Work in Progress by Scarlet Ibis

06/02/2016 07:06 pm
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No, you are wrong, more than one person noticed your use of Bohemian Rhapsody.  There was just so much going on, I didn't mention it until I went back and read your reviews b/c there was so much to cover.  I too love that song in particular, and Queen in general.  My favorite song... well one of my other favorite queen songs is Death on Two Legs, which would be a great title for a fic, come to think of it!

Again, well done.

Blue rushes off to see what else SI has written.

06/02/2016 06:56 pm
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Not sure where to start, but I'll start with the end because, well, Dru is my favorite of all the non pricipals, maybe just my favorite, the pixies argue, you see.  Anyway, I am glad she got her sanity back, though probably a slightly demented one, as the rat bastard was a sociopath.  Still, Ms. Justice got what she needed, and Riley got what she deserved.  I mean. he.  A bullet was much too nice, and the sanity extraction was a luscious, appropriate cherry on top.  So interesting how even the demons in this story knew the wrong that Riley did.  I have said that I think rape; particularly the rape of children is a crime far worse than murder.  I have seen nothing here to dissuade me of that.

Anyway, I don't read rape stories, mostly. I mostly only read this b/c someone on the forum recommended it as being something more than well worth reading and I am deeply grateful that I did.  It made me think hard about my book in progress which involves the same topic among other things.  I think too many books/fics either gloss over or (stomach churningly, IMO) seem to celebrate the rape-sex.  This is the only story where it was described in any detail where I didn't feel that it was done for its titillation.  It was shocking in the necessary ways, but not gory for the sake of gore. 

Thank you for building all the relationships SLOWLY.  Nothing happens right away.  Healing is slow and trust takes time.  I'm glad that you made them align right away on the correct side of the divide - sadly, it's shocking how often existing relationships and friendships get destroyed even when the rapist is clearly at fault and even when they are a stranger (I suspect 'stranger rape', is actually more of a rarity than most people would like to believe).   But they did not get instant friendships, just add a little rape.  The Buffy relationship didn't end happy ever after right away b/c the beautiful princess suddenly came around, and everything was 'all better' with Spike because of true love.  Rape is so much messier than that... and of course, so is Buffy's relationship history and their mutual brokenness.  You did GOOD.

I never saw Dru coming.  I knew you had decided to use her, but I didn't know just how and when.  It was perfect.  I still think it was a huge plot hole that Spike could be on that train and not know it was Dru, but the original canon material made it seem he really didn't smell her.  So, I don't hold you responsible for that.  Glad you brought her in for a visit.  Very glad.  I love her.  (If you've ever read any of my work on twisting the Hellmouth, you'll know I have a sweet spot for her in my heart)
I just wanted to thank you from the bottom of my heart for your lengthy and thoughtful review.  Also, if you're into The Walking Dead/Richonne, I write for them as well ^_^  Hopefully you'll have a happy read!

01/19/2016 02:07 am
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I love how you ended this - NOT that turning Riley Insane was justice - but sounds like he was ready for a lot more human evil - I'll think of it as preventive intervention. 

Enjoyed reading this again - Hope everything is going well with you.  

Kahdri
07/03/2012 03:58 am
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Enjoyed the read, great story!

Jags
03/07/2011 11:20 pm
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Wow! That was terrific. I've been waiting for an end to the story and thought I'd never see it. It's ripe for sequel by the way. :D Keep it up
Thank you muchly :D 

Wow, it's been awhile since I finished that one :P  When I wrote the epilogue, I felt pretty done with this tale.  In addition to original work, I now have some long abanoned WIP's in the queue as well as some new plot bunnies (some un-Spuffy related, so check my LJ for those).

Glad you liked it, and thanks for taking the time to review :D

Niori
05/31/2009 09:26 am
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This was one of those disturbing stories that you cant help but enjoy. Good job.
I especially love what you did with Harmony and Dru- I can see them both wanting to help Spike get revenge.
Again, great job.
Thank you :D  Harmony did genuinely love Spike, and Dru in her own way, so it wasn't a stretch for me.

Thanks again.

02/26/2009 03:37 pm
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Haha! I love the end! Yay for Drusilla!

And Buffy's dream--"I'm just a poor boy," "thunder and lightening," "spare him"--was that traces of Queen's Bohemian Rhapsody that I read?

Nice story. I really enjoyed it. :)

<--absolutely loves "Bohemian Rhapsody."

And kudos to you--only like three people ever noticed the reference ;)

Thank you for reviewing, and I'm super glad you liked it :D

LCF
10/11/2008 11:28 pm
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Just discovered this fine fic of yours. (So good, I read it all in one shot). Truly a Bloody masterpiece. While I  always suspected that Spike had been a victim of sorts during his early days as a fledge, the rest..? Very well done. It isn't an easy thing, getting those particualr emotions right. But you did, & then some. As for Riley being a sick F**k..? The plastic stake said it all: a torture implement, & one he kept on hand. (Yeesh!) A pity Riley didn't suffer worse. (if only Dru had doused him in Chirago demon phermones, and..? you get the idea.) I never liked Drusilla until this fic (Harmony..? only amused). You nailed them both, character-wise, as well as making them intruiging. I have a Spuffy scale for the finer fics... You just broke it. (in an amazingly good way).
Bravo.
LCF
First, thank you profusely for your kind and lovely review.  Your words have touched me as well, and broke my scale for reviews ;)

This was my first time really digging into those two characters (Drusilla and Harmony), and I'm glad that I got them right.   Watching s5 of AtS really helped me get into Harm's head, and Dru, well...I have no idea where that came from.  As for all of the emotions involved, well, I do something I refer to as "method writing," which is really sucky, but makes the writing great.  Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it :D

Shiko
07/14/2008 07:53 pm
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Totally loved the end. The idea of getting Dru sane again... I really didn't see that coming. Great story!

Thanks so much for giving me kudos on that, part, and I'm happy you enjoyed it.  Also, very glad you didn't see it coming ;)

Shelby
06/19/2008 11:47 pm
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The whole rape thing made me physically sick, but the rest was cool. loved the Harmony revenege kick. and Dru's little revenege thing was awsome. nice job =D
xoxo

Thanks Shelby :D  Glad you enjoyed it.

And sorry for making you sick, but this was my first (and perhaps my last) really dark fan fic.  Glad the payoff made it worth though.

04/14/2008 12:10 pm
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OMC! Are you going to be doing a sequel?
I can't believe I didn't see this--sorry for the late response.

I am...considering a sequel, but it would probably be Dru centric, and therefore unpostable here.  I still have one fic to finish here though, an AU s4 I've been pondering and a Spangel, but I will definitely keep you posted :D  Thanks for reviewing, and glad you enjoyed it.

03/04/2008 07:47 am
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oh such a lovely end for riley...just what he deserved :) death would have been too easy....and i love how you brought buffy around as well...wonderful, love :)
Death would have been too sweet--this way it's funnier.  Okay, that was a tad morbid, lol, but at any rate, this eliminates (in my brain) any chance for "As You Were," and that suits me just fine.  Thanks for reviewing :)

02/26/2008 07:32 am
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I love it!  what a fitting ending for Riley, the a** hole, though i'm not sure if a sane Dru is better or worse than the insane one. 
Thank you :D  And honestly, I have no idea what a sane Dru would be like...besides understanding her a lot more clearly.

Cewcew
02/25/2008 04:28 am
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Nice!
Thanks--glad you enjoyed :D

alým
02/24/2008 09:31 pm
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Perfect end to a beautiful fic!Well,what can I say;I loved it.
Now,time to read "Use Me Up" by you.:)Wish me a good read;)
Glad you loved it :D  And yes of course--I wish you happy readings.

02/22/2008 02:47 pm
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Nice way to tie up all the loose ends.  Gotta say that I'm still reeling at      the idea of Drusilla as a Justice Warrior.  And you managed to get Xander off the the OC concerning Buffy too.
If it helps at all, she was insane when said that :P  And I'm sure that after I write this, I'll know what you meant by "OC," but at this specific moment...I don't.  But I assume that you're referencing how he's more understanding.  I think given the right circumstances, he can be.  The Xan Man can come through ;)

Thanks for revieiwing.

Cas
02/22/2008 04:52 am
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Sanity in Riley's head?  That seems a bit far fetched!  Thanks for the great write.
Oh no, cause when Glory brain sucked people, it brought back her sanity, and left them insane.  And Dru, drinking Glory's blood essentially, temporarily gave her those powers.  Sorry I didn't make that more clear.  Thanks for reviewing :)

sirc
02/21/2008 03:14 pm
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Wow.... Great ending.
I'm liking the "..." there.  Thanks so much for reviewing, and glad you enjoyed it :D

02/21/2008 03:39 am
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excellent ending to a fine tale. thank you. and the bonus of a sane dru.
I'm glad the ending worked for you.  And to be honest--making Dru sane was a split decision.  I wrote that last part like ten minutes before posting, but I'm glad it panned out.  Thanks for all of your support and sending me one last review for this fic :D

02/20/2008 10:44 pm
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A very clever and satisfying conclusion - really well done!
If there is one thing that is ever important in fiction writing of any kind, it is to have a satisfying ending.  I'm very pleased that I have managed to succeed.  Thanks for all of the support and for revieiwng one last time :D

02/20/2008 03:08 pm
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i really liked this story. after reading alot of fanfcition i can appreceiate you ablitiy to write clear and ordered stories. one where you know who is talking and what the crap is going one : )
Ah--another mysterious reviewer.  Well, I'm super glad you liked this story, and that it wasn't a bit confusing :P  Thanks for reviewing.

02/20/2008 01:44 pm
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Excellent ending, an incorporation of Crush, but with all of your events behind it.  And Drusilla rocks!
Yeah, Drusilla is great.  She just made things so much simpler.  Glad you liked the ending, and thanks so much for reviewing :D

02/20/2008 05:46 am
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Brilliant weaving of canon happenings with your verse.  Totally loving the ending. 

I read this story from chapter one to fourteen in one sitting.  I couldn't leave it alone.  Or it wouldn't leave me alone.  I don't know which, but I was truly shocked, entertained, thrilled and pleased. 

Good job!

One sitting?  I think that may be a first.  Glad it was worth it :D

"I couldn't leave it alone.  Or it wouldn't leave me alone."

Sounds like a drug metaphor.  Either way, it was my pleasure to be your pusher :P  Thanks so much for your awesome reviews.

clarityfades
02/20/2008 04:30 am
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terrific ending! FLOVED dru...both helping spike and ruining riley.  I really like how you showed buffy's need for acceptance from her friends, but also, how she felt she couldn't fully trust a guy.  and i absolutely loved them making new memories over the old.  and i liked that spike cried.  excellent, excellent story! i've really enjoyed the journey.
You know, I was this close to having her kill him, but I figured this way was more satisfying :D  I tried my best to stay true to the characters, their situation and their motivations, and I'm glad you liked what I came up with. 

Thanks so much for reviewing :D

02/20/2008 02:33 am
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Oh I loved it.

Really glad you did--apart of me was worried about certain parts, but I'm glad it panned out.  Thanks so much for reviewing :D

kim
02/19/2008 11:57 pm
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Ooo, I LOVE Dru's revenge!!! I like when she takes care of family.

Figures it takes a scare to make Buffy get over herself. Poor Spike, they would have been in limbo forever if something didn't shake her up!
lol--yeah.  I figured it couldn't be easy with Buffy, and gave her something big to ponder.  Thanks so much for reviewing :D

Tamara
02/19/2008 10:56 pm
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Nice touch having Drusilla kill Glory , save Spike from future chip troubles and get revenge on Riley.

Excellent ending.
I was actually saving the whole "Dru kills Glory" bit for this other fic, but it was just too perfect here.  Glad you liked it :D  And thanks for all your reviews.

02/19/2008 09:14 pm
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Okay.....I have to say I take wicked pleasure in the last bit.  Dru regaining her sanity is wonderful (toss in a soul and you'd have a fab. character for a sequel...maybe an interesting combo with Giles Tee hee) and that she's getting it while revenging Spike with Riley is extra special.  Yup, that appeals to me in a deep way. YAY you!

Love this extra bit.  I enjoyed the story all the way through and even though I thought it was complete, I am happier for this last bit.

Kathleen
Dru and Giles--oh boy, the possibilities!  But...I must, resist, new...plot bunnies!  *holds up a cross, then tosses it aside cause it won't work*  Someone else mentioned a Drusilla sequel...and I'm seriously pondering it. But if I do, it won't be any time soon, unfortunately.  I have so much on my plate fan fic wise (and not to mention the devil that is RL), but nevertheless...this just proves it all hasn't been done before :P

I'm super excited you enjoyed it Kathleen.  Your reviews were such a pleasure to read, and I thank you.

*hugs*

02/19/2008 08:19 pm
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OMG! I friggin' LOVE you!!! *resumes semblance of normality*

This wrapped the story up perfectly! I loved the way Buffy finally opened up, Drusilla eating Bed and taking Glory's powers was ingenious, and the way Riley paid was awesome!
Oh! And the 'undercover date' part had me giggling so hard my stomach hurts!

