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Hide and Seek by dreamweaver
Chapter: Chapter 6
marstersrules
02/03/2010 05:15 pm
i have read most of your stories and i love them but this one OH. MY .GOD!!!!!!!!!!ilove the way you write!it moves me and i feel like im actually there!its like i see the show continue just like always wanted!i must say that i come across buffy the vampire slayer and angel 1 year ago because in my country-im greek-officially in dvd they are the 3 first seasons.so i simply hated they way it ended!when i found this site with these stories i was consumed with joy!anyway i cant wait till your next update!!!!!!!
Oh, thank you! I wanted the stories to seem like continuations of the show. Like you, I came late to BtVS as well and hated how it ended. So all my stories are to make it go the way I wanted. I'm so glad you're enjoying them!
02/03/2010 08:02 am
No don't eat William! Oh, and I read another review saying that they thought Willow and William would be good together- I completely agree. It's a step up from Kennedy by far.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
That reviewer was right. They really would suit since they'd share so many interests. (I don't like Kennedy either.) Oh, and another reviewer reminded me that Angel couldn't remember his own name, so of course he can't remember Spike's. I'd forgotten that. *g*
Belle
02/03/2010 05:46 am
Darn! No waking up to William?? Sadness! Great chapter! Always love it when she tells them to but out. Something she should have done in the series a looooong time ago. I wouldn't really put William with Willow. I'm more of a Willow/Oz fan. Oz was my favorite partner for Willow, not that I had anything against Tara (and Kennedy was a brat, not to mention 15! What was she doing having sex at age 15?! Doesn't matter that it was oral or what not...needs to get priorities straight, you're only a kid for so long!)..sorry, a rant. I'm really, really feeling bad for William because Buffy feels nothing for him. I know she need a little monster in her man, but the goodness in Spike had to come from somewhere and it didn't come from the demon. Or at least that's my thought on it anyways. Anyways, like I said, great chapter! Looking forward to chapter seven but rather sad to know it'll be the last.
I had to choose between funny and serious for the morning after and decided to go for serious because the story had shaped itself that way from the beginning.
Shy, sweet, scholarly William would share a lot more things with Willow than with Buffy. That's why there's no chemistry between Buffy and him. They're very different people and he doesn't have the demon's charisma. Buffy might lust for the demon, but the person she loves is Spike, who combines both the demon's lethal charm and William's goodness and lovingness. But don't worry, William/ Willow won't be happening here. And I didn't like Kennedy either. Either Oz or Tara would be so much better. :)
Shy, sweet, scholarly William would share a lot more things with Willow than with Buffy. That's why there's no chemistry between Buffy and him. They're very different people and he doesn't have the demon's charisma. Buffy might lust for the demon, but the person she loves is Spike, who combines both the demon's lethal charm and William's goodness and lovingness. But don't worry, William/ Willow won't be happening here. And I didn't like Kennedy either. Either Oz or Tara would be so much better. :)
02/03/2010 03:22 am
Oh, you're going to make us suffer right up until the end! Naughty!
Wonderful chapter, with a nice openness between them, and teasing and fun. I do wonder at Xander's butting in on Buffy's love life, since friends usually try to be supportive, even when they see disaster looming. But, he's right that Buffy and William don't make an ideal pair. It's almost worth it to see Angel twist, though. *iz evil*
Wonderful chapter, with a nice openness between them, and teasing and fun. I do wonder at Xander's butting in on Buffy's love life, since friends usually try to be supportive, even when they see disaster looming. But, he's right that Buffy and William don't make an ideal pair. It's almost worth it to see Angel twist, though. *iz evil*
What, give it all away with a chapter to go? Nuh uh. *g*
And Xander's always butted in, hasn't he? Though this time he is right - Buffy and William don't suit. I'm so glad you're enjoying it!
And Xander's always butted in, hasn't he? Though this time he is right - Buffy and William don't suit. I'm so glad you're enjoying it!
02/03/2010 02:43 am
So i have to say I love Buffy with Without Memories Spike, everything about there little relationship was so cute and deep. Then there's the whole not a prophecy thing, and I find myself slightly confused and worried and curious for William's safety. But its ok I trust you to work everything out it a wonderful way! :)
Thank you! I'm so glad you're liking it! It will all work out - trust me. :)
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