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Randy And Joanie Were Lovers by Shell Presto
Chapter: Clothes Make the Monster
calminthechaos
06/03/2009 12:37 am
LOVED IT!!!! This is by far my favorite fic on this site! I love the direction your going, I love how you've developed these 'alternate' characters, I just really love every part! Please update soon!~
Wow. Okay, I'm major-league flattered there, because there are many a deserving fic on this site. I hope the fic continues to meet or exceed your expectations. Chapter 5 is giving me hell (I want it to be perfect, really), but it shouldn't take much longer, and I look forward to seeing your assessment on Chapter 4. : )
ya_lublyu_tebya
05/26/2009 11:29 am
Woohhh! Hot! Very glad Randy had the guts to try that.
I'm always glad when Randy has the guts to try anything, because he's a very awkward mix of self-conscious and daring. (Which I fully intend to have fun playing with.)
Dreylin
05/26/2009 08:28 am
I loved the scene in the clothing store. That last one was great too.
I knew I had to get him out of the tweed, but the clothing store scene sort of surprised me. I had a lot of fun writing it. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
05/24/2009 03:49 am
This plotline continues in a quite amorous direction to the delight of this reader. Love the way they test "familiar"!
I hope you continue to follow the plotline. Hopefully you won't be sick of the word 'familiar' before it's all done. Keep me updated on your delight level, whether it grows or falters.
05/22/2009 01:54 pm
They are such sweethearts!! Hope it lasts.
05/22/2009 04:56 am
His English lilt made her name rich like mocha ice cream, and that did seem familiar
This was a very satisfying chapter. From Xander's lonely perspective, to naughty clothes shopping fun, and ending in a (magnificent) kiss.
I wonder what will happen when she tries on his real name for size...
This was a very satisfying chapter. From Xander's lonely perspective, to naughty clothes shopping fun, and ending in a (magnificent) kiss.
I wonder what will happen when she tries on his real name for size...
Thank ye kindly. You won't be wondering long, and I definitely want to know your opinion on how she learns his name. : )
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