Origins:Resolutions by Niamh

10/28/2017 03:03 am
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loved this series  thanks, 

Danica
11/14/2016 09:06 am
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Incredible story I ate up the Origins universe. Thank you for writing it

04/01/2014 01:34 am
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Read the whole series and was utterly transfixed; took about four days with breaks for life and all it entails.  You have a great ability to tell a story.  Even in the areas I questioned; I still thoroughly enjoyed your work.

momnesia@yahoo.com
12/19/2013 03:00 am
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WOW!!!   Just finished reading this third story in your "Origins" series, and it was fantastic.      I only started reading the Buffy fan fictions a couple of months ago, and this is one of the BEST yet!     I especially liked the parts where you were able to bring both Willow & Xander around slowly & easily, as many writers usually cause them to have a very sudden "about-face", which is just not real life.    Also, it was refreshing to see Angel get dusted (FINALLY), and to have Travers not be a complete monster.

Really enjoyed every minute, and I hated for the stories to end!   Thank you so much for sharing your talent with the rest of us!

Theresa

Elaine
11/20/2013 12:05 am
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Loved it, will there be more? thanks for the entertainment 

Zoe
10/13/2013 06:39 pm
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Wonderful, wonderful story. Thanks so much for sharing this all with us. Love your wordy-ness- you have noting to apologize for on that front!!! More stories in this verse would be the best thing ever. I\'m rather late to this fandom, so I\'ve read all of these in one go, staying up nights for about a week- it\'s been that riveting! I\'ve really appreciated all the exploration of the characters beyond the action. Not enough authors pay attention to world building, even if it\'s an established one. Characters change ans it\'s been really lovely getting the insight on those changes. Thanks again, you are very talented, please continue gifting us with your work!

Kaylie
08/13/2013 01:47 pm
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I have adored your origin stories and spent the last three days straight reading
them. You have no idea what ablessing they've been during this last week.

Thank You so much for your wonderful creativity,

Kaylie

Whitney
12/11/2012 09:07 pm
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Hey, just finnished reading the whole set... LOVED IT! Hope you one day decide to revisit this story line with an additional book.

12/02/2012 03:24 pm
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I feel bad I haven't reviewed each chapter for all three stories. My only excuse is that I found these after they had been completed and I was so involved in reading that I just clicked to the next chapter eager to find out what happened next. Each of the stories in this series were wonderful. Origins was simply the best thing I have ever read. It was heartbreaking and loving and tender all at the same time.

Revelations was great. I loved the idea that Dawn was from Buffy and Spike. That always bothered me on the show. If they had only used DNA from Buffy Dawn would have been a clone and she obviously wasn't. The pain and death that Willow caused in my mind could never be forgiven. Because of her actions an innocent boy lost his life and another lost his childhood. Casey would never have been in Angelus' path without that spell and Connor wouldn't have grown up alone and scared until Spike found him. The core Scooby's all had deep emotional problems. Buffy ran when things got too intense. Xander refused to accept change. And Willow, when things didn't go her way she lashed out hurting others in the process. From the delusting spell, attempting to curse Oz and Veruca,  the Will Be Done spell, pulling Buffy from heaven, all of it. (Plus the things she did in season 6) It wasn't about addiction, it was about power and control. And her belief that what she wanted was the right thing for everyone. Not to mention Angel getting his head ripped off was a bonus! Plus Anya and Giles make a much better couple.

Resolutions was the eye-opener Buffy needed about Riley. He was never the wholesome good ol' boy from Iowa he claimed to be. Oh he might have been once upon a time but not since he joined the Initiative. The power he got from the military mindset and the steroids went to his head. The fact that he could and did help in the capture and torture of sentient beings and then could walk past those cages without a twinge of guilt made me hate him from early on. So his beat down by Spike made me smile. Then you killed Kennedy! I would love this for that alone!

I always wondered why the gang couldn't understand that Spike changing sides no matter the reason was a cause to celebrate instead of view with mistrust. An evil being chose to fight on the side of good. That is a pretty big feather in the cap of the good guys. That you had Giles recognize it and acknowledge it and support it was wonderful.

So thank you for a wonderful story. I have to admit I reread it often.

Tahkaullus
11/08/2012 07:15 am
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I've commented here before, but I need to say it one more time.
Origins is, put simply, the most beautiful, thought provoking, awe inspiring, heartclenching, terrifying, perfectly planned fictional series that I have ever taken the time to sit down and read. If there was only some way we could get this published in paperback. It deserves to be out there for the public to read, to give an idea of where the series could, and in my mind should, have gone after Glory.
This version shows the Scoobies growing up and, inevitably, at least for the original core-members,growing apart; the issue of Dawn is confronted rather than being swept under the rug; Connor, though I actually have no issue with his real portrayal, is given such a better arch; Spike's efforts were not just thrown away - something that always irked me even before I was on the Spuffy bandwagon; Xander's bigotry and Willow's issues were brought to light; Tara got a much more substantial role, which she rightly deserved; Oz came back (I like Oz, sue me); Riley got the comeuppance he so richly deserved but was never dealt; the threat of Angelus was finished off for good - by Souless Spike no less, that's a definite plus; and most importantly of all, for me at least, we saw Buffy really sort of come into her own as a person and an adult - again, something that I don't think was ever covered, in the series or in the comic books.
I think I speak for every reader who has been smart enough to click on a link that says 'Origins' on the Bloodshedverse website, and subsequently fallen in love with your universe, when I say, thank you Nia for giving us, not only a story that tapers to our admittedly biased opinions, but for also continuing a story that was so terribly let down by its real creators...
You know who you are? You're Giles. You're the pseudo parent that the Buffyverse wasn't looking for that suddenly took it under its wing and somewhere along the line became so much more of a guiding star than Whedon or Mutant Enemy could ever hope to be.
I have never said that about a fanfiction piece before, and I never will again. But then, as far as I'm concerned, this isn't a fanfiction. This is merely that other path less travelled...and the Buffyverse is less for not going in that direction.

03/12/2012 03:20 pm
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Well, this has been a blast!  You've taken up my life for days now with your lovely epic.  I'm so glad that you ended up with Rona as the 'future' of the slayers... she's so much more 'my type of girl' than the brat.  Might have been interesting to see Kennedy end up with Willow, which is what I thought you were aiming for at first, but I'm good with the way things turned out.  Thanks for an enthralling tale.  Will keep my eyes open for other offshoot stories b/c this universe really works for me.

Peace,

Blue
http://www.tthfanfic.org/authors.php?no=12717&list=profile

Aoiyami
09/06/2011 05:13 pm
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Hahaha! I'd go with 'omg, u wordy biotch, finally ova' but it was so well written and detailed I can'nt hate on you! Spikey deserves all this looove! :) ...although def can hate you for meeting JM XD Lets see...love the rollercoaster ride, the smexy scenes; the quotes really intensified the ambience of the chapters, and most so true... I wouldn't mind you owning the rights to the btvs franchise, since it would imply hot sex, awesome apocalipse combos, character development and most importantly (yeah) more sizzling blond vamp spikey !! :d About the novel thing...Who cares!!! Made MY (boring) days so much sweeter! *stand up and cheers for you* Keep up the good work and make me yo reading ho! ....too far? Sorry...um...jus' gonna...go... (apologizing profusely to master for any and all awful grammar mistakes: english not this ones mother tongue) See ya!

REgrrl
07/22/2011 11:08 am
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Well, I guess I'm headed over to Elysian Fields to check out Destinies.  I've thoroughly enjoyed all three books so far.  Thanks for sharing your story!

nikki
07/21/2011 07:44 am
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i love the family buffy and spike love to know if you have more long stories about the kiddy growing up and such. 

Jodi a
02/03/2011 03:50 am
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Awesome. Im so glad u finished it. Thanks for a great read.Text

Murph
01/11/2011 07:42 am
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Thank you so much for sharing this story. Whenever you updated, it cheered me up and made my day. After knowing these characters (your characters) for so long, every update was like a visit with old friends. I'm going to miss this 'verse, and any other stories you might add will be very welcome. Even as long as it is, I will go back read it again, like a favorite novel.

The characterizations were wonderful. There was a truth to each character that came through. What I mean is, while this isn't canon, it felt like it could have been, based on the way you developed the characters.

Again, thanks very much. I've spent many happy hours reading your stuff. You have a talent and it's wonderful that you choose to share it with others.

marcy
09/27/2010 02:41 am
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THANK YOU so much for a great 3 stories. I've laid here for 5 daysand did nothing but read your awesome stories. I'm sad that their is  not a 4th!! I sure wish the TVshow would have gone this route when they wrote the series.You're an awesome author. thanks you for all your time.

09/16/2010 01:07 pm
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Great to hear that their is the additional "Destinies" at EF -

Again - just want to add a great big "Thank You" for keeping faith with your story and passion for writing.  I know this had to be a huge and oftentimes a burden to keep going.  I am so very happy that you did not abandon your wonderful series.  I have enjoyed it so very much. 

I know that all your readers appreciate that the work was not another WIP - never to find completion.    Congratulations on your work. 

tamrha
09/11/2010 05:36 am
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wonderful story..sorry its ended..but have been with you since it started - just havent reviewed..again..sorry bout that..great ending..:)

tam

SpaceLord
09/10/2010 11:32 pm
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Well this has been a really good read. I've loved it from the start although I can hardly remember how it started it's been a while.

Thanks for a great story

Jane
09/10/2010 06:57 pm
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An absolutely brilliant story. It's been a stupendous ride, loved it all the way. Great fic, gonna miss it.

Judy
09/10/2010 12:23 am
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Guess I am one of the ones who didn't want to see this end.  Loved this story.  Now that it is all done, I am going back to beginning and read it all again.  You are a wonderful writer and really hope you don't leave the verse.

kim
09/09/2010 05:53 am
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Future story, eh? Well, we're only crazy cuz you built such a rich world that there are so many things to look at.

Tahkaullus
09/09/2010 02:20 am
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I'm sad

Its ending! I love this story, all three epics, and now its ending?
What will I do with myself on sunday evenings now?
Still great work, and I beg you to do something nasty to Willow just one more time. Oh! And castrate Xander....no? PLEEEEASE castrate Xander?

Many thanks :-)
09/27/2010 12:22 am
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09/16/2010 11:48 am
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You are so wrong about all the readers not having looked forward for each new chapter through all this time.  I love this saga - Congratulations to you, this was quite an undertaking and now an accomplishment -

I love everyone of these characters and what you did with them in your vision of Buffy & Spike and their journey - And it was great to have a different treatment for QT -

09/01/2010 01:34 am
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I have always swore I would never start reading a story that wasn't completed because it drives me insane when they aren't finished,  but in this case I made an exception because I loved the first two sooooo much.  I am glad I took a chance.  This is my first review of this story (and not really a review, more of a thank you for this great series).  the plot is exciting and full, and all the characters are believably written.  I adore the characters you've developed (ie:Jenner).  Oh yeah,  and . . .  YAY  . . . Kennedy is dead (never liked her in the show and it is nice to get a little satisfaction).
Thanks for this story - you still have faithful readers <3 <3 <3

kittyvamp
08/26/2010 07:17 pm
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 just to let you know i love this story and i love reading it over again its one of the best out there and i love the length my favorits are the long ones thanks for the wonderful read

Steve
08/19/2010 07:47 pm
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Awesome Niamh!

jane
08/19/2010 02:16 pm
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Wow that was super, really well done. You've given Travers a lot more depth than he had in the show. He's showing himself to be a true leader. Liked how you introduced Rona, don't think she'll have any trouble fitting in. Excellent update gonna miss this fic. 

08/18/2010 01:03 pm
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I can't believe the last post was in December!  Where has this year gone?  Very believable that Travers would be the pragmatist, love how the delayed reaction is setting in.  I really appreciate you tying up the lose ends, Nia, Origins deserves no less.  It is absolutely one of my favourite rereads.

kamw30
08/18/2010 11:22 am
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Doesn't remember this? Won't tackle the whole thing? Bloody hell, woman! I've just re-read the lot for the umpteenth time. T'is a grand adventure.

Whatever, whenever, however you get us to the finale is fine. Then I'll have an excuse to read the whole thing again .... then a little later again cos I've forgotten bits.........then because, hey, I fancy a good read... then I've got a friend who'd like it..........

:-)

kim
08/18/2010 05:10 am
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I haven't forgotten, hon. Just glad it's here.

Judy
08/18/2010 02:48 am
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 I have really enjoyed the Originsverse.  Sorry to see it end.  Hopefully we will have more stories from you in the future.

Dee
08/18/2010 02:19 am
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Brava!!!

cheryl
08/18/2010 12:02 am
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absolutely cannot wait!  thank you sincerely for your efforts.

Tahkaullus
07/09/2010 01:51 am
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Don't stop now! I'm loving it! You killed Kennedy and for that alone I love you.

Natalie
04/06/2010 01:14 am
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Excellent story, read it all three books in a day. Epic! Write more!!!

Shadowhawke
03/24/2010 10:55 am
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Wow. Wow. I can't believe you killed her off, but hot damn, she had it coming. Very nice, and also an interesting twist of fate given Riley didn't die.

I'm not sure if this is the final chapter, since your Author's notes say it is, but the story info says it isn't complete yet, but thanks very much again for the read. It was a ride the entire way through.

Hermione2be
01/22/2010 07:03 am
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I love the perspective jumping, very neat and suspenceful.

Kennedy is dead-dead, I hope the next slayer is Amanda or the Chinese Slayer no one understood.

Spike killing her... is that an even 10??


Waiting impatiently for more.

Niori
01/17/2010 05:11 am
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Great chapter. I know it probably makes me a horrible person, but I', kinda glad Kennedy's dead- she annoys the hell outta me. Can't wait for more.

01/16/2010 06:34 am
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 definitely made me smile. excellent, as usual. thank you.

kat
12/27/2009 08:42 pm
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it's been a while since i wrote a review and i apologize for that.  life gets crazy for us all, right?  i just wanted to thank you for this series of stories.  i've read a lot of fanfiction and i can honestly say you are one of the VERY BEST out there.  i hope your new year is a good one and once again, thank you and best wishes.  kathleen in PA.

12/27/2009 05:17 am
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I have been remise in not reviewing this chapter.  First off, as always AWESOME.  Spike knows that he will be able to be open with Buffy all of the time.  She has learned to wait him out.  They are truely a team.  Love Dawn stepping up and demanding answers.

