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Green-Eyed Monster by ya_lublyu_tebya
Chapter: Five
08/29/2008 09:26 pm
Nice fight with excellent visuals - though Buffy should have dealt with Warren's power source.
At least he was out of the way and she can get back to Spike :-) Glad you liked the fight - always the hardest thing to write.
08/29/2008 08:57 pm
Okay, an interesting twist and all, but is she really letting them walk out with the device that can trigger Spike' chip? Buffy is not that tactically idiotic.
I think she just wants them gone. She can always go beat them up later. And that ass-whooping might have knocked some sense into them... Thanks for reading!
08/29/2008 07:15 pm
Even though Warren was not aware of the chip's function in canon, I like this version. Poor Spike who's unable to back up the Slayer though.
Yeah, he missed a good fight - he would have enjoyed it. :-) Thanks for reading - I always like reading your comments.
08/29/2008 06:39 pm
Oh dear she didn't get the remote control from them! BUFFY YOU IDIOT! Didn't see them coming but it makes perfect sense. Warren still has his magic balls too (that always makes me have a guilty snicker).
This is baddddddd...
Nice twist! Happy to see the update too. Hope the group saw all that and remind her of what she missed by underestimating these three.
Wonderful twist.
Kathleen
Small oops though....Think you mean "get the best of me" instead of "take the best of me"
I think she wasn't exactly on top form after Spike kissage :-) You can't blame the girl really, can you?!!
Thanks for the careful reading but yep, I did mean take- as in, they couldn't take her full strength because they're weak little boys. Or so she thought...
Thanks for reading! So glad to hear you're thoughts.
Thanks for the careful reading but yep, I did mean take- as in, they couldn't take her full strength because they're weak little boys. Or so she thought...
Thanks for reading! So glad to hear you're thoughts.
shadow
08/29/2008 06:06 pm
love it please update soon
Very glad you liked. Thanks for reading!
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