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Something Redux by dreamweaver
Chapter: Chapter 3
08/16/2008 04:20 pm
I have a bone to pick about that 4:45PM sunset having lived in southern California for 4 years. There was sameness all year long more about 6PM. That timeframe is too northern.
I did research that! Sunset on that day in that year in California is recorded as 4:45 pm, according to timeanddate.com, which has the sunrise and sunset times for all locations in the world. I was surprised - I too thought it would have been later, California being that much closer to the equator.
07/15/2008 04:21 am
fine read, thank you. buffy has shown her growth in everything but dealing with spike.
She's never good with emotions, always gets those mixed up!
avidreader
07/13/2008 10:16 am
wow...this is really awesome!! i love that buffy's working with the demons! very cool!
Thank you! I'm so glad you're liking it! Buffy's grown up enough to know that just being a demon doesn't make one automatically harmful.
Belle
07/11/2008 08:05 pm
Hurray! Review thing fixed! Another great chapter! =] Funny dialogue between Buffy and Spike! Can't wait for the next one!
Thank you! I'm just proofing the next chapter right now and it will be up tomorrow.
07/11/2008 07:52 pm
You did brilliantly with all the plotting for the successful mission, it was seamless. The 'who shouldn't have risked themselves' row was so cute!
Thank you! I'm trying to learn how to write action properly. I'm glad you liked it!
07/11/2008 06:48 pm
Action packed! Good to see Buffy making alliances. Her plan to make Spike not care? Priceless.
Older Buffy would have grown out of the ridiculous Council mindset. And Spike ruins everybody's plans!
07/11/2008 05:51 pm
wonderful chapter! Great action sequence and love Buffy wanting to work WITH peaceful demons...this grey area is now something she can deal with and be a better Slayer because of. You know Spike will love her anyway...even sooner. Excellent.
Kathleen
Spike will be Spike. We know that even if Buffy doesn't! I'm so glad you're liking this!
DeanSamWinchesterfan
07/11/2008 05:05 pm
Great chapter. Update soon. Poor Buffy. She doesn't want Spike to love her, but he's probably falling in love with her anyway. I can't wait to see what happens next.
I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Thank you! Everything between those two is unstoppable.
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