.
Poor Xander, if he knew who she was talking about... lol Hope you had fun with your dad.

08/16/2007 04:50 pm
Welcome onboard Angelus Airlines         
lol...too funny, i always kind of liked her even though she was evil...hehe....great chapter and can't wait to see the reunion between buffy and spike...though her slayer dream parts are all starting to come together again, aren't they? *bites nails* great chapter, love :)
I think the first time I watched the episode, I was too freaked by the Buffy/Immortal thing to pay attention to Ilona. But I watched it again recently and she made me laugh my butt off. She was a great character to write (I just finished writing the next chapter) I'll post the next chapter soon. Thanks for your review.

08/15/2007 10:24 pm
Welcome onboard Angelus Airlines         
Nice chapter, I'm looking forwrd to more.
Thank you! I'll post the next one soon.

Brunettepet
06/18/2008 06:27 pm
Hero of the people, enemy of the State         
 Sorry for leaving this twice, I forget I'm not logged into this site.

Nearly getting captured was very entertaining, and Spike and Lazurus' escape was vivid and exciting.  Spike bemoaning the bullet holes, shots caused by his own lingering at the Hellmouth, was very amusing, and I loved Clem deflecting his ire by pointing out he was bleeding all over the Viper's seats.  

Spike's dream flash back was very moving, and he's right, Buffy didn't get the acclaim she deserved.  This new investigation just adds insult to injury.
Glad you enjoyed the excitement. It was a fun chapter to write. I really like writing Clem and Lazarus. It's always fun when someone makes fun of grumpy Spike... in a friendly way of course ;)

06/18/2008 06:26 pm
Hero of the people, enemy of the State         
 Nearly getting captured was very entertaining, and Spike and Lazurus' escape was vivid and exciting.  Spike bemoaning the bullet holes, shots caused by his own lingering at the Hellmouth, was very amusing, and I loved Clem deflecting his ire by pointing out he was bleeding all over the Viper's seats.  

Spike's dream flash back was very moving, and he's right, Buffy didn't get the acclaim she deserved.  This new investigation just adds insult to injury.

DeanSamWinchesterfan
06/14/2007 05:24 pm
Hero of the people, enemy of the State         
Good chapter.Update soon.At least Spike is asking Angel to fix the "Buffy is a terrorist thing". The stupid government is being helped by all the Slayers.They're getting rid of all the magical creatures that they tried to do experiments on.

06/12/2007 11:31 pm
Hero of the people, enemy of the State         
I'm so glad to see you updated this! I hate it when fics I like die on the vine...

06/12/2007 08:09 pm
Hero of the people, enemy of the State         
sounds like spike has a plan. that usually works so well. very good read, thank you.

06/12/2007 07:19 pm
Hero of the people, enemy of the State         
like angel's response.... :) great chapter, glad they managed to get away, and with the file...can't wait to see what happens next :)

Tamara
06/12/2007 01:02 am
Hero of the people, enemy of the State         
The precense of Initiative soldiers certainly explains where they got Buffy's name . And you'd think after dying and saving the world , they'd stop calling him Hostile 17.

Way cool. :-)
05/21/2010 03:51 pm
Digging for the truth         
 

Brunettepet
06/18/2008 06:16 pm
Digging for the truth         
 I'm enjoying Lazarus' easy teasing.  He and Spike are an excellent team.  Spike being self aware of how crap he is at plans gave me a grin.  He's right, he is more a seat of his pants type of vamp.

Your attention to detail on the road toward Sunnydale and at the base camp made this chapter vivid and entertaining.  Spike's break in was tense, and I'm still uneasy at the ease of his obtaining a uniform and getting Buffy's file.  Is he being set up?

Time for another chapter or two, so maybe I'll see!
It was such an amazing thing to open my account today to find out you had left me all these wonderful reviews. Thank you so much, you have no idea how much it means to me.
And about this chapter... yes, Spike was just THAT lucky. Or, the army was just that unorganized and you'll find out much later in the story why exactly that is.

05/30/2008 11:45 pm
Digging for the truth         
Cool  action Spike with the Viper, love it!
Black Viper... Dark and flashy, just like Spike ;) Thanks for your review.

