Shanshu Bugaboo by firefreezes
Chapter: Chapter 1

07/26/2011 10:32 pm
I love your style of going back and forth filling in little bits to build up your story.   Love the last line.  Angel deserved that after his behavior.

02/01/2007 12:06 am
Hmm seems Angel has some thigns to explain himself after all those cookie references. Hopefully Spike will realize that there isn't anything between Buffy and Angel anymore. Stupid kissing decisions aside. Now if only she would let something happen between the two of them. You have to love Illyria's comments about everything and general snarkiness.
thanks for reading, hope it doesn't dissapoint!

01/30/2007 03:08 am
very good read, thank you. love the ending question. angel is such an ass.
i'd have to agree with you about angel. best intentions, and all that...

Lou
01/29/2007 04:01 pm
God, poor Spike making his usual zero impression! Run while you can, mate.
well, he might, but it is a spuffy story...

01/18/2007 12:51 am
Yes Angel gets his new lovers thrown back at him!! can't wait to read more!!!
Keep up the good work,
Nox
thanks, nox!

01/13/2007 12:51 am
Poor Spike, just had to arrive second, didn't he. But is Spike's the one she loves, that's the big question. Waiting to see how you're handling this Immortal thing. Cool, Willow's a hippy. At least we know that Ilyria will have Spike's back and hope that it make's Buffy jealous. Great beginning, looking forward to more.
wow.

you're insightful.

and thanks for reviewing!

01/12/2007 11:45 pm
There's my girl! Nice to see you posting it up here Jen! ^^
only because of you, des.

thanks for everything!

01/12/2007 09:57 pm
oh this is an excellent beginning to this story....love it so far...love your version of willow...and it's sad about nina...wonder what buffy will think of that whole situation? :) love illyria, too, the way you write her is perfectly in character, and hilarious....looking forward to an update, love :)
thanks! illyria was the one i was actually most worried about writing.

01/12/2007 09:15 pm
Oh, I love Illyria! And snaps for one of the funniest story titles I've heard in a while. Thanks for writing and sharing, and good luck with the ongoing story!
thank you so much for your encouraging review!

01/12/2007 07:42 pm
*So hell was interactive? Ok*

*They were Buffy and Angel, reminding themselves in the most painful ways of what they couldn’t have was what they did. Except that Spike was here now, and he usually sent all traditions flying out the window.*

LOL. What happened to L.A.?
well, there was this apocalypse...

:D

01/12/2007 06:23 pm
Now you look extra-dead - LOL. Buffy should really have a kissing lock on her face.
i like that idea!

01/12/2007 03:24 pm
Nice beinning, hope there's more soon.
the first few chapters will be kind of spread apart, as I'm dealing with some heavy RL demands at present. but hopefully soon i'll be moving to a more regular posting schedule.

Melissa
01/12/2007 03:18 pm
I hope you update soon (and often) as this is a very intriguing start. Angel is such a jerk. He wants Nina and his half-baked cookie, too. Meh.
what can i say? he's angel. poopy-head.

01/12/2007 02:59 pm
I see what she means about Willow's hippyness. But it looks like it could be worth living with if she gets useful flashes like that.
i like to think that willow enjoys it...every part but the falling down.

kim
01/12/2007 01:00 pm
Kissing? Again? Icky Buffy.
i know.
but buffy does what she does...

01/12/2007 09:02 am
Intriguing start... looking forward to seeing where this goes.
thanks...so am i!