*hugs you tight*
Thank you for this wonderful story!
Hey--normal's boring, lol :)

I am SUPER glad this ending worked for you.  Apart of me was worried about so many different aspects of this final chapter, but your hugs made them all better.  Thanks so much for all your support.

*hugs Sotia back*

01/18/2016 12:57 am
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I had forgotten about Dru and the taking care of Glory - 

09/16/2008 07:48 am
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Ooooooo. Very nice. I love it when Dru is a good mummy.
Oh, it gets better.  Thanks for reviewing ;)

03/04/2008 07:46 am
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you've done such a wonderful job with this fic, love...brought in so many characters and handled them all beautifully...i've very much enjoyed the privilege of being among the first to read it ;) hehe...wonderful work, love :)
Thanks--without your guidance and a metaphorical swift kick in the bum to actually post it, this fic wouldn't have even been here.  So again, thanks profusely, and glad you enjoyed the outcome :D

alým
02/24/2008 08:42 pm
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Way to go,Dru and Scarlet Ibis!This was absolutely a brilliant idea.Loved it!
Well, I'm all about the pay off.  At least, I try to be ;)  I was actually saving that for another fic of mine...but it worked here, so I said, what th hell?

01/31/2008 08:53 pm
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wonderful utilization of dru. very good read, thank you.
Thanks so much for reviewing, vladt.  All I can say now is...

Dru's not done yet :evil:

01/30/2008 06:45 pm
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I've always wondered why all those passengers were in the one car when it seemed some could have escaped. Oh well good to see you addressing the blood overfill. Drusilla is always interesting. Wonder what she had in mind for Lindsey?
For Lindsey?  Oh, nothing.  She just wanted to ask him for a favor, which you'll find out in this last chapter.  And to take care of Darla in her stead.  Thanks for revieiwng :D

01/29/2008 05:13 pm
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Hurrah! Drusilla is so the perfect person to take out Glory - genius.
Thank you :D  I figured, there was only one way to truly fight insanity--insanity with murder ;)

01/29/2008 04:49 am
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Excellent way to get rid of Glory, didn't see it coming until the end!
*gg* Super glad it snuck up on you.  Thanks so much for reviewing :D

01/29/2008 04:44 am
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Wow, so Dru kinda saved the day for Dawn and Buffy and Spike. She fixed the whole dying off the tower bit, yay. But what else is she up to? Can't wait.
I was actually saving that--the whole Dru kills Glory bit, for another fic, but it worked so well here, and there was already so much chaos...I had to do it.  Hope you like the rest of Dru's plans :D  Thanks so much for your reviews.

01/29/2008 03:21 am
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Love the new banner!  I read all 13 chapters yesterday, so now I'm on the edge of my seat for the conclusion.  Can't say how much I love Dru being the problem-fixer--but it brings up a question that just occurred to me:  is Ben's blood actually god blood?  And, if so, oh my gosh! 
You know, you made me rethink my entire ending (well, a good chunk of it, anyway).  And for these reasons, if you don't like it, I blame you and Muse, naturally :P  Just kiddin'.  Anywho, thanks so much for playing temp beta, and for your kick ass reivew.

*hugs*

01/29/2008 01:30 am
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I wonder just how god blood might affect Drusilla and if she'll stick around? Good chapter and I loved how you worked in the new history and motivations for Spike's words from the show, and that wonderful little speech to Buffy in the park. Great dialogue.
Um...can't spoil you.  Sorry!  Thanks so much for reviewing, and hope you enjoy the ending :)

01/28/2008 11:31 pm
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NICE ending line -

Thanks so much :D  Hope you like the ending line of the ending as well.  I think it's in a neat, little bow...Thanks so much for sticking with this story and reviewing :)

01/28/2008 05:57 pm
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I can't tell you how much I enjoyed your twist of having Dru solve the whole Glory issue.  I do believe she loved Spike in her own crazed and damaged way and would have done what she could to help him had she been on the scene.  I love Lindsey getting his chance with Darla too.  I thought they made a good pair and might have brought out the best in each other in time (and Darla's left over feelings for Angel might have tempered Lindsey's obsession with him too which would only have helped HIM and vice versa where Angel's feelings were concerned).

LOVELY story, lovely epilogue.

Kathleen
You know, I was actually saving the whole "Dru kills Glory" thing for this other fic, but it worked so well here, and I decided to use it.  Sorry I couldn't expand on the Darla/Lindsey thing for you, but happy you liked the bits you did see.

Oh, and sorry for the epilogue fake out as well.  But this story is officially finished, so yay!  Thanks so much Kathleen :D

01/28/2008 01:59 pm
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Oh goodie, Dru killed Ben/Glory.
Yeah--there was way too much other stuff to deal with, and Glory was just plain annoying anyway.  Thanks for reviewing :D

01/28/2008 12:39 pm
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Lovely to see this update - go Dru, nice fix for Ben.
Thanks Lou :D  Glad you liked how I took care of that little problem.

kim
01/28/2008 12:28 pm
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Good Dru? On the one hand, this saves the Scoobies a lot of trouble. On the other, Spike doesn't get to do the ultimate test of loyalty that might get Buffy off her butt. But, it also means that Spike and Buffy have free time to keep developing without a crisis getting in the way....
Yes, this is all true, but there are other circumstances that will show their true colors for one another...Thanks for reviewing :)

01/28/2008 10:10 am
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Huh!! LOVED the part Dru played in this! You said in the previous chapter that there was only an epilogue pending, since this story is not marked as complete I'm eagerly waiting for more!!!

Great, GREAT update!

xxx
Sorry for the fake epilogue, but I'm thinking you liked the chapters better anyway :P

Deb
01/28/2008 09:33 am
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Interesting story. Hope Drusilla is there just to help Spike out with dispatching Ben...although. It might make Buffy a bit jealous if Dru attempted to get Spike back. Have fun with your writing!
Thanks Deb--Dru, well, she has a few tricks up her sleeve.  That's all I can say. Anyway, it's done, and I hope you like where I took them :D

IT
01/28/2008 09:00 am
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LOL! I love the way you did in Glory! Well done!
Thanks so much for your review.  Glad you liked it :D

jane
01/28/2008 08:59 am
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Neat solution to the Glory problem. Liked it.
Thanks :D  I figured, there was already so much going on in this fic...why not off her now?

01/28/2008 08:34 am
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I've been following this story on dark-solace (it is actually on my favorites list) and saw the update here, so I hurried to read it, and guess what? LOL, it's 3 chapters ahead of where I was! *smacks forehead* Will go back and read what I've missed after work.
God, I feel like such a blonde (which I most definitely am!)
*hugs*
Well, I can't say much about this since I saw your final comment for this fic.  But anyway, thanks so much for all your reviews :D

01/28/2008 07:45 am
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yay! go Dru!
Hope you like what Dru does next ;)  Thanks for reviewing.

alým
02/24/2008 08:07 pm
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"Definitely a someday,"

Would've she died if she told this at "Crush"?I remember him begging her for a "maybe,someday",while running after him.Am I right,or am I mixing the show and fictions?
Either way,it'd be nice for her to say it.
Great chapter,I liked it.:)
Spike says this in "Crush":   Just ... give me something ... a crumb ... a barest smidgen ... tell me ... maybe, someday, there's a chance.

So yeah, pretty niffty.  Just play close attention to Drusilla in the last chapter, and her parting words...

02/20/2008 04:58 am
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Loved it.  Gave me the warm fuzzies : )
Cool beans :D  I'm all about the "hope."  And, since you finished this already (I think), that's what Dru was referring to--"Someday..."

01/28/2008 10:06 am
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She was frozen in place—struck immobile due to his powerful, unwavering stare; and the only thing that let her know for certain that this moment was real was the invisible grip on her heart, causing it to beat erratically.

Just beautiful!!!

xxx
*blushes*

Aww shucks...thanks :D

nmcil
11/05/2007 05:25 am
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looking forward to more - nice update - like your Giles much-
Thank you :D Just two more chapters to go, though...

10/30/2007 05:14 am
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Wow this has been a very deep story the writing is very well done.
Thank you so much, Diesa. I hope you like the ending as well (there's only two chapters left).

10/12/2007 04:32 pm
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This is so sweet...and I really liked Giles's reactions.
Thanks so much Joyce :) I'm glad that my depiction of Giles came across as true and enjoyable for you.

Tamara
10/12/2007 11:47 am
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Very sweet start.
Thank you :) Hope you like what's next.

10/11/2007 11:12 pm
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We will all be waiting for "someday" and hoping it won't be too long.
Sorry if it was too long--the update, I mean. There's only one more chapter after this one, and I hope I don't disappoint. Thank you for reviewing :D

10/11/2007 07:24 am
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short and very sweet works well, thank you. and there are bonus points granted for not including xander's ranting, whether about anya or what buffy is doing wrong. very good read, thank you, luv.
I'm glad there wasn't a void of some kind where Xander's speech should've been ;) The last two chapters will be much longer than this, but I hope you'll think it's still sweet. Thanks for reviewing :D

10/10/2007 11:50 pm
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awwww, so sweet :) love how things are working out between them...you've done a lovely job with this, pet :)
Thanks so much DoS :) Of course, there'll be a few hiccups...but heck, you know the rest ;)

10/10/2007 11:33 pm
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OH we have a someday.
Yup--there's a definite light at the end of the tunnel, and it's not a freight train :nod:

Thanks for reviewing :)

kim
10/10/2007 11:15 pm
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Awwwwww...Buffy handled that really, really well!! Yay for Spike. No rejection this time.

Oh, "devine", should actually be "divine".
Thanks kim :) I hope you feel the same about Buffy's behavior in the update, lol.

10/10/2007 04:25 pm
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Lovely feeling of the inevatible there! Nicely done discussion with believable voices throughout.

Kathleen
Thanks so much, Kathleen. I'm glad I was able to keep it believable :D Hope the ending will be just as enjoyable for you.

10/10/2007 02:44 pm
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Lovely chapter. Buffy's so nice when she's being ... well, nice. To have her jump immediately into his arms would be unrealistic, but I think you handled her reaction in a way that's both in character and very sweet. Great job. I look forward to reading the epilogue. :)
Well, I nixed the epilogue, and instead have two final chapters. Anyway, I hope you feel that these last two bits are in character as well. Thanks so much for reviewing :D

10/10/2007 01:57 pm
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Awwwww -- that was so sweet! They're going to make a lovely couple!
They still have a few trials ahead of them, but yeah, I agree. Thanks for reviewing :)

Pin
10/10/2007 07:16 am
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Very nice. I really appreciate that Giles has not toally lost it and gone homicidal on Spike. Lovely little conversation at the end. thanks so much for the update.
*gg* Giles is a rational man one hundred percent of the time (in this fic ;)

Thank you for reviewing.

10/10/2007 06:57 am
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Simple yet sweet. I like dhow Buffy didn't give Spike any mixed signals or shoot him down like she did on the show. She gave him hope, and hopef or her. Can't wait until your next update to see what happend. As I told you before I really enjoyed this story, thanks hon for sharing!
Thanks so much GB for your review :D All I can say is this: Buffy's true feelings are going to be tested in these final two chapters, and I hope you enjoy those as well.

alým
02/24/2008 07:45 pm
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Gee,I wonder how he'll answer that question
By the way,nice chapter:)
Thanks :D  And our boy is clever...that's all I'm going to say about that.

01/28/2008 09:54 am
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So I said I'd read after work... LOL! I couldn't resist!
Loved this, gonna catch up with the rest now!
Can't wait to see how Spike responds...
...wait a minute, I don't have to wait! *rushes to next chapter*
Glad you played catchup :D  Now...you don't have to wait any longer for the ending, cause it's over.  Hurray!  Thanks Sotia.

sirc
10/02/2007 09:34 pm
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Great chapter! :D
Thanks sirc :D Hope you feel the same about this last one...

09/14/2007 08:42 pm
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Intense chapter! I especially loved Buffy's confrontation with Spike at the end. I like how you had Spike point out to Buffy that she would have let him bite her in "Out of My Mind". I always wondered about that as well. If his chip hadn't fired - and for all she knew, it wouldn't - he would totally have had her. I don't think I've read a fic that addresses this before, so good job on that! And need I tell you how much I love the ending? The rapture of Spike's "innocent, yet somehow sensual touches". The question she asks him ... I cannot wait to see how he replies. This is just a wonderful story. :-)
UB, I find myself examining every nuance of canon Spuffy interactions, and then picking them apart. I think it's the whole "geek" thing. Have to prove my right of being a card carrying member, don't I? And wait no further- the updates here. And only one epilogue to go ;) Thanks for reviewing.

nmcil
09/09/2007 03:50 am
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nice update - short but good - sorry to hear that you will not be able to work on this story on a regular basis - but thanks for doing what you can -
Unfortunately, this next update's even shorter...but for a reason. I hope you find my reason to be a good one. Anyway, thank you so much for reviewing as much as you have on this fic, and I sincerely hope that I don't disappoint you.

09/08/2007 02:56 am
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wonderful read, love. great line to end the chapter.
Thanks, vladt :D I'm super happy that you enjoyed it. Hope to see you for the end...