DeanSamWinchesterfan
04/05/2007 05:09 pm
Digging for the truth         
Good chapter.Update soon.I can't wait until Spike finds Decoy!Buffy.
Thank you! Love your user name by the way ;)

04/05/2007 08:23 am
Digging for the truth         
spike at his best. very good read, thank you.
No, thank you lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing. You have no idea how much I appreciate it.

infinitecrisis
04/04/2007 07:14 pm
Digging for the truth         
Plot getting thicken. Is the military planning to capture Buffy or her friends? Will Finn make an appearance? Also, Finn is way too young to make into a captain if he was in his early 20s in BTVS. Please give us more mystery and suspense.. adventure and action. I am seeing a potential here. Thanks!

Here, is nothing to do with the story but Initiative made US military looks bad in BTVS. Few bad eggs had cost some reps in the best organization in the world. Those bad eggs should be taken out and not fit to serve. Wankers. "We, Army Strong". Hoo ah!
I don't write Riley Finn. Just writing is name gives me a rash. If I include him in my story, I'll have nightmares. Of all the characters I hate, this one is the absolute worst. But he might get mentioned, probably even in the next chapter. But I haven't decided yet if I want to go that way. We'll see. I know they made the military look bad. I don't think Joss likes the police and the military. The police officers in Sunnydale were stupid, and the military evil. According to what I read so far in the comic book, the military is still somewhat evil AND stupid. But I'll tone it down, don't worry. I'll update soon.

04/04/2007 06:29 pm
Digging for the truth         
Kinky bonding games - LOL! Hey, seriously, I'm loving this post-Chosen, post-NFA scenario, and I like your OC friend for Spike.
Lazarus says thanks lol. He likes him too. Looks at himself in the mirror every morning and blows himself kisses. Selfobsessed little yellow demon that he is. Glad you like it.

04/04/2007 04:15 pm
Digging for the truth         
I’m still enjoying this so much. I think this Spike is the best you’ve done so far. Really good.
You like him? Yeah, I think I'm getting better and better at writing him. Or at least, I hope so. Thank you.

04/03/2007 07:27 pm
Digging for the truth         
well, i'm glad he at least got out of there okay...and something about the description of the girl makes me think she might play into things later...wonder that that file's going to say ... great chapter, love, looking forward to reading more :)
Maybe she'll show up again later. You never know. Thanks for your review. Won't be too long for an update.

Brunettepet
06/13/2008 09:18 pm
City of lights, city of sins         
This was a vivid, entertaining chapter.   Your intriguing set up and excellent character voices have already pulled me in.  I'm enjoying this introspective Spike, still aching from Buffy's seeming rejection.  Lazarus is an entertaining character, and I'm looking forward to his back story.

Sunnydale sounds like a beehive of military activity.  That can't be good.  Off to chapter two. 
I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story just as much as you enjoyed the first chapter ;) Thank you so much for your great review. Keep sending your comments, hearing stuff like this motivates me to keep writing!

05/30/2008 03:16 pm
City of lights, city of sins         
Good start.
Thanks!

04/05/2007 08:01 am
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excellent start, thank you. lazarus seems to be a moderating influence, not that spike can be influenced for long. read the reviews for the chapter. can anyone explain to me what the hell angie is ranting about in the chapter i just read and reviewed? write your story, luv.
Thank you. So happy that you like it. And don't worry, I only let good reviews influence my writing. You're right, it's my story to write. And I'm so glad so many people came to my defence lol. Good to know I am loved ;)

infinitecrisis
04/04/2007 10:57 pm
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Nice beginning. Please keep the update sooner than later! Yes both characters have a lot of issues to resolved but hopefully the your story wouldn't turn into heavy heavy angst.

For Angie:
1. Xander pretended that his attempted rape on Buffy during hyena's possession never happened
a. He kept bashing Angel for turning into Angelus without his soul.
b. He kept blaming Spike souless/souled for just about everything including the rape scene.
However he wouldn't blame himself. The problem is Buffy, until now still wouldn't tell her friends. In "Conversation with the Dead People" she admitted her faults to a vamp but afraid to tell her sister and friends or even Spike. Just a minute or few after Spike rushed off with guilt, Xander found out what happened.. Buffy tried to explain to Xander but in a poor way. She took Dawn to Spike for protection. If she does believe in Spike in the end even when everything happened between Buffy/Spike who are you to JUDGE Angie?

2. Willow attempted to destroy the world.

3. Angelus attempted to destroy the world.

4. Ressurection spell by Willow assisted by Xander, Tara and Anya was the catalyst of events in season 7. It had led to many deaths.

