NIce and angsty - you might want to draw out Buffy's embarrassment and humiliation at the end where she tells all. 

All right!  High five and all that!  A definitely refreshing take on this episode.  

will be interesting to see where this goes - like the way Spike stopped before things carried on. Well written and ending on the right moment to keep us hooked. Good stuff.

I love where this is going :) Can't wait for more!

I can't watch this episode, so I didn't really know what to expect, but I'm very relieved that Spike stopped things before they went too far.  Now, this is how the episode should have gone.  I like how Buffy just came out and told them the truth.  I'm interested to see where you take this=)

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