Brave New World by JamesMFan
Chapter: The Chosen Two

04/19/2011 09:38 pm
I'm *loving* this fic--around every corner, there's something unexpected. And yet, the people are still themselves--not completely the same as they were 3 decades ago, but still recognizably themselves. Recognizably themselves, and yet, not caricatures.  It's a fine line to walk, but walk it you do . . . you *dance* along it, reveling in creating complexity so your readers can revel in their turn.  

05/22/2010 04:13 pm

09/05/2006 01:55 am
Faith's driving sounds as scary as Spike's driving was. Buffy getting used to Faith, this Faith, sounds intriguing and I am looking forward to it. Thanks for the update, I really enjoyed it.

08/30/2006 07:12 pm
well done

08/21/2006 05:18 pm
LOL! That was a funny chapter. I was wondering what had happened to Faith. I hope you give a little back story on how she got turned, this chapter was a bit vague on that.

08/21/2006 01:55 pm
oh i adore this chapter! Faith the Vampire with a soul - I adore it - great concept and vamping!

08/21/2006 08:24 am
Well Faith kinda did come on to him when she was in Buffy's body and no doubt would have in the basement if Buffy hadn't come down stairs. So I'm all caught up now, and must wait like everyone else for updates. hope you do soon. Very interested to know where this is going. Great chapter, thanks.

08/21/2006 04:42 am
Oh my... Why do I have the strangest feeling that this "joyride" is going to end badly?

08/21/2006 04:40 am
fun read, thank you.

08/21/2006 03:06 am
Dragged my feet on starting this one, because it looked like it would be long, but it really is very exciting and well done. Can't wait for more. Oh, and a contract signed by a 15 year old is definitely not binding; since this society seems very set on its rules, that should still be one of them - and even if they later changed it, it would have been in law in effect on the date the contract was made - so not legal.

08/21/2006 02:38 am
Which one - the car or Buffy? Great chapter and I love the way the shocks just keep coming! Can't wait to see what happens next. This should be a fun ride; it will be virtually the first time Buffy gets to talk to someone else.

08/21/2006 01:47 am
LOL, this was a good chapter..I loved Faith.

08/21/2006 12:04 am
Faith the Slayer Vampire...and Spike cursed her.

Buffy's vampire tinglies must really be broken, not to sense it in Faith. She should have been setting off bells and whistles.

I wonder if Faith visits Angel? He did a lot of good for her.

08/20/2006 10:20 pm
:::grins::: I always loved Faith!

08/20/2006 10:04 pm
So full of surprises!!!!Great chapter. Please update soon.

08/20/2006 09:08 pm
fun read, thank you.

08/20/2006 08:27 pm
You should update often like this. Can't wait for the next chapter.

08/20/2006 08:24 pm
Just wanted to tell you how much I'm enjoying your tale. Keep up the good work.

08/20/2006 07:54 pm
oh this could get really interesting!!! great chapter, love that faith was turned....good twist...can't wait for your next update