5. How Angelus created Dru? Horrible.

6. Xander dancing spell had caused some deaths but he seem to shrug it off, yet again.

When I say destroying the world meaning potentially billions of death. Billions. Get it Angie? The review has to be in the context of this author's story. Sorry for the rant Isabel.

infinitecrisis
04/04/2007 06:33 pm
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Nice beginning. Please keep the update sooner than later! Yes both characters have a lot of issues to resolved but hopefully the your story wouldn't turn into heavy heavy angst.

For Angie:
1. Xander pretended that his attempted rape on Buffy during hyena's possession never happened
a. He kept bashing Angel for turning into Angelus without his soul.
b. He kept blaming Spike souless/souled for just about everything including the rape scene.
However he wouldn't blame himself. The problem is Buffy, until now still wouldn't tell her friends. In "Conversation with the Dead People" she admitted her faults to a vamp but afraid to tell her sister and friends or even Spike. Just a minute or few after Spike rushed off with guilt, Xander found out what happened.. Buffy tried to explain to Xander but in a poor way. She took Dawn to Spike for protection. If she does believe in Spike in the end even when everything happened between Buffy/Spike who are you to JUDGE Angie?

2. Willow attempted to destroy the world.

3. Angelus attempted to destroy the world.

4. Ressurection spell by Willow assisted by Xander, Tara and Anya was the catalyst of events in season 7. It had led to many deaths.

5. How Angelus created Dru? Horrible.

6. Xander dancing spell had caused some deaths but he seem to shrug it off, yet again.

When I say destroying the world meaning potentially billions of death. Billions. Get it Angie? The review has to be in the context of this author's story. Sorry for the rant Isabel.
LOL Excellent points. I couldn't have said it better. And I'm not over the Once more with feeling fiasco. People died because of Xander and he never, not once, realized that. But oh yeah... He has a SOUL. So that' fine. Anya never showed an ounce of remorse for a thousand years of killing. But oh yeah... she has a SOUL now. So that's OK. As you can tell, I have issues with both the "soul" thing, and Xander lol. But enough about that. No I won't turn this into something heavy with angst. I don't do angst much. Some bickering, some arguing, some issues to resolve... but that's it. Thanks for the review. I enjoyed it.

dicecanntcry
03/26/2007 11:35 pm
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Very interesting beginning! Hope to see more soon! ;)

Not real sure where all the 'rape' talk came from... *scratches head*

And as for what Angie supposedly wants to come out of this, I say 'Isabel, it's your story. Write it however the hell you want'. i personally like the 'lovey, dovey' crap, but i ain't the one writing the story...
Thank you for your support. I like the lovey dovey crap too lol It will take a little longer for this story to get to the romantic part, but it will happen. Because I said so. lol. I all try to make it happen in a realistic way though and yes, they have issues to work on. Thanks for your review.

03/26/2007 08:48 pm
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Very intriguing beginning. I really hadn't planned on buying the comic. Comics aren't really my thing, so I appreciate the fact that you're sharing a little of the plot with us. I like your oc - Lazarus is intersting and humorous - nice foil for Spike. Hope you update soon. I really want to see more; can't wait to find out what's going on in Sunnyhell. :)
Thank you so much! I just finished ch. 2 and will send it to my beta today. I will probably update next monday.

03/26/2007 08:14 pm
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Rushing over here to review it again. I love this first chapter and can’t wait for the next.
LOL thank you! You won't have to wait too long for the next chapter. I'm thinking it should be ready by Monday. I'm really into this story now so it makes it easier to write.

03/26/2007 02:30 pm
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oh man...what an excellent start, i love your oc, and this sounds like a fun road trip...looking forward to seeing what happens next, love ;)
Thank you! I thought Spike needed friends lol.

03/26/2007 02:27 pm
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Nice teaser chapter. Looking forward to more.
Soon, promise. Thanks for your review.

BT_
03/26/2007 07:19 am
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hmm. Looking forward to seeing where this one goes.
asylum? hope we get some backstory, too!
Not sure I'll get into the asylum story because it's a Spike comic book that I haven't read myself. But if I read it, I might have him tell the story later on in the fic. Glad you like it so far.

Tamara
03/26/2007 06:32 am
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Actually I think angie's review wasn't anti-Spike.It had more to do with Buffy's contradictory behavior .