09/07/2007 07:10 am
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I just now discovered this wonderful story of yours. Dark, but very good. I hated Riley (which I'm pretty sure was the point), and to my surprise loved the Harmony bits. And I can't wait for the Spuffy.
Thank you so much, and happy that you found this ;) It's my first dark fic, so I'm glad you thought I was successful. The long awaited Spuffy will be...soon :D

09/07/2007 04:54 am
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I hate that Xander had to find out what happened to Spike, but maybe he will realize that everything is not all black and white. And leave it to Giles with the way he is dealing with Buffy and Spike. And go Buffy for at least this time not living in denial.
Well if it's any consolation...Willow and Tara are totally in the dark, lol. And yes, so much has happened that it would be impossible and irresponsible for me to leave Buffy in a river somewhere. Thanks for reviewing :D

09/07/2007 01:45 am
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Giles would completely bit knocked of his feet with this revelation. What she went through with Angel and now what about Spike? Thanks for letting Xander know just what Riley did to him. Xander just had his blinders pulled off and even he can't see that clearly right now. Well, that's the question at the moment right now, isn't it? Does Spike even know himself. They all have things to work through, I'm glad you're not throwing them together just yet. They both need some time, so do the scoobies, though it might be a bit easier for Xander to get on board, now. Thanks for the update. School, does put a crimp in your writing time. Looking forward to more.
Gosh, Scoobies...Willow was totally absent in this fic. Is that strange? Was she missed? Anyway, I'm glad you agree with them needing time, and I hope you don't mind that in the update, well...I kinda ignored Xander- for (what I hope is a) good reason. School still sucks, btw, but this story is almost wrapped up (unlike much of my schoolwork). Thanks for being there like every step of the way :D

09/06/2007 10:17 pm
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Great way to end this chapter!
Thanks so much, Joyce :D Hope you feel the same about the ending...

09/06/2007 08:55 pm
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Great chapter. Wonder what Spike will say to that question.
The question now has its answer! Thanks for reviewing, Inzey :D

09/06/2007 03:41 pm
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lovely chapter, pet, the scene you inserted at the start works well, too :) good job on this and i'm looking forward to reading spike's response to that all important question :)
Thanks so much, DoS :D Glad I didn't disappoint with that addition. Hope you feel the same about the next, lol.

Tamara
09/06/2007 12:00 pm
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I hope that mission in South America leads to Riley being a chew toy for something big and nasty.
lmao, yeah...That'd be fitting. Alas, I doubt that Riley will make an appearance, even a horrible, "accidental" death, in the end of this fic. But you never know- Muse is liable to change her mind ;) Thanks for reviewing.

09/06/2007 11:07 am
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So Riley is gone and Xander tried to but in again is it, it seems like Giles knows something or just won't admit something to himself.
Oh yes, Riley's gone, and Giles has much to ponder...Hope you like his assesment ;) Thanks for reviewing.

09/06/2007 10:36 am
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Yikes -- tell the truth, Spike! This is not the time for prevarication.
Um...hum...can't say, lol. Thanks for revieiwng Lou. Hope to see you on this update :)

09/06/2007 05:26 am
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Hey, we may have had to wait but it was worth it. Great update. So long Riley, but is he gone for good? And Xander, he was left speechless for a change. I can't believe he aactually believed Buffy in regards to Spike. But will he use this info. at Spike out of anger?

Can't wait for the next update!
I'm going to address the whole Xander thing in the epilogue. Maybe it was all of that Bander talk, but I'm kinda Xandered out at the moment, lol. I don't think that Xander would believe his bff to lie about such a thing, so I simply didn't address it in this second to last update. Thanks for reviewing :D

09/06/2007 05:15 am
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Well, I suppose whether he should answer that depends on why she wants to know. That's not a question I want to answer in the definitive if I know they're going to be cruel.

Giles seems to be on to something specific, and I'm not sure what.
Well Caro, I think Spike would agree with you...Thanks for reviewing :D

alým
02/24/2008 05:22 pm
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 Huh! You got that straight,Captain Cardboard? She never loved you! Huh,again:D
I loved the break-up scene,and I'm gonna read the rest right now:)
I'm happy that worked for you :)  And for the record, yeah, I don't think she loved Riley in canon--more of a strange obligation type of thing.

Rae
08/22/2007 07:41 pm
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I decided to try this and have to say it's a great fic. I think you have done brilliantly in keeping them in character. Spike vengeance is a good thing and if you would have had him being more soft about it I don't think I would have continued reading it for the reason of it being to occ. Excellent and please update soon.
Thanks ever so much for your lovely review. Oh, and writing Spike soft when it comes to vengeance is like...against my religion, lol.

nmcil
08/03/2007 02:34 pm
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Interesting Story - looking forward to see where you take this - could go so many ways. Hope we get some new chapters soon -

Yes, so many ways that even Muse is horribly confused, lol. Thanks for reviewing, and sorry for the wait.

07/27/2007 04:10 pm
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Yay, the "talk" deed was done superbly!
Aww, shucks...Thanks so much! And sorry for the wait.

07/27/2007 01:24 pm
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And finally the truth about all that Riley/Buffy (non)romance comes out. I loved the snide remark about him growing up on a farm.
Thanks- I added that comment on the fly. It just made sense, and I"m glad you enjoyed it :D

07/27/2007 05:47 am
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is it too much to hope that we are done with riley? and then there is dear xander. very good chapter, thank you.
No, it isn't. Though that isn't to say he won't be back, eventually...Meh, even Muse doesn't know that. Thanks for reviewing, and sorry for the wait :D

07/26/2007 10:50 pm
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This story is really well written. I do have to admit I was a bit turned off by the rape in chapter one but I thought I would wade through because I KNEW that Spike would have his retribution. If he had not fought back in some way yes I would have been angry because that's not Spike. I can't wait to see how this turns out.
Keep up the great work.
Jace
Thanks so much, Jace. I'm glad you stuck through with it. And honestly, the rape turned me off as well- my first tread into "dark" territory. But anyway, can't say how it'll all turn out, cause I honestly don't know, but I hope to see you later, and that I don't disappoint ;)

daniel_nieves
07/26/2007 08:32 pm
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Awesome chapter. I still find that there is a lack of pity for Riley in me, he pretty much deserved what he got but, I hope Riley never goes after Spike again. Thanks for the read Scarlet.
It's cool about the lack of pity. In fact, if you had some, I'd be deeply disturbed, lol. Thanks so much for your lovely review Daniel, and sorry for the wait ;)

07/26/2007 01:04 pm
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oh that was good her admitting she never loved him, she can't love him because she seems to be in love with Spike whether she wants to believe it or not.

MOre please.
I'm sure that whether or not Spike was there, she still wouldn't have loved him- guy was like a brick wall. Big, and boring, lol. Thanks for your review, and sorry for the wait :D

Lou
07/26/2007 08:17 am
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Yaaaay!!! Lovely way to start the day. Buffy needs to get to Spike before Xander tries something daft though.
Aww, thanks Lou! Ah yes...those three--well, I can't say. Anyway, sorry for the wait, and I hope the update doesn't disappoint.

07/26/2007 07:20 am
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Oh, I forgot, I love the banner!
All thanks goes to Pari :D

07/26/2007 07:18 am
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Yes! She walked a away from him. It would be great if Riley left but what will he try to do something to Spike, before he leaves? Giles is learning more about his slayer tonight. Loved the conversation between Giles and Spike. It's one of the most honest ones they've ever had. Great chapter, Thanks for the update.
Can't tell you, lol. All answers are in the update. Well, not all, but, some :D And I can't stay away from friendship/father-son Giles/Spike convos, cause they're so gosh darn adorable...Aww. Anyway, sorry for the delay, and thanks as always for reviewing.

Tamara
07/26/2007 05:23 am
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I'm glad Buffy realized the bigoted turn of her thoughts.

She's got a point about him thinking of demons as animals and growing up on a farm. Add to that the fact that serial killers start with animals and you could easily see how any Initative member who thinks it's fine to hurt demons (espicially human looking demons) could make the leap to doing the same to humans.

I find it worrying that Xander is going to try and find out what's going on not to mention that Riley is free to leave. Once he crossed the line to raping demons , he might do it again especially if the Initative chips more demons. He also doesn't seem to have gotten that what was done to him was because of his own actions.
Yeah, I've always had some...feel good feelings that *weren't* about the Initiative. And Riley disturbed me with his testing Xander's comment in "The Replacement." Anyway, Xander's a poor lost boy, but eventually, he'll see the light. I hope. I really can't speak for Muse, lol. Thanks for reviewing, and sorry for the wait ;)

07/26/2007 05:14 am
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i'm so glad she told riley that, so glad she rejected him completely in favor of spike...excellent chapter, love, can't wait to see what it is that riley has decided, and how the aftermath of all this plays out :)
Oh DoS, I always thought she should've rejected him regardless, lol. Thanks so much for all your help- I'd be a wreck otherwise :D

kim
07/26/2007 04:53 am
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Don't be too hard on him, Rupert.....you've seen Spike be anything but a plain ol' vampire.

Wow, honesty from Buffy...
Poor Rupert is completely baffled, unfortunately. And your ex losing his mind and attacking others, well, it can do that to people sometimes, lol. Sorry for the wait, and thank you for reviewing :D

07/26/2007 04:47 am
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Great chappie. The bit about him growing up on a from ROFL! So Buffy needs to do some serious soul searching and get out of the river, oh yeah, and get over Angel. I wonder what Giles is going to get up to. He's brain is working. Can't wait for more.
Yeah, that farm thing sorta just came to me. Mostly, I thought "eww," lol. And poor Giles- don't you just feel sorry for him? He's so stressed. Thanks for revieiwng :D

BT_
07/26/2007 04:02 am
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wow. that was intense.
loved it.
But now we have to wonder what Riley's going to do next. I don't think he's just oging to let it go...
Boy, that Riley. He gets such a defeatist attitude sometimes. He's lost his love, and officially found out that she really never loved him. Well, I can't say what he'll do...but I hope it doesn't shock you when you see it. Thanks for reviewing :D

09/16/2008 06:45 am
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OMG, Harmony is hilariously sweet here! So different for her.
Thanks :D  I found Harmony quite endearing in Ats s5, and learned more about her character.  When it comes to matters of the heart, she isn't a total flake.

alým
02/24/2008 04:42 pm
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" "Do you know what it's like to love someone who doesn't love you back?"
"Yeah. I do," Buffy answered quietly."

Who didn't love Buffy back?I can't remember.
And I suddenly think that Harm is better than Buffy for Spike,but,hey,I'm a die hard Spuffy shipper.:)
I loved the Harm-talk.Written well,thank you.
I was thinking of early Angelus with that quote--of course she still loved the guy, hence the whole not killing him (that, and David was still under contract to be on the show :P )

And it's true--Harmony would be better.  Problem is...he isn't in love with her, which really sucks for her.  She would have been good to him, silly bint that she was.

02/20/2008 04:28 am
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There were only three options: forget, which was impossible without the aid of a lobotomy; forgive, which would be beyond insane, eventually leading Spike to crave a lobotomy for the sole purpose of forgetting what an incredible twat he'd become; or decimate and destroy.

I really liked that paragraph, but the whole chapter was amazing. 
Thank you, mysterious reviewer.  Glad you liked it :D

01/28/2008 11:13 am
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picking up where I left off last time - second reading and while the revenge of the eye for an eye is not my particular belief I shall read on see where you take your characters -

Nice touch with Harmony and her talk with Buffy -
Thanks for continuing on with reading, as well as for reviewing.  I hope you enjoy the rest :)

07/26/2007 06:42 am
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What an emotionally packed chapter. Harmony just gave Buffy a lot to think about and I hope she does. Don't know why you'd lose anyone, Spike deserved some kind of vengence and Riley's out of control. He's lucky that Spike didn't kill him! The old Spike would have! Great work.
Oh, Buffy will be confused for awhile. Spike too. It's catching like the flu. And as for killing Riley, well...maybe he can have some sort of accidental death, lol. Haven't figured out what I will do with him indefinitely.

pretty_in_fangs
07/05/2007 06:59 pm
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Wow. Go go Harmony on the emotional awareness.
Harmony in tune to her Spikey Bear's needs. Well, not so much hers anymore, lol.

Thanks for reviewing :D

06/29/2007 06:26 pm
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I rther like stupefied Buffy.
great story.
Well in that case, expect more ;)

Thanks for reviewing :D

06/28/2007 04:08 pm
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Wow! Harmony has actually succeeded in stunning the Slayer! That's got to be a first.
Oh, yes. Especially since it's, ya know, Harm, lol.

Thanks for reviewing.

06/28/2007 01:35 pm
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Hey, your story...tell it your way. ITA that Spike would never (not even S7) just let it slide! With the soul and feeling guilty as hell in S7 he didn't let Robin get away with the beat down...why would soulless Spike let Riley get away with raping him? Nope, you are right.

Like your Harmony. She really does love Spike in her own way. I like that she wants him happy and cares about him getting hurt by Buffy.

Glad Buffy covered about the bite or Giles would have taken measures.

Kathleen
Thanks for the support. I personally think all rapists should be raped, then turned into human toilets. I think I let Riley get off easy, lol.

And yes, Harm's love for Spike in canon inspired this altered version of her. The circumstances here matured her, and gave her perspective.