NO love lost for Kennedy.  She just never learned and she got her just deserts.  I know that Oz and Connor will probably feel a little bad.  Connor knew soemone was there but they let their guard down.  Travers and company really can not expect type of remorse on that.  They all saw what she did. 

And if anything Spike has known some restraint.  He could have killed Riley at any time and that is something that he really deserved if you ask me. 

12/27/2009 05:17 am
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I have been remise in not reviewing this chapter.  First off, as always AWESOME.  Spike knows that he will be able to be open with Buffy all of the time.  She has learned to wait him out.  They are truely a team.  Love Dawn stepping up and demanding answers.

NO love lost for Kennedy.  She just never learned and she got her just deserts.  I know that Oz and Connor will probably feel a little bad.  Connor knew soemone was there but they let their guard down.  Travers and company really can not expect type of remorse on that.  They all saw what she did. 

And if anything Spike has known some restraint.  He could have killed Riley at any time and that is something that he really deserved if you ask me. 

FoolForLove
12/25/2009 12:06 pm
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Yes, this made me smile! First of all, shirtless Spike, thankyouverymuch. And Riley getting the piss beat of out him. Yes! And a not so fond farewell to Kennedy, yay! Happy Holidays to you too!

SassyFrass
12/19/2009 12:19 am
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Very nice update. And I'm so glad you got rid of Kennedy. Yay!
Merry Christmas.

peck
12/17/2009 12:07 pm
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No more Kennedy, Yea!!  Hope you find your holiday spirit though, we all need a little bit of it.  Thanks again for you wonderful writing.

12/17/2009 02:17 am
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Poor Kennedy and Riley - glad to see the you allowed Spike and Riley a backing away from revenge and vengeance - pity Kennedy had to be such an foolish ass. 

Again, I want to extend my congratulations and big "thank you" for your work on the wonderful saga on Buffy and Spike and all the other Buffyverse and new characters -

On the Christmas Spirit - mine has not wanted to come out much either - But having another concluding chapter is a very good holiday goody.

Feel Better -

cheryl
12/17/2009 01:53 am
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Easily my favorite chapter of late ;-)

kim
12/17/2009 01:09 am
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I worry about how all of them will take him killing Kennedy. Sure, she attacked, but he didn't *have* to kill her there. 'Course, now there'll be a new Slayer to teach. Quentin's less of a prick these days, so there's hope.

12/16/2009 11:37 pm
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Wow, that was high drama, terrific action!  Thank you for killing Kennedy, Riley's got off too lightly though, and there's a lot still hanging though, sneaky woman!  Have a  very happy Christmas and New Year, you deserve it!

twinsie
12/16/2009 09:06 pm
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Noooo!  This can't be the last chapter.  You left so much unanswered.  Please tell me there's going to be at least an epilogue.  Plus, I'm dying to know how Dawn and Wesley hooked up.  I know your muse is pretty much used up on this verse, but please do continue.  I love this saga. 

Happy Holidays!!!

Seth
12/16/2009 04:38 pm
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Exellent!!

Goldm00n
12/16/2009 04:14 pm
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Thank you!  WONDERFUL!!!!!!  have a wonderful Christmas!

Shadowhawke
03/24/2010 10:44 am
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There is no angriness about the delay - there is joy that you've taken such time and consideration to share this with us. Thanks!  A very original Spike background that makes William even more intriguing, as well as more information on what's to come in terms of prohpecies and Buffy! Nice.


jane
10/18/2009 04:21 pm
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Super chappie, interesting titbit about Spikes past. Highly suspicious of Kennedy. That girl will come a cropper  'hopefully please'  Can't wait for more, gonna miss this fic.

SassyFrass
10/18/2009 08:53 am
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Very nice update. I loved Xander's reaction to the babies, where he didn't quite get what he was looking at.


peck
10/15/2009 12:07 pm
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Wonderful update!!!  Can't wait for more even if it brings us closer to the end of the series.

10/15/2009 05:42 am
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well, as far as I am concerned, this is a gift - more exciting chapters and the history of William - sounds great to me -

10/14/2009 08:32 pm
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"At least two -- maybe three more chapters --" take all the words and time you need.  love the way you tell your tale. thanks for the enjoyable read.

Niori
10/14/2009 05:33 am
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The amount of thought you put into this verse is amazing. It seems as though you did your research. Theverse is absolutely amazing. I'm sad that it's almost over, but can't wait to see how it ends.

sirc
10/13/2009 09:31 pm
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Great chapter!

Pin
10/13/2009 04:32 pm
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Lovely update.  I can feel that the end is near, but that will just give me the chance to read the whole opus from start to finish!  Thank you so much for sticking with this story.

10/13/2009 11:58 am
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I am just going to say it like this.  And it is only for purely selfish reason 'that I would hate to see this verse end'.  I came to your verse late in the game for book 1.  And I have been so hooked since. I think you captured the real characters of Buffy and I have loved every minute of it. 

So now on to this chapter.  I am just so waiting for Kennedy to get what is coming to her.  She has NO idea what/who she is playing with.  And for that right now I fault Travers.  He really needs to keep a watch over his 'slayer' now that Buffy is a mother and faith is doing her own thing.  I am glad that Jenner realizes that at some point Faith is going to be so scared that she will make a break for it.  I just hope that he is strong enough to really let her go.  She will come back.  She always seem to come back to a place she at one time called home.  And they have traveled together for the last 6 months.  They are in each others systems.  He just needs to be open for when she decides to come back.  And the way Giles and Spike got on Connor.  They are making it a real family with rules and punishments.  That was too cute.  And Connor being protective of his family.  What a way for Xander to find out about Dawn.  And Spike of all people should know that you can't hide from your past forever.  Just awesome chapter.  I am glad that you are feeling better.

kim
10/13/2009 02:08 am
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Ah! Thought it was the end-end, so I was waiting for the wrap-up.......Aww, poor Spike's secrets are spilling out. :D

10/13/2009 01:58 am
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Thank you Nia for another great chapter, I'm so sad that this 'verse is coming to an end, I have been reading it since you posted the first chapter of Origins. I have loved every word written, This is probably the most recomended fiction out there, I will miss it like an old friend.
Lis

Shadowhawke
03/23/2010 12:43 pm
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Oh dear, poor Willow. But nicely done. And Tara and Oz are very sweet.

Not to mention Riley... ugh. More importantly, love the way you're tying this up. It's lovely, with just all the right hints of future potential.

10/15/2009 03:43 am
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You have given us one of the best Spuffy sagas in all the FF fandom - the Originsverse is absolutely wonderful.  You have put so much effort into this work - all your readers are so very grateful.

Sorry that we will be losing so fine a Spuffy writer, but you have accomplished your goal of creating your vision of the Buffy and Spike relationship and the Sunnydale world, you more than deserve a rest and the chance to move on to your new great adventure in life. 

All my Best Wishes to you - hope that you get back to your normal healthy self soon.

Thanks again for all the years of hard, but satisfying, work on the Originsverse. 

08/09/2009 03:21 am
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glad the voices are taking control. sad that this is the last in the originverse. but i definitely agree that this has "been a really great ride." hope the characters force a few more chapters than planned. thanks so much for all the enjoyment. (that does not sound quite right, i hope you understand what i meant to write.)

08/06/2009 06:58 am
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A brilliant chapter like always. I hope Riley gets taken care of soon.

08/05/2009 03:33 pm
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First of all, I am glad that Willow finally realized that SHE made this mess and no amount of cookies is going to fix it.  They have all moved on with their lives.  Buffy has her family which now includes the twins. And Tara (which Willow does not know yet) will have her own family.  I really think that she and Oz calm each other.  They have the right balance.  He came back to be with her.  I know that it may not be perfect but I think it will work for them.  And Travers is not as in the dark as people seem to think.  I am glad that he made the decisons for all people involved. 

Dawn and Connor are like real siblings but Connor is coming up a little short.  He doesn't have the time in this realm to get used to sarcasm and alot of things can really get to him.  but I am glad that Spike is there and can understand when Connor is upset while others may or may not care.

As always Anya is just too much for words.  I am glad that she and Giles are making the most of this.

Riley still scares me.  He really should get what is coming to him.

Now to be selfish I would hate for this verse to end.  I have been reading it in some fashion for years.  It is just awesome.  But you do what is best for you. 

08/05/2009 06:40 am
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You have given us a great Spuffy Saga with wonderful new characters, a very interesting mate for Faith, and the coming together of a couple that is most unusual with Tara and Oz  - So anything more after this great story and these beautiful connections that you created will all by extra added goodness.

I thank you for a grand adventure with all these characters that I love so very much - your efforts have been long and difficult I am sure - and all those fantastic quotes and knew information that you gave us added so much to the reading experience. 

All my best wishes to you - hope you get back to your healthy self and that you can find a little time, if you still want to spend it with The Buffverse real, to write - however, I think you deserve a good time off after you complete this fine work.

Thanks again for your great Spuffy work - I loved reading it -

kim
08/04/2009 03:44 am
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Connor and Dawn are so cute.
Awwwww, Oz came back.
It's nice that Travers isn't the evil monster a lot of fics tend to paint him as. He's been quite amusing here.

Deep sleep will do our poor blonds some good. I'll be surprised if they wake up any time soon. :)

08/04/2009 12:33 am
Nothing can make bitter into sweet         
Wonderful chapter!  The interaction between Dawn and Connor with the babies has been a favorite part.  Willow finally seeing her faults and the overall pairings were great.  I will really hate to see this end, but we all understand RL can get in the way.  If only we could hit the lottery!!

Shadowhawke
03/23/2010 12:25 pm
Nothing so powerful as truth         
I hope you're feeling better soon. I loved this chapter, and love Ian, though I'm surprised they told him everything! I suppose there's not much chance of Buffy going incognito anymore.

Mishka
08/16/2009 11:17 am
Nothing so powerful as truth         
 I can't tell you how happy I was to find this story again.  Take as long as you need just please please please don't abandon it.  There are so few writers of your imagination and talent in the fanfic community its a true treat to read your work.

And hey if you ever need a Beta feel free to drop me a line it would be an honor [email]wamplsae@mac.com[/email]

Pin
07/29/2009 08:41 pm
Nothing so powerful as truth         
Lovely update.  Sorry that you are having such a difficult week and I hope you are feeling better soon.  Thanks so much for continuing this story; I really enjoy every chapter, no matter how long it takes to post them! Thanks!

07/18/2009 10:05 pm
Nothing so powerful as truth         
  "That explains so little." loved it. very good chapter, thank you, again.

07/18/2009 03:59 am
Nothing so powerful as truth         
Love right back to you - thanks for posting the latest chapter especially with how much has been going on  in your life -
Nice touches to spending a little time with each character set -
Finally, no more chip and Spike can now fully protect his family.

Best to you and thanks so much for this splendid Spuffy Saga -

07/17/2009 12:30 am
Nothing so powerful as truth         
So Dawn and Connor got some alone time with the twins.  I am so happy that the kids are okay with the new babies.  And I am also glad that Kait made it known in her own way that Willow needed to leave.  There is just no time for all of this craziness right now.  And Ian just found himself in the wrong place at that right time.  I am glad that he was able to get to the chip.  If only that could have been done before now.  As always AWESOME chapter.  I just love the Origin verse.  And I hope you get and stay better soon.

SassyFrass
07/15/2009 09:18 am
Nothing so powerful as truth         
Great update. Although I miss the Spuffy fluff. But this really isn't the time for it.
Anyway, as always I loved the chapter. And I hope you feel better and can post more soon!

07/15/2009 03:02 am
Nothing so powerful as truth         
Never a "bitter" end, just very wonderful writing.  Glad Dawn and Connor got a chance to see and hold the twins.  Thanks again for updating.

kim
07/14/2009 11:25 pm
Nothing so powerful as truth         
Aw, poor doc. At least Spike's head is all fixed up.
Connor and Dawn were so cute with the babies. I'm a big sister by several years, myself, and still remember holding my hours-old sibs.

jane
07/14/2009 10:53 pm
Nothing so powerful as truth         
Brilliant chappie, couldn't stop giggling all the way through. The good doctor was priceless, not what I was expecting. I felt a little sorry for Xander, but hopefully this estrangement will make a man of him. Can see Connor & Dawn having a lot of fun with the twins over the next few years.

07/14/2009 08:15 pm
Nothing so powerful as truth         
The bitter end, i'll be there.  Hope you will feel better.

Shadowhawke
03/23/2010 12:18 pm
Wondrous strange         
Aww.... Ian is adorable. And the character growth you've given Anya is great and it shows. I'm just happy that Xander and Willow are beginning to come around.

07/05/2009 07:22 pm
Wondrous strange         

Excellent story telling, good characterizations, they come alive and are seen from all angles.

sassyfrass
07/02/2009 08:55 am
Wondrous strange         
Great update. That's all I really have to say, except that I hope things are going better for you.

07/01/2009 12:35 am
Wondrous strange         
fine read, thank you.  wishing you health and happiness.

sirc
06/24/2009 06:56 pm
Wondrous strange         
Great chapter!

06/20/2009 12:42 am
Wondrous strange         
Ian has no idea what he has gotten himself into when he flew out with the council.  I just love his first comments to Buffy.  She is a mother now and she is bouncing back.  Only 4 hours and she is running things.  Xander really could not believe that life would stop without him being around.  Anya has found her stride.  Oz is in his family element.  Buffy and Spike are parents to not only 2 teenagers but to twins now.  ANd just love Connor.  He is still learning but he has to know that NO ONE would go against the orders of Spike.  Riley just never had a chance.  Awesome awesome awesome chapter.  and always, I hope you get better, completely better soon.

06/20/2009 12:33 am
Wondrous strange         
Love your Dr. Ian and Xander treatments.  Perfect closing lines.  
Looking forward to your notes regarding Joss and Spike - I am always so confused with some of the ideas that are said regarding this character - and particularly the idea that Spike was totally not the right partner for Buffy.  It's complete nonsense as far as I am concerned.  Any knowledge that you bring out about what Joss Whedon's plans and ideas about this character will be much appreciated by this reader.

Seth
06/18/2009 08:12 pm
Wondrous strange         
Exellent update, i'm greatly looking forward for the next chapters.  Hope you feel better.

Liza
06/18/2009 03:12 pm
Wondrous strange         
Oops! Sorry about blank review - cat trod on the keyboard.  no, really, she did.  Enjoying the outsider's viewpoint - highlights the tight bonds within the group. And yah boo sucks, Xander.

liza
06/18/2009 03:08 pm
Wondrous strange         

06/18/2009 11:12 am
Wondrous strange         
Ah... dear old Mash - a nice reminder - and debutant Ian's final question says it all!

varina8
06/18/2009 05:42 am
Wondrous strange         
Lovely to see you back. Poor Ian! Wait until he gets to the brain surgery.

kim
06/18/2009 05:22 am
Wondrous strange         
Heehee, poor bewildered doc. :D

06/18/2009 03:50 am
Wondrous strange         
So glad you are feeling well enough to write!  I always look forward to your updates.  Hope you are  in top physical form soon.

