In Harm's Way by dawnofme
Chapter: 13. Peas

07/09/2008 09:55 pm
love to see spike in his element. very good chapter, thank you.
Thank you.  This chapter was tough to write because of the action scenes, but like you, I love to see Spike in his bad ass mode! 

07/05/2008 10:41 am
Woohoo! Go Spike! Awesome fight! Glad you didn't split it up. Wonderful chappie.
Thank you!  So glad you liked it.  Thanks for letting me know.

07/03/2008 07:37 pm
Your action scenes were well written...kept me on the edge of my seat.  Looking forward to the next chapter.
Thank you so much.  I find the action scenes to be a real challenge and being the stubborn person I am, I want to learn to get them right.  So very pleased that it worked for you.  Thanks for letting me know.

07/03/2008 05:05 pm
I love yout fic! I hope u update soon!
Thank you so much.  New chapter is up now.

07/02/2008 01:25 pm
*grins*  Eeeee, this was a fun battle!  Gotta love Scoobies flying about every which way.  Also liking how Spike leads the Initiative on a merry chase to distract them from the gang.

The peas!!! OMG!  The peas!  I couldn't figure that part out in the earlier chapter ... the freakout over the peas, but now it all becomes clear!
LOL.  I'm glad you liked it.   It was fun to write, but also very challenging.  I have to admit, it was fun writing Scoobies flying about every which way. 

I'm glad the peas thing was a surprise.  I was being really obvious with the freezer being the place that Buffy had kept the ring, but I knew some wouldn't see it.  LOL!

07/01/2008 11:32 pm
That was one hell of a fight - gruellingly brutal.  Good to see Spike saving the day.
Thank you.  I was going for action packed and brutal. 

07/01/2008 01:17 pm
Great chapter; glad she finally got smart and gave him the ring.  Here's hoping....
Thank you.  Took her almost dying to give him the ring, but she did it. 

07/01/2008 05:30 am
That fight scene was awesome.  Loved Spike's joy in the fight.
Everyone coming together to fight Adam, even without the joining spell was also wonderful.
Thank you.  I'm glad you liked it. 

07/01/2008 05:05 am
Wow, what a chapter! So many questions...glad Adam is done for.  Looking forward to answers
Thanks.  Yes, a lot was happening.  I hope you like the next chapter.

07/01/2008 03:54 am
Exciting chapter! The fallout should be very interesting.
Thank you.  Yes it will be. 

Mark Evans
07/01/2008 02:56 am
What a great chapter ! I loved Spike saving the day.  I can't wait for the next update though, I'm sure Buffy is gonna be okay.  Thank you for sharing.
I'm thrilled that you liked it Thanks for letting me know.
I've just posted chapter 14.