Thanks for revieiwng :D

06/28/2007 12:50 am
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"But I mean, hurt him here"
"Even though it doesn't beat anymore, it feels so much."

Oh my Goddess, that is simply beautiful. I like this insightful Harmony! Love the story, keep up the good work!
Aww shucks... thank you. Glad you enjoyed it, mysterious reviewer ;)

Hope to see you next chapter.

daniel_nieves
06/27/2007 10:03 pm
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Bad ass chapter. I felt really bad for Harmony though, which was really suprising to me any way, she was usually just my comic relief in the series. But still, great chapter and thanks for the read.
Harmony's love for Spike spoke to me... and it made honest to goodness sense here for her to be sympathetic to Spike's feelings, even though they clearly weren't for her. Glad you agree ;)

Thanks for reviewing.

Kawaki
06/27/2007 04:04 pm
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I actually felt bad for Harmony. Loved her and buffy's 'girl talk.'
I'm sure that someday Harmony will find that special guy... though I'm not sure we'll get that in this fic.

Thanks for reviewing :D

06/27/2007 11:55 am
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I am so glad it turned out that way, well not for the lieing Giles is so going to find out the truth anyways.
Harmony was really great at what she told Buffy, now I wonder if she will go to break up with Riley or go and she Spike.
Yes- Giles is no fool. Can't pull the wool over his eyes (well, sometimes ;)

And Buffy... decisions, decisions. Just gotta read and see.

Thanks for reviewing :D

06/27/2007 08:49 am
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great read, thank you. the harmony and buffy scene was fantastic.
Ooh- "fantastic." Kick ass, and thanks for that :D Hope you like the update.

fanxstitch
06/27/2007 08:01 am
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This was really good. Loved what you did with this chapter and Buffy and Harmony's talk.
Aww, thanks so much. Glad you enjoyed it :D Hope you like the rest as much.

kim
06/27/2007 07:17 am
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I love Harmony right now....wow..that was wow.

Yay for Buffy not staking Spike and just sending him home with Giles right now.
Yeah, I most definitely feel that Harmony is capable of more than just comic relief. That, and she really did love Spike... and at this point, what with everything that happened, wanted his happiness more than anything.

Thanks for reviewing :D

06/27/2007 06:36 am
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oh, thank god, harm broke it down for buffy. now i wonder what will she do next? can't wait for more.
Buffy, or Harm? Who's to say with either. Buffy, of course, will be confused. Deeply.

Thanks for reviewing :D

06/27/2007 03:45 am
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Really enjoyed the Buffy/Harmony dialogue! Who knew Harmony could be so smart?
Um... angst aged her? Lol. I think Spike's overt hurt help to open something within her (mentally).

Thanks for reviewing ;D

06/27/2007 01:41 am
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Somehow I missed a bunch of updates but all caught up now. Wonderful chapters, I'm looking forward to the next.
Sorry you missed the updates, but glad you're caught up, and still sticking with it :D

Hope you like what comes next...

Bridget
06/27/2007 01:02 am
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I am glad Spike was not able to drain Buffy although I did not believe he would. I don't have any sympathy for Riley I just did not want Spike to sink to Riley's level. This was a great chapter,
I really liked the conversation between Buffy and Harmony. I hope she (Buffy) remembers what she said.
Oh, Buffy will remember alright, lol. But that doesn't mean everything will be sunshine and lollipops... She still hasn't confronted Spike, and I have no idea how she'll react.

Thanks for reviewing :D

Izzy
06/27/2007 12:37 am
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I love that Buffy learns about Spike's feelings in such a frank way from a source that couldn't have an ulterior motive. Now she also has time to look through everything and see all the clues.
I think Giles will give Spike a chance, even without the chip. Riley still needs to get his comeuppance from Buffy, now the revenge from his victim is over. I look forward to the next chapter.
Well, Harm has no filter, which works great for me here :D

I hope the update is all that you expected it to be.

Thanks for reviewing.

06/27/2007 12:27 am
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i agree with you, spike is a vampire and is such he would be prone to vengeance rather than mercy in a case like this, when given the opportunity...
the chapter was great, and as i told you before, you actually made me like harmony and feel for her...i love how she acknowledges that spike doesn't love her, never really did, and basically relinquishes him into buffy's hands, with a warning not to hurt him...i love it :)
great chapter, love :)
Aww, thanks so much :D Maybe Harm will return briefly? Meh, only Muse can tell ;) I think that her knowing what Spike went through, the severity of the situation, helped her mature more? I think that's what I'm trying to say.

Anyways, thanks for taking my clay molds and baking it into awesome pottery. You know what I mean, lol.

01/17/2016 10:51 pm
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I've read this before but it's still such a heart ache to read it again - you have to feel a great sorrow for Spike, Buffy and even Riley.  Haromony and Chris - sure they made the choice to seek vengeance and do the rape, but all the others - they had free will and chose their actions. 

alým
02/24/2008 04:18 pm
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Awww,I wonder how you're gonna fix this.Guess it's gonna be hard to fix a situation as complicated as this one.
But I liked it.
Read on, young grasshopper.


;)

02/20/2008 03:02 am
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Wow! and I LOVE it!  Great chapter.
:D

02/20/2008 02:11 am
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Wow! and I LOVE it!  Great chapter.
:D

02/20/2008 02:11 am
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Wow! and I LOVE it!  Great chapter.
Thank you :D

BT_
06/23/2007 04:22 pm
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nice! I like your Spike here. I AM kinda wondering what Buffy would prefer as punishment for Riley. Unless she was just reacting in shock to what she'd just stumbled onto.
Then again, what is your Riley capable of? When this is done (if they don't eat him...bad choice of words...what an image...) will he be scared and leave Spike alone, or will he just want further revenge?
Great dialog in this piece - sounds very real and true to character. I think the dialog is one of the hardest parts to get right, and you've done it well.
Buffy's just confused, and has no idea how to handle any of this. And what to do with Riley... Can't say (honestly, Muse doesn't 100% know anyway). Thanks for your lovely review :D

06/22/2007 04:39 am
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Oh, god, I loooooooooved this chapter. And the end, perfect. Can't wait for more.
Lol, (blushes) thanks GB. Some people didn't like the whole biting thing, but I'm glad you liked it.

06/21/2007 12:33 pm
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A very powerful chapter indeed!
I hope you enjoy the follow up just as much. Thanks for reviewing :D

06/21/2007 05:45 am
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cannot generate any sympathy for riley. find it very telling that xander attacks a chipped spike. found the chapter ending to be fantastic. thanks for the fine read.
Thank you profusely for your lovely review :D

Izzy
06/20/2007 10:35 pm
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A great chapter. I like how the author kept Riley's punishment without Spike going utterly evil and doing it himself and enjoying the pain rather than the payback. the slightly hysterical part is just enough, but what happens to Riley had to happen in my opinion. If a vamp bite is as erotic in this fic as some write, I look forward to the next chapter. Buffy and Spike did have a budding sweetness in their relationship after Spike was attacked, and I hope that can get him to stop before killing Buffy. Still, he could take enough that she wouldn't be strong enough to make the decision of staking him for what they did to Riley.
Eagerly awaiting Spuffy in the next chapter.
Thanks for agreeing with me :) And he won't kill Buffy- he's just so frustrated right now, and wanted to, well, shake some sense into her is all. And Spuffy will be coming, though unfortunately, not in the update. Thanks for reviewing :D

06/20/2007 08:01 pm
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cannot generate any sympathy for riley. find it very telling that xander attacks a chipped spike. found the chapter ending to be fantastic. thanks for the fine read.
Xander's all... misguided and out of the loop here, and yes, though he assumed Spike was chipped, he just saw his friend about to hurt. And if it helps, he wasn't happy about it. Thanks for reviewing :D

*bite me*
06/20/2007 07:50 pm
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wow. this is awesome. i loved the end of this chapter. I can't believe that happened. I love this story. keep up the good work.
Thanx
Thanks- it's always great to know I can shock a viewer. Thank you for reviewing, and hope to see you next chapter :D

Kawaki
06/20/2007 06:35 pm
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Oh my goodness. I totally didn't see that coming. Now I'm on the edge of my seat.
I'm glad I was able to shock you. Thanks for reviewing :D

Bridget
06/20/2007 06:16 pm
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I can honetly say that I do not like the way Spike handled Riley. I know that Riley deserved it but I do not think an eye for an eye is the way to handle it. I think this makes Spike as bad as Riley. I hope that Spike will come to his senses after he tastes Buffy's blood. I really did not expect for Spike to become vindictive in this story.
Well, if it helps at all, Spike hadn't planned it at all- it just happened... Thanks for reviewing, and I'm hoping you'll stick with it :D

06/20/2007 04:48 pm
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a wonderful, exciting, dark and disturbing chapter, love...you're doing an amazing job with this story...nice cliffhanger :P...i'm proud lol... ;) ... i'm eagerly awaiting what will happen next :)
Thank you for ironing out all of those lousy kinks :D And aww shucks- proud? I'm a blushin'... thank you again.

06/20/2007 02:34 pm
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Yikes -- that was unexpected. Glad Riley's enjoying himself. Just promise me Spike doesn't elope with Harmony!
Riley isn't enjoying himself- it really is involuntary. I just thought it'd add to his further humiliation ;) Lol on that last bit- of course not. Thanks for reviewing.

06/20/2007 01:28 pm
Slipping Away         
okay i do really like this story!!and i dont feel bad at all for riley.......but i dont really think that he should have bitten her ....she was his drinking buddy and she was the object of his desires.....and he kissed her....but i do really like the story
Yay! (claps hands). Yeah, nearly everyone doesn't feel sorry for him. And Spike, though he lets his emotions get the best of him, he knows when to reign in the control. And he didn't kiss her- not yet. Thanks for the lovely review :D

Jane
06/20/2007 08:02 am
Slipping Away         
Well, I'm well with the eye for an eye. But Buffy helped Spike. I know he's mad with her, but I hope he doesn't kill her. Looking forward to more.
Thanks- you are with the majority. And he won't kill her... that's all I have to say about that. Thanks for reviewing :D

pretty_in_fangs
06/20/2007 05:45 am
Slipping Away         
Fascinating. You're going to keep going, right? Soon? Not leaving us there?

:;grin:: Whenever you have time to update, I'll be watching. Nice chapter.
Of course I am, lol. And no, I'd have to be a mean ol' bitch to leave it there. Thanks for the lovely review :D

06/20/2007 05:02 am
Slipping Away         
Eep! It's a thing you gave her the dream or I'd be worried for her. He still loves her but is caught up in the moment. Maybe he'll claim her? Might upset Harmony but it would be an interesting twist. Thanks Jill, to bad Riley's enjoying it. Don't know if it's the violence that gets him off or he's discovered he also enjoys men. This was, so worth the wait.
You're the only one to specifically refer to that, and you are 100% on the money. And Riley's not enjoying it- it really is involuntary... Thanks for the lovely review :D

.
06/20/2007 04:39 am
Slipping Away         
this is horrible. i can't read this story anymore. as if riley doing that wasn't bad enough, but spike doing the same thing and attacking buffy when he's supposed to love her is just too much for me. i'm done now.
Well, not exactly the same so much as allowing it to happen. Did you really want Riley to get away with it scott free? Most people didn't, and Muse didn't, but sorry it upset you... Spike being forgiving about it is *way* OOC.

Tamara
06/20/2007 04:38 am
Slipping Away         
I don't feel bad at all for Riley.

Though I'm thinking Buffy's kind of stupid. Exactly what did she think should happen to Riley?
Buffy's just... confused. She'll have to cope with it all, eventually. Thanks for reviewing :D

kim
06/20/2007 04:23 am
Slipping Away         
Ho,ho! Good for Spike getting his rocks back. We know he won't kill her, though.
Ah yes, of course he won't. He isn't that reckless. Thanks for reviewing :D

Myra
06/20/2007 04:13 am
Slipping Away         
Hmm, I think I should feel bad for Riley, but in this case, not particularly. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Lol, good, then you're with the majority. Thanks for reviewing :D

06/20/2007 03:39 am
Slipping Away         
Oh is he going to kill her or stop her.

No what they are doing to Riley is not right, but in a way he does desevre it.
Spike may be impulsive, but usually, his emotions get the best of him... No, it's not right, I agree. However, doesn't it make you feel a bit better? Thanks for reviewing :D

Nika
06/20/2007 03:20 am
Slipping Away         
This chapter is leaving me in so much suspense. I don't really feel all that bad for Riley, but I hope Buffy will be okay. I can understand Spike's need for revenge though. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Well, it's to be a Spuffy, so of course she'll be okay... And yes, revenge is a must!! Thanks for reviewing :D

06/20/2007 02:44 am
Slipping Away         
Sadly, I dont feel bad for Riley. I should but i don't. I just hope doesn't kill Buffy.
It's okay that you don't- most people don't, and really, it's okay. Thanks for reviewing :D

01/17/2016 10:29 pm
Let My Savage In         
Such a good set up for the events coming - and it's all complicated because One, Spike is a vampire and by Buffyverse mythos inherently vulnerable to control by his demonic nature.  Two, the theme of vengeance and moral accountability - Spike and Harmony taking vengeance of Riley puts them all on a equal level field - all choosing to do the same terrible act that Riley did. 

alým
02/24/2008 04:00 pm
Let My Savage In         
I enjoyed the chapter except for the parts where Riley defeated Spike.I loved Buffy's dream;especially the brief, hot, Spike-sex and the boy version of Spike.
Well, Riley's a loser in oh so many ways in the end.  And thanks for the comment on the dream--I didn't get many of those, and I worked real hard on it meaning something :D

02/20/2008 02:01 am
Let My Savage In         
On on the edge of my seat now... Great chapter.
I don't remember specifically what happens in thsi chapter, but I'm glad it had you on edge ;)

06/20/2007 04:46 am
Let My Savage In         
Buffy and her slayer dreams. Spike as a child, how cute is that! So happy to have Harmony and Chris find him before Riley can hurt him again. I hope they can have some fun with Riley before Buffy can find him. Now I understand what you meant about Spike being able to get some revenge for himself. Great chapter, this should be fun.
Well, by the time you read this, I'm sure you'll have your answer. Whether or not you approve is a whole other story ;) Just keep in mind that Spike's still... well, I don't want to use fragile, but emotionally, he is.