Shadowhawke
03/23/2010 12:06 pm
. Intemperate in Your Blood          
I like how Faith and Jenner's relationship is opening up, as well as Xander being challenged.

Oh, I just realised I forgot Oz in the list of characters I love that you've made changes to. Well, here he is! I think it's hard to nail Spike, and you've definitely done it!

06/19/2009 10:56 pm
. Intemperate in Your Blood          
Know I  don't give your enough recognition and thanks for all those splendid quotes - I love the ones for this chapter.

Hope all is good with your surgery and that you get back to good health very soon.

It's been a long, but good time, reading this great saga - one of my favorite in all the Buffyverse & Spuffy Fan Fiction works. 

I want to take the time to send you a great big "THANK YOU" for all your work on this series and for not making it another wonderful, but in-completed Buffyverse fiction - all your readers I know will join me in my appreciation.

busybee90us2003
06/17/2009 11:02 am
. Intemperate in Your Blood          
I hope the surgery goes well but my selfishness continues because I can't wait for the rest of the story

jane
06/14/2009 09:03 pm
. Intemperate in Your Blood          
Super update as usual. I thought Jenner's reaction to Faith in danger was madly romantic. And finally Xander seems to be on the Spuffy bandwagon. Looking forward to more.

06/14/2009 08:31 pm
. Intemperate in Your Blood          
well first let me say that I do hope that things go well when you have surgery.  I hate when people are under the weather and you have been having issues for a long time.  Just take care of yourself. 

Now to the great chapter.  Xander just does not know how things have really changed since he has been gone.  He better be glad that Connor didn't really show him how grown up he really is.  And Faith and Jenner are just too cute.  They both are not really ready to put all of their emotions to words. but they were really scared that something would happen to the other. And Buffy has to realize that yes she is the slayer but she is a mother.  She has been for a while but Dawn and Connor can take care of themselves.  But the twins just got here.  And Spike just wanted her this time to stay put.  As always just a great chapter and update in the lives of all fo them.

06/11/2009 11:57 pm
. Intemperate in Your Blood          
I'm always thrilled ot see this tale updated - it's been a wonderful journey.  And it doesn't hurt to see Spike getting some much deserved TLC!  Can't thank you enough for continuing when you've clearly got so much on your plate.  You are a star!

06/11/2009 04:27 am
. Intemperate in Your Blood          
excellent addition to a well told tale, thank you. wish  you well love.

06/11/2009 03:45 am
. Intemperate in Your Blood          
Just so you know there are still alot of loyal readers that wait patiently(mostly) on your words. Hope everything goes well with the surgery and we hope for a speedy recovery.

Ikepear
06/11/2009 03:25 am
. Intemperate in Your Blood          
Always glad to see more of this. It's a well-told tale.  Good luck with your health issues. After all, we need you scribbling away as soon & as often as possible.

Regards & best wishes
Ikepear

kim
06/11/2009 02:03 am
. Intemperate in Your Blood          
Crisis over, yay!!!

Shadowhawke
03/23/2010 11:55 am
An Equal Failing          
Goddess, Buffy is amazing. And I love Faith now. Despite not liking Kennedy, I'm really enjoying the way you look into all the minor characters' backgrounds and show what makes them tick. It makes your world feel so much more full and amazing. Like Nicholson, Lawson and even Travers - I'm beginning to like!

06/09/2009 06:48 pm
An Equal Failing          
Just me again -  reread everything....... again...... I never stop enjoying it!  can't wait for more hope your health is better!

busybee90us2003
05/26/2009 01:48 pm
An Equal Failing          
 Great Chapter in a fantastic series. Hope you get better soon so that another chapter can be posted. I know it's so selfish of me but this story has me hooked. Keep up the fantastic work

05/05/2009 07:24 am
An Equal Failing          
Terrific chapter -

I just want to say  again how very much I appreciate that you never gave up on this saga - It iss one of my favorite Buffyverse works.

Hope you have a full recovery very soon -

I am one of those readers who would, after you have some rest from all these characters, to see another adventure for all of them - particularly more with both the new vamps and the Slayers working together - It's a great new voice and look for Spuffy.

smokescreen
05/04/2009 05:38 am
An Equal Failing          
i love this story! the excitement keeps on building!  thanks for the update!

jane
05/03/2009 10:23 am
An Equal Failing          
Great update. Kennedys attitude is a bit worrying, can see her becoming a problem in the future. Can't wait to see how they deal with Finn. If they don't kill him, hope he gets put in the brig for disobeying orders. Bust him down to private, that'd smart.

IT
05/02/2009 08:44 am
An Equal Failing          
Thanks for updating.  I hope all is well and you don't leave us hanging too long! :)  

I think Spike's going to be a little growly when he sees Buffy up on the roof. 

05/01/2009 03:59 pm
An Equal Failing          
This has been a thoroughly enjoyable story.  In a way, it's sad to know it's wrapping up, but at the same time it's terribly exciting to know we're coming to a resolution.  Great work, as always!  Glad to hear you're not hospital bound anymore.  Hope you get back up to snuff soon!

05/01/2009 10:49 am
An Equal Failing          
Another very exciting chapter with plenty of ifs and buts... you're doing a terrific job of keeping us entranced.

sirc
05/01/2009 10:15 am
An Equal Failing          
Great chapter! :D

peck
05/01/2009 03:33 am
An Equal Failing          
I hope you are feeling a little better now.  The chapter was great and we are breathlessly waiting for more.  Thanks for all your hard work with this story.

Dee
04/30/2009 09:23 pm
An Equal Failing          
Thrilled to see another update so soon. Hopefully it means things are going better in your life. You're in my thoughts and prayers....

Shadowhawke
03/23/2010 11:53 am
The thundering line of battle         
I hope you're feeling better after your stint in hopital. This was a great chapter!

05/01/2009 09:33 am
The thundering line of battle         
Sorry to hear you have been ill - hope you got good news about staying healthy.

Another greater chapter -

Ikepear
04/30/2009 10:07 pm
The thundering line of battle         
Best wishes for a complete & speedy recovery, not to mention more story & more Buffy to come.

Much thanks for this long & interesting tale.

Regards
Ikepear

04/24/2009 12:20 am
The thundering line of battle         
very glad your are doing better. now your writing, i don't know if it is possible to do better. another very good read, thank you.

04/23/2009 06:24 pm
The thundering line of battle         
It's nice to see the chapters up that I knew were here but couldn't get to.  Can't wait to see how it all turns out!

04/23/2009 10:40 am
The thundering line of battle         
My goodness I've missed this story.  I'm aniously awaiting what happens next ... but take your time - your health comes first.  Great job as usual!

Shadowhawke
03/23/2010 09:37 am
The noise of battle         
You're almost making me like Travers. As for Faith! HAH! That was awesome, showing Kennedy up. Nice. :D

02/20/2009 11:42 pm
The noise of battle         
I just started reading origins a few days ago while i was ill at home and in only three days I managed to make it to here! You tuly are a wonderful writer, and I must say that i am very suprised by myself by being completly on edge and waiting to see a development in the Wes/Dawn department! I really hope you continue with this pairing and develop that whole thing!

Again, great work!

reginapritt@aol.com
02/15/2009 09:33 am
The noise of battle         
been reading this for the last week lol started with  the first in the series and have not been able to stop now i am sitting on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens. please keep writting this i so want to see how you wrap all this up. ty for a great story it has helped me through some rough patches in my on life giving me somethig to look forward to. hope real life treats you better

02/12/2009 09:25 am
The noise of battle         
complicated is one of the many things you do superbly. another great update. thank you , love.

02/10/2009 02:48 am
The noise of battle         
Let me just say that I love Jenner and Lawson.  They are warriors and they know that you can't always go with your commandor.  they have been able to live a long time.  And to have Spike back them up to Connor was just too funny.  Travers is finally realizing that the 'Council' is not the end all to everything.  Giles has been in Sunnydale a long time and especially now, they have to learn to live and work together to keep the innocents safe.  I can just imagine Buffy going to do everything that she can to keep her babies safe.  And on the flip side, Spike is just feeling left out that he can't keep them safe due to the threat coming from humans.  There is no father who would feel helpless if there was nothing that he could do the physically help in keeping his children safe.  Just an overall great chapter.  Just love to see them all working together on this.

02/07/2009 06:16 am
The noise of battle         
More Lawson and Jenner please - what are some of his other vamps up to? 

Thanks for the quick update -

peck
02/06/2009 04:43 pm
The noise of battle         
As if we could forget about you or this story.  You have created and used characters that have become like family to us, and we sit on pins and needles to find out what happens next!  Thanks again for your wonderful words.

02/06/2009 12:06 pm
The noise of battle         
Another agonising chapter - tension still abounding.  Wonderful stuff.

Shadowhawke
03/23/2010 09:30 am
Rampart of Defense         
My condolences, Niamh. *hugs*.

Nya!
05/02/2009 04:06 am
Rampart of Defense         
I don't comment often on anything, but I find I have to tell you that I'm really glad you decided to soldier on. Everything you've wrote that I've read is very engaging, and your take on this series is a pleasure to read. I wish I had some helpful bit of advice or criticism, but I'm coming up short. Thank you for sharing your stories.

Kathy
02/03/2009 09:46 pm
Rampart of Defense         
I'm looking forward to finding out the reason why Xander has to be there.  Sorry about the death in the family.  Never any fun.  Keep up the great work.

spikespet2002@yahoo.com

sirc
01/31/2009 10:33 pm
Rampart of Defense         
Great chapter

01/30/2009 11:30 pm
Rampart of Defense         
having recently suffer a loss of family i understand how disrupted this can be. my sympathy and sincere best wishes go out to you and yours. very glad to this fine chapter posted. and seeing you have crafted the tense tone to such a high level, very glad the next chapters are coming soon. thanks for the fine read.

01/30/2009 10:54 pm
Rampart of Defense         
Very apt openers lead to heart-pounding tension that didn't disappoint.  You must have the record for keeping us on a knife's edge!   Fabulous.

Liza
01/30/2009 11:08 am
Rampart of Defense         
I love a bit of action and adrenalin! Well-plotted and paced, this one.  So many players and threads brought in and lots of juicy excitement to look forward to.  

I'm very sorry to hear about your family's loss.  

01/29/2009 09:16 am
Rampart of Defense         
So Sorry about the death in your family - I recently lost one of my sisters from cancer - all my good wishes go out to you. 

It's great to get this new and very exciting and excellent update considering your troubles - I appreciate that you posted this new additions.  Been reading this for a long time and have enjoyed it all the way through.  Please do finish the work, after all your efforts it would be a pity to not have it completed.

On the lack of reviews and feed back - I wish that people would acknowledge all the efforts of the writers, even with a simple - thanks for the new chapter - but mostly they don't.   I have the same thing with all the work that I do with my images and at my gallery - So I just keep doing my work and hoping that someone is actually taking the time to see what I am doing.  You must have many people reading this work .  I for one have been reading for a long time and plan to stay with you to the bitter end.  Hell, I am hoping that after you take some much needed time off - that you would consider doing a long story with Jenner and Faith and his pack.  I would love to have some adventures with these new vampires - throw in Connor doing some work with them and I would be one happy reader. 

I am so excited about Tara and Oz having a baby - I love how you paired them - Plus, glad to see that Willow might start to have a way back - if not the group, at least with getting her powers back and used to some good purpose.

Look forward to your next updates -

01/28/2009 11:47 pm
Rampart of Defense         

SpaceLord
01/28/2009 08:59 pm
Rampart of Defense         
Nice chapter, I like this story a lot and hope the updates keeps on coming.

Belle
01/28/2009 02:57 pm
Rampart of Defense         

I'm sorry to hear about the death in your family *hugs* and hope you and yours are doing okay and hanging in there. Love the chapter. Leaves me wanting more lol

01/28/2009 10:04 am
Rampart of Defense         
sorry to hear that. hope all else is well. another great chapter as usual

Rosemaree Allison
01/28/2009 09:14 am
Rampart of Defense         
Hiya,

I just wanted to say that I was so pleased when I read the bit at the top of the story saying you weren't going to short change any of your WIPs - you've gone so far with them it would be a pity to rush the ends. 

And please remember, people may be reading them and not ever review - I have, in the last 18 months since I found the stories - reviewed a total of 2 stories, one of which was this one.  I know I would have read from the works of at least 50 authors.  Can I say of all of them, you are one of the very few that bring the characters as created by the show to life again.

I hope this is a good year for you, from what I've read on your LiveJournal, you deserve it!

I am sitting here in shorts and a very light top, it's just after 7pm and still over 105F!  And it is expected again tomorrow and Friday.  Neither my house, car or office is airconditioned, so your story helped me forget how yuck I feel for  a few minutes, so thank you. 

Looking forward to the next chapter on this, and your other stories.  I know "Safe" is hard for you to write, but it is a very good, honest story, I hope you are able to keep up with it without big breaks between chapters. 

Look after yourself, and thanks for the stories!

Rosemaree

spikestussi
01/28/2009 09:10 am
Rampart of Defense         
 Thank you so much I have been waiting on this . I am so sorry to hear of the death in your family. I had to have my sweet, 14 year old Lab put to sleep on Monday and I have not stopped crying since.  I hope writting provides a distraction for your grief as reading what you have written has provided one for me. 

FoolForLove
01/28/2009 08:26 am
Rampart of Defense         
Very sorry to hear about your loss. My condolences.

All hell's about to break loose in this story. ::flails:: Can hardly wait to see what happens.

01/28/2009 01:46 am
Rampart of Defense         
I'm sorry for your loss and I completely understand you needing the time off to grieve. 

I love this story and hope you keep going with it.  Please don't give up.  If you need to, bitch slap your muse to keep going.  LOL  Anyway, great job as usual.  Can't wait for the next chappie.

cheryl
01/28/2009 01:39 am
Rampart of Defense         

Sorry for your loss, I am sure that was hard.  But, I really love this story and always look forward to another installment.  Many thanks!

Jorem6
01/28/2009 01:12 am
Rampart of Defense         
Sorry to hear about your family, But I'm really glad for the update.  I've been hooked on this story from the beginning.