Buffy acted as if she was the innocent victim that had done no wrong yet soon after the supposed attempted rape she took her sister to be protected by Spike and she left an insane Spike in a school full of children.

If she truly considered Spike to be a rapist then she wouldn't have done either of these things.

The closest Buffy came to admitting guilt for her actions in season 6 was when she admitted that she used Spike . However she did not say she was sorry for doing so.

It sounds like she hopes that Spike in this fic will not easily forgive Buffy even after he finds out it wasn't her with the Immortal.Which is completely understandable especially considering the Angel kissing right after he told her that the night they had together was the best night of his life.
Yeah, I get that, Tamara. I just didn't think it had anything to do with my story. Well, it does in the way that it points out that they have issues, but I already know that and I'm keeping that in mind while writing. But thanks.

fanxstitch
03/26/2007 05:04 am
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definitely an interesting beginning and has my attention.
Thanks for your review. I'm glad you like it.

DeanSamWinchesterfan
03/26/2007 04:01 am
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I'm not a comic book reader,but this is one comic book I want to get.I already know the general info.(The main villian,poor Dawnie,why Buffy's considered bad.)Update soon.I like this so far.
I'm not a comic book reader either. Even the guy who sold it to me could tell just by looking at me. Completely out of my element there lol. But it's the next best thing to watching a season 8, so I couldn't pass up the opportunity. I bought it after a friend assured me that the "girl in question" incident was explained. I wouldn't have if not. Glad you like the story. Thanks.

03/26/2007 03:59 am
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Uh, angie, why the hell are you on a Spuffy site if you hate Spike so much? You can check through the forum and see just what we think about the supposed attempted rape!
Probably the same thing I think about it lol. I don't even understand where that came from. Did I write something in my story that has something to do with the "rape" without even realizing? Weirdness...

angie
03/26/2007 03:47 am
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looks good so far, just please - no wimpy, mopy or puppy spike or making this one of those lovey dovey 'spike sees buffy again and everything's fine because he doesn't care about any of the crap she's pulled on him' type of post buffy fics that are totally unrealistic for any healthy relationship - those types of stories seem popular despite the fact that we all saw how badly that type of a thing turned out in s6 when everything bad thing that happened between them was ALL spike's fault and buffy was the totally innocent victim - yah spike attacked buffy and HIS own actions were his fault but one thing about it especially bugged me (and almost ruined spuffy for me) - i have a younger sister and ther is NO WAY IN HELL that i would leave EVER her alone with anyone if i even suspected that they did anything close to trying to rape anyone so why was buffy going to have spike babysit dawn alone in the middle of an empty graveyard less than twelve hours after he "tried to rape me" without even warning dawn befroehand?! that and leaving an insane spike who "tried to rape me" in a school full of children (who couldnt possibly defend themselves against him if he did assault them) before she even heard anything about his soul caused me to seriously question how buffy perceived spike's attack on her cause actions dont even come close to what they should have been against an "evil soulless thing" who tried to rape her
ps i'm a female and i teach martial arts classes i know dozens of ways to subdue people without hurting them and some are completely painless so that chip didnt mean crap in keeping the 'horrible monster rapist' from sexualy assaulting dawn or anyone else if that was what he really wanted to do.
I used to think every review is a good review, but since this one has almost nothing to do with my story... I'm not so sure anymore. I went back to the main page to see what I put under "genre" and it does say angst and romance. And that's what the story is going to be: angst and romance. No, I never had any intention to turn this into a lovey dovey sappy romantic kind of story, but if I had, I would. They do have a lot of issues to resolve and they will. I don't quite understand where the rant about the "rape" came from. Did I say anything in the chapter that reminded you of it? I'm not even sure who you're bashing here, Spike or Buffy. But one thing is for sure, I love them both dearly and don't really like hearing such nasty things about either one of them. Thanks anyway for taking the time to review. I do appreciate it.

Pam S
03/26/2007 02:45 am
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Buffy and Sunnydale.. usually not so good for our hero.

Interested.
Sunnydale, Spike and the US military... now that's an even scarier mix lol. Glad you're interested and I hope the next chapter will keep your interest. Thanks for the review.

Tamara
03/26/2007 02:35 am
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I definitely like it!
Thanks for giving my story a chance, Tamara. I was really excited about starting to post it. I hope I can keep you interested. Next chapter will be out soon.