05/27/2007 02:33 am
Let My Savage In         
Spike has no chip, I hope Buffy oesn't act all, well, Buffy when she finds out. Can't wait to see what Spike had planed with Harm, and what she wants to do with Riley.
Ah yes... I'm sure though most will be expected, a few surprised will emerge ;) Hope you like this next bit, and thanks for reviewing.

05/25/2007 11:42 pm
Let My Savage In         
Nice twist. Now Buffy can be mad at Spike, too.
Ah, Ms. Buffy... what ever will she do? Can't spoil you though ;) Thanks for reviewing.

05/23/2007 05:45 am
Let My Savage In         
an effective harmony, excellent. spike with a disabled chip, priceless. thank you for the fun read.
Thank you for reviewing :D I hope you enjoy this next bit...

Izzy
05/23/2007 02:48 am
Let My Savage In         
Things are getting interesting. I hope Spike shows more of his softer William side in a good light, instead of just the victim-part. Buffy has to fall for him like that! He can be sweet and compassionate and understanding though I know it'll be a while before snuggles. Keep updating!
I'm getting into William, so I think we'll see his poet side eventually. Hope you like what comes next, and thanks for reviewing :D

05/22/2007 10:02 pm
Let My Savage In         
another excellent chapter, love, very dark in the right ways :) love to see riley pay for what he's done...looking forward to more :)
Thanks :D I'm hoping the next part's good, even if it may be expected... Maybe I'll even be able to update sooner more than later.

05/22/2007 09:06 pm
Let My Savage In         
Hum....unexpected turn of events. Wonder if the chip is out of commission for good or not? Go Harm! Looks like Spike is going to get his own back a bit (and yay for that). Interesting dream.

Kathleen
Honestly, I don't know yet, though I'd bet on yes :D I hope you enjoy the next bit- and thanks for commenting on the dream. That really meant a lot.

jane
05/22/2007 08:40 pm
Let My Savage In         
Great update. Don't know if I really want Buffy to stop what's coming to Riley. He's unhinged and is always gonna be dangerous. Can't wait to see what comes next.
But... vengeance is bad. Okay, couldn't type that with a straight face :D Hope you enjoy the next bit.

Bridget
05/22/2007 06:55 pm
Let My Savage In         
Not that Riley doesn't deserve it but I hope that Spike does not kill him. It would make things worse for him overall.
Well... I can't tell you. However, I hope you like what I've done with the situation ;) Thanks for reviewing.

daniel_nieves
05/22/2007 06:38 pm
Let My Savage In         
I hope Riley gets whats coming to him.
Um, yes... Don't want to spoil you ;)

Thanks for reviewing.

05/22/2007 10:24 am
Let My Savage In         
Poor Spike's going to be in deep trouble no matter what happens!
Probably, but it just wouldn't be right if Spike didn't have his day of vengeance. Thanks for reviewing, and hope you enjoy the next bit :D

kim
05/22/2007 09:27 am
Let My Savage In         
Go, Harmony! Revenge party on Riley!!! Woot woot! Time to show that bastard how Spike got his nickname.

Hope Buffy doesn't freak.
Lol, thanks for the review. Hope you enjoy the party...

05/22/2007 08:07 am
Let My Savage In         
If Buffy sees Spike hurting Riley she's probably going to overreact.
Great chapter, looking forward to more.
Sorry for the wait, and I hope the reactions... all around are pleasing. Thanks for reviewing :D

Tamara
05/22/2007 05:31 am
Let My Savage In         
If the something awful is what's gonna hapen to Riley I can't see that as a bad thing.

Yay, Harmony! Great timing.
You know, I have to agree with you there.

Thanks for reviewing and hope you enjoy the next bit :D

05/22/2007 05:17 am
Let My Savage In         
Oh, the chip is dead...mwhahahaha! Nice timing there, by Harmony. You don't often see stories where she gets to be an actual character.
I think... Harmony's gonna surprise us all quite a bit in this fic ;)

Thanks for the review.

01/17/2016 09:28 pm
Guiding the Blade         
You do an excellent treatment on how the rape has effected Spike in such a fundamental way - to be helpless in the face of fear and danger from someone in your life is so horrorible and dangerous for the victim. 

alým
02/24/2008 01:18 pm
Guiding the Blade         
"Better to be a coward than a victim.":D
Loved the philosophy here along with the chapter.
There's nothing wrong with running.  I saw in this one film "Never mistake stupidity for courage," and maybe that would've been nicer to say here...but since it's from Spike's perspective, yeah, he kinda viewed it as an act of cowardice, when it was really the smartest thing he could've done.

02/20/2008 01:53 am
Guiding the Blade         
If nothing, Spike is highly intelligent.  I'm glad he ran.  I'm enthralled by this story.
Yeah--our Spike's no fool.  Self preservation and all that.  Oh, and totally glad you kept reading :P

06/20/2007 04:30 am
Guiding the Blade         
It's good that the people closest to Buffy and Spike should know about Riley. I hate that Spike feels like a victim, he's a powerful demon and to be reduced to that, has to be the hardest thing for him to accept. This Chris should do nicely to help Harmony to exact her revenge for Spike, kinda feel sorry for her when she finds out about Buffy. It's been awhile since I've read this, forgot how good it is and how much I missed it. I wish they had an update notice here. Yup, best for Spike to run. Now to get caught up.
Ah yes, losing her Spikey bear... Muse is not certain how that will play out. Glad you missed :) This is so much more fun than reading how you'll stop reading now (sorry, I got my second one today). Anywho, curious to hear your thoughts on the latest update, thanks for reviewing :D

05/25/2007 11:36 pm
Guiding the Blade         
Mean writer. Can't Spike think up some way to make a Crispy Critter out of Riley without getting a migraine?
Well... it's kinda pointless putting in a proper response since I know you read the last update. *sigh*

sirc
05/10/2007 10:00 pm
Guiding the Blade         
Great chapter
Thank you :D

Lou
05/04/2007 10:43 am
Guiding the Blade         
Poor guy can't even go out for a ciggie!!!! I'm so glad he ran though! A wise move! I think Riley deserves a double dose of what he gave to Spike -- only worse of course! Harmony's plan is going well and Chris sounds the perfect recruit!!
Oh Riley... what to do with him? Thanks for reviewing, and hope you enjoy the update :D

05/03/2007 11:46 am
Guiding the Blade         
wtf? riley got spike-dar, can track him to the ends of the earth? great update.
Lol- he's still got a few of those soldier gadgets up his sleave. Thanks for reviewing :D

05/03/2007 03:19 am
Guiding the Blade         
excellent update, thank you. love the last line.
Thank you :D Still, don't you just wish he stayed in the house?

05/02/2007 05:18 pm
Guiding the Blade         
He's just had it painfully and intimately proven to him that he is helpless against humans. So, why not go outside where Soldier boy can have another go at him? I know it's worked for him in the past, but right now impulsive is not the way to go.
He's Spike- he's stubborn. I know, I know... but that doesn't mean that everything will be bad, though. Hope you enjoy the update to some extent. Thanks for reviewing :D

05/02/2007 06:35 am
Guiding the Blade         
Great chapter.
Thank you :D

05/02/2007 01:26 am
Guiding the Blade         
Scarlet, Congrats on your nomination! Thanks for another good chapter. I really liked the peek inside of Spike's head; and I totally love the bit about Harmony. I'm really looking forward to seeing what she's got planned! :)
Thank you, though I probably won't win :D I hope I don't dissapoint...

05/02/2007 01:07 am
Guiding the Blade         
Smart decision! The chip makes fighting impossible so he made the wise decision. Being smart is not being a coward.

Good reaction from Joyce...fearce protection of her own.


Don't have any problem with any plan Harm may have (suspect a bit ove tit for tat payback will be in order soon.....GOOD).

Kathleen
Exactly- too many mistake stupidity for courage. Not our Spike :D Thanks for reviewing :D

kim
05/02/2007 12:42 am
Guiding the Blade         
Live to fight another day....and you're much faster than any human.

Perfect Anya.

Nice Dawn and Joyce scene.
Yes, Spike is swift. Thank you- I do try with Anya, cause she isn't always easy to get right... Dawn and Joyce won't be in the update, but we'll see them soon.

pretty_in_fangs
05/02/2007 12:25 am
Guiding the Blade         
Oh shit oh shit. I had a feeling heading out for the fags was going to be a bad idea.

Though I am loving seeing Joyce in Momma Bear mode and the race to vengeance.
lol, yeah, addictions will get you into trouble eventually... And Joyce- I coudln't see her any other way. Thanks :D

Dreamsofspike
05/02/2007 12:14 am
Guiding the Blade         
oh, poor spike...you've described his emotions very well, heartbreakingly well, and i can't wait to see riley pay for his crimes...great chapter, love ;)
Oh Riley... yes, he will pay. Thank you (for many things) :D

alým
02/24/2008 12:59 pm
Duality         
I'm seriously starting to like this Harmony,and that means that the fic is beautifully written.Loved the chapter,thank you for writing it:)
*blushes* Thank ya :D

07/19/2007 11:07 pm
Duality         
The scene between Riley and Dawn was incredibly disturbing and so realistic. Rape is about power, and your Riley is a prime example of that. Also, the tender moment between Spike and Buffy was lovely. Letting him lie back against her, stroking his hair ... God, why couldn't canon Buffy be that sweet?

Another great chapter. :)
I personally always thought *something* beneath Riley's seemingly, good farm boy exterior. That being said, I doubt he'd hurt a human though, especially a minor.

Oh, and sweet Buffy? Well, she was a little tipsy at the time, lol (but she really was, though). Nah, I'm just teasing. This Buffy is sweeter.

05/25/2007 11:32 pm
Duality         
Loved Dawn - she just wades right in. Heh heh. Great chapter.
Yup, our Dawnie's a little spitfire, or something like that ;)

sirc
05/10/2007 09:57 pm
Duality         
well done
Thank you (:

04/25/2007 08:53 pm
Duality         
Normally I could care less about Harmony, but if she can get revenge for Spike, then all the better. Good for her, I hope she can pull it off. Buffy should kill him just for what he did to Dawn, the sick SOB. Thanks for the update, love it.
Well, he didn't do anything to Dawn, besides scare her. The feeling was there, but he would never hurt her, or a human in general. And Buffy won't kill him, of course. But what *will* happen to Mr. Finn? Can't tell you ;) Thanks for reviewing, and hope to see you next chapter.

mr_chaos
04/25/2007 04:40 am
Duality         
You know, I always had this idea for a fic where the demons of Sunnydale unite against someone that hurt Spike.

I get this weird sense you might be headed the same direction.

good read
Well, considering Riley was apart of the Initiative, that could be possible. But I'm sure you know, I can't say either way, and you'll have to read to find out. Thank you for reviewing :D

04/25/2007 04:32 am
Duality         
love a vengeful harmony and would love to see her succeed, but really would like to read how spike or dawn meted out justice. very good update, thank you.
Will she succeed? I most certainly hope so (of course, I know the answer, but I simply can't say). And Spike will... have his moment as well. Thank you for reviewing :D

04/24/2007 12:38 pm
Duality         
Great chapter. Pity Dawn wasn't able to act dumb with Riley -- it's upped the ante somewhat. Good old Harmony -- I'm guessing Spike would rather do it himself though!
You know little Dawnie is always honest and blunt with her feelings ;) And Spike, well... will he get what he really wants? I cannot say, or at least, not in a review, because it'd be a spoiler. Thanks for revieiwng, and hope to see you next chapter.

04/24/2007 10:38 am
Duality         
Ugh, someone really needs to take Riely out, what if he tried the same thing with Dawn? what if he tried later on when she's alone and no one to help her? I hate to think about that.

Harmony is gonna get him, I hope. And Buffy and Spike on the couch, loved it. She's kinda drunk now but what will happen when she sobers up? Will she react badly to how they were so close together?

I saw American History X years ago when it first came out. Since I was younger then I know I didn't get the full power of the movie. Maybe I'll rent it sometime soon. And I agree Edward Norton was cut in that movie.
Dawn wasn't in any real danger with him- Riley does have a huge problem, but when it comes to those he cares about, or human beings in general, he's, you know, sane... Harmony will have her moment, most definitely :D And what *will* happen when she sobers up? Not tellin'. Sorry, you have to wait and see. Thank you for reviewing.