Keep it coming.

kim
01/28/2009 12:58 am
Rampart of Defense         
Exciting. Nice to see this today. The house is sounding like a fortress, much as it can be.

Northern Lights
01/28/2009 12:58 am
Rampart of Defense         
OH S**T! This is gonna get uglier. Really sorry to hear about your loss, I really dislike funerals. Love the story tho,

peck
01/28/2009 12:32 am
Rampart of Defense         
Wonderful update, I'm really glad to see you still writing this story.  Sorry for all the bad news from RL.

01/28/2009 12:11 am
Rampart of Defense         
Yay, update!!  So sorry for your RL troubles, especially your loss; I feel silly saying how much I enjoyed this chapter, I just love the idea of everybody gearing up to kick Riley's ass, but want to let you know that I'm still reading, still loving, and still waiting for the next chapter with held breath. 

01/27/2009 11:39 pm
Rampart of Defense         
I am so sorry about your loss!  Gosh don't worry about us readers we are a loyal bunch I think!  I know I have read and reread your series I have lost count how many times.  I'm sorry you didn't get much feedback before I am trying to recall if i posted or not.

LOVED this chapter!  Loved that Willow sounds like she might have finally gotten it and is worried she should be if it screws up because of her it will cost everyone.  I love Anya standing by - doesn't sound like anyone is getting past her to the babies if she can help it.

Once your done with the whole series I will probably reread it all over again I always end up picking up some tidbit i missed the other times!

Ikepear
01/27/2009 11:20 pm
Rampart of Defense         
Sorry to hear of your loss. My sympathies to you & your family.

Glad to have you back. I'm enjoying your story. It's always a pleasure to find a new chapter.

Sonja
01/27/2009 11:09 pm
Rampart of Defense         

Great to see the story continuing.  I have absolutely loved the whole series.  As usual a great chapter. 

 

 

Shadowhawke
03/23/2010 09:20 am
Shadows of Evil         
I can't help but be glad determined!Xander is back. And a good one, too, or at least fighting for the right reasons.


04/20/2009 11:29 pm
Shadows of Evil         
This is an amazing story! I've been reading the three over the past few weeks. You keep getting me more & more pulled in! But, the last  3 chapters are showing up at bloodshedverse!! I'm going into withdrawal! Here's hoping this stupid problem gets fixed!!!

01/23/2009 02:39 am
Shadows of Evil         
I have just re-read Origins, Origins: Revelations, and now this since I've been so out of sync lately ... being caught up with real life and all.  =P 

I'll never get tired of this story it seems and now I can't wait to see what happens in your next chapter.  You're an awesome writer.  Keep up the great work!!!

01/14/2009 05:32 am
Shadows of Evil         
thorough is good! excellent reead, thank you.

Spikestussi
01/03/2009 09:48 pm
Shadows of Evil         
Hi Nia,
I read "God Only knows" on the day that you posted it and I liked it so much that I went and read all of the "Origins" stories. Luckly it has been vacation and I have had some time.  I haven't reviewed until now as some of it has been up for a very long while.  I loved every  bit of it. Really fab.I was so glad that both Willow and Xander got what was coming to them. You have put in so many twists that I didn't expect,but itall works.The stuff with Connor and Dawn and Faith was all belivable in the context of the story and very "Buffy" like. I hope that you find the time and health to finish this story as it is worth an end.
It seems you have some other stories elsewhere, i am going in search. Thanks for all your hard work.

12/22/2008 06:27 pm
Shadows of Evil         
Oh, I really hope Riley dies in an extremely bloody, messy, painful way.  *is bloodthirsty*  I can't wait to see what Spike's gonna try and do to him if he goes near his babies!!   Awesome update, as always.  Eagerly, but more or less patiently, waiting for more!   Happy Holidays!

sirc
12/07/2008 04:53 pm
Shadows of Evil         
Great chapter!

12/05/2008 07:12 pm
Shadows of Evil         
Thanks Again for the new updates - Great Series.  Glad to see that you still have a good amount of chapters to go before the end.    I always suffer from that feeling of "friends goning away" when I get to the last page of a wonderful book -

Once again, nice to have these new characters to read about and this so excellent Spuffy with children tale.

12/04/2008 08:37 pm
Shadows of Evil         
just love the chapter.  I am glad that they made it safe.  That Tara was going to tell the gang about the babies.  I can't even imagine her fears after seeing what Buffy went through.  And to have him meet Connor all grown up for the first time was funny.  I am glad that he at least stepped in.  Anya did a good thing with taking herself out of the room.  She has really grown.  And to have them all moving towards to goal of keeping everyone safe.  Awesome chapter.

Liza
12/04/2008 09:19 am
Shadows of Evil         

Are you sure about the uncontrollable desire part? Not buying the needs of the demon explanation.  I can understand the confusion, the overwhelming experience of emotion and blood, but sex?  Surely love and admiration and compassion would win hands down.  For some of them, it takes months to get over the horror!  Men aren't always fab but they're better than this.    The sisterhood of childbirth is just too strong for me to understand this aspect of the character.  I would have killed any selfish bastard who even thought about touching me up!  Or the girl in the next delivery room!      Just as soon as I recovered.  

Well, at least you inspired a strong response.

12/03/2008 11:52 am
Shadows of Evil         
You manage to prolong and build the tension so excruciatingly -  I'm hoping the unthinkable doesn't happen, it would be too cruel as poor Buffy's only just given birth.  I liked how you handled the post partum scene, it's only natural that Spike would be in extremis after such an event..  As always, I can't wait for more.

kim
12/03/2008 07:56 am
Shadows of Evil         
Big showdown any minute!
Spike! You'll have to settle for a hand job, cuz dude, no way you're gettin' any right now. LOL.

Well, they have enough defenders in the house, unless the soldiers make a heavy assault with major fire power.....

Tamara
12/03/2008 06:06 am
Shadows of Evil         
Im glad Xander is willing to help.

Being a vampire, Spike might not realize that a woman whose just given birth mught rip his balls off if he's not careful especially if he tries anything that might get her pregnant again.

Kennedy really needs to learn when to listen.
Not surprised that the initative killed witches. They'd consider anyone who's different to be a target.Ans they are so gonna get thier butts kicked.

12/03/2008 05:07 am
Shadows of Evil         
GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!!  Oh boy I can't wait for MORE!!!!

Shadowhawke
03/23/2010 09:14 am
A dream of possibilities         
Okay, first of all, continuation of the lovely babies scene. Brilliant.

Secondly, I now hate Kennedy with a passion.

Thirdly, you sure know how to ramp it up! I think you got the suspense, tension and thrills down just perfect these last few chapters!

Amara D'Angeli
04/10/2009 10:35 pm
A dream of possibilities         
Well, I've read through chapter 25 but the rest aren't available on this site...due to, I think, a site error.  Please tell me this is posted somewhere else.  I can't wait to see how it continues!  amaradangeli@inbox.com

12/05/2008 06:42 pm
A dream of possibilities         
Been reading this for such a very long time - and while I wish updates came sooner - I always feel completely satisfied with the new chapters.  This has been on my "favs" list for a longtime.

Know that it is a project that you will need a big rest period from, but I sure would like to read more about the other vamp characters, see what happens when their part, and Faith's new connections, has finished in this work. 

Writing stories based on new characters is something that I think ff writers don't take advantage of - the Buffyverse FF is more than firmly established and has a firm fan base, there is room for writers to expand their works to bring in new characters and do long works for them. 

11/04/2008 06:39 am
A dream of possibilities         
Totally lived up to my expectations! All the players are in place, now comes the fireworks.

11/03/2008 06:25 pm
A dream of possibilities         
It took me a while to actually get to sit down and read it.  This was definitely worth the wait.  I am so glad that she made it.  Both of the kids made it safe and sound.  I can just imagine how anamated the little boy is.  And how such a daddy's girl the little girl will be.  I am a little suprised that Xander actually showed up.  How is he going to help them?  And the doctor was flown in.  I don't see Spike wanting to leave his family so soon.  And the little snippet of Giles and Anya.  Awesome chapter to a great story and saga.

11/02/2008 04:48 am
A dream of possibilities         

totally worth the wait - but please, don't make us wait too long for the next one.  I love the mid wife character and how you have used all the characters from the series plus the new characters you introduced. 

 

Lanea
11/01/2008 05:53 am
A dream of possibilities         
Most definitely worth the wait! I'm glad Xander is back in the picture but if Kennedy and Willow end up together I may lose just a bit of faith in the universe.
I wonder if the Initiative will get their hands on one of the kids (since their only expecting one) or if the kids' powers'll manifest this quick or if cavalry will be required to save the day.
I can hardly wait for the next update.

jane
10/29/2008 08:51 am
A dream of possibilities         
Oh my god that was brilliant, I don't know how i'm gonna contain myself until the next chapter. I wish the doctor had got there quicker, wonder how Spikes going to overcome his handicap. So looking forward to more. Loved it.

Tamara
10/29/2008 06:58 am
A dream of possibilities         
Great update! It looks like everything is about to come to a boil.

kim
10/29/2008 06:44 am
A dream of possibilities         
Stupid Initiative....

Yay! Spike's doc is here!

Loved Wes teasing Giles. Love Dawn's typical teen reaction of being grossed out by the adult's affection.
The babies are a kick, too.

I hope their team can keep Riley's group far enough away so that Spike and Buffy don't have to fight at this time....they deserve some calm and rest and time with the babies.

LCF
10/29/2008 03:18 am
A dream of possibilities         
Six weeks ago, I came across your "Origins" series.  I've been hooked ever since. Your work is truly amazing. I, for one, cannot wait to see what happens next. (But if this last chapter's any indicator..? it'll be great.)

Bravo.

LCF

10/29/2008 03:17 am
A dream of possibilities         
wonderful read, as usual. thank you.

Leanne
10/29/2008 02:03 am
A dream of possibilities         
I thought this was a GREAT chapter!! So much is happening. Please don't make us wait too long to find out what happens next!

10/29/2008 01:27 am
A dream of possibilities         
What can I say , it was perfect  and so tender and quiet.  Very moving.  And then you go and turn the thumscrews!  Heartpounding!

chicalatina526
10/29/2008 01:17 am
A dream of possibilities         
OH NO RILEY DONT DO IT damn he's crazyyyyy lol but anyways it was amazing all my expectations where met and i cant wait for more

duke6665
10/29/2008 12:09 am
A dream of possibilities         
nooooooooo there is no way you can leave it there lmao more now please????? great work.

10/28/2008 11:47 pm
A dream of possibilities         
Aaaaaahhhh, I'm dying here.  Please tell me you will have more soon!  I can hardly wait for all the confrontations.

10/28/2008 11:16 pm
A dream of possibilities         
oh man oh man oh man!!!!!!   Great chapter!!!!  I can't wait for more!

I can't imagine why Xander of all people needs to help with anything,,, but i am TRYING to wait and see....... trying!!!!!

Great Chapter!

anon
10/28/2008 11:01 pm
A dream of possibilities         
At the risk of sounding like one of those really bad Buffy/Spike lemons (you know, the ones written by 13 year olds), all I can say is 'More! Faster!'

10/28/2008 10:39 pm
A dream of possibilities         
OH MY GOD, WHAT A PLACE TO LEAVE IT!!!  *flails hands*

Hurry and update soon, the suspense is killing me!!!  *makes grabby hands at you*

Shadowhawke
03/23/2010 09:08 am
Welcome to the human race         
Wow. Very gritty birth scene, but in a good way, and obviously written by a female. (At least, I think?) I love it. So much love and goodness, yet still acknowledging the pain and worser side of it.

As someone who will be having surgery tomorrow, and is very nervous about it, this chapter inexplicably helped me. Thank you.

12/05/2008 06:16 pm
Welcome to the human race         
this is one of the birthing scenes in fan fiction that I have read - a good combination of the physical and emotional experience for both parents and all at the scene.   Nice Touch bringing in Giles and Anya and how different their relationship is, plus like the Connor Dawn exchange as well. 

11/02/2008 04:23 am
Welcome to the human race         

Long time coming, but great when they finally arrive.  What a wonderful joyous gift that has come into the life of our vampire and slayer - not only for them, but for everyone connected with them.  These children will be an awesome new chapter of their life together.

Great update - and I hope that you can bring us regular updates soon - I have enjoyed your terrific saga since I began reading - been a while now - thank you so much for not abandoning this work and your readers.

10/26/2008 04:36 pm
Welcome to the human race         
wow wow wow!!!  wonderful, beautiful, emotional, exciting....i'm not a writer so i'm running out of adjectives, but great job!  i was moving, so i haven't been able to visit the site for a while, but i'm glad to be back!  keep these great chapters coming!

jane
10/05/2008 02:34 pm
Welcome to the human race         
Excellent update, so hope Cordy was seeing the birth and not the initiative getting the upper hand. Really hate those boys now. Can't wait for the next chappie, love it.

10/03/2008 06:24 pm
Welcome to the human race         
magnificent read, thank you.

fangfaceandrea
10/03/2008 05:58 pm
Welcome to the human race         
 wow that was pretty intense. good to see Xander won't be an ass

Liza
10/03/2008 03:17 pm
Welcome to the human race         
You've got me lost in memories.  Told you I love birth stories. X 

chica526
10/03/2008 02:32 am
Welcome to the human race         
it was absolutely amazing i've been waiting fo these babies forever i feel like! i cant wait for more please give me more soon :)

sin_amatic
10/02/2008 03:32 am
Welcome to the human race         
Sounds like writing the last couple of chappy's  was like given "birth" an if it's any consolation it's a beauty.  (You did good girl.)  It was a very satisfying, an even though I've never given birth I feel you truly capture all the glory and the gory of it.

It was a nice touch to bring Cordy and the Xanman back into play and let's not forget oh so sweet Kennedy and Willow.  You do know how to racket up the angst.

Thanks ever so!

Lanea
10/01/2008 09:04 pm
Welcome to the human race         
Ahhhhhhh! That was phenomenal! I had read a rec somewhere for the first installation of the Origins story but this whole story line was so much more than I had expected.
Reading this chapter, I almost hyperventilated. The labor/birth was so well written. I can hardly wait to find out the children's names.

Many, mas, mucho kudos to you.

Belle234
10/01/2008 02:58 pm
Welcome to the human race         
Wooooo! Excellent chapter! YAY! The babies are here!!

duke6665
10/01/2008 01:26 pm
Welcome to the human race         
wow GREAT chapter.Well worth the wait..everything about it was perfect. also glad you gave them 1 of each :) can't wait for more.

Tamara
10/01/2008 07:00 am
Welcome to the human race         
Fantastic chapter. I especially loved the parent's reactions over it being a boy at first and Anya's convo with Giles. Xander really never let her talk. Not to mention if my husband told me to rest up while I was having his 15th child because he wanted more boys , I'd opt for the instant home vasectomy option.

sandyrah
10/01/2008 05:24 am
Welcome to the human race         
Yay! The babies are here! Finally.
I just about died when the boy peed on Buffy. Hilarious. First that they didn't realize that he was a boy, and then, of course, that he peed on her.
Good for Cordelia.
I am really looking forward to more when you get to it!

Carol
10/01/2008 04:43 am
Welcome to the human race         
That was a lovely chapter.  I loved Buffy and Spike's reactions to their newborns.  Just so sweet. 

Murph
10/01/2008 03:03 am
Welcome to the human race         
Yay!!!!!!!!!!! Great job! How cool was that? The penis line killed me. Truly lol. Also, I love your Anya/Giles. Giles acceptance of her is a beautiful thing. Finally, this is easily my favorite ongoing fan fic. Just an absolutely amazing 'verse you've created. Thank you!

10/01/2008 02:51 am
Welcome to the human race         
Awwwesome chapter!  Well worth the wait.  Thank you.

kim
10/01/2008 02:39 am
Welcome to the human race         
Great description of the birthing, their emotions with it...And now we know who is the older twin. :)

Anya, Giles, Dawn, and Connor were some good comic relief.

But a vision, about all this? Uh-oh.....

10/01/2008 01:00 am
Welcome to the human race         
Fabulous chapter - and a truly believable birth, sweaty,  painful and well worth the effort.  Congratulations all round!!  I hope Xander takes this opportunity to redeem himself.

10/01/2008 12:45 am
Welcome to the human race         
Please tell me both babies are healthy and safe, and that nothing's going to be wrong with them!!!  Other than that, so pleased I've been along for the ride; awesome, awesome story, and can't wait to see what happens next!

Shadowhawke
03/23/2010 08:59 am
The long wait for angels         
Kennedy and Willow again, eh? Well at least Willow's got someone, I suppose. I'm half-glad the olive branch is finally out, at least, since she's started repenting and trying to help.


09/30/2008 07:50 pm
The long wait for angels         
another fine read, thank you.

09/26/2008 01:41 am
The long wait for angels         
Yea for more so soon.  We haven't given up, and don't plan to.  Keep going, we will be here.

Crazed Humor
09/26/2008 01:13 am
The long wait for angels         
Frickin' sweet!

sirc
09/25/2008 07:05 pm
The long wait for angels         
Great chapter!

Bigbird
09/25/2008 01:22 pm
The long wait for angels         
Hurray! I have finally caught up with the updates! Ilove this story, been reading it from the beginning, sorry if I dont review that much but  I'm not good with the words like you ;-) keep going please I know the lack of reviews is disheartening at times but look more at the number of hits! we keep coming back and only do that if we really are enjoying it -  thanks for posting xx

KAMW220
09/25/2008 04:36 am
The long wait for angels         
Fabulous Story. More Please :-)

Seth
09/24/2008 11:06 pm
The long wait for angels         
Great stuff, this is one of my if not my favorite series.

09/24/2008 02:05 pm
The long wait for angels         
Ah the contractions -- something you never forget!!  It looks like Buffy is set to deliver and in comparative safety.  God, I hope it stays that way!  Can't wait for the next instalment!

Liza
09/24/2008 11:02 am
The long wait for angels         
After my own deliveries, I developed a bit of a fixation with birth stories.  Love births, love Spuffy - does it get any better? Tell you what, she's bloody lucky to be so lucid at 10 cms!  Keep going for us; don't worry about delays so long as we all get there in the end. 

09/24/2008 02:08 am
The long wait for angels         
very happy that you brought us another update - but I think you are right to work on stories that are feeling more important right now -

Your readers have been with you a long time on this one - and, while the updates are sometimes a little slow, we are totally still loving this story -

kim
09/24/2008 01:48 am
The long wait for angels         
Kennedy...blech.

Yeah, Spike is too pretty for clothes. :)  Ah, poor Buffy, figuring out the indignity of labor just now. :D  Not much modesty left after having babies in a hospital.

Love the network.

Tamara
09/24/2008 01:22 am
The long wait for angels         

I like Grace.Great OC.

Kennedy always struck me as the type of character that would get hoist by her own arrogance if she was fighting alone.

09/24/2008 12:15 am
The long wait for angels         
I am so excited!!!!!   Thank you for posting!!!!  I can't wait for MORE MORE MORE!!!!!

Shadowhawke
03/23/2010 08:51 am
Not exactly pleasant         
Graham is good. Always 'never minded' him much, although I didn't like Forrest and Riley. You've really brought him out here, as well as making it political as well. I like it. :)

CrazedHumor
09/09/2008 12:27 am
Not exactly pleasant         
OMG!

I'm starting to get teary-eyed waiting for the next chapter!

Though, I do understand why it takes forever to update...good work takes time.

Thank you for giving me such a good plot to thrive on in my spare time!!!

Felecia (CrazedHumor)
08/29/2008 11:45 pm
Not exactly pleasant         
Wow.

I don't know how you came up with this, but THANK YOU!

 Everytime I look for fanfictions nowadays, I look at the summary and then the date. I usually pick between '01-'03, 'cuz people who have posted lately have either jacked it off of someone else, or are repetitive.

Yours is far from it and I can't tell you how amazing this story is and what it will be once it's finished.



Tingeling with anticipation for the next update!!!!

08/25/2008 12:11 am
Not exactly pleasant         
enjoyed the update. hope you enjoyed the vacation. very good read, thank you.

pretty_in_fangs
08/24/2008 12:13 am
Not exactly pleasant         
Ah, denial.  A good reliable reaction to a) going into labor and b) being Buffy.  Being Buffy going into labor...

And yay to Graham.  Really liking what you're doing with his character.

Enjoy your vacation!

Alexis
08/23/2008 10:58 pm
Not exactly pleasant         

Excellent chapter! Things are getting really tense now. Loved the gentle banter between Spike and Buffy, really shows how close they are. Besides, they wouldn't be them if they weren't quipping at times of crisis! lol

kat
08/23/2008 02:39 pm
Not exactly pleasant         
so sorry i haven't reviewed for a couple chapters, but i'm still faithfully reading!  let's get these babies born! 

Dee
08/21/2008 09:14 am
Not exactly pleasant         

You're such a tease! Hope the chip comes out soon so Spike can pound Riley into a paste Enjoy the vacation Sweetie ~ you certainly deserve it...

chicalatina720
08/19/2008 11:53 pm
Not exactly pleasant         
ohh dear i missed this story it was great i cant wait till spike and buffy have the babies :) i want to see more wesley and dawn and did i mention that by character death i hope you mean riley and noone else because i would not be able to take it lol i cant wait to read more and i hope you're vacation goes well and you update soon:)

kim
08/18/2008 07:50 pm
Not exactly pleasant         
With most everyone inside and Buffy getting close, nothing to do now but wait for the babies. A cat nap will be good for her, as long as she just sleeps, not passes out from a drop in blood pressure - iow, no complications. :)

Shadowhawke
03/23/2010 08:46 am
Strings of tension         
The new take on the Initiative is disturbing, but now that I think of it, entirely proper. Their rhetoric was Nazi-ish, as you've so rightly pointed out.

Can't wait for more.

chicalatina720
08/02/2008 01:12 am
Strings of tension         
ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!! AS ALWAYS i cant wait to read more ohh i hope they all kick riley's butt and i hope graham becomes a good guy he was cute on the show lol i hope to see more of the wesley and dawn pairing :) as always im impressed and at the edge of my seat please dont kill any of the good guys casey's death was enough to make me sob for an hour lol

pretty_in_fangs
08/01/2008 07:08 pm
Strings of tension         
Always brightens my day to see a new chapter from you.  I'm impressed at how well you track the movements of all the various players in this little tangle of alliances and interests.  It's like the outbreak of WWI.

In a different vein, I'm highly enjoying watching Graham's dilemma.

08/01/2008 06:20 pm
Strings of tension         
I really do hope that you are feeling much better and that you are doing okay.  As always I just love this story and any other but Origins holds a special place for me. 

Hope Graham will make sure things don't get too out of hand.  And I just love Anya and Giles.  They are just too much.  And they are all just trying to take care of their family.  Tara, Buffy, the twins, Jenner, Dawn, Connor all of them are a family.

08/01/2008 01:43 pm
Strings of tension         
Your update is always appreciated, especially so in the circumstances.  A big thank you.

And here I was, thinkingt things couldn't get any more tense!!  Devil Woman!

cheryl
08/01/2008 12:52 pm
Strings of tension         
Gosh, what a tease - and now I am going on vacation!  But maybe you'll have an update waiting when I get back - something to look forward to!  I have really been enjoying this fic.

08/01/2008 12:25 pm
Strings of tension         
So sorry for all the trouble you've had lately.  If you need some more time, I know your readers will understand.  Great chapter today, hope to hear from you soon.

brandy
08/01/2008 06:46 am
Strings of tension         
Nia,

Thank you for the lastest update.  This continues to be one of my favorites.  Can't wait for more.

08/01/2008 12:28 am
Strings of tension         
it is great to see, that despite what real life throws at you, the quality of the update is the same excellence you always deliver. very good read, thank you.

Dee
07/31/2008 10:01 pm
Strings of tension         
Bless your heart ~ you've had so much to deal with lately. If it helps, know that you are in my thoughts and prayers. Storywise, can't wait for the chip to come out and hoping Spike gets to pound Riley into paste....

07/31/2008 07:43 pm
Strings of tension         
C'mon, Graham! There are so many balls in the air, I'm excited to see how it all comes together. I'm especially curious about how Buffy's homebirth will play out, 'cause I have a (very) little experience with that, and 'dramatic' hospital births are usually pretty tiresome. I trust you, though. Very cool, referring to Oz by his 'Hostile' number. Heh.

07/31/2008 04:39 pm
Strings of tension         

Great to have the latest update - as always - love this series  -

So sorry to hear about your grand mom - my sister also just recently died after long period with cancer - all my sympathy and good wishes go out to you -

Thanks So Much for not ever giving up on your wonderful, but very long writing project - so many ff writers leave their readers out in "Limbo Land of Abandoned Works." - appreciate all your efforts on this one. 

07/31/2008 03:32 pm
Strings of tension         
Great Chapter!  I am so glad you are doin better and are back.

Can't wait for MORE MORE MORE!

Liza
07/31/2008 02:33 pm
Strings of tension         
So sorry to hear about your loss.

Really, really loved this chapter.  The sidelight into the troubles of a vampire father to be is fascinating - yes, there is shedloads of blood at any birth. That would definately rachet up the stress levels. Look forward to the next one.  Baited breath, actually. 

Shadowhawke
03/23/2010 08:41 am
No eternal allies         
Ah Kennedy... good to see there's still no love lost there.

And dear Goddess... ANYA! SO AWESOME! :D

Sorry, I've degenerated from my normally literate self because your story is making me very excited and I'm enjoying it.

regina
07/30/2008 11:02 pm
No eternal allies         
i have been reading this series for the last few days and i can not wait to see how it all ends. this is by far the best series in this fandom that i have read please update soon can not wait to see how it all ends.    

chica526
07/24/2008 05:11 am
No eternal allies         
i have spent the last 2 weeks reading all of the origins stories and they are absolutely amazing and oh i hope oz and tara end up together as an official couple i hope she starts to love him love him but just in a i care about you way b/c they are so cute together (marriage perhaps?) i really want dawn and connor to start calling buffy and spike mom and dad more often b/c i think its AWESOMMMEEE and uughhhh i hate riley i even hated him on the show hope he always sucked i hope it gets whats coming to him ten fold, i adore dawn and wesley every cool pairing on your part :) i cant wait to read more of this amazing story and i hope it has an amazing ending with no character deaths unless its one of the bad guys b/c i couldn't take one of the characters dying when casey died i cried for an hour it was ridiculous lol but yea maybe willow can be with kennedy b/c oooooo i really don't want her with tara but I LOVE THIS STORY sorry this was so long

kathy
07/13/2008 03:45 pm
No eternal allies         
hello!  i came back from vacation to find a new chapter....woo hoo! 

tamrha
07/12/2008 05:28 pm
No eternal allies         
not complaining - so glad your continuing this fic - well worth waiting for..:) tam

jane
07/06/2008 11:23 am
No eternal allies         
Yay we've got imminent childbirth and brain surgery to look forward to. Riley won't know what hit him. Really looking forward to more, super update.

sirc
07/05/2008 10:16 pm
No eternal allies         
Great chapter! :D

07/04/2008 07:09 am
No eternal allies         
Let me be honest and say that I hate to see this end.  It has been an awesome right from chapter one of Origins to now.  But you just have to love Anya.  Really Travers would really love to have her at the council.  She can get results.  And to see the teenagers working together on setting up the house was too funny.  Riley has NO IDEA exactly who he is messing with.  I just really hope that Travers comes through.  These twins are on their way and they want to have a grand entrance.  What else do you expect from kinds that belong with Buffy and Spike?

07/03/2008 09:35 am
No eternal allies         
no complaints from me - Just happy to have this new update - I have enjoyed reading the entire series.

Please, a little more Jenner, it's nice to have another interesting Aurelian, like your Lawson also.  Great to see Travers in this more positive treatment - makes for a nice change.

Hope you will be able to bring another update again soon -

07/03/2008 08:33 am
No eternal allies         
AAGGHH!!! And they're still not born!  You sure know how to keep people in suspense!
You bring these characters to life as well as the writers on the show did.  Keep up the great work.

Cheers

Rosemaree 

07/03/2008 06:12 am
No eternal allies         
no yelling or complaining about the timing of this fine chapter. just a thank you. now, about the stopping point. maybe a bit of whining. very good read.

Liza
07/02/2008 09:12 pm
No eternal allies         
Welcome back but yes, I do feel frustrated! I had to reread so much of the fic just to pick up the thread that one little chapter was quite infuriating!  Put your real life on hold for your loyal readers and wrap this up, please?  You're leaving it too long for the momentum to be sustained, kitten.   

07/02/2008 07:52 pm
No eternal allies         
You know, I think your work is what lured me into buffy fanfic, way back long ago...and it's still great. 
Loved your portrayal of  Anya's negotiating skills - I think she'd be awesome at it too. 