04/24/2007 09:11 am
Duality         
I'm so looking forward to Harmonys vengance. That will be fun.
Harmony's vengeance approaches, and should be here the update after next. Thank you for reviewing :D

kim
04/24/2007 05:31 am
Duality         
Love a vengeful Harmony.

Dawn's realization process was very well shown.

And the drinking buddies are getting snugly....gonna have consequences, though, with it being them...
Thank you for reviewing :D Dawn's no fool, and they didn't give her any credit for a long time. And I don't think Buffy would've been so snuggly had it not been for the alcohol, lol.

04/24/2007 05:07 am
Duality         
Funny how I am liking Harmony in this story LOL. Enjoy Buffy and her uncomfortable comfort too...:::snicker:::... Poor Spike with a Buffy mattress and too much baggage to do anything with it.

Riley has stepped off the edge into the abyss and is becoming as much a monster as if he'd been turned. He always had it in him (that's why those suck jobs were such a danger to eeryone around him) and this feels rational.

Excellent update.

Kathleen
I'm getting that a lot- the liking Harmony part. Her revenge, well, I'm not sure how it will be taken. I'm thinkin' it'll be one of those split down the middle, love it or hate it moments. We shall see. It's not in the update though, sorry.

Thanks about the Riley part- I wanted to keep him in character as much as possible. He might get urges, but he can control himself around humans, especially ones he cares about.

Thank you so much for your review :D

04/24/2007 04:20 am
Duality         
Nice progression into some Spuffiness. I enjoyed that a lot. I also liked how hard Dawn pushed Riley. Good stuff, looking forward to more!
Thanks Maggie ;) Yeah, the SPuffy is hard to get to, because I don't want to just throw them together. It'll be a process, and I know a lot of people aren't fond of that, but I'm glad you're liking it thus far.

04/24/2007 03:04 am
Duality         
such a sweet chapter, and i'm soooo looking forward to seeing harmony's revenge :) great job, love ;)
I'm doing things a bit differently here, but I was really thirsty for reviews, lol. And Harmony's revenge... Yes, it will most certainly be interesting :D

daniel_nieves
04/24/2007 02:08 am
Duality         
great chapter, can't wait to read more.
Wait no longer, and I hope you like this chapter too. Thanks for reviewing :D

LadyYashka
04/24/2007 01:53 am
Duality         
Riley's scenes? :hurl:
But of course he's a complete bastard so I'm not surprised.

The scene with Spike and Buffy was great. Buffy stealing the couch, getting Spike to lie above her, and then running her fingers through his hair, was very sweet.

And I must say, I love Harmony. I hope her plan succeeds. :evil:

Wonderful update, and I'm looking forward to the next.
Will Harmony's plan succeed? Well, I still haven't revealed what it was yet, but rest assured, our Spike will be avenged. And yes, Riley anything makes me wanna hurl as well ;) Thanks for reviewing.

04/24/2007 01:50 am
Duality         
I loved the sweet Spuffy scene! And so looking forward to seeing vengefull Harmony! She's rarely portrayed as a round character in these fics.
Well, I touch on Harmony a little bit more in this chapter. And she loves Spike, so I couldn't just have her do nothing. I'm glad you like seeing her :D Thanks for reviewing.

smlcspike
04/24/2007 01:27 am
Duality         
Oh this is great, love it, wonder what Giles will say when he comes home to find a sleeping Buffy under Spike in which they both have been drinking.
Well... Giles will kinda miss that display, I'm afraid. No worries, though, I'm sure somewhere in this fic, he'll catch them doing *something* at some point ;) Thanks for reviewing.

alým
02/24/2008 12:44 pm
The Virus of Life         
I don't like how everbody is learning what's happened to Spike,one by one.It may cause trouble to him,but,hey,I doubt that you'd let Spike get hurt...right?:)

Also,Harm is smart and even more appealing as you said before,I think I can get used to it;)

Loved the chapter.
I know...and I apologize.  But it was apart of my master plan :D  And Harm isn't necessarily smart in this fic, so much pays a good deal of attention to her vampire senses, and has no problem with blood vengeance for the man that she loves.  But yeah, she's definitely likeable in this fic, and for good reason.  I enjoyed Harm in s5 of Angel, and it shows here.  Me, biased?  Pshaw...

07/19/2007 10:59 pm
The Virus of Life         
So, Joyce thinks of Spike as one of her "babies." I knew it! lol. When I first saw LMPTM, I was struck by how much Anne reminded me of Joyce. No wonder Spike took to her so readily. She's very much the nurturer, and that's exactly what he needs right now. I can't wait to see a scene between them.

If Harmony can manage to formulate a halfway decent plan, then Riley is in big trouble, lol. Unfortunately, knowing Harm, that's a pretty big "if".
Yeah, Joyce is reminiscent of Anne (which is why Spoyce fics kinda creep me out...)

Oh, and dear, sweet Harmony...well, I'll just say this- I've gotten a lot reviews where people actually say they actually *like* her. Can't wait to see how you feel about it ;)

05/25/2007 11:26 pm
The Virus of Life         
Spike - Employed? Joyce needs to adjust her medication. That scene with Dawn was really icky. I liked it.
LMAO- yeah. But the vampire part and lack of employment aside, I think Joyce could be convinced he's good bf material. Well at least, she likes him. Ah, Dawn's scene- thanks. I know it was kind of convenient for her to see *that* scene of *that* movie, but I figured, what the hell?

sirc
05/10/2007 09:50 pm
The Virus of Life         
well done
Thank you :)

Lou
04/11/2007 12:52 am
The Virus of Life         
Wow -- Harmony's brain cells are on top form today! Go, girl! Great chapter.
Lmao! Thanks for reviewing :D

04/10/2007 12:22 pm
The Virus of Life         
Does Dawn know that Riley's off the guest list? Glad Spike made Joyce's list. So Harmony knows the truth, does that mean she's the one to get vengence for Spike? Is the littlest vampire even capable of pulling it off? Worried about Dawn and Joyce, Riley's not a vampire, he doesn't need an invitation to come in. Great work, thanks.
Yes, cause she was eavesdropping again. And Harmony... well, she has plans ;) She's "the little engine that could," she is. And no worries about Riley- he's a boyscout, right. Right? Hmm... guess you'll have to read and see. Thanks for reviewing :D

Deb
04/10/2007 08:30 am
The Virus of Life         
Looking forward to updates. Glad to see Buffy and Spike in a contemplative and quiet moment. Little worried for Dawn. Liked Anya and Giles thoughtfullness in dealing with Spike earlier at the Magic Shop.
Thank you for your lovely review :D More quality Spuffy time to come.

Dreylin
04/10/2007 06:21 am
The Virus of Life         
And just like that, I kinda like Harmony. Riveting story.
Thank you for your kind review. It made sense in my brain to write Harmony like that- she does care about him, after all. The question is, will she succeed? Stay tuned... (or the equivalent for reading)

Thanks for reviewing :D

kim
04/10/2007 04:48 am
The Virus of Life         
Harmony wanting vangeance? THat's a surprise...a very novel idea.

Ooo, Dawn watching "American History X" - way too young for that movie! And now Riley's at the door, yes?
Of course- Harmony loves her Spikey bear (or some equally, semi degrading nick name). She genuinely cares (perhaps loves?) him. And true about Dawn, but she was captured in by male nakedness- a common lure for a girl her age and burgeoning curiosity. Thank you for reviewing :D

04/10/2007 04:23 am
The Virus of Life         
how quickly everything changed for riley and the beauty of it is he does not know. can harmony, for once be effective? thank you for a fine update.
Yes, he'll be blissfully unaware for a little while... but no worries, someone will jolt him into reality ;) Thank you for reviewing.

04/10/2007 01:59 am
The Virus of Life         
Wow, brutal way for Dawn to figure out what happened to Spike - but I bet it's Riley at the door, so I'm glad she knows just how evil he is.

And loved Harmony at the end - didn't expect her, but the "nobody messes with my boyfriend" attitude is cute. Would love to see her take on Riley (I'm imagining her defeating him by using the hair-pulling technique she used on Xander, lol).
Yea, Dawn's smarter than the show initially gave her credit for. Oh and Harmony is... vindictive in my mind, and what she plans on doing won't be funny like that- well, maybe in a sick, twisted way to those who hate Riley... We'll see ;)

Thanks for reviewing.

BT_
04/10/2007 12:36 am
The Virus of Life         
I don't know which one of your threads I'm most anxious to have you update - I guess you'd just best do them all... :)
Nothing like a demanding reader, huh?
Well, I'm trying my best to give in to your demands :D Two down, one updated, and one (hopefully) will be updated and completed soon, though these papers and projects these last few weeks of school are killing me... Thanks for reviewing :D

04/10/2007 12:15 am
The Virus of Life         
Wow nto only does Rily have Joyce after him, maybe some of the Scoobies, Buffy and quiet soon Dawn, now he has Harmony too. Oh, man I can't wait to see what happens next. And please don't tell me that's Riley at the door? I hope he dosen't try to force himself into the Summers' homes. And Dawn's pretty bright I'm sure she's about to connect the dots and know what happened to Spike and who did it. Great chappie, can't wait for more. I can't beleive you typed the "n" word, lol.
Okay, alright- I won't tell you ;) As for the "n" word, well, it was in the film. And if you haven't seen "American History X," I strongly recommend it. Edward Norton (though he's no longer cut like that) is just, well, sexy, even though he's all evil and racist during most of it.

Thanks for reviewing :D

04/09/2007 07:44 pm
The Virus of Life         
Okay, now my minds cheering for Harmony, telling her to make Riley hurt bad.
Wonder what Dawn will do now that Riley has showed up.
Wonder no longer! Oh, and Harm... yes, well, I still haven't revealed her plan, but she's in this chapter. Thanks for reviewing :D

04/09/2007 03:17 pm
The Virus of Life         
moving the plot along well, love :) can't wait to see harmony's vengeance, and riley's suffering... hehe... glad that dawn and joyce now are figuring out what happened to spike, he needs all the support he can get right now, poor thing...great chapter, love :)
Harm's vengeance- yes, there's just "darkness" all over this fic... (secretive smile accompanied by a wink). Thanks so much for all of your support, and for pushing me to post in the first place :D

04/09/2007 02:46 pm
The Virus of Life         
I could actually learn to like Harmony if she pulled off her vengeance against Riley, instead of heading for Buffy like she undoubtedly will.
But will she pull it off? There's a big TBC on that one, sorry. Thanks for reviewing :D

pretty_in_fangs
04/09/2007 02:40 pm
The Virus of Life         
I have a happy feeling about Harmony now. How... strange. :grin:

And I like the fact that, somewhere in Joyce's brain, the push for Buffy to be with normal and marriageable is fading away.
Oh yes, I couldn't resist bringing Harmony in on all of this... And Joyce, well, what can I say? She's a bright lady ;) Thanks for reviewing.

04/09/2007 10:54 am
The Virus of Life         
Interesting an intelligent Harmony! That will be quite a twist (one I sure didn't see coming). Pretty sure it's Riley at the door and I'm worried about Dawnie.

Looking forward to more updates.

Kathleen
Well, to be honest, her enhanced smelling came with the vamp package, and though she isn't the brightest lightbulb, the scents just made no sense. That, and it made more sense to me for Harm to be the one vengeance inclined on Spike's behalf as opposed Buffy, cause Riley is still human after all *sigh*. Thanks for reviewing, and sorry for the wait.

Tamara
04/09/2007 10:42 am
The Virus of Life         
Riley doesn't realize it yet but he's got nowhere to run and nowhere to hide. Spike's got a lot more people caring wanting vengeance for him than anyone ever thought.
Spike sure does, though he, nor Riley are not aware of it yet... Thanks for reviewing :D

04/09/2007 10:12 am
The Virus of Life         
This was a good chapter. I liked how you drew parallels between the American History X scene, and what happened to Spike. Both were brutal and heartbreaking. Both characters were what some people would describe as "monsters", and yet what happened to them was horrific. Those scenes had you breaking with the characters.

I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Great job.
Yea, that's why I used it- you feel bad for the "bad" guy, and will he find redemption or some sort? (that, and I love that movie) Thanks for reviewing, and I hope you enjoy the next chapter as well :D

04/09/2007 09:26 am
The Virus of Life         
Harmony is still in the picture! Her reaction is great, and I can't wait to see what she comes up with.

I also can't wait to find out how Dawn reacts to the person at the door.

Thanks for another great chapter!
Unfortunately, Harmony's intent won't be shown until the chapter after next, sort of... And wait no further for Dawn's reaction. Sorry for the wait, and thanks for reviewing :D

alým
02/24/2008 12:25 pm
Wait and Bleed         
I want Riley to find out real soon just what a Slayer means…
But,In that case,Riley'll know that Spike didn't keep it to himself and Spike'll be in danger.
God,I wanna rip that literally bloody chip off of Spike's head!Then Riley'll find out just what the "William The Bloody" actually means,and I as sure as hell will sit back and enjoy the show...
So,I liked the chapter.:)
Ah yes, the chip...quite the problem, isn't it?  Well, you're already ahead of this chapter, so I think you kind of know what happens at this point ;)

02/20/2008 01:32 am
Wait and Bleed         
I’m thinking Riley’s gonna find out real soon…


Loved that last line, but I hope Spike gets a little revenge action of his own.
Well, feel kind of silly responding to this one, since you already know what happens ;)

07/19/2007 10:42 pm
Wait and Bleed         
Nice tender moment between Spike and Buffy. It's a relief to know she's behaving appropriatly. Your description of Spike's wincing and walking bow-legged gave me sympathy pains for him. Poor baby. Well, I'm on to chapter four. You've got me hooked, now.
Great to hear you're hooked. However, I trust you to let me know if you get over it, lol. A few have... What can I say?

And yeah, I wanted Buffy to see his pain- you know how she can be fond of living in denial.

05/25/2007 11:20 pm
Wait and Bleed         
Really liked your Riley characterization - both the part where he didn't intend to rape Spike, and the part where he's starting to think he likes it. Excellent conflict.
Thanks- yeah, I just couldn't have him straight up "bad." I could definitely see that (icky) potential within Riley, but he's still a boyscout at the same time, so I had to be true to that, sort of.

sirc
05/10/2007 09:43 pm
Wait and Bleed         
Well done :
Thanks :D

Lou
04/11/2007 12:49 am
Wait and Bleed         
Riley is seriously losing it. It'll be Buffy's turn next.
Yes, Riley is going off the deep end, kinda. The question is, will he be stopped? Hmm... Thanks for reviewing :D

04/04/2007 09:10 am
Wait and Bleed         
That's our Spike, thinking of her when he's the one that needs the attention. Riley just might have gone to the dark side if he got off reliving the rape, sick bastard. Unless Buffy can get the doctors to remove the chip, there isn't much she can do to keep Finn from hurting him again and again. Dawn doesn't need to get in his way either, no ones safe from him but Buffy and then he can always get the Initiative involved. Bet Xander's going to have to feel for the vamp too. Great work, thanks.
Spike's in pain, and yet, Spike's in love. What's man to do? And Riley doesn't see it as completely dark- cause hey, vampires aren't people, and therefore don't count, right? Yea... But trust, things will be done. What things, I can't say, but they will ;) Thanks for reviewing.

04/04/2007 08:11 am
Wait and Bleed         
love buffy's reaction. on one hand it seems out of character for her, but on the other, it is who buffy really is. thanks for the fine read.
Buffy's a white hat after all, and rape puts Riley on the side that's not, mostly. Of course he doesn't see it that way- vampires don't count, right? *sigh* Thanks for reviewing :D

04/04/2007 12:08 am
Wait and Bleed         
Yay! Support for Spike. Please continue this story soon.
Sorry for the wait. Spike shall be helped... Thanks for the review :D

04/02/2007 11:52 pm
Wait and Bleed         
Nice to see some Spike and Buffy bonding.
Thanks for reviewing :D Hope to see you next chapter, though Spike and Buffy are kinda MIA in it...

04/02/2007 06:07 pm
Wait and Bleed         
oh dear. I hope Dawn doesn't head out to the crypt this evening...I fear much badness if she does.
The idea of Giles coming home to a drunken Shayer and vampire passed out on his couch is rather funny...can't wait to see what you do.
Oh, little Dawnie... what will she do? And sorry- I just realized that Spike and Buffy are totally MIA in this chapter, but we do learn a few new things... Thanks for reviewing :D

pretty_in_fangs
04/02/2007 03:14 pm
Wait and Bleed         
I love how you're taking this story. What's happened to Spike is bad enough. If he'd had to be alone, and hide this from everyone as well, it'd be utterly heartwrenching.
Spike and alone are unmixy things in my brain :D I don't think I could stand to write that myself... thanks for reviewing.

04/02/2007 01:07 pm
Wait and Bleed         
Thank you Anya for the 'don't smell like Riley when you visit Spike' suggestion. Her years of experience as a demon were definitely underutilized in the show. I think Buffy's response to the incident is NOT going to be pleasant.
Well, someone had to tell Buffy- I think they all would've been sort of clueless in that regard. Thanks for reviewing, and hope to see you next chapter :D

04/02/2007 07:17 am
Wait and Bleed         
Yay Riley's going to get his butt served to him on a plater. I can't beleive he thinks he can go back to Spike if Buffy tells him no, grrrr. Jerk. Need more like now.
The last line in the last chapter (for Riley) was actually in ref to those soldier boys in town. However, yes, Riley will eventually go gunning for Spike again... Sorry. But hope you like the direction it's going in- if not, let me know :D

Great chapter plz update soon
04/02/2007 04:58 am
Wait and Bleed         
Thanks so much :D

Tamara
04/02/2007 02:29 am
Wait and Bleed         
One thing I hated about Into the Woods was that Riley and Buffy both blame Spike for her finding out. Whatever his reason for showing her , would Buffy really prefer to be ignorant? Even the guy who write the synopsis for the episode describes it as Spike interfering in thier relationship.
And here iley is once again refusing responsibility for his own actions.


Anya and Giles are again stellar in the chapter. Trust Anya to figure out that he would be able to smell Riley on Buffy .

Damn, I had this whole response written out, and something made it delete... anyway, Riley needed help, and Buffy had to know. I think that writer might've been sniffing glue or something... I'm glad you're enjoying it thus far, and I hope you enjoy this next bit. Thanks for reviewing :D

04/02/2007 02:24 am
Wait and Bleed         
Oh, I hope Riley doesn't get a chance to come near Spike again. Of course, if Spike has room to maneuver, he'll just out-speed the bastard and still be safe.

Nice to see Buffy trying to be as considerate as possible.
Well, I could tell you, but that would just be wrong ;) I'll just say we haven't seen the last of Finn. Thanks for reviewing :D

Typerbabe57
04/02/2007 12:11 am
Wait and Bleed         
What's really different about this fic is that Spike is actually getting some support from the Scoobies! That's really refreshing and a nice change of pace. Great story! Can't wait to see how Buffy handles Riley!
In a situation such as this, and considering it's before "Crush," I dont' see why they wouldn't be inclined to help him. Riley is the "bad and evil" in this scenario after all. However, I haven't gotten to Xander yet... not saying that he'll react horribly, but just pointing it out ;) Thanks for reviewing.

04/02/2007 12:08 am
Wait and Bleed         
Yes, Riley should find out soon. Wonder who his backup plan is? We'll see I'm sure. Seems Riley enjoyed it more than he wants to admit.

Kathleen
Oh Riley... what will I do with him? Oh, the backup plan- I should've clarified that I was referring to those soldier guys who are in town. And yes- Riley absolutely did, as you will find out later... Thanks for reviewing :D

04/01/2007 10:46 pm
Wait and Bleed         
Another good chapter. I totally buy your characterization of Riley. In my own head, Riley's natural reaction to the vamp whore reveal by Spike would have been to stake him. With a wooden stake. Course, that would sort of end the story for Spike, so we can't do that. But this makes more sense than the plastic stake thing.

Like Anya's sensitivity about the vampiric sense of smell.

I like this fic a lot! But to finish the point from my last comment. I totally agree that being raped by Riley is about as catastrophic as it gets for Spike. Really disgusting and humiliating in all the ways that you clearly understand. It's just that I don't think this is Spike's first experience of being raped by a contemptible bastard. See, to my way of thinking, William was a small, pretty boy in Victorian England. And he went to public (i.e. private in the American sense) school. And I don't see how he could have escaped being raped by bastards. In fact, I suspect it happened often. And the only thing that would make the humiliation worse would be to show that he is humiliated. I doubt William was even willing to let it show. And since the whole point of inventing Spike is to not be vulnerable William, I think the impulse to NOT show it would be that much stronger. So in my head, the very last thing Spike would ever do is let others know about this. But that would make it hard to write the fic you are writing. And the moves you are making opens up interesting doors. And that's what makes fanfic so fun! Thanks!!
Yay (claps hands)!!

You know, I just saw "Sleepers" this past week for the first time... I never considered that William was abused. Beat up probably, sure. But the other never crossed my mind. And true, Spike is the facade that protects William. But even Spike can't always be successful in that (alley scene in "Fool for Love," and though no one was there to see him cry, it was still evident how "sensitive" Spike could be, as Harmony pointed out. Thanks for reviewing, and please let me know if I pass or fail in this next chapter ;)

Tristan Charron
04/01/2007 10:44 pm
Wait and Bleed         
Wow, I just found this story and am very glad I did. It's incredibly amazing, especially the intensity you've written with! The first chapter was exquisitely gruesome and gah, totally had me tearing up! :) Very worried about where Riley's going and I hope Buffy and Spike totally kick his creepy rapist arse!! Great chapter, can't wait for more.
I'm glad that the first chapter effected you so, and yet, sorry cause I don't like to make people sad. Thank you for reviewing, and I hope you enjoy the rest ;)

04/01/2007 10:34 pm
Wait and Bleed         
A shredded spleed would be just what the doctor ordered. Hand it to 'im, Buffy!! Avenge your Spike.

Excellent, thoughtful chapter.
Hmm... who will avenge Spike? Who will comfort him? Too many questions... Glad you liked the chapter :D

04/01/2007 10:17 pm
Wait and Bleed         
great chapter, love how you're having buffy react in this...she's not just accepting it easily and going directly onto the warpath, but she is allowing herself to believe spike, instead of automatically taking riley's side...loved it, pet, looking forward to more :)
If she automatically took Riley's side, I'd have to punch my own face, and that wouldn't be very pleasant... Thanks for the review :D

01/17/2016 12:08 pm
Breakdown         
Rape - always such a miserable and difficult theme and especially with your choice to use Riley and Spike - although I have to say that the symbolism for these two - the extreme hatred and physical abuse that Riley as a member of the Initiative is an excellent fit.  

I like how you show that Spike admits to his own evil acts and karma - makes the story even more powerful -

alým
02/24/2008 12:04 pm
Breakdown         
I loved the Spike-Giles friendship you placed to the chapter.
And I loved it when Buffy came in and thought the whole thing was about her.
And I certainly loved it when Spike showed her her place.
The chapter was beautiful,thanks:)
I think that Spike and Giles were kind of close at one point (pre "Crush," and after Buffy's death), so it wasn't such a stretch in my brain :D  They did live together after all, and it was actually said in canon how they hung out during the summer before s5, so yay!

Thank you for being a diligent reviewer :D

02/20/2008 01:23 am
Breakdown         
A great chapter.  I loved how Giles has reacted, but what I was most impressed with was your characterization of Buffy and even Anya. 

You have all the characters voice down solid, but Buffy's reaction was just spot on to what I would have thought she'd do and say in this situation.

Loved it!
*blushes* Thank you.  Yeah, I made myself really live and breathe all of the characters for this fic especially, because of the sensitive subject matter.  I would have hated to flub a fic such as this, but I'm gald it worked.

07/19/2007 10:33 pm
Breakdown         
Ah ... I always suspected Giles had something of a soft spot when it came to Spike. It was one of the reasons I was so disappointed by his asinine behavior toward Spike in season seven. So glad to see that in your fic we have the more understanding, more human version of Giles, a man who is capable of believing Spike when he tells him about the rape. I'm also happy to see that Buffy appears to believe the story, as well. Let's just hope she reacts in a manner that is positive to the victim. Great chapter. I'm on to read the next now. :)
I think in s7, it was obvious that Giles was smoking crack, or sniffing glue... At any rate, he clearly belonged on a short bus ;)

05/25/2007 11:13 pm
Breakdown         
Poor Spike, everybody in the universe knows. Liked Buffy's reactions - both good and bad.
Well, there's still Willow, Xander and Tara... They're still in the dark (and Giles isn't- so weird ;)

sirc
05/10/2007 09:36 pm
Breakdown         
great chpter
Thank you :)

04/04/2007 08:40 am
Breakdown         
Looks like the Ripper might come by and pay a visit to Mr Finn? Anya's still human and what's Buffy going to do? Beat him up so he can hurt Spike all over again? Spike's not safe no matter where he goes as long as he has the chip. Great read, thanks.
Well, most will be answered fairly soon... There will be vengeance, and all kinds of things that I really can't say ;)

Dirktavian
03/31/2007 07:56 am
Breakdown         
Wonderful began. You have dealth very nicely with a horrendously difficult subject-matter. Love how Spike pulls a Dr. Phil~ "It's not about you!" Can't wait for more!!
Thanks for reviewing :D And the next several chapters will take place on the same day, so more dealing with this subject matter to come.

03/30/2007 11:00 pm
Breakdown         
I'm reading and I will continue reading. It's disturbing, but I write disturbing so I can't fault you.

I got mixed reviews when I wrote about Spike as a victim of child molestation and rape. People seemed to think I emasculated him. Something *I* don't personally believe is possible.

If anything I think it made him stronger, more aware of what he can survive and overcome.

I don't share your slightly higher opinion of Angelus and I always thought that 'one time' refered to *Angel*... But I think it could have gone that way...

*I'd* enjoy seeing Angel rip your Riley into tiny bloody pieces myself.