Dee
07/02/2008 07:51 pm
No eternal allies         
No apology necessary ~ it was more than worth the wait. Congrats, BTW, on the Best of the Best award. Well deserved...

07/02/2008 06:46 pm
No eternal allies         
Nope - no yelling from me!  I'm just happy to see the update!  You've left me with another cliffhanger!!  I can't wait to see how Riley gets his comeuppance!  There's so much going on, what with childbirth, chip removal, goodies and baddies... seamlessly interwoven.  I love it!

kim
07/02/2008 06:33 pm
No eternal allies         
Kennedy's being a brat, so it's another day that ends in Y.

It's hilarious how the Initiative crew is so confused by what's going on.

Carol
07/02/2008 05:47 pm
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Love this story Nia, always have!  I think your characterisation is spot on.

07/02/2008 04:42 pm
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he he he he he everything is moving so fast!  I was even reading fast because i felt the rush!  Great update!   Can't wait for MORE MORE MORE~~~~  Glad Travers is finally coming round nice change!

Shadowhawke
03/23/2010 08:36 am
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Oh, I *like*.

I also haven't mentioned previously, but I'm heartened on how you capitalised on the potential of Anya, Tara and Oz. Having them treated like real important characters and explored means a lot.

generic penname so my boss can't find me...
06/19/2008 09:34 pm
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hi there! the blank review was from me, apparently my work computer is none too pleased with the fact that your tale has consumed me for the past 4 days.  yep. i didn't accomplish much this week. i blame you ;)

that said, obviously your story pulled me in, and would not let me go, like no other i've read. the relationships are so realistic, despite being those of supernatural beings. the story is intricate, full of twists, yet you never seem to lose the thread, nor do you include something that doesn't come to bear fruit later on.  your style is so engaging that i can't believe i never found this tale until this week.

all apologies, hugs and bottles of bourbon to your muse... looking forward to seeing what kind of deal anya pushes travers to. just when i think it couldn't possibly get more interesting... it does!

cheers!

06/19/2008 10:44 am
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06/03/2008 08:13 pm
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Yes, Anya master negotiator is on the job, if she can't hammer together a deal no one can. It makes sense that Quentin would see the benefits to the situation. Buffy maybe rebellious, but she gets the job done. great update.

06/03/2008 12:47 am
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LOL!  Love Anya taking the reins of the negotiations; amazing!  And can I just say, I love every glimpse of Jenner that we get; just love him!!  Can't wait to see what happens next; please update again soon!!!

06/01/2008 08:01 am
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What a pleasure to have another update - wonderful chapter - love your Anya coming in at the end - what kind of a Bad Bargain is the CoW going to force on them?  - hope I find out soon.

Katie
06/01/2008 02:52 am
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Love it can't wait for more!

kathy
05/30/2008 06:23 pm
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woo hoo!!!  new chapter!!!  can i just say i hate travers???

Belle
05/30/2008 03:47 pm
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Excellent!! Can't wait for the next chapter! Wooo let's see how well Travers holds up to Anya's neogtiating!

liza
05/30/2008 12:27 pm
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Welcome, welcome back, Niamh!  I've been scanning the updates for weeks looking for a new chapter.  I really enjoyed this one, but if you don't mind me saying so it feels like a bridge more than a development in plot.  Maybe you could speed up the pace of the plot strands?   

05/30/2008 12:18 pm
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Go Anya!!  Travers won't know what hit him.  Thanks for the update.

05/30/2008 12:18 pm
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It seemsTravers is sincere, slayer/vamp offspring will be a coup for the Council, which I imagine they'd protect at all costs.  Shame they had to add loony Kennedy to the mix, though!  And Riley...words fail me; at least Graham is thinking right and Willow too, it seems.  I 'm looking forward to the next update!

Tamara
05/30/2008 08:06 am
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Interesting little work around Riley's come up with to try and not see himself as a scumbag. He's gonna be screwed.

FoolForLove
05/30/2008 05:49 am
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Oooh, wonderful update. I'm glad the council will be working with Buffy and Spike. Maybe. :-D

kim
05/30/2008 05:23 am
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Oh, brilliant bringing Anya into that little discussion.

Willow still trying to help, good.

Riley's really an idiot.

05/30/2008 04:31 am
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with all the tension having anya step forward to negotiate is a wonderful stress releaser. as always a fine read, thank you.

Shadowhawke
03/23/2010 08:30 am
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Wow. One hell of a cliffhanger punch, delivered one after the other! I'm actually hopping around in excitement at the moment, the complications and twists you've put in this are great!

Roberta Badger
05/10/2008 06:44 am
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Hi, I just wanted to say that I have really enjoyed your trilogy.  Your writing style is very solid and you cleaned up a lot of the mess that original tv show created.  I'm so glad you brought Oz back into the story because he was one of my more favored characters.  I always felt Anya deserved better than Xander as well.  So thanks for writing.

DK
05/08/2008 07:47 am
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Love this story!  Also have been reading your latest and that is great too.  Thanks!

notwhomever
05/07/2008 07:21 pm
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after all this time, still loving this.
one of a few stories that doesn't lose its strength and focus with time and length.
bravo

05/07/2008 02:45 am
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excellent update, thank you. perhaps travers, who i have never seen portrayed so reasonable, will have a way to remove spike's chip.

Alexis
05/05/2008 06:14 am
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Oooh, excellent chapter. I'm scared of what Riley is going to do to get his hands on the babies but I trust in you. Spike will tear the Initiative to pieces and laugh through the pain of his chip firing while he does so. And if there's anything left, Giles will get them. And the Council may prove to be helpful in disbanding the neo-Nazi jerks.

Hmmm, I wonder if techno-geek Warren could do something about Spike's chip? After building an android, disabling one computer chip should be a piece of cake.

pretty_in_fangs
05/04/2008 09:35 pm
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HA!  Your timing is impeccable.

I'm SO sorry I haven't been reviewing lately.  I hadn't been back on the BSV site for a while and realized I'd been missing updates.  So today I happily sat down and gorged on lovely ORigins posts.  As always, this story keeps me enthralled and the action is progressing faster and faster these last few chapters.  I can't wait to see where this convergence of forces will go.

P.S.  Points for the use of the word "asshat" in the last chapter.  It made me smile.

05/02/2008 01:26 pm
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continue to love this work with every single new chapter - thanks much for this one and little greedy reader here would so love another one very soon -

Great Series -

05/02/2008 12:58 pm
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wonderful introductory text - always excellent, but these are so tragically relevant once again -  Thank you

05/02/2008 12:17 pm
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Where else would we be when these characters are  behaving so twisty that I can't figure out what comes next!  Love your writing and this chapter.

Brandy
05/02/2008 04:49 am
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Nia,

This is still one of my favortie stories.  I am so glad that you have are still working on it.  I can't wait to see what you have planned next.  Is Travers a good guy?  It will be interesting to see.  Hope all is well in your life and you can update soon.

kat
05/01/2008 02:14 pm
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hello!  i was so excited to see a new chapter!  looks like we're getting to the good stuff...keep up the GREAT work.

IT
05/01/2008 08:48 am
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And the plot just keeps on thickening!  Another great chapter, thanks!  

My favourite line is Anya's "Was it like having lots and lots of orgasms at once?"  lol!  I hadn't thought about it that way, but really that's an apt description.  The final moments of giving birth struck me as somehow orgasmic, or the completion of sex itself, but you're right about the labour pains, too.   

Looking forward to more! 

05/01/2008 04:48 am
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Wonderful chapter Niamh! You capture the 'voices' of the characters so very well, it is almost like I can hear them saying their lines. I loved how Giles and Wes treated Riley and his gang. I can't wait to see what Quentin is up to, I hope he is going to turn out to be a good guy in all of this. I am riveted by this work, please know that this fic is dearly loved.
Lis

05/01/2008 02:50 am
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OMG, I can't wait for Riley and his crew to meet up with Ripper.  They have no idea what he is capable of.  And they are threatening the Sunnydale FAMILY?  Did Riley not learn at all?  I can't believe that Buffy kept her pains to herself.  She was great a blocking that all out.  Awesome chapter and leave it to Faith to crack me up.  And what a time for Travers to show up?

sin_amatic
05/01/2008 02:19 am
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Okay... Are you trying too give me a heartattack???  I feel like this is one of those perfect storms.What a "wild" ride.  You are an awsome writer.  Thank you for hanginng in there to finish this incredible tale.  I hate too think of this story coming to an end, but I can't wait too see the way you will wrap all this up.

Ta!

BTW - Lovely little switch-a-roo with your take on Travers (well so far!) 

04/30/2008 10:45 pm
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Dammit!  How do you DO that!!!  Please tell me you're close to writing the next part!!!  Puhleeeese!!

Liza
04/30/2008 08:31 pm
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Welcome back!  Really enjoyed this episode.  My favourite ingredients for a good spuffy are developments in the group dynamic, (I've always been a sucker for bands of brothers) and a healthy plot pace.  I'm loving the fact that you don't get bogged down in PWP and actually do some tale telling.  You bring out nuances of characters that are rooted in their show origins, and don't try to spring implausible and unsatisfying contradictions in character on us.  
Do you know 'In my craft or stubborn art' by Dylan Thomas?  He knew how hard it was to keep going at times.  Keep at it.   You help me escape.  xx     

Belle
04/30/2008 04:48 pm
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AHHHHHHHH! Cliffhanger! *sigh* Great chapter!! Can't wait for the next one! You know, it's Buffy stories like this that makes a quote stick in my head. Especially when those stories involve the initative. Umm, ever read any of Kay Hooper's books? It's in one of them. Goes something like...Those who seek to destroy monsters should see to it that they themselves do not become a monster...something like that. Can't remember who says it but it's a really cool quote that i think lots of people should follow especially if they're in the business of destroying "monsters" and i'm rambling! sorry! Excellent chapter! Update soon please!

04/30/2008 02:41 pm
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awesome. just, awesome. more please? *begs nicely*

sirc
04/30/2008 02:00 pm
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I loooved the chapter. So many things coming together and happening at once.

Well done! :D

04/30/2008 12:37 pm
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Phew - you're ratcheting up the tension something wicked!!  I'm glad the reinforcements have arrived, I think they'll be needed.  The Nazi undertones are chilling.

sammywol
04/30/2008 10:46 am
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This is wonderful. It's always a fillip to see that this has updated but this chapter is great. Lots of plot, lots of passion and Giles doing a Ripper speech.Can't wait to see what happens next.

04/30/2008 03:58 am
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Eeeee! The tension mounts! ::flails::

Another great update. Thank you!

Dee
04/30/2008 03:12 am
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Darn near jumped out of my seat when I saw your update. I've been with you from the beginning and look forward to every new chapter. You're the Best, Lady. The Absolute Best...

04/30/2008 02:47 am
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I admit to not having read this story for awhile so I had to go back to refresh my memory.  But man...is this getting good.  Everything's happening all at once!  The Initiative, the Council, and then to top it all off...Buffy's having the babies.  Man - sucks to be her!!!

Can't wait for the update!

kim
04/30/2008 02:13 am
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Travers actually being on Buffy's side has been a welcome surprise.

Riley's still being such an idiot!

And Buffy, well, the babies, have flawless timing, LOL.

04/30/2008 01:39 am
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ohhhh your are so evil..noway you can just us hanging like that...more please

Shadowhawke
03/23/2010 08:24 am
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Goddess, you just make me hate Riley more and more. Very effective writing.

03/25/2008 02:32 am
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another excellent read, thank you. another evil chapter ending, ok, thanks for that too!

jane
03/22/2008 04:03 pm
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So pleased with the update, you really know it's a holiday when you get prezzies. I think Quentin's starting to show why he's the boss, got a feeling he's several steps ahead of his cohorts. Really looking forward to more. Happy holiday.

BerMH
03/21/2008 08:44 pm
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Cliffhanger!!! I am really enjoying this story, and I hope you don't get too dicouraged. You have at least one faithful reader (who is anxiously awaiting another chapter).

kathy
03/20/2008 07:00 pm
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well, i have ALWAYS enjoyed your stories...and still do!  another wonderful chapter, as always.  thank you.

Liza
03/20/2008 09:14 am
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I've been reading lots of fanfic recently and I want to tell you that this is one of the best.  Can't wait for more. 

Liza
03/20/2008 09:14 am
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I've been reading lots of fanfic recently and I want to tell you that this is one of the best.  Can't wait for more. 

Alexis
03/20/2008 03:58 am
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Grr! I wanna smack Riley so hard right now. I trust Giles will put him in his place.

Travers actually seems to be on Spike's side. That pleases me.

Excellent chapter, hon.

03/20/2008 02:00 am
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I don't know who has or has not been reading but I have been along for the ride since volume 1... I am just glad that Riley walked in on them.  Buffy and Spike needed to have that connection and leave it to the twins to make that happen.  And what is Quentin up to?  GO Faith for stepping up to the plate.  The initiative really does not know what they stepped back into.  Awesome chapter.

AthenaHahn
03/20/2008 12:34 am
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AAAARRGGGHHH!!!

You evil, evil woman!  Cliffhanger!

Seriously loving where this fic is going.  I hope Giles is about to read Riley the riot act, and that whatever hell broke loose in the shop isn't too bad for everyone else to handle!  I'll say it again; you are an evil evil woman!  Please please please update soon; I absolutely adore your fics and eagerly await each installment, even if I don't review that often.  Thanks so much for keeping this going!

Bigbird
03/19/2008 10:33 pm
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I was really sorry to read about the lack of support for this story. I have read & re-read this and looking back I am probably the worst reviewer ever! I'm so sorry, please don't take that as lack of support, its just a case of not knowing how to express how much I enjoy reading the story.  I jump straight in and read it through - then go back and read it again! my re-viewing is usually 'great' or 'excellent' because I cant write anything that would compare with your writing.  Lady you are a seriously awesome writer and I read anything you post.  So THANK YOU. xx 

Katie
03/19/2008 05:36 pm
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I'm sticking with you with this I can't wait for the next update.
you rock!!

03/19/2008 03:43 pm
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This is such a great story, I always look forward to the updates.  Sorry you're had having such a stressful time of it, hope it gets better soon!

Leilani
03/19/2008 01:09 pm
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This is a great story - I'm loving every chapter.  Question - when does Buffy punch Riley out??? 

03/19/2008 12:38 pm
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more pls

03/19/2008 10:02 am
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Riley is in for another surprise if he thinks the Watchers are going to agree with his Nazi leanings - he really is a nasty piece of work.  Great job.  I'm sorry you're not feeling appreciated., be assured you have my heartfelt appreciation!

Rosemaree Allison
03/19/2008 08:43 am
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I really don't like Riley.  Once again you have brought  the love, affection and respect that Spike & Buffy feel for each other to life for me.  I am sorry to hear you are trying to finish up this story - I really love the "originsverse".  Thanks for sending me the link to your other stories, I've had a quick look but will spend some time on it over the Easter break - 4 days off and I can't wait! 
You went from Bay City Rollers to punk - I went from BCR to Split Enz - went to their reunion shows in Melbourne in 2006, two of the best gigs I have ever seen.  They are playing in New Zealand over the next couple of weeks, wish I was going - a couple of my friends are, I'm sure I'll hear all about it when they get back.
Anyway, keep on writing, and please remember, lack of reviews doesn't mean lack of readers.  Some people are just not into the reviewing thing.  I'm not, usually,  Don't know what made me send the first review in to you.  I suppose I just wanted to thank you for bringing some enjoyment into my life.   
I hope your shoulder is better and you stay on top of it all.
Look after yourself,
Rosemaree

kim
03/19/2008 07:53 am
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Well, Travers is full of surprises....

Oh, come on, Riley....idiot. Now, all hell breaking loose on which side of the door? Cliffhanger, here! Nice to see Faith step up, and be calm about it, too.

CinnaBunn
03/19/2008 07:31 am
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wonderful....i will be waiting eagerly for the next update

IT
03/19/2008 06:45 am
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Great, great story!!  Please keep it coming!  I'm always excited when I see new updates.  Not sure what Travers has up his sleeve, though.  Looking forward to more - soon, please!!!!! 

sin_amatic
03/19/2008 05:34 am
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First off let me admit to being guilty of reading a whole lot more then I review.  ::hangs head in shame::

So, kudos once again on a beautiful angst filled chapter. Hate Riley! Loath Tavers! You make me smile.... Thank you! 

Hope RL mellows for you soon.

Ta!

sin_amatic
03/19/2008 05:33 am
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First off let me admit to being guilty of reading a whole lot more then I review.  ::hangs head in shame::

So, kudos once again on a beautiful angst filled chapter. Hate Riley! Loath Tavers! You make me smile.... Thank you! 

Hope RL mellows for you soon.

Ta!

03/19/2008 04:47 am
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oh boy oh boy oh boy oh boy!!!!!!!  I can't wait for MORE MORE MORE!!!!  Great chapter!

Inna
03/19/2008 04:32 am
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You're evil!  I want more!!! MOOOOOOORE!

=) Great installment.

(This reminds me of a Russian joke: A woman walks into a pharmacy and says "Give me some pills against greed!  Lots and lots and LOTS of them!")

03/19/2008 04:12 am
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another great chapter. can't wait for the next one. i'm hoping someone gives  riley  a smack down :)

Cat
03/19/2008 04:04 am
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Really sorry that I haven't reviewed more.
I have been with you since the start and am anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
Excelent work throughout!! I love it!

03/19/2008 03:41 am
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This reader wants to send right back the "appreciated" to you for continuing to write this saga - I have been reading it for a long time and loving it from its beginning.  I wish more people were reading along with me cause this is one fine Buffyverse series you have created.  Hope life is going better for you and that you can continue to update regularly.  I sincerely hope that you will not give up on your readers - I am sure that once everything is completed it will have a whole new set of people wanting to read and loving this tale as much as I have.  Can't hardly wait for the children to come out into the world.  I love the idea of Spike and Buffy as parents - and again, I love how you have used characters from the early seasons and all your new vampires -

thanks for the update - hope you can bring us another one soon.

Tamara
03/19/2008 03:20 am
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I think Riley is going to be disappointed. Giles may just lay a smackdown on him if he starts pouting off about humans and demons together being disgusting.

I had this flash of Riley and his men being arrested as a threat to the country since they are interfering with the people who save the world.

And I'm not real good at pop culture refernces. I live in a cultural wasteland.It's sixty miles to an indoor movie theater (ther'a drive in with one screen and it's only open in the summer 2 days a week).

03/19/2008 03:13 am
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The wily Q. Travers is captivating in this chapter. And Riley just as plodding as he ever was.

Pin
03/19/2008 02:10 am
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Hmmm, Riley continues to be an asshat, or worse.  Love Faith and her support.  Can't see how talkign privately to Riley is going to help anything!  Continue to love this story; thanks!

03/19/2008 01:45 am
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I seriously want to do Riley some major physical damage here!  I hate him more than I do Angel at his worst and that is strange for me.  I canNOT wait for your next update.  I can't imagine what you are trying to deal with getting real life stuff situated and writing to satisfy us needy fans but you are so very appreciated and your stories are not thing short of amazing! 

Don't give and know that you will get responses from me.  Sorry about the pop-culture things I miss but maybe I wasn't aware of some of them due to age or whatever.  who knows, lol  I will try and pick them out but no promises here.  I just get too involved in the action of the story...

Kimmy

03/19/2008 01:38 am
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I will stick through every one of your stories, and will wait with bated breath for the next update; love love love your work; enjoy this series immensely, and can't wait til the next chapter is available; please don't get discouraged; love the way Faith is so protective of her new "family", especially Buffy; love the relationship b/n S & B; can't wait for more!!!

Kyra
06/10/2012 06:17 am
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ok so im only on chapter 16 but im loving the fact ur making railey the villian in this lol i hate him so especially after he faked staked spike, evil bastard needs to die lol

Shadowhawke
03/23/2010 08:18 am
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Wow.

You have definitely grown as a writer since your first series. Your plots are more complex and seamless, and more of a joy to read. Can't wait for more!

kathy
03/15/2008 12:41 am
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i'm happy to see you've added another chapter.  you sounded kinda sad in your author's notes.  i hope you don't give up on this story, because i have really enjoyed it.  some resolution would be nice.  not that i'm pressuring you or anything:)

pretty_in_fangs
03/08/2008 09:12 pm
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Always a joy to get an update.

I have keyboard problems, so short review.

Jane
03/07/2008 09:15 am
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Super update, waiting for all the players to get into place, is excrutiating, but i wouldn't have it any other way.  Traver's is as enigmatic as ever but you can read Riley like a book. I can't wait for more. Love it.

03/06/2008 07:04 pm
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let the tension build. very good read, as always. thank you.

Alexis
03/06/2008 05:53 am
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Another excellent chapter. We're counting down to the show down now. I have more hope now that the Council will back Buffy.

03/06/2008 04:04 am
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Now what is Travers' up to?  And really did Riley think he was going to just walk back into Buffy's life like nothing happened?  He was always such a dumb person.  I love the sparing of Jenner/connor/Faith and Spike.  they are really a great team.  And I just love blunt Dawn.. Awesome chapter Lady...

03/06/2008 02:28 am
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Amazing story and the tension is unbelieveable-I love this!  I have to wonder though if the Powers are gonna bring Angel back since he came back before when Buffy sent him to hell.  How would that make everyone feel?  I sincerely hope it doesn't happen and that is entirely up to you...

I can't wait for the next update and I promise to review regularly...:D

Kimmy

03/05/2008 09:01 pm
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You're really ratcheting up the tension - and another Council team joining the mix.  Can't wait for more.

Amy. B
03/05/2008 05:14 pm
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Great chapter.
Ican't wait for the next one :-)

Vanillamangogirl
03/05/2008 03:17 pm
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I adore the story, and the earlier ones.
I adore everything you write..so keep up the good work.
The verse is a wondrous place thanks to writers with your talent.

IT
03/05/2008 06:01 am
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Another great instalment and a rise in tension!  What oh, what will happen next?  Please don't leave us hanging too long.  Love the story, thanks.

03/05/2008 05:33 am
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great to have another update - thanks ever - I really like having all these diverse character in the piece -

03/05/2008 03:53 am
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he he he he i can't wait!

kim
03/05/2008 03:50 am
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Ooo, goodness! So many players, so many agendas...

Makes sense that Cordy would go straight to Lorne. He could see her trauma without her having to talk about it, and be sympathetic without her feeling pitied. Perfect safe place. Poor girl...

Travers proprietary stance about Slayers can work in their favor when it comes to someone else getting in Slayer business.....my enemy's enemy....

Kate
03/05/2008 03:41 am
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Thanks for the update!  I really enjoy reading this story.  I can't wait for all the parties to finally intersect.

03/05/2008 01:53 am
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Cliffhanger!!  Please, please, please update again soon!  Thanks for the wonderful update.

03/05/2008 01:40 am
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Excellent chapter; love to see Travers showing his respect for Buffy, which I really believe he had for her since she faced down the whole council in S5; glad to see a bit about Xander & Cordy; will they be striking up their relationship again, or just friends??  And can't wait to see the final showdown b/n Buffy and Riley; dying to see what happens; please update again soon!!!

03/05/2008 12:33 am
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oh the tension!! keep them coming I love this, and Cordy getting help from Lorne is just what she needs too.

IT
02/23/2008 10:28 am
Preconceived notions         
I found Origins about a week ago and have to say that your series is AWESOME!!!  I am a somewhat glad that I have got to this point, because now I don't have more to read until the next update - maybe I can start going to bed at a reasonable time again and stop obsessing over your fic when I should be working! :) 

Thanks for the amazing story!  Looking forward to following the rest.  -yawn-  Going to stumble to bed now....

02/18/2008 07:47 am
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very good read, thank you. riley is such a waste of space.

Rosemaree Allison
02/17/2008 07:52 am
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One more thing - I laughed out loud when I read Leslie McKeown had rung Wesley - yes, I am a Bay City Roller's fan from way back!  I went to see them in the mid 80's when they were back together for 5 minutes - Eric (who was my favourite) spoke to me from the stage - I was right at the front, and I couldn't answer him.  I nearly ran over Woody who walked behind my car as I was reverse parking to go to a market while they were in town and I spoke to him for about 15 minutes - he's lovely.  I met, got a kiss from and  a cd autographed by Les and his whole new band when they came to Australia 5 years ago, and he was lovely too. 
So yes, someone got one of your cryptic pop references!
Thank you once again and I hope you keep writing Spuffy for a long time to come.

Cheers
Rosemaree

Rosemaree Allison
02/17/2008 07:41 am
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I found your stories at the end of last year and have just read thelast of what is up.  Wow!  You have really brought the characters alive for me.  Thank you so much.  I read much more than I watch TV and your Origins series has really done it for me!  I will be sorry to see you finish it (thought by what you have written I can see you won't.) I saw my first episode of Buffy 1st December 2006 (still haven't seen all of the first 3 seasons), dunno why I waited till it was on cable (in Australia) to watch, and I have only seen a few episodes of Angel - it's sitting waiting along with all the other dvd's I haven't watched yet.  Do you post anywhere other than the Bloodshedverse?  I would love to read more of your work (not necessarily Buffy - anything).  If you get a chance & wouldn't mind emailing me the site if you do at R.Allison@xavier.vic.edu.au that would be great, I would really appreciate it.
Thank you and keep up the great work.
Rosemaree

02/16/2008 11:34 am
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Sometimes when I read an update I have to go back a couple of chapters to remember the storyline, get the charaters straight in my head etc. I never have that with yours - they pick up exactly where I left them, told you loads I love this world, still gonna tell you again you are an awesom writer

alexis
02/15/2008 05:48 pm
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I'm really enjoying this story. Glad to see an update.

Riley is scaring me. So much hate and no true understanding. He really doesn't know Buffy at all if he thinks he can successfully take her children from her. I look forward to her and Spike kicking his ass!

Sounds like they might have an ally in the Watcher's Council, as least for dealing with the Initiative. Travers isn't about to let the US gov't get their hands on the Slayer's babies.

02/15/2008 02:13 am
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Wow; that's about all I've got for you, is wow.  Cannot wait for more; don't want to put more pressure on you, but I'm scared to death that you're going to lose interest in this story and it'll never be finished and it's one of my favorites!!!  Please, please update again soon, I'm dying to see what happens when Riley meets with them at the Magic Box!!!

02/15/2008 12:14 am
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If Riley knows what is good for him, he will have his team drop this.   Buffy and Spike will hurt anyone that comes after their family.  And I just love Connor.  I thought he was staying with Spike and Buffy?  Where in the world does he sleep.  And Travers just will not know what hit him... Awesome chapter and I hope you get better soon. 

02/14/2008 08:55 pm
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ahhhhhhhhhhhhrrrrrrrrrgggggggggggggggggg  Update soon!

02/14/2008 04:02 pm
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Wonderful update. I really do love this series. Riley is being a complete twit, and I really want to know what Travers' reaction to the Initiative is going to be.

As for the references, I'm going to take a wild guess and try to pick out a pop culture one.

The house you placed Warren at was located on Coraline Avenue, which has the name of one of my favorite books in it. (Coraline by Neil Gaiman.)

Now I could be completely wrong, but the name Coraline Avenue caught my attention. :P

And finally, I hope you start feeling better soon. Being sick sucks.

kim
02/14/2008 04:13 am
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Riley, you're an idiot.

I'm sure Connor had fun with that.

Oooo, Travers is pissed now.....4 hours, huh?

Anya's renewed appraisal of Giles because of the Ripper thing is priceless. LOL

02/14/2008 12:57 am
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So great to have this new update - I have been reading the entire series and have enjoyed all the books - Hope you will feel better soon - thanks for bringing us another chapter -

Reb
02/14/2008 12:23 am
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I almost feel sorry for Riley. And Quentin Travers. Almost.

02/13/2008 11:39 pm
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I'm so glad you are continuing this.  It really made my day to come home to an update.  Thank You!!

02/13/2008 11:25 pm
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Hope you're better soon! Thanks for the update!

jane
02/13/2008 09:25 pm
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Forgot to leave my name on my review, sorry. But still fantastic and can't wait for more.

02/13/2008 09:23 pm
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Oh my god, just when you thought you couldn't despise Riley any more, he plumbs new depths of bigotry and ignorance. That he still thinks it's ok, to experiment on other sentient beings, is enough to condemn him for me. He's learned nothing from the Adam fiasco. He's so set in his beliefs it's hard to see how he can be stopped without violence. And I can't see the good doctor giving up his new lab rats without a fight.
Then there's Travers, I wonder if he really is as ignorant of his teams background as everyone thinks. Always thought the Council could prove useful if they got their priorities straight. Fantastic update, you've got me buzzing with all the new twists and turns. Loved the take down of Warren and Andrew, really cool. Can't wait for more.

02/13/2008 08:46 pm
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Kramer and Riley - what a pair!  And what a great plan for Kennedy to be the new Slayer.  My grrrr meter will be going off the scale.