My, when I actually sit down to READ a story I write rambling reviews. Sorry. I need to go write more Drawing Down The Moon...
This is my first disturbing fic, so if it gets too light- let me know ;) I don't see child molestation as emasculation- after all, that's something he'd have no control over, and the fact that he's a child... As for the Angelus thing, well, at least he was a superior (in a sense) if it had been rape (though I don't think it was, cause Spike referred to it as "intimate"), and to have Riley do it... well, it's a low place. And I like your rambling reviews- here's hoping to seeing more of them :D

kim
03/30/2007 11:43 am
Breakdown         
Ah, yes...the one who believes humans are milk and honey goodness is the last convinced. What'll she do now, though?

I'm glad Giles said something. It wouldn't be any of Buffy's business if she wasn't dating Riley, but she is, and that makes her vulnerable.

Anya, of course, caught on quickly. There isn't much she hasn't seen or imagined in 1000 years...

I suppose this is one situation which really would rattle Spike's mask in a great way. Still managed to snark well to the Slayer, though....

There's a typo of a mistaken word - I think Giles means to say "..formally press charges..". Spell check wouldn't catch "formerly", since it's spelled correctly.
You know, for some reason, your first sentence made me think of Cartman, relishing the situation, lol. Okay- ignore me there. I think it affects Spike so greatly in particular because of who the perpetrator is. Oh, and I made the change for formerly ;)

03/30/2007 10:32 am
Breakdown         
Nice that Giles is so supportive, Spike needs that from another male especially.

Kathleen
Yes- Giles makes the most logical sense. And they used to live together before, so... Spike will have a good support system, though I won't have him mollycoddled.

Lou
03/30/2007 10:16 am
Breakdown         
Stick that in your pipe and smoke it, Buffy!! Thank god at least Giles is perceptive! Great chapter.
Thanks Lou :D Yea- Buffy needed a serious wake up call.

BT_
03/30/2007 09:54 am
Breakdown         
I can't decide to be mad at Buffy or not...but I do hope she apologises to Spike.
Reading your story kind is kind of like watching a horror movie - too awful to watch, too good to look away. Just, not with the scarey, more with the horrible.
Well, she really didn't know- not that saying it's okay to beat Spike up is particularly good either. And, I'll take that last line as a compliment :D Actually, that's how I felt about writing it- too awful to write, but I couldn't not write it... Thanks for the review.

03/30/2007 07:31 am
Breakdown         
very good read, thank you. perhaps ripper can come out to play?
We shall see...

;)

LadyYashka
03/30/2007 07:06 am
Breakdown         
:( This chapter made me cry. I'm glad Spike had someone to go to and I'm glad Giles believed him.

Maybe Anya can get Spike a no-strings-attatched vengance wish.

Now I need something lighthearted to read. :(
I'm sorry about it making you cry, but on the other hand, touched at the same time that it could effect you so. This fic is kinda staying in a dark place for awhile, sense the next several chapters take place during this same twenty-four hours, so if you continue to read, I hope you have more fluffy fics to alternate in between ;)

03/30/2007 06:27 am
Breakdown         
I'm glad Spike told it to Giles, and that Giles let Spike stay with him. It was good that Giles told Buffy what had happend.
Spike had to tell someone- I couldn't just let him stay at the crypt unprotected. And Giles made the most sense to me. Thank you for reviewing :D

03/30/2007 05:25 am
Breakdown         
OMG, you almost had me in tears when Spike broke down, but then Anya made me all better, lol. Great chapter. I'm glad he was able to talk to Giles about what happened, and Buffy didn't take a dip in the Nile and she believes. Now I can't wait to see how she handles Riley, and what will Spike say when he finds out that Buffy knows?
NO! I need *tears* damn it!! Lol- j/k. I'm glad you're liking it. And Buffy simply cannot dispute Giles' authority (well, not in this season, anyway ;)

JJ
03/30/2007 02:39 am
Breakdown         
This is such a powerfully moving and disturbing story. I am enthralled and can not wait for the next chapter. Both chapters have made me cry and that says a lot about your writing. Keep going.
Wow- I'm speechless. I think overall, I've gotten about four people mentioning to me about this fic bringing them to tears at some point, and I'm terribly shocked. It means so much as a writer that I can touch you guys this way. I hope you like how the rest unfolds, and thank you profusely for reviewing.

Tamara
03/30/2007 01:33 am
Breakdown         
Yay for Giles and Anyain this chapter. I'm glad he put a stop to Buffy's attempt at denial.
I'm thinking you may like Anya a bit more in the next chapter. And someone had to stop the Buffy Denial train. Thanks for reviewing :D

03/30/2007 01:26 am
Breakdown         
I didn't expect Spike to open up to Giles, but I like it when they're friendly and respectful with one another. Even though I realize Buffy needs to know about it, I can't imagine how embarrassing it must be for Spike to let Giles tell her. Really liking this fic so far, Scarlet!
I thought long and hard about that- who Spike would tell because he needed some where else to stay, since he can't protect himself. Giles just made the most sense to me. I'm glad you're liking it so far, and I hope you like the rest :D

03/30/2007 12:55 am
Breakdown         
Well, thank you Giles for NOT protecting her, and for making the leap of logic about Riley possibly hurting others. Now, let's see how Buffy handles it.
Giles is an intelligent guy- it'd be wrong to have him any other way ;) And Buffy, well... you'll see.

03/30/2007 12:37 am
Breakdown         
very poignant, emotional chapter, love...very beautifully written and devastatingly painful...great chapter, love :)
Well, it's good that I have an excellent beta to watch my back :D

03/30/2007 12:28 am
Breakdown         
Good second chapter! I always love it when Giles is friendly toward or at least tolerant of Spike. So glad he's backing up Spike here. It's hard to see Spike let this get to him (I think of Spike as more resiliant than that -- at least in terms of what he's willing to show) -- but the Giles thing has me totally hooked.
I get that it's hard to see it effecting Spike in such a matter, but I think that the fact of who it is, to be dominated by Captain Cardboard (even with a chip), of all people, would bring him to a depressing place and feel utterly shamed. At least, that's the perspective I wrote it from :D And I think Giles liked Spike (before the "Crush" ep), and he mentions spending quality time with him during the summer at the end of "The Real Me," so I took the ball and ran with it.

08/26/2012 10:18 pm
My Plague         
Very good story.  I like what you did with Drusilla and also that Xander wasn't a total ass like he usually is.  Thanks for sharing this story with us.
Thank you :)  I believe in the evolution of a character.  Glad you enjoyed it!

alým
02/24/2008 11:33 am
My Plague         
By the way,I think Riley proved that he is more of a monster than Spike has ever been-well,except for William The Bloody times,I guess-.Because,hey,I highly doubt that Spike would've done anything like that,or anything near that,really.
Shocking and impressive chapter,gonna read more and more and more...:D
I always found Riley kind of sadistic (he was the one who wanted to separate the two Xander's and experiment on them.  Sick...), and on top of that, he always wanted to prove himself.  And IMHO, I don't think Spike in his hay day was a rapist.  Vicious killer, sure...but that's just my own personal opinion.

alým
02/24/2008 11:27 am
My Plague         
Guess I've learned the lesson of my life:
---Check the warnings before reading!---
Oh...My...God...
Riley..I wanna kill that sadistic bastard before he could say "Mommy"
Ghrrr
Yeah--sorry about that.  Perhaps I should put warnings in the actual chapter as well.  But on the other hand, if you had looked closely that first time around, you may not have read it.  So that's kind of a plus, right?

:)

02/20/2008 01:12 am
My Plague         
I've been waiting for this to be completed before I started it.  I'm so glad you got it done!  Very intense start and I'm looking forward to the rest. 
Really?  So glad I kicked my own ass then to finish it :D  Thanks for reviewing.

07/19/2007 09:38 pm
My Plague         
What an amazing start to a story! Painful to read, due in no small part to your wonderfully descriptive writing, but also incredible. I've got to get offline now, because of a thunderstorm. But I'll be back to read chapter two as soon as it's over, and I'll be sure to let you know what I think. :)

... oh ... and by the way ... intriguing banner!
Aww, shucks... thank you :D As for the banner, well, I did pick out the pics myself, lol. I just couldn't do anything with them...

And thunderstorms are only cool when they don't knock out the power or something else bad.

05/25/2007 11:07 pm
My Plague         
I had no idea you were so deeply disturbed Scarlet. Comes from hanging around DOS. Great writing and EWWWW.
I'm not, really... Okay, maybe a little :D This whole thing only came about because of some thread at the bloodshed pub. I can't remember what it was, but I read something, and this concept crept into my brain... And Muse made me do it. Thanks for reviewing :D

sirc
05/10/2007 09:28 pm
My Plague         
Interesting. Dark, yes, but compelling me to read more. Well done :D
Thank you. It's my first "dark" fic :D

antoinette
04/05/2007 04:47 am
My Plague         
Um... thanks, I guess ;)

kim
03/30/2007 11:37 am
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Damn chip...

I don't know if Spike would refer to Giles as "Giles" much. He usually said Rupert or Watcher when talking to him...

Man, you sure got the gruesome right...*shudder*
Oh, he calls him "Watcher" at first in the shop. And I'm guessing that's technically good, right, with the gruesome? Hope you like the rest :D

03/30/2007 07:23 am
My Plague         
intense beginning. hope that revenge is meted out just as intensely. thanks for the read.
Revenge, you say? I'd have to be insane to let Riley get away with that... I'll update soon.

03/28/2007 01:33 am
My Plague         
Oh how sick is Riley!?!?! Hope you continue this and we get to see the bastard pay. This was worse than the fake staking on the show because rape takes a part of ones psyche....gaaaahhh

Kathleen
Of course Riley's gonna pay- what type of evil bastard would I be to let him get off scott free? I wouldn't do that to you guys, or myself. Thank you for reviewing :D

scaryscouse
03/27/2007 08:56 pm
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wow this is dark-- i love it!
Yay *claps hands* Thank you for reviewing, and I hope you like the rest.

jess2357
03/27/2007 08:06 pm
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Hey, original concept! Like it so far, but PLEASE let Spike get his own revenge. Too many fics where Buffy fights his battles for him, and Spike's been emasculated enough already in this fic. Also, yeah, beer would actually put a fire out. Love it though, as with all of yours.
As much as I'd love to- there's no real way for him to get around the chip. And no worries- it won't be Buffy fighting his battles for him. Spike will get revenge, however... And yes, I just learned this about the beer thing. Honestly, I should have known better ;) Thanks for reviewing :D

03/27/2007 07:53 pm
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Wow. GOd, Riley's evil. How could he do that? And poor Spike, I'm sure that gave him flashbacks to Angelus. *shivers* I hope Buffy finds out so she can kick his ass (Riley's). Can't wait for more. And no need to worry this is a good start, hun. Keep it up.
Somehow, I'd like to think of him and Angelus as consensual (you know, that "one time" Spike mentioned in s5 of Angel *gg*). Riley was just... wrong. And Buffy, yeah, relationships just suck for her right now. Thank you ever so much for reviewing :D

03/27/2007 02:27 pm
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OMG! How can he protect himself from that SOB! Can he call Haley for vengence? Riley's got to pay! How can he prevent Riley from doing it again? Wow, this is so different from your other stories, I'm surprised. Looking forward to Riley getting his, thanks.
Vengence... will occur in what I hope to be a least suspected place ;) And Riley will most certainly pay, I assure you :D

Lou
03/27/2007 01:35 pm
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God that was gruesome!
But in a good way? Yea, I know... Riley= gross, but it's Muse's fault- I swear!!

03/27/2007 06:37 am
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Oh God, poor Spike. Wonder if any of the Scoobies will find out, and if they do, how will they react?
Um, well... Sorry, can't tell you- you'll have to read and see ;) Thanks for reviewing.

03/27/2007 05:01 am
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wow - that was intense. Very cringeworthy. Boy - I sure wonder where this is going.

But...beer doesn't burn like that. Too low of an alchohol content. Sorry - you need to send him out there with some of Giles' good stuff. :) No offense intended!
No offense taken- thanks for the info and for reviewing :D

.
03/27/2007 04:53 am
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um, ewww
Well, everything can't be happy. I agree though with the "eww," that's mostly what I thought when Muse presented it to me...

03/27/2007 03:36 am
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Disturbing beginning, but in a good way. Wonderfully written. I'm practically bouncing on my toes to find out what you're going to do with this story.
Thanks for reviewing ;) Though I gotta say, I'm bouncing on my toes as well as to what I'm going to do with this story... Hope to see you in later chapters.

03/27/2007 03:06 am
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Wow, what a start. I'm definitely interested. And I agree with DoS, I like the depiction of Spike's emotions through his actions. Great chapter, Scarlet!
Thanks :D I can't remember which thread it was here at BSV, but one of the topics lead to the creation of this fic, and I just couldn't ignore it...

03/27/2007 02:49 am
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very dark and intense, love, very emotional too in a subtle way...i like how you describe spike's state of shock by his actions, without just spelling it out for the reader...awesome job with this so far, and i'm so looking forward to reading more :)
Hopefully, I'll have something new for you by the weekend. Oh, and did I mention I still don't know where I'm going exactly with this? Thank you ever so much for all your help :D