Emma
02/13/2008 06:52 pm
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Great story so far welldone!

02/13/2008 06:21 pm
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Nooooo! Left hanging! :'( *sigh* Another great chapter!! Please update soon!

Shadowhawke
03/23/2010 08:03 am
Readiness to defend         
And it just gets better! Can't wiat to find out what Spike and Buffy have named their kids, and I liked Faith's little return to old form and the small stoush between her and Spike. Don't get me wrong, I love Faith, but it's good to see her still being badass.

Amy. B
02/11/2008 05:42 pm
Readiness to defend         
Great chapter update soon :-)

Alexis
02/02/2008 08:21 am
Readiness to defend         
Glad to see an update to this. Great chapter.

Looks like we're headed for a showdown. Hmm, they should let the Initiative and the Council fight it out first... thin the ranks a little and then mop up after. 

kathy hey! i'm glad you're focusing on this s
02/01/2008 04:16 pm
Readiness to defend         

kathy hey! i'm glad you're focusing on this s
02/01/2008 04:16 pm
Readiness to defend         

02/01/2008 04:16 am
Readiness to defend         
as always, a very fine read, thank you.

sirc
01/31/2008 02:14 pm
Readiness to defend         
It's always good to see new chapters :-)  .. It doesn't matter if it takes you longer than usual, as long as you don't drop it.

Well done!

jane
01/30/2008 09:41 pm
Readiness to defend         
Joy is an update. Well I didn't think it was possible, but you've cranked up the tension yet again. I can't wait to see what happens next. Have visions of Buffy's waters breaking in mid fight.
In some ways I almost hope they reach an understanding with Riley and his boys. Then they could lock Quentin up with Ethan Rayne. Looking forward to more.

01/30/2008 12:44 pm
Readiness to defend         
Great chapter. Wonder what's keeping Riley?

01/30/2008 09:49 am
Readiness to defend         
Nice lightener at the end of a very tense chapter!  What's Riley up to?

01/30/2008 09:32 am
Readiness to defend         
Be with you till the end... love this fic! 

01/30/2008 07:38 am
Readiness to defend         
I was delighted to see this chapter posted tonight. I've followed your Origins series from the beginning and enjoyed it greatly.

01/30/2008 05:23 am
Readiness to defend         
I'm with Spike. I don't trust the fact that Riley is late. He's military through and through, it'd be alien to his nature to be even the slightest bit late.

Unholydragoon
01/30/2008 05:09 am
Readiness to defend         
Excellent as usual.  I don't comment much, But I have been slavering over this series since it started.  Can't wait for more!

01/30/2008 04:59 am
Readiness to defend         

NICE surprise with the update - wonderful new chapter - This is one of my favorite current reading projects - hope we can have another soon.

Judy
01/30/2008 01:36 am
Readiness to defend         
As usual great.  Love this story.

kim
01/30/2008 01:34 am
Readiness to defend         
Riley's late? Something fishy there. Military guys hate being late.

Buffy likes everyone where she can see them.....which works fine for hand-to-hand, but if someone wants to blow up your building, there goes all of you. It's interesting how the Slaying world is still caught in the past in a lot of aspects....

Hortense! LOL!

I love how they're all so close, and all getting along.

01/30/2008 01:32 am
Readiness to defend         
Yes we are still here, and we love it when we can get an update.  I wish I could help with the muse.  If he ever comes back I'll chain him to a wall for you!  Titanium chains in a cinderblock and brick wall!!  Thanks for the update.

01/30/2008 01:21 am
Readiness to defend         

OK I think I got it……

 

“You might want to print these out so the Gaffer can read them.”

 

In reference to Spike because he is the boss and or the old man or they could mean Giles too?

 

Gaffer (boss), a British colloquial term for a boss or old man

 

Or it could mean

 

Gaffer: The gaffer is the head electrician.

 

And that would make Wes:

 

Best Boy: The best boy is the gaffer's assistant.

 

 

Am I even in the ballpark here?

 

Even if not I bet I made you smile!  Great chapter can’t wait for more!!!!

Shadowhawke
03/23/2010 07:52 am
Information is not knowledge         
Wow, Oz and Tara have really come a long way, and I appreciate that Buffy's reaction was so real and not just sunshine and happiness. That happens a lot in your fic, and I appreciate it - makes the story just that much more gripping!

01/19/2008 06:46 pm
Information is not knowledge         
I've been unable to go online for a while, and to find that there were two chapters of Origins waiting for me when I finally cam online was just great. Don't loose interest in the story, 'cuz i never will.

01/18/2008 05:40 am
Information is not knowledge         
very good read, thank you. love the tara,oz, spike and buffy scene. i agree you should wrap this up soon. fifty or sixty more chapters should do it. and then go on to the sunnydale/hellmouth day care center.

pretty_n_fangs
01/15/2008 04:29 am
Information is not knowledge         
I just got back from a half-month fic hiatus and I was so glad to find two updates to this fic! And, :;shrug:: hey, since it was all reposted, I started over from the beginning again (well, of this book).

It's always a joy to read your words.

Aonadharcach
01/14/2008 02:16 am
Information is not knowledge         
Thank you for the new chapters! I'm really looking forward to finding out how the situations with the Initiative and Council pan out and am keeping my fingers crossed that something terrible happens to Travers and that Reily either catches a clue or butts the heck out. :) Thank you for the wonderful story!

01/12/2008 05:06 am
Information is not knowledge         
"I think this series is losing its appeal for people"
i can't speak for anyone else but for myself personally i have to go with are you insane??? lol no way, no how am i losing ANY thing for this fic. in fact the more you write the more i want to read. I LOVE this fic. it just keeps getting better and better.If i had my way i would never have you stop writting it,

sirc
01/11/2008 12:20 pm
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Well done! :)

01/11/2008 06:57 am
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wonderful update - thanks so much for giving us another this soon. Tara and Oz are such a great couple together-not a couple I would have thought to match, but your treatment make them a set of lovely people, same as your Faith & Jenner. Nice to have these different couples and characters. Nice to see that Lawson has someone now as well. Looks like Buffy and Spike have some very difficult time ahead with Riley. To this day, I still try hard to give this character a chance for being on my "I Like & Love List," but I just can never quite like Riley.

Look forward to reading the next chapter and reading your fine sage -

Kate
01/11/2008 01:18 am
Information is not knowledge         
The scene with Tara & Oz telling Buffy & Spike about the baby was so sweet and funny. Poor Buffy - all thrown for a loop. lol The best part was her words to Tara. Loved that! Thanks for the update. A great chapter.

01/10/2008 08:27 pm
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My heart just goes out to Tara. In less than one day she has the verbal knowledge that she is has a real FAMILY. She was accepted by Oz's parents and then Buffy didn't wnat her to move. And being hormonal can't help things. I am glad that they got a trace on Warren. And really Riley and his team have no idea who they are playing with. I just hope that the fireworks in this meeting won't be too bad for Buffy and Tara. Awesome chapter. Just gotta love Anya.

01/10/2008 03:53 pm
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I just love this story,, I have reread the saga i dont know how many times.... thinkin about doin it again infact LOL

I can't wait to see how Riley reacts I hope they finally get to kill him... trying to remember if he is in any of the other stories...

Update soon please!!!!!!

FoolForLove
01/10/2008 01:51 pm
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I'm kind of glad Riley is going to refuse to have Spike's chip taken out, since I didn't trust him do it anyway (without killing Spike, and then being all ooops, sorry Buffy, my bad.)

Great update! And so soon after the previous one. You're spoiling us. Thank you!

Shelly
01/10/2008 09:55 am
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Loved the update. I don't think you are losing people, but I think a whole lot used to review on SR and if they aren't a member, just a reader like me, they can't review anymore.
I can't wait for the showdown with Riley. Can't wait for more from you. All your stories are wonderful

jane
01/10/2008 09:01 am
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Wow that was good, I loved it.

Alexis
01/10/2008 06:05 am
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Great chapter. I'm really hating Riley right about now, but I trust you'll make it all better. I'm with Anya... just kidnap the doctor. Only, you know, keep a better eye on him that Harm did! lol

Tara and Oz make a great, if somewhat unconventional, couple. I'm really liking that.

BerMH
01/10/2008 06:00 am
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I for one am still enjoying this story very much. I know how hard it can be to gt updates out sometimes, but they're always worth the wait when it comes to this series.

01/10/2008 05:51 am
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Great update. Riley, just as crazy and mean as ever. Love Jenner & Faith, and really like Oz & Tara - nice combo. Love this story. THanks.

kim
01/10/2008 05:19 am
Information is not knowledge         
So Riley's decided to be an ass, huh? Pity. But they do need someone with know-how to remove the chip.

Awww, Buffy and Tara are really the hormonal twosome!

01/10/2008 02:36 am
Information is not knowledge         
Niamh, please stick with this story; "I think this series is losing its appeal for people and I think it’s more than past time to wrap just about everything up"; it's not true; I absolutely adore this series, and I could read forever quite happily! Love this chapter, and when Tara started to cry, thought I was gonna lose it too! Can't wait for more, please please update again soon!!!

Shadowhawke
03/23/2010 07:31 am
Touchstones of our characters         
Ooh, and the plot thickens. I'm loving again the demon community you've built up here, as well as the forces arraying against the enemies.

01/18/2008 05:05 am
Touchstones of our characters         
just the usual excellent read, thank you.

jane
01/09/2008 09:02 am
Touchstones of our characters         
Another stupendous update. I'm so psyched up for the big confrontation, the initiative and council goons really have it coming. Love all the new characters, can't wait to see them in action.
loking forward to more.

kathy
01/08/2008 05:24 pm
Touchstones of our characters         
woo hoo!!! i'm so glad you are back with more chapters!!!

01/06/2008 09:33 pm
Touchstones of our characters         
Smashing update as always, and much appreciated.

01/06/2008 09:45 am
Touchstones of our characters         
great to see that you are better with your writing and that your series will continue - like I said before, I LOVE this series and your work. Can't wait for your next update.

01/06/2008 06:50 am
Touchstones of our characters         
Okay, I don't know what happend to your earlier posts but let me just say that this chapter was worth the wait. I am so glad that Buffy was not completely thrown off by the dream. It was an opportunity to become closer with Spike. And now Spike knows that she is really there for him, even though he should know by now, she is not walking away from him. And Travers does not know what he is walking into. I just hope that they can pull this off. And who in the world was Sam talking about at the end. Just so many GREAT questions that I can't wait to see what you have in store.

01/05/2008 10:47 pm
Touchstones of our characters         
Great update! Very curious as to the mysterious person in the picture. Thanks!

01/05/2008 08:55 pm
Touchstones of our characters         
OH, I'm so glad to see an update; I absolutely adore this story! I love the way you keep all the plot threads so tidy; you must outline like crazy to keep everything straight! Loved the conversation b/n B & S re: his mother; I always wished he could discuss that with B, and never got a chance to on the show; can't wait for more, please update again soon!!!

Shadowhawke
03/23/2010 07:24 am
Hearts at peace         
Connor is *interesting*. I like seeing a fic with him and the Buffy group but without the people from LA tagging around. I like the way you've done him and the way you changed his story, and I love the allies you're building up too. Can't wait!

Shadowhawke
03/23/2010 07:17 am
For the sake of knowing         
Oh wow, very sweet. And I'm glad that Xander showed signs of relenting about Spike since he killed Angel.

01/06/2008 08:16 am
For the sake of knowing         
[A/N: I have no interest/will/ambition to write anything at all lately. Developments have completely sapped my creativity and my desire to write. I have nothing left at all.

I don't know what could possibly have happened but I am very sorry to hear that RL has turned so difficult - it must be terrible to make you turn away from your writing. I send you all my best wishes for a change toward a better place.

Just want to say how very very much I have enjoyed reading your work and this series - hope that things get better for you and that you don't give up your writing, be it Buffyverse or not -

Shadowhawke
03/23/2010 07:11 am
The sin of broken faith         
I know you've been going through writer's block from your Author's notes, so don't stress. Update when you want to, not out of guilt. I'm loving this so far, and I'll definitely keep checking back!

Amara D'Angeli
04/09/2009 11:32 pm
The sin of broken faith         

A couple of weeks ago I started reading the Origins series...masterful work.  I can't beleive how it's sucked me in.  Now, I'm 9 chapters into book 3 and I can't wait for the opportunity to read more.  This may well be the only work in Progress I've ready since I was a teenager.  High praise from someone like me - massively impatient.  Often, too impatient to wait even when the story is good.  But I couldn't possibly walk away from this one.  Wonderful work!

01/18/2008 04:45 am
The sin of broken faith         
and you, love, are one of the best writers around

Shadowhawke
03/23/2010 07:04 am
Nothing stands between us here         
Wow, I'm so sorry. I should be trying to review every chapter of this gorgeous fic, but I just keep reading! I love the way the plotlines are going in this one... not to mention you sure started it off with an electric bang! As for the idea of allies inside the Council... I *like* it. The Council's featured as a Big Bad in many of the fics I've read, but I can't say how heartwarming it is to see so many allies for Buffy as well.

Can't wait for more, am reading now!

03/05/2008 03:50 am
A succession of moments         
Sorry your muse is on holiday...lots of interesting things happening in this chapter. Thanks for an excellent chapter!

01/18/2008 04:30 am
Never explan         
very good read, thank you

01/06/2008 05:59 am
Twisted truth and half the news         
great to see that these other chapters were added -

01/18/2008 04:07 am
My piece of heaven         
there is absolutely nothing wrong with epics. in fact, they are to be encouraged.

01/18/2008 04:00 am
Real life, depicted in song         
i know that i said this before, very pleased to see this fine tale continue. after spending some time trying to remember where i had reviewed, your a/n in the latest chapter explained all. thanks for the fine read.

01/04/2008 01:47 pm
Real life, depicted in song         
*meep* :( Where'd the other chappies go? I

01/04/2008 03:01 am
Real life, depicted in song         
I love this series so when your muse takes brings you back again I shall be ready and waiting. Good luck with your current projects - in my world, you are one of the best buffyverse writers around.

Kristen
01/03/2008 10:29 am
Real life, depicted in song         
I love your story but didnt you have more than one chapter up of this?

AthenaHahn
01/03/2008 12:15 am
Real life, depicted in song         
Eeek! What happened to the rest of the story? I was loving this story! Did it accidentally get deleted or something? Please please please please repost!

Kawaki
01/03/2008 12:09 am
Real life, depicted in song         
Wasn't there already a lot more to this story posted?